I simply looooove the word choice and rhymes. The beginning really got me, I liked the first and third parts the best although.
This actually didn't start out as a Herobrine post -- I wrote the first couple parts because of my depression, then I saved it for later.
It just creeped me out so much, the first words coming to my head were "Holy sh*t, Herobrine."
Thanks for the compliments!
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My heart no longer beats
My soul gnaws at the bone
Fighting to escape the membrane
The skin we have never known
The blood flows freely
Dripping down my skull
A haunting melody plays
To sleep we are lulled
A conterto of screams
A symphony of screeches
Though I look away
The white light still reaches
His eyes are like death
Emptiness and regret
He watches me sleep
As I wake up in cold sweat
My companion longs to protect me
For he understands my pain
It is not long after
He is lying on the ground, slain
He sleeps eternally
Lying in his blood
A circle drawn around him
A star, an everlasting grudge
I tug the body outside
Where I bury the furred beast
He was my friend
And understood me, at least
I turn around to go home
Tears streaking my face
A loud crack sounds behind me
His footsteps loud in the chase
I fall to the ground
Sweat heavy on my arms
My blood churns inside
My skin begins to warm
Three syllables is all I need
Just hearing it makes me grim
I'll try to say it without crying
Herobrine.
thank you! <3
This actually didn't start out as a Herobrine post -- I wrote the first couple parts because of my depression, then I saved it for later.
It just creeped me out so much, the first words coming to my head were "Holy sh*t, Herobrine."
Thanks for the compliments!