The legend Prolouge: "Could he be the one?" Asked Lina."I don't know.he could be the one.I will send one of....his minions out tomorrow.it is getting late now.we better get some rest."he said."OK but I don't like this guesswork."she replied. The end. JK
Chapter one,how to slay your enderman
It was a normal day i woke had brekfaest and went to my computer.I ent to minecraft .exe and opened it. I only had one world and 2 servers.....but on so I was all powerful.the only mods I had were forge,a custom made minimap and a custom made swordsplay mod.it was just dawn but had decided to crash in a stronghold for tonight.so I threw an eye on ender and to my surprise it went straight down.I went in and found myself in the portal room.I went to make a small safe room and was grated by an enderman.but this was no normal enderman.it had green eyes.I looked down the I did a fiet to the left the a jab to the back.it tellaported away and it did the normal screen.I carged jumped a stabed. The enderman died.it dropped 2 enderpearls and.....an enchanted book? I picked up the enchent book and opened it.
So.......should i continue?leave what you think of it in the comments.
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You have a lot of words to correct, and you should also add more detail, such as what the stronghold was like, let me try to make an example:
"As I dug down into the portal room, I heard the familiar sound of lava. I dug one more block and I could see the frame, along with some Silverfish scurrying around below. I dropped down onto the Silverfish and dispatched them quickly, then looked up to see a green-eyed Enderman."
Stuff like that.
Prolouge:
"Could he be the one?" Asked Lina."I don't know.he could be the one.I will send one of....his minions out tomorrow.it is getting late now.we better get some rest."he said."OK but I don't like this guesswork."she replied.
The end. JK
Chapter one,how to slay your enderman
It was a normal day i woke had brekfaest and went to my computer.I ent to minecraft .exe and opened it. I only had one world and 2 servers.....but on so I was all powerful.the only mods I had were forge,a custom made minimap and a custom made swordsplay mod.it was just dawn but had decided to crash in a stronghold for tonight.so I threw an eye on ender and to my surprise it went straight down.I went in and found myself in the portal room.I went to make a small safe room and was grated by an enderman.but this was no normal enderman.it had green eyes.I looked down the I did a fiet to the left the a jab to the back.it tellaported away and it did the normal screen.I carged jumped a stabed. The enderman died.it dropped 2 enderpearls and.....an enchanted book? I picked up the enchent book and opened it.
So.......should i continue?leave what you think of it in the comments.
"As I dug down into the portal room, I heard the familiar sound of lava. I dug one more block and I could see the frame, along with some Silverfish scurrying around below. I dropped down onto the Silverfish and dispatched them quickly, then looked up to see a green-eyed Enderman."
Stuff like that.
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