WARNING : THIS IS NOT REAL THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS HEROBRINE
NOTE: PLEASE TELL ME IF U FIND AN ERROR OR IF U WANT ME TO CHANGE OR ADD SOMETHING
ANOTHER NOTE : PLEASE TELL ME UR IDEAS FOR a MINECRAFT STORY,SONG or CREEPY PASTA
I’m a minecrafter witch means I’m good at minecraft in fact very good that I would fighting the ender dragon 3 days after I spawn but one say I logged onto my minecaft and entered a world and the most strange things started to happen things that made me wanna go further and see where I would end up it might sound like a stupid idea for a movie but imagine u were there and imagine u had what I had heroic personality fast reflexes what would u do and here began my story and the villain was notch’s dead brother it was herobrine yes he was the villain in fact a villain’s right arm but the shadows were the boss in my story they were what everyone feared don’t u think that people go sleep at night not just to grow up or rest or bla blab l they go to their homes at night to hide from the shadows and the same thing happens in minecraft over and over again I might take u into many stories with many loops but this is what my story is all about and so it begins ………
1/April/2012
I was in a new world witch I like to call adventurer’s paradise I found two lake’s and between them was a grass land witch I made my home and farm behind my house was a dark jungle and in front was a mountain and on the left side of the lake was a desert behind some trees and on the right a larger mountain I made a room with a fireplace in case It rains and a shelter for my dinosaurs ( yes I have a mod called animal bikes that allows me to spawn and ride animals ) and I made a tree house in case my friends decide to join my world
2/April/2012
I was running around gathering wood when i heard an explosion I ran back home to find creepers all over the place I grabbed my diamond sword and lured them into the water where there explosion wouldn’t destroy more of my home when lightning appeared at day time without rain and made them charged creepers witch mean a creeper only 10* times tougher I killed them in the water without getting a lot of damage and went to repair what they destroyed
3/April/2012
I woke up to find zombies in my indoor swimming pool and more of them in my base above the bed room I ran out of the house an locked the iron doors all my items and books where in that place so I went to the tree house to figure stuff out
Now 4/April/2012
12:0 am
I am in my tree house I don’t know what to do I have a bunch of weapons up here some swords,knifes,muskets and bows all iron It was night and night time makes monsters stronger now I had lights all over my base and I locked the doors how did they enter it stays a mystery and how they got in might be a glitch but I didn’t think so I slept and woke up underwater I was not drowning and I was not being hurt by anything there were monsters all around me they didn’t even notice me I didn’t have any hearts and instead of hunger points I had blood in jars I was shocked I stopped playing minecraft
11/April/2012
A week later which is now I got it together and went to find out what I was dealing with I logged in and instead of adventurer’s paradise I found Hell in MineCraft I went in my eyes half closed and I spawned in the nether I walked and walked with a song playing it wasn’t like your everyday Selena Gomez or Miley Cyrus song it was scary it had death all over its lyrics though it didn’t have any words walking I started to drop tears as the song grew louder and louder I started running I couldn’t see a thing I changed my render distance to far still I couldn’t see anything instead of a few blocks around me none of the renders worked it stayed the same I ran and ran and ran until I came to a large wall I did what I was supposed to do what I do each time I log on to minecraft each time I make a new world each time before I make a house and each time before each night I broke blocks and that’s what I did I broke a bunch of blocks two blocks to be honest which was enough for me to go through though I broke the blocks and I got something called death stone and when I placed it back two word were written they spelled this : YOUR END
I ran as far as I could and all of a sudden I was on a cliff a lever near me and four monsters or from their looks KINGS a king for every kind a
Skeleton king a zombie king a creeper king and and and Notch the maker of minecraft he was filled with blood his eyes pulled out hanging from the cliff the three kings trying to help him with tears in their eyes I found three staffs and then all of a sudden I started hearing a demonic voice saying : you have crossed the line u thing u can stop me well …… YOU CAN’T
I was scared I was surprised I said : w…what are you where are you were the ones who sent those creepers and zombies WHERE YOU THE ONE WHO DID THIS TO NOTCH
He laughed and laughed until his noise faded out I looked behind me the world was fading out everything falling the zombie king grabbed notch and put me on his shoulder then they ran I woke up and they explained everything turns out a man from india who was notch’s best friend and a very good hacker named herobrine had the idea of minecraft while herobrine was learning programing Notch created the game with a team he formed the game was beta and herobrine was shocked that Notch stole his idea he hacked into the game since beta version and until now all he did was create awful traps for players and destroy their worlds here are a few pictures from my experience :
Awful right ??? now back to the story
They said that when he hacked into the game and now it’s not beta it’s 1.6.2 and he found an error in the code witch allowed him to give himself power more than anyone could imagine tougher than notch himself he saved that code and now it’s permanent and they said that their end was near and that minecraft will be erased I hated that idea and I rushed to the source of that voice that turns out was made by herobrine
Until I came to a room with humans like me and monsters that I used to fight only that humans were monsters in that place monsters were crying and they were filled with blood which was impossible the minecraft.jar witch has all info of the game didn’t have those models in the chests I could find diamond swords and chain which was like a rope ANOTHER item which was not in the .jar I got a diamond sword with a fire aspect enchanted in it I could know that from the glow on it the humans saw me and said it time for a change then ran after me screaming and enchanting this song : today is the end today u die today we kill tomorrow we cry today is the day to think with our swords today notch dies and the lord herobrine rules the world destroys everyone and then goes
I entered a room and locked the iron door they laughed and went away the game lagged a lot and then the lagging stopped I looked behind me to find an enderman crying and more weirdly he had blue eyes I couldn’t control my character no more he was moving on his own he touched the enderman’s hand and the enderman rolled himself around me i pressed F5 for third person view I was half a human and half an enderman turns out what I used to kill all these days of playing minecraft was defending himself against me and my kind and at the end I …… i
Was fighting with what I used to fight against what I was and used to protect
Not everything is what is seems not everything has an end not everything can be described not everything has to be discovered cause something’s better be “myths” and other better be “not-known”
And that’s my story how it ended it ended by the monsters and me using their powers to kill the humans in minecraft and the villagers helping us with their magic to destroy lord herobrine and his story lives in all of us and this and when I die they will teach about me they will tell about my story and about the war I had the war I WON they will teach the new born humans to be good they will teach them combat and martial arts there will be hunter builders warriors but they will not fight monsters they will fight robbers murderers. and with the help of the good humans the monsters and Notch which turns out had helped us not where he geographically was he helped us mentally being in our minds when we fought he gave all of us HOPE
……….. THE End …….. Note: of course Notch returns cause he’s the maker of minecraft and since he added horses to minecraft he got me one with golden armor on it we all rode our way to a party were we celebrated and got super cool stuff
Dictionary :
Mod : stands for modification which is something that tempers the behavior of the game and can be a new content or a whole change in the game’s behavior and GUI
Notch : the real maker of minecraft
Lord Herobrine : a “Myth” as some people might say and a real creature as some players like to say anyway what the official minecraft forums say that it’s just a myth started by a “ low life player “ as they like to say
Zombie : we all know what that is
Creeper : a green creature that creates an explosion when is near the player and creates a crater that destroys blocks around it and if lightning strikes it it becomes a charged creepr witch is as I said 10 times tougher and a large crater after the explosion of course
Enderman : it was made after slender man know slender to know ender man or the other way around
Slenderman : The Slender Man (See other names to the right) is a creature or being with various nebulously defined characteristics and abilities. Slender Man was first mentioned in Something Awful Forum's "Create Paranormal Images". Slender Man generally appears (in modern times) as a tall man in a black or grey suit, red or black tie, and white shirt, with no eyes, mouth, or clearly defined facial features. It has no hair, and generally has normal-looking bare hands. Slenderman typically is depicted in imagery and literature as between 6 and 15 feet tall, depending on the situation, and in video as around 6-7 feet tall. Because of its inexact nature, and differences between series, no one has yet determined what it is. Currently, the two leading theories as to what the Slenderman may be are the Tulpa Effect and Quantum Theory. The internet popularity of Slenderman has spawned a massive amount of interconnected ARGs, collectively known as the Slenderman Mythos. And I will not mention it’s powers but if u want to know type this in your browser : slenderman wiki and select the first link
The nether : is another dimension with lava as it’s water and netherrack as it’s grass with different mobs all special and more powerful
Netherrack : a red block which when lit on fire keeps the fire on until u turn it of used in fireplaces and not like other blocks because all the other blocks will turn out the fire after a minute
Villagers: the game creates villages with villagers. there are priests butchers,librarians,etc…
Lagged : ( the word lag in past form ) : we all experience lag in games as if u were playing a game and it doesn’t work properly u can’t move clearly and do stuff the was your supposed to cause the game is stopping and then working and stopping then working and I think u know what I mean
Myths : creatures might be real and might be just myths they can be created by a human for entertaining purposes followed by a paid game so he can get rich or something really seen by someone which is now considered a physic and living in a hospital
One thing I want to add is that we shouldn’t be afraid from monsters despite what we think about them despite what everyone thinks we cannot be the only creatures that have the right to kill and destroy humanity maybe god already hired someone other than satin to do it. it could be the aliens maybe zombies wait wait maybe slender man anyway what I’m saying is that instead of being scared we should be sorry for them they have been here all along before we were born and they will stay here after we die one or two monsters or one from every kind they don’t die this is why we should be sorry for them when we rest in peace at the end they will still be here on earth lurking in the shadows waiting for a day to come a day to let them leave and leave their misery behind them they have always been here form the very beginning and they will always be here after we are all gone ……………
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I really hope u enjoyed and got goosebumps and got spooked out so as i said all ur ideas are good all of u r smart u all are creative u just gotta unleash that creativity ( sorry i wasn't able to post the pictures they were a bunch of big holes in the ground lava and nether rack on fire ( all made by me of course ) but that was it all the pics were lava destroyed trees bla bla bla )
~Proper punctuation. Run-on sentences hurt readers' eyes! Don't be afraid of that period key. This goes for capitalization as well, since they go hand-in-hand. A good way to think of it is how you would speak in real life. When would you pause? Try to make sure sentences are complete and that they make sense.
~Spelling. While you had pretty good spelling, a few words need to be changed. Using "u" instead of "you," for instance, was one of the more common ones. Literature is formal. ESPECIALLY creepypastas. You need to take something seriously to be scared of it, and you can't really do that if it looks more like a text message than a book.
~Pace. A very common issue among blooming authors. I struggled with this for quite some time. A lot of times something will feel rushed. Like in a movie, if they were to cut out an entire scene. Sometimes the "filler" content that you'd like to leave out can be boring to write, but it must be done. Don't worry about how long it is. Maybe some people will find it too long for their taste, but overall you'll get a much better story if you take the time and effort to flesh it out and put in all the necessary details you need. Adjectives are your friends.
~Practice. As with any skill, this is one of the most important things ever. Making better stories isn't always easy, and you might find it better to hone your skills in unofficial short stories, possibly written in a notebook during your free time. Such a method also has the nice side-effect of giving you ideas for your bigger stories that you'd share in places like this one.
~Proper punctuation. Run-on sentences hurt readers' eyes! Don't be afraid of that period key. This goes for capitalization as well, since they go hand-in-hand. A good way to think of it is how you would speak in real life. When would you pause? Try to make sure sentences are complete and that they make sense.
~Spelling. While you had pretty good spelling, a few words need to be changed. Using "u" instead of "you," for instance, was one of the more common ones. Literature is formal. ESPECIALLY creepypastas. You need to take something seriously to be scared of it, and you can't really do that if it looks more like a text message than a book.
~Pace. A very common issue among blooming authors. I struggled with this for quite some time. A lot of times something will feel rushed. Like in a movie, if they were to cut out an entire scene. Sometimes the "filler" content that you'd like to leave out can be boring to write, but it must be done. Don't worry about how long it is. Maybe some people will find it too long for their taste, but overall you'll get a much better story if you take the time and effort to flesh it out and put in all the necessary details you need. Adjectives are your friends.
~Practice. As with any skill, this is one of the most important things ever. Making better stories isn't always easy, and you might find it better to hone your skills in unofficial short stories, possibly written in a notebook during your free time. Such a method also has the nice side-effect of giving you ideas for your bigger stories that you'd share in places like this one.
wow, thanks a lot really i appreciate it but i wanna know how people think about the plot the events etc .... and i will make sure to punctuate check my spelling and all the other stuff next time but i wanna ask something.
Do u write creepypastas and minecraft stories ??
Two things:
1. I would've read it, but it seemed like it was coming from someone who knew nothing about writing, so that creates:
- Intimidation, due to a wall of words
- Nobody reading it xD
2. dragontyron is the writer of the Minecraft Fan-Fiction "Cubic Fire", started in October 22nd, 2011, which has reached 28 chapters so
far. Last story I read, and my, was it awesome
I'm sorry to say, my friend, this has many errors. Heed Dragontyron, they know what they're doing. Within the first few words I found a misteak mistake. "Witch" is the kind that brews potions and eats little children, while "Which" is like "Which should I choose?". You need to watch out for that stuff. Other than that, I think this could make it far, you just need practice! Keep up the good work, and someday you'll master it!
NOTE: PLEASE TELL ME IF U FIND AN ERROR OR IF U WANT ME TO CHANGE OR ADD SOMETHING
ANOTHER NOTE : PLEASE TELL ME UR IDEAS FOR a MINECRAFT STORY,SONG or CREEPY PASTA
.......................................................................................................................................................................
I’m a minecrafter witch means I’m good at minecraft in fact very good that I would fighting the ender dragon 3 days after I spawn but one say I logged onto my minecaft and entered a world and the most strange things started to happen things that made me wanna go further and see where I would end up it might sound like a stupid idea for a movie but imagine u were there and imagine u had what I had heroic personality fast reflexes what would u do and here began my story and the villain was notch’s dead brother it was herobrine yes he was the villain in fact a villain’s right arm but the shadows were the boss in my story they were what everyone feared don’t u think that people go sleep at night not just to grow up or rest or bla blab l they go to their homes at night to hide from the shadows and the same thing happens in minecraft over and over again I might take u into many stories with many loops but this is what my story is all about and so it begins ………
1/April/2012
I was in a new world witch I like to call adventurer’s paradise I found two lake’s and between them was a grass land witch I made my home and farm behind my house was a dark jungle and in front was a mountain and on the left side of the lake was a desert behind some trees and on the right a larger mountain I made a room with a fireplace in case It rains and a shelter for my dinosaurs ( yes I have a mod called animal bikes that allows me to spawn and ride animals ) and I made a tree house in case my friends decide to join my world
2/April/2012
I was running around gathering wood when i heard an explosion I ran back home to find creepers all over the place I grabbed my diamond sword and lured them into the water where there explosion wouldn’t destroy more of my home when lightning appeared at day time without rain and made them charged creepers witch mean a creeper only 10* times tougher I killed them in the water without getting a lot of damage and went to repair what they destroyed
3/April/2012
I woke up to find zombies in my indoor swimming pool and more of them in my base above the bed room I ran out of the house an locked the iron doors all my items and books where in that place so I went to the tree house to figure stuff out
Now 4/April/2012
12:0 am
I am in my tree house I don’t know what to do I have a bunch of weapons up here some swords,knifes,muskets and bows all iron It was night and night time makes monsters stronger now I had lights all over my base and I locked the doors how did they enter it stays a mystery and how they got in might be a glitch but I didn’t think so I slept and woke up underwater I was not drowning and I was not being hurt by anything there were monsters all around me they didn’t even notice me I didn’t have any hearts and instead of hunger points I had blood in jars I was shocked I stopped playing minecraft
11/April/2012
A week later which is now I got it together and went to find out what I was dealing with I logged in and instead of adventurer’s paradise I found Hell in MineCraft I went in my eyes half closed and I spawned in the nether I walked and walked with a song playing it wasn’t like your everyday Selena Gomez or Miley Cyrus song it was scary it had death all over its lyrics though it didn’t have any words walking I started to drop tears as the song grew louder and louder I started running I couldn’t see a thing I changed my render distance to far still I couldn’t see anything instead of a few blocks around me none of the renders worked it stayed the same I ran and ran and ran until I came to a large wall I did what I was supposed to do what I do each time I log on to minecraft each time I make a new world each time before I make a house and each time before each night I broke blocks and that’s what I did I broke a bunch of blocks two blocks to be honest which was enough for me to go through though I broke the blocks and I got something called death stone and when I placed it back two word were written they spelled this : YOUR END
I ran as far as I could and all of a sudden I was on a cliff a lever near me and four monsters or from their looks KINGS a king for every kind a
Skeleton king a zombie king a creeper king and and and Notch the maker of minecraft he was filled with blood his eyes pulled out hanging from the cliff the three kings trying to help him with tears in their eyes I found three staffs and then all of a sudden I started hearing a demonic voice saying : you have crossed the line u thing u can stop me well …… YOU CAN’T
I was scared I was surprised I said : w…what are you where are you were the ones who sent those creepers and zombies WHERE YOU THE ONE WHO DID THIS TO NOTCH
He laughed and laughed until his noise faded out I looked behind me the world was fading out everything falling the zombie king grabbed notch and put me on his shoulder then they ran I woke up and they explained everything turns out a man from india who was notch’s best friend and a very good hacker named herobrine had the idea of minecraft while herobrine was learning programing Notch created the game with a team he formed the game was beta and herobrine was shocked that Notch stole his idea he hacked into the game since beta version and until now all he did was create awful traps for players and destroy their worlds here are a few pictures from my experience :
Awful right ??? now back to the story
They said that when he hacked into the game and now it’s not beta it’s 1.6.2 and he found an error in the code witch allowed him to give himself power more than anyone could imagine tougher than notch himself he saved that code and now it’s permanent and they said that their end was near and that minecraft will be erased I hated that idea and I rushed to the source of that voice that turns out was made by herobrine
Until I came to a room with humans like me and monsters that I used to fight only that humans were monsters in that place monsters were crying and they were filled with blood which was impossible the minecraft.jar witch has all info of the game didn’t have those models in the chests I could find diamond swords and chain which was like a rope ANOTHER item which was not in the .jar I got a diamond sword with a fire aspect enchanted in it I could know that from the glow on it the humans saw me and said it time for a change then ran after me screaming and enchanting this song : today is the end today u die today we kill tomorrow we cry today is the day to think with our swords today notch dies and the lord herobrine rules the world destroys everyone and then goes
I entered a room and locked the iron door they laughed and went away the game lagged a lot and then the lagging stopped I looked behind me to find an enderman crying and more weirdly he had blue eyes I couldn’t control my character no more he was moving on his own he touched the enderman’s hand and the enderman rolled himself around me i pressed F5 for third person view I was half a human and half an enderman turns out what I used to kill all these days of playing minecraft was defending himself against me and my kind and at the end I …… i
Was fighting with what I used to fight against what I was and used to protect
Not everything is what is seems not everything has an end not everything can be described not everything has to be discovered cause something’s better be “myths” and other better be “not-known”
And that’s my story how it ended it ended by the monsters and me using their powers to kill the humans in minecraft and the villagers helping us with their magic to destroy lord herobrine and his story lives in all of us and this and when I die they will teach about me they will tell about my story and about the war I had the war I WON they will teach the new born humans to be good they will teach them combat and martial arts there will be hunter builders warriors but they will not fight monsters they will fight robbers murderers. and with the help of the good humans the monsters and Notch which turns out had helped us not where he geographically was he helped us mentally being in our minds when we fought he gave all of us HOPE
……….. THE End ……..
Note: of course Notch returns cause he’s the maker of minecraft and since he added horses to minecraft he got me one with golden armor on it we all rode our way to a party were we celebrated and got super cool stuff
Dictionary :
Mod : stands for modification which is something that tempers the behavior of the game and can be a new content or a whole change in the game’s behavior and GUI
Notch : the real maker of minecraft
Lord Herobrine : a “Myth” as some people might say and a real creature as some players like to say anyway what the official minecraft forums say that it’s just a myth started by a “ low life player “ as they like to say
Zombie : we all know what that is
Creeper : a green creature that creates an explosion when is near the player and creates a crater that destroys blocks around it and if lightning strikes it it becomes a charged creepr witch is as I said 10 times tougher and a large crater after the explosion of course
Enderman : it was made after slender man know slender to know ender man or the other way around
Slenderman : The Slender Man (See other names to the right) is a creature or being with various nebulously defined characteristics and abilities. Slender Man was first mentioned in Something Awful Forum's "Create Paranormal Images". Slender Man generally appears (in modern times) as a tall man in a black or grey suit, red or black tie, and white shirt, with no eyes, mouth, or clearly defined facial features. It has no hair, and generally has normal-looking bare hands. Slenderman typically is depicted in imagery and literature as between 6 and 15 feet tall, depending on the situation, and in video as around 6-7 feet tall. Because of its inexact nature, and differences between series, no one has yet determined what it is. Currently, the two leading theories as to what the Slenderman may be are the Tulpa Effect and Quantum Theory. The internet popularity of Slenderman has spawned a massive amount of interconnected ARGs, collectively known as the Slenderman Mythos. And I will not mention it’s powers but if u want to know type this in your browser : slenderman wiki and select the first link
The nether : is another dimension with lava as it’s water and netherrack as it’s grass with different mobs all special and more powerful
Netherrack : a red block which when lit on fire keeps the fire on until u turn it of used in fireplaces and not like other blocks because all the other blocks will turn out the fire after a minute
Villagers: the game creates villages with villagers. there are priests butchers,librarians,etc…
Lagged : ( the word lag in past form ) : we all experience lag in games as if u were playing a game and it doesn’t work properly u can’t move clearly and do stuff the was your supposed to cause the game is stopping and then working and stopping then working and I think u know what I mean
Myths : creatures might be real and might be just myths they can be created by a human for entertaining purposes followed by a paid game so he can get rich
One thing I want to add is that we shouldn’t be afraid from monsters despite what we think about them despite what everyone thinks we cannot be the only creatures that have the right to kill and destroy humanity maybe god already hired someone other than satin to do it. it could be the aliens maybe zombies wait wait maybe slender man anyway what I’m saying is that instead of being scared we should be sorry for them they have been here all along before we were born and they will stay here after we die one or two monsters or one from every kind they don’t die this is why we should be sorry for them when we rest in peace at the end they will still be here on earth lurking in the shadows waiting for a day to come a day to let them leave and leave their misery behind them they have always been here form the very beginning and they will always be here after we are all gone ……………
..........................................................................................................................................................................
I really hope u enjoyed and got goosebumps and got spooked out
~Proper punctuation. Run-on sentences hurt readers' eyes! Don't be afraid of that period key. This goes for capitalization as well, since they go hand-in-hand. A good way to think of it is how you would speak in real life. When would you pause? Try to make sure sentences are complete and that they make sense.
~Spelling. While you had pretty good spelling, a few words need to be changed. Using "u" instead of "you," for instance, was one of the more common ones. Literature is formal. ESPECIALLY creepypastas. You need to take something seriously to be scared of it, and you can't really do that if it looks more like a text message than a book.
~Pace. A very common issue among blooming authors. I struggled with this for quite some time. A lot of times something will feel rushed. Like in a movie, if they were to cut out an entire scene. Sometimes the "filler" content that you'd like to leave out can be boring to write, but it must be done. Don't worry about how long it is. Maybe some people will find it too long for their taste, but overall you'll get a much better story if you take the time and effort to flesh it out and put in all the necessary details you need. Adjectives are your friends.
~Practice. As with any skill, this is one of the most important things ever. Making better stories isn't always easy, and you might find it better to hone your skills in unofficial short stories, possibly written in a notebook during your free time. Such a method also has the nice side-effect of giving you ideas for your bigger stories that you'd share in places like this one.
wow, thanks a lot really i appreciate it but i wanna know how people think about the plot the events etc .... and i will make sure to punctuate check my spelling and all the other stuff next time but i wanna ask something.
Do u write creepypastas and minecraft stories ??
TT2000, you are genius.
1. I would've read it, but it seemed like it was coming from someone who knew nothing about writing, so that creates:
- Intimidation, due to a wall of words
- Nobody reading it xD
2. dragontyron is the writer of the Minecraft Fan-Fiction "Cubic Fire", started in October 22nd, 2011, which has reached 28 chapters so
far. Last story I read, and my, was it awesome
misteakmistake. "Witch" is the kind that brews potions and eats little children, while "Which" is like "Which should I choose?". You need to watch out for that stuff. Other than that, I think this could make it far, you just need practice! Keep up the good work, and someday you'll master it!beginningeverywhere