Many people say, the tall creature is evil,
or that its IQ is that of a weasel,
that the leafy,green creeper, has nothing to live for,
except its poor life, of suicide and gore.
They say hes a nuisance, a kamikaze, a bat,
they blow up your homes, and poof, just like that,
its invisible armor does nothing to him,
except raise his depress level up to the brim.
Some say he is as useless as a zombie,
or maybe a witch, their always so swampy!
They still cant believe their cousins are pigs,
and all they really ever do is dig!
I say creepers are all misunderstood,
Its IQ all depends on its mood,
This four-legged creeper might be a kamikaze,
but, at least hes not a green Nazi!
You think bats are awful, oh, how dreadful!
I would compare them because their both greatful,
Sure the invisible armor is useless,
but no one knows THAT except gaming brand students!
Zombies aren't useless, and neither are creepers,
if you think with THAT logic, then you are a keeper!
Pigs can do much much more than do a little digging,
just like a creeper does more than some hissing!
So thats what I think on the infamous creeper,
basically, they all are just weepers,
they cry in their home, nobody loves them,
because they end their lives when somebody hugs them!
This is my poem, hope you like it! More in the future!
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leafy,green creeper, hes their always so swampy! cant
Do fix these.
its invisible armor Its IQ all depends on its mood
What? I don't even know what you're talking about.
Pigs can do much much more than do a little digging,
They dig? Really now.
they all are just weepers, they cry in their home, nobody loves them, because they end their lives when somebody hugs them!
No offense, but this part sounds incredibly corny.
raise his depress level always so swampy! greatful gaming brand students!
Now you're starting to invent your own words. For one, "greatful" is not a word. "depress level" and "gaming brand students" are nonsense terms. "Swampy" refers to places, not living things.
Practice more. There's rhythm to it, descriptions are colorful, you just really need to make it sound more deep (no offense, your vocabulary sounds like a schoolboy's words), and also look better (by that I mean less errors). This poem can be better, in my opinion.
A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step, Minecraft is a journey of endless miles that does not start until you press that first button. Yes, I wrote this myself........
Many people say, the tall creature is evil,
or that its IQ is that of a weasel,
that the leafy,green creeper, has nothing to live for,
except its poor life, of suicide and gore.
They say hes a nuisance, a kamikaze, a bat,
they blow up your homes, and poof, just like that,
its invisible armor does nothing to him,
except raise his depress level up to the brim.
Some say he is as useless as a zombie,
or maybe a witch, their always so swampy!
They still cant believe their cousins are pigs,
and all they really ever do is dig!
I say creepers are all misunderstood,
Its IQ all depends on its mood,
This four-legged creeper might be a kamikaze,
but, at least hes not a green Nazi!
You think bats are awful, oh, how dreadful!
I would compare them because their both greatful,
Sure the invisible armor is useless,
but no one knows THAT except gaming brand students!
Zombies aren't useless, and neither are creepers,
if you think with THAT logic, then you are a keeper!
Pigs can do much much more than do a little digging,
just like a creeper does more than some hissing!
So thats what I think on the infamous creeper,
basically, they all are just weepers,
they cry in their home, nobody loves them,
because they end their lives when somebody hugs them!
This is my poem, hope you like it! More in the future!
leafy,green creeper,
hes
their always so swampy!
cant
Do fix these.
its invisible armor
Its IQ all depends on its mood
What? I don't even know what you're talking about.
Pigs can do much much more than do a little digging,
They dig? Really now.
they all are just weepers,
they cry in their home, nobody loves them,
because they end their lives when somebody hugs them!
No offense, but this part sounds incredibly corny.
raise his depress level
always so swampy!
greatful
gaming brand students!
Now you're starting to invent your own words. For one, "greatful" is not a word. "depress level" and "gaming brand students" are nonsense terms. "Swampy" refers to places, not living things.
Practice more. There's rhythm to it, descriptions are colorful, you just really need to make it sound more deep (no offense, your vocabulary sounds like a schoolboy's words), and also look better (by that I mean less errors). This poem can be better, in my opinion.