Thank you. And yes, I am using a hand-me-down laptop given to me by my mother (early version of Macbook Pro). I use an application called Pages. So, I just call it a pages document.
Chapter 6. Allied : In which almost all is explained, something is promised, and another is somewhat healed - is finally out! It is the longest chapter so far with about 4,000+ words. Hooray?
Chapter 7 should be out soon enough, I don't think anyone has noticed that Chapter 6 is out yet. Whatevs, I'm happy enough. I just thought, randomly, that I should add that Chapter 7 is the new Chapter 11. It seriously took me six chapters to get where it took me ten. Applause, everyone.
Chapter 7 should be out soon enough, I don't think anyone has noticed that Chapter 6 is out yet. Whatevs, I'm happy enough. I just thought, randomly, that I should add that Chapter 7 is the new Chapter 11. It seriously took me six chapters to get where it took me ten. Applause, everyone.
Six to get where you took ten...
Sorry but cannot view that as a accomplishment since i am constantly trying to stretch things out more... 0_0
I just meant that, since this is a re-written version of the first, where it took me ten or eleven chapters to get where the scenario is, I already got there in Chapter 6 or 7. Does that make it sound, um, clearer?
Alright, let's see here....I'm going to attempt a character application here.
Name: Raht
Age: As old as the beginning of Minecraftia
Gender: Male
Race: Nightmare [evil dream character]
Bio: Raht is probably the deadliest of all Nightmares. He stalks the dreams of unsuspecting victims, turning their pleasant visions into midnight terrors. His first sighting was at the beginning of Minecraft, and he has been sighted in dreams ever since. Legend says that Raht can make your dreams so horrifying, that you can die. There have been more than twenty mysterious deaths believed to be caused by the Nightmare. Raht is feared all throughout Minecraftia. People say that he is so frightening, that Herobrine is a like a cow compared to him. If you fall prey to Raht's dreams, there is no escaping the horrors that await.
Appearance: Wears a black cape with a hood obscuring his forehead. He has no face, but his skull awaits his victims. Raht carries a bronze scepter, which he can transform into a serpent to terrify victims. The cape hides the rest of his body. Raht wears a horrible grimace, and has black pits for eyes.
Personality: Terrifying, scathing, fears none, is feared by all
Good or Evil: Evil
Other: Raht only exists in dreams, he is not real. Sometimes he is believed to give messages or warnings. Other times, he enters dreams to terrify or kill. There is no way to stop Raht from entering your dreams until the Nightmare is pleased.
Alright, I gave it a shot. Good luck with the story!
This is pretty late mentioning this...
1. He will appear in Chapter 8.
2. He doesn't fear anyone, but keeps away anyways to some particular people.
3. He doesn't overpower Herobrine (who by the way is a fictional character).
4. Many people still fear him.
5. He to me, seems like a bearer of bad news. Which, in Celeste's case, will be taken advantage of... You will not understand what I mean... Read Chapter 8 when it's out. Hahahaha.
im reading this right now and im loving every single line, its a lovely and nice read i must say.
i'm currently reading chapter 3 but i intend to finish reading it until tomorrow.
i also intend to write my own story who knows, im really lazy to write but ill try anyway
Why, thank you! It's nice having these comments, because when I read my own story... I just close my eyes, shake my head, and hate myself for the next few minutes. Take your time, the chapters become longer. If you do choose to write your own story, I wish you the best of luck. Happy writing!
Good story so far, wishing you luck for chapter 4 and beyond! Also,
Name: The Observer (reference to TribeTwelve's secondary antagonist, The Observer. Reaaaaaaaal original here)
Age: Unknown
Gender: Male
Race: He is in Human form, though his actual race is a Fallen Angel.
Bio: The Observer plays a medium role in Minecraft history and religion: He is the gatekeeper between the Nether and the world of Minecraft, enabling entry to those who are worthy enough to enter the hell that is the Nether. He had regular fights with Herobrine who tried to escape the Nether to gain control of the Minecraftian world.
One day, Herobrine composed a master plan in order to escape, though this didn't work out. His plan was to send in his minions to enter the Minecraft world while he fought The Observer. They fought in a platform of netherrack, lava was surrounding them with mountains and fields of nettherrack were around them.
The Observer had lost the battle, though, before Herobrine could kill him, The Observer activated a self-destruct switch that had removed the gate from existence. This angered Herobrine, making him deal the final blow to The Observer, stabbing his heart with his Netherrack Sword, corrupting The Observer. He, however, managed to trade body's with another human, making him a sacrifice for him to live on.
The sword, however, still made him corrupt, and he eventually turned evil. He couldn't be killed by Notch because he wasn't bound to him in anyway, and also, he could live forever.
Appearance: Has greasy brown hair with pale white skin, wearing a black jacket and black jeans. Also wears dark glasses.
Personality: He is wise, though he is always an attention seeker. He stalked people who ever saw him, though only 1 person ever actually saw him. Likes to collect evidence, killing people, stalking people, though dislikes him possibly being revealed to the world.
Good or Evil: Evil
Other: Likely to cause coughing if present near a person, causes nose bleeds if close to him (If OP, only keep the coughing thing).
Hopely he gets accepted!
Oh gosh, I totally forgot about this. Dang it.
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Seems like I have some...
I was worried that I didn't. Phew. Thanks.
Pages document?
Seems like I have some...
Sorry but cannot view that as a accomplishment since i am constantly trying to stretch things out more... 0_0
Seems like I have some...
1. He will appear in Chapter 8.
2. He doesn't fear anyone, but keeps away anyways to some particular people.
3. He doesn't overpower Herobrine (who by the way is a fictional character).
4. Many people still fear him.
5. He to me, seems like a bearer of bad news. Which, in Celeste's case, will be taken advantage of... You will not understand what I mean... Read Chapter 8 when it's out. Hahahaha.
i'm currently reading chapter 3 but i intend to finish reading it until tomorrow.
i also intend to write my own story who knows, im really lazy to write but ill try anyway