Hm...as I said: I have a busy weekend. Do not expect Chapter 3 until Sunday night or Monday. Sorry for delay! On EndWar, I was posting 3 chapters a day!
But things have changed. I'm taking time to make the chapters longer and more detailed. Anyways, do not be afraid to post your comments.
Also, I have decided to allow character applications. Hooray!
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Well, considering EndWar was pretty good, and you're taking more time on chapters this book, then I don't mind you having a piece of my chaotic mind in the form of a character.
Name: Rytrien
Age:17 years.
Gender: Male
Species: Human, but raised by spiders (More of that in the Bio)
Good or Evil: Good
Personality: Untrusting at first, and tends to stalk people he deems suspicious, and when he's fighting, he usually hides, then comes out at the last second and continues the fight, and when he gets ambushed, it's not him who gets ambushed, it's the attackers. When he's with friends he relaxes a bit, but can deflect a weapon in an instant.
Bio: Rytrien lived with his parents in a village nearby a bunch of large cave systems, and his parents had made friends with some of the local spiders, with a deal that they wouldn't mine any of the ores around the spiders' nests, so long as they wouldn't hurt them. (And yes, I know the idea of talking with spiders is rediculous, but his parents were slightly telepathic.) One day when he went caving with his parents for the first time, there was a cave in, and he barely got to safety before he was killed, which was when he was 5, but the spot he went into just so happened to be a spider's nest, and the spiders who lived in it taught him their language, as his parents had given sentience to them. Eventually he came out, but not without being prepared.
Other: He has extremely good night vision, and sometimes his eyes glow in the dark faintly, he is very nimble, and can act faster than anyone else, he can also climb up vertical surfaces to an extent, but not slippery surfaces like glass. And you missed
appearence and weapons/ inventory. He can also commune with spiders.
Appearence: Green eyes, pale skin, he has a small nose, and wears black clothes he made from silk and dye, he also wears diamond boots, which he made.
Inventory: A long iron quaterstaff (Can't remember how to spell quater! :/) with a gold grip and iron outside of it, and diamond on the end, he also wears a diamond dagger on his left leg which is enchanted with Smite V (Or max, can't remember what it was...) and Unbreaking III. He also carries a stack of melons, since he started a farm, he also has a diamond pickaxe with Effeciency V And Unbreaking III, and if you're asking how he made them, abandoned mineshaft has wood, and you're pretty bound to find one while mining. He also carries around a stack of gold and iron, and 16 diamonds, all of which he found, he also had a diamond pendant.
Forgot how to spell some things but, I did my best. And feel free to change anything, so long as you don't majorly change him.
Well, considering EndWar was pretty good, and you're taking more time on chapters this book, then I don't mind you having a piece of my chaotic mind in the form of a character.
Name: Rytrien
Age:17 years.
Gender: Male
Species: Human, but raised by spiders (More of that in the Bio)
Good or Evil: Good
Personality: Untrusting at first, and tends to stalk people he deems suspicious, and when he's fighting, he usually hides, then comes out at the last second and continues the fight, and when he gets ambushed, it's not him who gets ambushed, it's the attackers. When he's with friends he relaxes a bit, but can deflect a weapon in an instant.
Bio: Rytrien lived with his parents in a village nearby a bunch of large cave systems, and his parents had made friends with some of the local spiders, with a deal that they wouldn't mine any of the ores around the spiders' nests, so long as they wouldn't hurt them. (And yes, I know the idea of talking with spiders is rediculous, but his parents were slightly telepathic.) One day when he went caving with his parents for the first time, there was a cave in, and he barely got to safety before he was killed, which was when he was 5, but the spot he went into just so happened to be a spider's nest, and the spiders who lived in it taught him their language, as his parents had given sentience to them. Eventually he came out, but not without being prepared.
Other: He has extremely good night vision, and sometimes his eyes glow in the dark faintly, he is very nimble, and can act faster than anyone else, he can also climb up vertical surfaces to an extent, but not slippery surfaces like glass. And you missed
appearence and weapons/ inventory. He can also commune with spiders.
Appearence: Green eyes, pale skin, he has a small nose, and wears black clothes he made from silk and dye, he also wears diamond boots, which he made.
Inventory: A long iron quaterstaff (Can't remember how to spell quater! :/) with a gold grip and iron outside of it, and diamond on the end, he also wears a diamond dagger on his left leg which is enchanted with Smite V (Or max, can't remember what it was...) and Unbreaking III. He also carries a stack of melons, since he started a farm, he also has a diamond pickaxe with Effeciency V And Unbreaking III, and if you're asking how he made them, abandoned mineshaft has wood, and you're pretty bound to find one while mining. He also carries around a stack of gold and iron, and 16 diamonds, all of which he found, he also had a diamond pendant.
Forgot how to spell some things but, I did my best. And feel free to change anything, so long as you don't majorly change him.
Accepted! Do not expect Rytrien until Chapter 5 or beyond. Nice application! It'll fit in perfectly.
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I'm fine with waiting, unless it takes a month, and I'm glad he'll fit in, and for some reason it seems like whenever I want to make a short app it becomes a wall of text. Just saying.
I have a busy week as well. I might not get Chapter 3 released for some time. Once again, sorry for the delay! I'll make sure to get a lot done once I have free time.
Alright. I have some free time this morning and afternoon, so I will work on getting Chapter 3 done. One last note, I still need 4 "good" character applications submitted. It doesn't matter which gender, but I need them done to fit into the story. You may also submit some "evil" characters as well. Thanks! ~~DreadMage
Name: fÃrinne (Irish for truth.) Age: 50 Gender: Female. Species: spider. Good or Evil: Good Personality: Always wants for justice. Very caring at times but has a great streak for vengeance. Bio: She is telepathic, and may know Rytrien from his growing up. She has a very obscure background other than that. Other: Is very strong and has a bit of poison even though she is a normal spider.
Name: fÃrinne (Irish for truth.) Age: 50 Gender: Female. Species: spider. Good or Evil: Good Personality: Always wants for justice. Very caring at times but has a great streak for vengeance. Bio: She is telepathic, and may know Rytrien from his growing up. She has a very obscure background other than that. Other: Is very strong and has a bit of poison even though she is a normal spider.
Chapter three has been published. (yay) It turns out I might have another busy weekend. (OMG!) I'll try to get in Chapter 4 tomorrow or Thursday. Chapter 5 might have to wait until Saturday or Sunday, maybe even Monday! (again, OMG!) I hope you guys can survive for that long. (just kidding, you'll be fine)
I'll be at my aunt and uncle's until the end of the weekend. I'm leaving tomorrow. Chapter 5 will not be released until then. Until Monday, have a nice weekend.
Name: Dilleron
Age: 39
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Good or Evil: Both!
Personality: Dilleron is a great fighter, but he is very cocky and proud of himself. He hates it when people are better than him. He is rude at times, and is always looking for a fight.
Bio: Dilleron was a famous warrior that was known for slaying a whole army of zombies by himself. After his amazing feat, Dilleron claimed he could defeat any foe. His fame grew and grew. Eventually, he decided to kill the most feared witch in all the land. During the battle, the witch sprayed Dilleron with a strange potion. Dilleron lost the battle and went home a failure. That night is when he learned of the potion's effects. Every time the sun went down, Dilleron would turn to a bloodthirsty zombie, rampaging the land.
Other: This is a suggestion for the story!
Dilleron joins Grant on his quest, but begins to take control of the mission. Because of him, the whole group falls apart. During the first few nights, he attacks Grant. That's when they discover a potion that can temporarily cure him.
Name: Dilleron
Age: 39
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Good or Evil: Both!
Personality: Dilleron is a great fighter, but he is very cocky and proud of himself. He hates it when people are better than him. He is rude at times, and is always looking for a fight.
Bio: Dilleron was a famous warrior that was known for slaying a whole army of zombies by himself. After his amazing feat, Dilleron claimed he could defeat any foe. His fame grew and grew. Eventually, he decided to kill the most feared witch in all the land. During the battle, the witch sprayed Dilleron with a strange potion. Dilleron lost the battle and went home a failure. That night is when he learned of the potion's effects. Every time the sun went down, Dilleron would turn to a bloodthirsty zombie, rampaging the land.
Other: This is a suggestion for the story!
Dilleron joins Grant on his quest, but begins to take control of the mission. Because of him, the whole group falls apart. During the first few nights, he attacks Grant. That's when they discover a potion that can temporarily cure him.
Hm...I like the idea of a werezombie...I guess that's what you can call it. Accepted.
Name: Randolph Age: 67 Gender: Male Species: Skeleton Good or Evil: Evil Personality: Irritable Bio: Randolph was an ordinary Minecraftian citizen for his whole life. He died at the age of 20 by falling into a ravine. Since then, he had been a zombie for many years, until all his flesh rotted away and he became a skeleton. He became the leader of a tribe of skeletons who live in a cave during the day and hunt for humans during the night. Other: He has a bow enchanted with knockback III and full leather armor. Because of this, he can stay out during the daytime.
Hope you can make him fit in! If not, it's OK. I loved End War and can't wait for the next chapters of A World of Chaos!
Name: Unknown (Can be referred to as the the Secret One)
Age: Unknown. Notch's first creation.
Gender: Male
Species: Enderman
Personality: Quiet, but incredibly intelligent and wise.
Bio: The Secret One's history is shrouded in mystery, but he has been known to speak somewhat frequently with Notch. He is a quiet but very wise creature, and is practically Omniscient. Being Notch's first creation, he is on very good terms, but only speaks with him in times of trouble. The Secret One is very hard to contact, as he moves around very frequently, but can be summoned in times when Enlightenment is needed. He very rarely fully reveals the full truth, and prefers to speak in riddles. He lives a life of secrecy, frequently teleporting between dimensions to avoid things, but do not mistake him for a coward. Renowned for his fighting capabilities, he prefers not kill his enemies, but rather strand them in the End. He is highly regarded by all species except the Enderdragon, whose power pales in comparison to The Secret One.
Other: I can understand the difficulty in implementing a character like the Secret One. He is probably best suited as a peripheral, but still integral piece of the story (Kind of like the Outsider from the game "Dishonored")
But things have changed. I'm taking time to make the chapters longer and more detailed. Anyways, do not be afraid to post your comments.
Also, I have decided to allow character applications. Hooray!
I actually started reading this before I knew about EndWar. However, I am halfway through EndWar now and I am enjoying it so far!
Name: Rytrien
Age:17 years.
Gender: Male
Species: Human, but raised by spiders (More of that in the Bio)
Good or Evil: Good
Personality: Untrusting at first, and tends to stalk people he deems suspicious, and when he's fighting, he usually hides, then comes out at the last second and continues the fight, and when he gets ambushed, it's not him who gets ambushed, it's the attackers. When he's with friends he relaxes a bit, but can deflect a weapon in an instant.
Bio: Rytrien lived with his parents in a village nearby a bunch of large cave systems, and his parents had made friends with some of the local spiders, with a deal that they wouldn't mine any of the ores around the spiders' nests, so long as they wouldn't hurt them. (And yes, I know the idea of talking with spiders is rediculous, but his parents were slightly telepathic.) One day when he went caving with his parents for the first time, there was a cave in, and he barely got to safety before he was killed, which was when he was 5, but the spot he went into just so happened to be a spider's nest, and the spiders who lived in it taught him their language, as his parents had given sentience to them. Eventually he came out, but not without being prepared.
Other: He has extremely good night vision, and sometimes his eyes glow in the dark faintly, he is very nimble, and can act faster than anyone else, he can also climb up vertical surfaces to an extent, but not slippery surfaces like glass. And you missed
appearence and weapons/ inventory. He can also commune with spiders.
Appearence: Green eyes, pale skin, he has a small nose, and wears black clothes he made from silk and dye, he also wears diamond boots, which he made.
Inventory: A long iron quaterstaff (Can't remember how to spell quater! :/) with a gold grip and iron outside of it, and diamond on the end, he also wears a diamond dagger on his left leg which is enchanted with Smite V (Or max, can't remember what it was...) and Unbreaking III. He also carries a stack of melons, since he started a farm, he also has a diamond pickaxe with Effeciency V And Unbreaking III, and if you're asking how he made them, abandoned mineshaft has wood, and you're pretty bound to find one while mining. He also carries around a stack of gold and iron, and 16 diamonds, all of which he found, he also had a diamond pendant.
Forgot how to spell some things but, I did my best. And feel free to change anything, so long as you don't majorly change him.
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I have a busy week as well. I might not get Chapter 3 released for some time. Once again, sorry for the delay! I'll make sure to get a lot done once I have free time.
Comment your thoughts.
[sorry for delay]
Age: 50
Gender: Female.
Species: spider.
Good or Evil: Good
Personality: Always wants for justice. Very caring at times but has a great streak for vengeance.
Bio: She is telepathic, and may know Rytrien from his growing up. She has a very obscure background other than that.
Other: Is very strong and has a bit of poison even though she is a normal spider.
Chapter three has been published. (yay) It turns out I might have another busy weekend. (OMG!) I'll try to get in Chapter 4 tomorrow or Thursday. Chapter 5 might have to wait until Saturday or Sunday, maybe even Monday! (again, OMG!) I hope you guys can survive for that long. (just kidding, you'll be fine)
Anyway, have a nice week everybody!
I'll be at my aunt and uncle's until the end of the weekend. I'm leaving tomorrow. Chapter 5 will not be released until then. Until Monday, have a nice weekend.
By the way, I still need those 4 good character applications.
Also, my new story: Eternal, has been released! Check it out.
Age: 39
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Good or Evil: Both!
Personality: Dilleron is a great fighter, but he is very cocky and proud of himself. He hates it when people are better than him. He is rude at times, and is always looking for a fight.
Bio: Dilleron was a famous warrior that was known for slaying a whole army of zombies by himself. After his amazing feat, Dilleron claimed he could defeat any foe. His fame grew and grew. Eventually, he decided to kill the most feared witch in all the land. During the battle, the witch sprayed Dilleron with a strange potion. Dilleron lost the battle and went home a failure. That night is when he learned of the potion's effects. Every time the sun went down, Dilleron would turn to a bloodthirsty zombie, rampaging the land.
Other: This is a suggestion for the story!
Dilleron joins Grant on his quest, but begins to take control of the mission. Because of him, the whole group falls apart. During the first few nights, he attacks Grant. That's when they discover a potion that can temporarily cure him.
Age: 67
Gender: Male
Species: Skeleton
Good or Evil: Evil
Personality: Irritable
Bio: Randolph was an ordinary Minecraftian citizen for his whole life. He died at the age of 20 by falling into a ravine. Since then, he had been a zombie for many years, until all his flesh rotted away and he became a skeleton. He became the leader of a tribe of skeletons who live in a cave during the day and hunt for humans during the night.
Other: He has a bow enchanted with knockback III and full leather armor. Because of this, he can stay out during the daytime.
Hope you can make him fit in! If not, it's OK. I loved End War and can't wait for the next chapters of A World of Chaos!
Age: Unknown. Notch's first creation.
Gender: Male
Species: Enderman
Personality: Quiet, but incredibly intelligent and wise.
Bio: The Secret One's history is shrouded in mystery, but he has been known to speak somewhat frequently with Notch. He is a quiet but very wise creature, and is practically Omniscient. Being Notch's first creation, he is on very good terms, but only speaks with him in times of trouble. The Secret One is very hard to contact, as he moves around very frequently, but can be summoned in times when Enlightenment is needed. He very rarely fully reveals the full truth, and prefers to speak in riddles. He lives a life of secrecy, frequently teleporting between dimensions to avoid things, but do not mistake him for a coward. Renowned for his fighting capabilities, he prefers not kill his enemies, but rather strand them in the End. He is highly regarded by all species except the Enderdragon, whose power pales in comparison to The Secret One.
Other: I can understand the difficulty in implementing a character like the Secret One. He is probably best suited as a peripheral, but still integral piece of the story (Kind of like the Outsider from the game "Dishonored")
I hope you consider it!