The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
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Hello to everyone again, you might know me from my other book, The Aether's Rage, which if you haven't read before this, I suggest you do, or some things might not make sense, this originally was going to be a three book thing, but I got other ideas. So, feel free to leave a rating, or constructive critisism, if it's an insult, then shove it back into your keyboard. I will be updating randomly until I have a definite date set up, but until then, enjoy!
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The Nightmare
Chonicle I, Chapters I-X
Prologue
Five Years After "The Aether's Rage"
I felt wind against my cheeks, and heat against my brow, a wasteland spanned my vision, and it smelled of sulphur. "Hello?" I spoke into the hot air. "Ah, so you've finally come to your senses." I heard someone say behind me, and I turned around to see someone that was flickering between forms, sometimes being human, sometimes a creature so frightening I dare not describe it.
"Who are you?" I asked him. "You'll find out soon enough, but for now, let me give you the tour..." He said, and put his and on my forehead, and I felt a shock, then in my mind an image of a map of this area spanned my mind. "Why are you doing this?" I asked him. "Because, if you're going to be stuck here for an eternity I wouldn't want you to get lost, would I? Now, begone, and face me when you're truly ready." He said, and disappeared, and I felt the pull of a rip taking me into the Dimensional Vortex, and I fell asleep.
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I woke up near a mountain, which was just bare dirt and rock like the rest of the place. I felt my hand brush over a backpack, and I opened it, finding a few pieces of bread and meat, along with some clothes that looked heat resistant, and a piece of paper that said: "So, you've woken up, in order to defeat me you'll have to get to my castle, which is on the other side of my dimension. Good luck." I put my hand on my head in frustation, and dropped the piece of paper. It exploded a second after and was replaced with a flute made of dark wood and a metal bit on the end to blow into.
I looked at the back of my right hand; the markings were gone, which left me weaponless. I saw a great big castle in the distance, that must've been where the person who made that note was, so I decided to get my backpack and head towards it.
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The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
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It'll take a while to find it, but well, you'll find it. And it'll get better towards the middle, hopefully... I'm trying to use weapons that people don't use very often... and the reason for the flute... Well, this game called Mabinogi told me you could kill an ogre with a mandolin...
It'll take a while to find it, but well, you'll find it. And it'll get better towards the middle, hopefully... I'm trying to use weapons that people don't use very often... and the reason for the flute... Well, this game called Mabinogi told me you could kill an ogre with a mandolin...
Why does 'The Aether's Rage' cut off like that? Also confusing beginning, sounds somewhat like a dull adventure map.
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Yeah.. I don't really know how to write... and as for the end.. I was l too lazy to include what happened... Hopefully I get better at writing, I try to write my thoughts in a good way and they just turn out boring... :/
Yeah.. I don't really know how to write... and as for the end.. I was l too lazy to include what happened... Hopefully I get better at writing, I try to write my thoughts in a good way and they just turn out boring... :/
You write pretty well, its just that it seems that you are trying to make this into an rpg game. :\
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Maybe it's just how I write, and this book is going to get random and even more random. He has that flute for a reason, and there's a reason why it's called the Flute of Breaking.
Maybe it's just how I write, and this book is going to get random and even more random. He has that flute for a reason, and there's a reason why it's called the Flute of Breaking.
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The Nightmare
Chonicle I, Chapters I-X
Prologue
Five Years After "The Aether's Rage"
I felt wind against my cheeks, and heat against my brow, a wasteland spanned my vision, and it smelled of sulphur. "Hello?" I spoke into the hot air. "Ah, so you've finally come to your senses." I heard someone say behind me, and I turned around to see someone that was flickering between forms, sometimes being human, sometimes a creature so frightening I dare not describe it.
"Who are you?" I asked him. "You'll find out soon enough, but for now, let me give you the tour..." He said, and put his and on my forehead, and I felt a shock, then in my mind an image of a map of this area spanned my mind. "Why are you doing this?" I asked him. "Because, if you're going to be stuck here for an eternity I wouldn't want you to get lost, would I? Now, begone, and face me when you're truly ready." He said, and disappeared, and I felt the pull of a rip taking me into the Dimensional Vortex, and I fell asleep.
~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~
I woke up near a mountain, which was just bare dirt and rock like the rest of the place. I felt my hand brush over a backpack, and I opened it, finding a few pieces of bread and meat, along with some clothes that looked heat resistant, and a piece of paper that said: "So, you've woken up, in order to defeat me you'll have to get to my castle, which is on the other side of my dimension. Good luck." I put my hand on my head in frustation, and dropped the piece of paper. It exploded a second after and was replaced with a flute made of dark wood and a metal bit on the end to blow into.
I looked at the back of my right hand; the markings were gone, which left me weaponless. I saw a great big castle in the distance, that must've been where the person who made that note was, so I decided to get my backpack and head towards it.
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I take no credit from anything I copied, if any, but I take full credit for my story and also take credit for characters I made. If you copy the exact storyline of this story or have a character's name from my stories then I will ask you to change it, if you don't then you are a stubborn little thing.
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Now to go read "The Aether's Rage."
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Never thought about reading it. Eh....I'll give it a shot!
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you have a strange antagonist too.
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It's called the Flute of Breaking?
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