I like the new chapter, hope to see it in completed form soon though.
DarkScript, is this poster another account of yours . . . ? I'm not trying to offend you by saying this but he's posted updates for the story sometimes and both of you have "Brentwood, TN, USA" as your location . . .
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
DarkScript, is this poster another account of yours . . . ? I'm not trying to offend you by saying this but he's posted updates for the story sometimes and both of you have "Brentwood, TN, USA" as your location . . .
Finally added chapter 11. Sorry for the inconvenient wait. I will add chapter 12 and reedit chapter 11 soon. Please let me know what you think of the story thus far. And if you find errors, please 'IM' SilverPhantom1 and let him know what the issues are. Thanks!
'As I came around the corner I could see how truly massivethis creature was. It had to have been five hundred yards across at least. It’s massive tentacle like arms hung a hundred meters down from the initial body of the creature. It was simply massive.'
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That Quote seems familiar haha. And glad you like it. Thanks for reading, commenting, and rating! More to come soon.
AMERICAN English? Is The constant repetition of brining instead of bringing intentional?
ooo... Ch.12 complete... YAY!!
No that's just i'm dyslexic and can't spell the right words lol. If you find errors such as that, and there are many, please let "Steven" know so we can fix them. Thanks.
I've just made LOADS of images for if you go with a 'herobrine destroys all' storyline.
Ok well if you want to you can show me some and i'll see what i can use. However do keep in mind that Herobrine is not the main villain in the story
But i'll look at anything you want to share. And thanks for the interest in the story.
I made those images using my own resource pack which had black wool as pure black and white wool as pure white. When you get to the part about 'him' they might be useful.
I'm trying to make a sound pack for Minecraft. Making stuff like that is cool. Do you do mods and such?
Ah ok got it. And the sound mod is just an idea right now. We are still working on some other things at the moment. When we get more time we might work on the sound mod. If we do get to it the theme would just be to mess with the sounds of minecraft. Just a personal mod really.
DarkScript, is this poster another account of yours . . . ? I'm not trying to offend you by saying this but he's posted updates for the story sometimes and both of you have "Brentwood, TN, USA" as your location . . .
And it should all be there, i just checked it and it shows up.
Are these your images? If so then i could prob find a place for at least of of them.
But i'll look at anything you want to share. And thanks for the interest in the story.