I would suggest taking more time in between posting chapters and making the chapters themselves a lot longer. I like to use a page of 12-point font as a good minimum, but that can always be adjusted by other writers. Keep writing!
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
I am currently working on Chapter 12. I am not finished with the chapter yet, so you can't read it right now. It's been a while since I wrote Chapter 11. I will try to get more chapters in when I have free time. Thanks to all who have read my story!
I would suggest taking more time in between posting chapters and making the chapters themselves a lot longer. I like to use a page of 12-point font as a good minimum, but that can always be adjusted by other writers. Keep writing!
I am reserving this post for the Content Too Long error.