I really meant the scene after the next scene. The eta on that gives a kindof eta on the first.
Ah, I see. Well I'm not really sure. As I said in the Literature Subsection Off-Topic Chat, I'm going to be busy with summer assignments for my school and I'm still finishing my Prologue for RIFT. Scene V might come out in a week or two, but I have no idea when Scene VI will.As I said in the Foreword, if you read it, progress isn't always regular.
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
your style is amazing I really can't write something like this. great story. are you adding the chapter V? just asking, I don't want to rush things.
I am writing a short story here on the forums and i'm taking some inspiration by reading other stories.
your style is amazing I really can't write something like this. great story. are you adding the chapter V? just asking, I don't want to rush things.
I am writing a short story here on the forums and i'm taking some inspiration by reading other stories.
Thanks for commenting, and I'm really glad you enjoyed the story! Rest assured, I do intend to finish the story but with the start of my high school three weeks ago I have been very busy. I'll try to write Chapter V as soon as I can finish it.:D
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I have found out, that this vaguely qualifies as Tesla-Steampunk, because use of electricity (Redsteam).
Really? Great. I've always liked Tesla. I meant for Redsteam to exist in a plane halfway between coal power and electricity but I suppose it does lean towards the electricity side.
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I'm going to have to put Dark Aether on hiatus, at least for the time being. Clearly my first year of high school, is a much larger investment than I bargained for and with five-six hours of homework a night I really can't see myself updating it for the foreseeable future. I definitely intend to continue it at some point, but you can understand my need to establish set priorities for school and for my spare time. I don't want anyone to think I've stopped writing the story altogether, however, at least not yet. For now, though, the tile will contain the addendum [On Hiatus] and progress will be coming to a halt.
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Read this story, awesome stuff. Very different from the norm. It's really nice to see someone else who is as devoted to world-building and expository discussions between Aristocratic figures as I am. Any chance of a return from Hiatus? It would be amazing with the Convergence coming up and such.
Read this story, awesome stuff. Very different from the norm. It's really nice to see someone else who is as devoted to world-building and expository discussions between Aristocratic figures as I am. Any chance of a return from Hiatus? It would be amazing with the Convergence coming up and such.
Hey! I log on from time to time and I was surprised to see a new comment here. Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you liked it!
I don't think I'll ever resume this story; it's been a year and a half since I started it and I've changed a bit both as a writer and as a person since then. I did read up on the "Convergence" though, and it sounds like it's going to be great. Good luck!
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
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Ah, I see. Well I'm not really sure. As I said in the Literature Subsection Off-Topic Chat, I'm going to be busy with summer assignments for my school and I'm still finishing my Prologue for RIFT. Scene V might come out in a week or two, but I have no idea when Scene VI will.As I said in the Foreword, if you read it, progress isn't always regular.
I am writing a short story here on the forums and i'm taking some inspiration by reading other stories.
Thanks for commenting, and I'm really glad you enjoyed the story! Rest assured, I do intend to finish the story but with the start of my high school three weeks ago I have been very busy. I'll try to write Chapter V as soon as I can finish it.:D
TT2000, you are genius.
Really? Great. I've always liked Tesla. I meant for Redsteam to exist in a plane halfway between coal power and electricity but I suppose it does lean towards the electricity side.
Read this story, awesome stuff. Very different from the norm. It's really nice to see someone else who is as devoted to world-building and expository discussions between Aristocratic figures as I am.
Any chance of a return from Hiatus? It would be amazing with the Convergence coming up and such.
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Hey! I log on from time to time and I was surprised to see a new comment here. Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you liked it!
I don't think I'll ever resume this story; it's been a year and a half since I started it and I've changed a bit both as a writer and as a person since then. I did read up on the "Convergence" though, and it sounds like it's going to be great. Good luck!