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I'm getting a sense of unobtainable epicness from your writing. It's going to blind me soon. XD**Introductions is spelled 'introdcutions' in the first few sentences.
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OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
I'm getting a sense of unobtainable epicness from your writing. It's going to blind me soon. XD
Well, to be fair, I spent a lot of time rewriting and editing the Overture to get exactly the story I wanted to write.
Fun Fact: Cadworth, in the conceptual phase, was an assassin, a drunk, a nobleman and once even an Enderman. Yes, an Enderman. But in the end I decided to make him a Sentinel.
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
In the present, yes, I don't think he's going to be reincarnated or anything. But since Vikram gains the ability to travel through time at some point, who knows? He could meet him before he dies or even save him. But he was mostly there to introduce the Endermen, which are going to play a larger role in the story later as the harbingers of the Void.
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Yay! Endermen should turn people into more Endermen! And due to their teleportation capabilities, having that many Endermen in the world is ripping Space/Time apart, bringing the void! :D**I love your Enderment already... XD
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OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Yay! Endermen should turn people into more Endermen! And due to their teleportation capabilities, having that many Endermen in the world is ripping Space/Time apart, bringing the void!
**I love your Enderment already... XD
Enderment? Is that a pun on "endearment"? If so, I like it!
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Well... I figured that if I made it 'The Group' it'd seem like a typo. And a hashtag kind of makes it a proper noun, so...
#Thegroup was invented!
Good idea! By the way, are you doing character applications on "Curiosity and the Cat" or is that kind of a solo work? Because I wanted to apply a character to someones work but I couldn't really think of anyone who seems to need them.
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Mmm... Curiosity and the cat is planned to have a total of Three main characters...
Sadly, I've already fleshed them out. There will be no other characters. At. All. D;
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OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Mmm... Curiosity and the cat is planned to have a total of Three main characters...
Sadly, I've already fleshed them out. There will be no other characters. At. All. D;
Ah well. That's okay. I'll find someone else. Almost everyone wants characters. :P. By the way, once again, no pressure if you don't want to or anything, but my character applications section is totally open . . . you know . . . if you want to drop by . . . have a cup of tea . . .
Just kidding. No pressure. Also, stories that are written entirely by yourself do have a kind of charm, don't they?
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
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OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Um . . . no . . . That would make this a completely different kind of story.
I'm getting a sense of unobtainable epicness from your writing. It's going to blind me soon. XD**Introductions is spelled 'introdcutions' in the first few sentences.
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Well, to be fair, I spent a lot of time rewriting and editing the Overture to get exactly the story I wanted to write.
Fun Fact: Cadworth, in the conceptual phase, was an assassin, a drunk, a nobleman and once even an Enderman. Yes, an Enderman. But in the end I decided to make him a Sentinel.
Cadworth... an Enderman!? XD
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Well, he was supposed to eventually become an Enderman through a plot device that I may still end up using . . . But yeah I know it's pretty strange.
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
In the present, yes, I don't think he's going to be reincarnated or anything. But since Vikram gains the ability to travel through time at some point, who knows? He could meet him before he dies or even save him. But he was mostly there to introduce the Endermen, which are going to play a larger role in the story later as the harbingers of the Void.
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Enderment? Is that a pun on "endearment"? If so, I like it!
Well, I might still, but really, I have no idea what would fit into the category, so... it's still possible.
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Well, if you're having trouble, just look up "steampunk" on Google. But if you're thinking about it then definitely take your time. Thanks!
Enderment!
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Hooray! Ironically, this story has gotten half the replies in three days that my old story got in three months.
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
I like the hashtag.
#Thegroup was invented!
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Good idea! By the way, are you doing character applications on "Curiosity and the Cat" or is that kind of a solo work? Because I wanted to apply a character to someones work but I couldn't really think of anyone who seems to need them.
Sadly, I've already fleshed them out. There will be no other characters. At. All. D;
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Ah well. That's okay. I'll find someone else. Almost everyone wants characters. :P. By the way, once again, no pressure if you don't want to or anything, but my character applications section is totally open . . . you know . . . if you want to drop by . . . have a cup of tea . . .
Just kidding. No pressure. Also, stories that are written entirely by yourself do have a kind of charm, don't they?