Oh, that's not what I meant. I mean that people felt like the writing was in the same style as Diary of a Creeper.
Apparently, it was 'good'.
Apparently, I'm using words such as 'apparently' too much today.
Oh. Well in that case that's probably a good thing. I always wanted to write something like "An Angry Critique of the First Published Minecraft Fanfic" but I never really got around to it.
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Oh look! I finally posted CHAPTA ONE!
And it's much better (but still... eh) than the one I showed you guys. Will now go on a twelve week hiatus or something... D;
Stupid parents.
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OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Oh look! I finally posted CHAPTA ONE!
And it's much better (but still... eh) than the one I showed you guys. Will now go on a twelve week hiatus or something... D;
Stupid parents.
12 weeks? Noooooooo! I kind of just skimmed Chapter One but I'll read the whole thing later. I'm kind of busy. I noticed you mentioned the Void though, which is cool. And what' even cooler is that you gave it a capital "V".
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Well... considering that it was originally my idea...
T_T
XD
Meh.
I've no idea what this sentence is here for.
Doesn't the "Void" always have a capital "V"? I was implying that it's cool you didn't change it to a lowercase "v" like some people did (you and I both didn't), not that you stole the idea from me . . .
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
I noticed you mentioned the Void though, which is cool. And what' even cooler is that you gave it a capital "V".
Yea, the void is fascinating. I remember mining to bedrock for the first time and just peering into it. The mystery surrounding it makes it fun to write about.
It's also interesting that Mage chose to make the Void a proper noun in his story. I think it fits well with the spiritual nature surrounding it, like 'Heaven' or 'Hell'. Having 'the void' lowercase has a more natural feel to it, like 'the sky' or 'the ground.'
The descriptions in chapter 1 were quite beautiful, especially the part where the narrator is on a floating island.
Yea, the void is fascinating. I remember mining to bedrock for the first time and just peering into it. The mystery surrounding it makes it fun to write about.
It's also interesting that Mage chose to make the Void a proper noun in his story. I think it fits well with the spiritual nature surrounding it, like 'Heaven' or 'Hell'. Having 'the void' lowercase has a more natural feel to it, like 'the sky' or 'the ground.'
Funnily enough, the Minecraft skybox that makes the sky just gets dark and gains gray particle effects at very low depths, making the sky and the Void two sides of the same coin. Philosophical, no?
The Void is a power in my story as well. I think a capital "V" suits it.
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Um... it's with a capital for a reason that will be... 'revealed' later in the story. Same reason as HTNL4ever, actually. Perma-death is part of the reason, but not all of it.
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OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Apparently, it was 'good'.
Apparently, I'm using words such as 'apparently' too much today.
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Oh. Well in that case that's probably a good thing. I always wanted to write something like "An Angry Critique of the First Published Minecraft Fanfic" but I never really got around to it.
YAAY!
Oh, you haven't done it? D;
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
I kind of did actually. Look on the thread.
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
I suppose you could say that too.
PS: I think that you have just become a part of #Thegroup due to your derailing conversations... XD
Welcome to the club that is filled with people from 11 years old to people that are 15 years old. XD (yes, I do adore my XD face. XD)
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Yeah, or we could keep posting random stuff to make our stories look like they have more replies.
Oh, hey, I am already posting random thingies! O_O
Mind if I invite you to a discussion between me, Oncie, and... well... you, now?
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
I guess not.
And it's much better (but still... eh) than the one I showed you guys. Will now go on a twelve week hiatus or something... D;
Stupid parents.
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
12 weeks? Noooooooo! I kind of just skimmed Chapter One but I'll read the whole thing later. I'm kind of busy. I noticed you mentioned the Void though, which is cool. And what' even cooler is that you gave it a capital "V".
T_T
XD
Meh.
I've no idea what this sentence is here for.
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Doesn't the "Void" always have a capital "V"? I was implying that it's cool you didn't change it to a lowercase "v" like some people did (you and I both didn't), not that you stole the idea from me . . .
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Curse PremiumYea, the void is fascinating. I remember mining to bedrock for the first time and just peering into it. The mystery surrounding it makes it fun to write about.
It's also interesting that Mage chose to make the Void a proper noun in his story. I think it fits well with the spiritual nature surrounding it, like 'Heaven' or 'Hell'. Having 'the void' lowercase has a more natural feel to it, like 'the sky' or 'the ground.'
Funnily enough, the Minecraft skybox that makes the sky just gets dark and gains gray particle effects at very low depths, making the sky and the Void two sides of the same coin. Philosophical, no?
The Void is a power in my story as well. I think a capital "V" suits it.
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."