Yah, I know it was pretty short, but if I continued it would go on to a complete different topic, so I reached the smallest number of paragraphs a chapter should be. Besides, keeps my readers hooked ;). I'll try to make chapter 2 longer. As for chapter 2, I'm not quite sure when it will come out but it will be sometime this week.P.S to my last message, second page! Woo!
Do you want me to help you write this? Considering that Curiosity and the Cat is off to a slow start, I think I can help you with the next few chapters.I'm really fast at writing. That was improper grammar.
Anyways, I wrote most of How To NOT Live Forever in approximately three hours.
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OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Do you want me to help you write this? Considering that Curiosity and the Cat is off to a slow start, I think I can help you with the next few chapters.
I'm really fast at writing. That was improper grammar.
Anyways, I wrote most of How To NOT Live Forever in approximately three hours.
Thanks for your offer, and if I need your help I'll let you know, but I really want this story to be my own. It is my first story, and I envision many more to come. Also, I'm actually a very experienced writer, just not fanfiction wise. I'm planning on making a poem collection.
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Name: Jimmy John III Gender: Male Appearance: Two meters tall with dark skin. He has deep blue eyes and a gray miner's outfit. Personality: Always in it for himself. He may act like he is helping you, but he is really helping himself. Power/skill (MUST have one of the two): Power Bio: Jimmy grew up in a poor family. This taught him to survive. When his home mysteriously caved in one night, he set out mining to make himself rich. Other:
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Name: Jimmy John III Gender: Male Appearance: Two meters tall with dark skin. He has deep blue eyes and a gray miner's outfit. Personality: Always in it for himself. He may act like he is helping you, but he is really helping himself. Power/skill (MUST have one of the two): Power Bio: Jimmy grew up in a poor family. This taught him to survive. When his home mysteriously caved in one night, he set out mining to make himself rich. Other:
Good character, perfect for a plot twist. What is his power though?
Name: John "Jack" Grayson (Robin's middle name and last name . I am so obsessed with Teen Titans . But his nickname is different.) Gender: Male Appearance: Tall and slim. Some of his face is black due to a fire that destroyed his home and family years ago. He has black hair and blue eyes. Personality: An actions-speak-louder type of guy. Power/skill (MUST have one of the two): Has the ability to fly and summon lightning onto his foes. However, he can easily (but not every time) faint after using his power. So he normally will go hand-to-hand. Bio: After the emotionally scarring backstory mentioned before, Jack was, though it was very unlikely, struck by lightning. After respawning, he discovered he could fly and shoot lightning bolts. His goal in life is to find out whoever burned his home and defeat them. Other: to you.
Gender: Female Appearance: Her long blonde hair cascades over her squared shoulders in obvious contempt of gravity, bringing out the gold in her eyes and contrasting against her bright red lips. Her eyelashes are long and frivolous, as well as being black. She has thin eyebrows, blonde, and these serve to convey her many expressions neatly and quietly. She has a thin, hard line for a mouth, one that seems filled with sadness and looks very out of place with her petite nose cheerfully peering out from her long, skinny face. She usually wears a short-sleeved, long, striped shirt made of spider's webs and dye. For her 'pants', she tends to wear long, usually white, translucent garments. She enjoys wearing little black cat ears on her head. If you asked her how she got them, she wouldn't tell you. Her small hands are lithe and unscarred by battle, with nails short and cut back so that they don't cause discomfort inside of her white, silken gloves that she dons before battle. Personality: Almost depressed, morose, very kind, extremely loyal, doesn't take to people easily (AT ALL).
Power/skill (MUST have one of the two): Assyria can freeze things, but only if they are suitably watery. (More than 65% water). She MUST be touching the thing that she wants to freeze, and the ice ring expands by 10% of it's total area every second. Starting area is always 1 inch diameter circle at first point of contact. Cannot freeze things through gloves. Exact temperature of frozen things fluctuates from around -120 degrees Fahrenheit to -80 degrees Fahrenheit and begins to get warmer as soon as she stops touching it. She is not very good at combat, having only trained with the village boys. She does not yet know of her ability.
Bio: Waking up in a large crater, surrounded by broken rocks, piles of dirt, burning trees, and miniature waterfalls from the nearby lake, she's rather new to this world and doesn't know where she came from originally. After climbing out of the crater (it was nearly filled up by the lake draining into it,) Assyria noted that the forest she was in ended abruptly to her left. This, of course, caused her to walk in that direction and find herself in a town where she was later accepted as a citizen. A few weeks passed by. She was living with an elderly grandma (to three grandchildren) and ended up becoming quite close to a cute boy that lived next to *her* house. The day that she was determined to ask him to be her boyfriend/whatever they call those things, a group of raiders stormed the (undescribed) town and killed nearly everyone. Assyria didn't see her friend die, but she was pretty sure that he did. She ended up surviving by hiding in the grandma's basement mine and sealing the entrance with some dynamite.
This lead to her being trapped in the tunnel and hoping that someone - anyone - would save her. After a day or two of nothing, she decided that no one was coming for her and began to travel further down the (undescribed) mine, only to find a small breach in it's orderly hallways (yay! Description!)
She went into this breach to fin Cassidy's mine, and, when looking for the exit, stumbled upon the hole in the world.
Other: Assyria is now really upset and sad, possibly depressed, that her caretaker (grandma person/whatever) and her best friend/the person she loved are now dead... or are they? This leads her to hurtling herself into the Void in an attempt to kill herself.
((Is death permanent in this story? PS: In HTNL4ever, the only thing that could PERMANENTLY kill someone was falling into the Void... you can use that idea, just let people know it came from me, as I plan on using it still. ))
Name: John "Jack" Grayson (Robin's middle name and last name . I am so obsessed with Teen Titans . But his nickname is different.) Gender: Male Appearance: Tall and slim. Some of his face is black due to a fire that destroyed his home and family years ago. He has black hair and blue eyes. Personality: An actions-speak-louder type of guy. Power/skill (MUST have one of the two): Has the ability to fly and summon lightning onto his foes. However, he can easily (but not every time) faint after using his power. So he normally will go hand-to-hand. Bio: After the emotionally scarring backstory mentioned before, Jack was, though it was very unlikely, struck by lightning. After respawning, he discovered he could fly and shoot lightning bolts. His goal in life is to find out whoever burned his home and defeat them. Other: to you.
Very good. Thanks for being descriptive and I really like his power.
Gender: Female Appearance: Her long blonde hair cascades over her squared shoulders in obvious contempt of gravity, bringing out the gold in her eyes and contrasting against her bright red lips. Her eyelashes are long and frivolous, as well as being black. She has thin eyebrows, blonde, and these serve to convey her many expressions neatly and quietly. She has a thin, hard line for a mouth, one that seems filled with sadness and looks very out of place with her petite nose cheerfully peering out from her long, skinny face. She usually wears a short-sleeved, long, striped shirt made of spider's webs and dye. For her 'pants', she tends to wear long, usually white, translucent garments. She enjoys wearing little black cat ears on her head. If you asked her how she got them, she wouldn't tell you. Her small hands are lithe and unscarred by battle, with nails short and cut back so that they don't cause discomfort inside of her white, silken gloves that she dons before battle. Personality: Almost depressed, morose, very kind, extremely loyal, doesn't take to people easily (AT ALL).
Power/skill (MUST have one of the two): Assyria can freeze things, but only if they are suitably watery. (More than 65% water). She MUST be touching the thing that she wants to freeze, and the ice ring expands by 10% of it's total area every second. Starting area is always 1 inch diameter circle at first point of contact. Cannot freeze things through gloves. Exact temperature of frozen things fluctuates from around -120 degrees Fahrenheit to -80 degrees Fahrenheit and begins to get warmer as soon as she stops touching it. She is not very good at combat, having only trained with the village boys. She does not yet know of her ability.
Bio: Waking up in a large crater, surrounded by broken rocks, piles of dirt, burning trees, and miniature waterfalls from the nearby lake, she's rather new to this world and doesn't know where she came from originally. After climbing out of the crater (it was nearly filled up by the lake draining into it,) Assyria noted that the forest she was in ended abruptly to her left. This, of course, caused her to walk in that direction and find herself in a town where she was later accepted as a citizen. A few weeks passed by. She was living with an elderly grandma (to three grandchildren) and ended up becoming quite close to a cute boy that lived next to *her* house. The day that she was determined to ask him to be her boyfriend/whatever they call those things, a group of raiders stormed the (undescribed) town and killed nearly everyone. Assyria didn't see her friend die, but she was pretty sure that he did. She ended up surviving by hiding in the grandma's basement mine and sealing the entrance with some dynamite.
This lead to her being trapped in the tunnel and hoping that someone - anyone - would save her. After a day or two of nothing, she decided that no one was coming for her and began to travel further down the (undescribed) mine, only to find a small breach in it's orderly hallways (yay! Description!)
She went into this breach to fin Cassidy's mine, and, when looking for the exit, stumbled upon the hole in the world.
Other: Assyria is now really upset and sad, possibly depressed, that her caretaker (grandma person/whatever) and her best friend/the person she loved are now dead... or are they? This leads her to hurtling herself into the Void in an attempt to kill herself.
((Is death permanent in this story? PS: In HTNL4ever, the only thing that could PERMANENTLY kill someone was falling into the Void... you can use that idea, just let people know it came from me, as I plan on using it still. ))
Wow, really descriptive (ironically)! This is a really good character too, practically lays out her story for me :P. When people die in my story, besides void which always permanently kills (why Cassidy was so scared), is they respawn with no memory of what had happened in their past life. They also spawn in a totally different place then there home. This also makes for perfect plot twists ;).
Wow, really tough choices already and it isn't even July 1st :P. Good thing I'll be picking one later on as well, in a different chapter. You know what, I'm actually going to accept 2 now, and just introduce them in different parts of the story.
D;
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Yah, I know it was pretty short, but if I continued it would go on to a complete different topic, so I reached the smallest number of paragraphs a chapter should be. Besides, keeps my readers hooked ;). I'll try to make chapter 2 longer. As for chapter 2, I'm not quite sure when it will come out but it will be sometime this week.P.S to my last message, second page! Woo!
What now?
Anyways, I wrote most of How To NOT Live Forever in approximately three hours.
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
What now?
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Gender: Male
Appearance: Two meters tall with dark skin. He has deep blue eyes and a gray miner's outfit.
Personality: Always in it for himself. He may act like he is helping you, but he is really helping himself.
Power/skill (MUST have one of the two): Power
Bio: Jimmy grew up in a poor family. This taught him to survive. When his home mysteriously caved in one night, he set out mining to make himself rich.
Other:
What now?
*Insert signature here*
Lifting very heavy things.
Ok, thanks.
What now?
Gender: Male
Appearance: Tall and slim. Some of his face is black due to a fire that destroyed his home and family years ago. He has black hair and blue eyes.
Personality: An actions-speak-louder type of guy.
Power/skill (MUST have one of the two): Has the ability to fly and summon lightning onto his foes. However, he can easily (but not every time) faint after using his power. So he normally will go hand-to-hand.
Bio: After the emotionally scarring backstory mentioned before, Jack was, though it was very unlikely, struck by lightning. After respawning, he discovered he could fly and shoot lightning bolts. His goal in life is to find out whoever burned his home and defeat them.
Other:
Gender: Female
Appearance: Her long blonde hair cascades over her squared shoulders in obvious contempt of gravity, bringing out the gold in her eyes and contrasting against her bright red lips. Her eyelashes are long and frivolous, as well as being black. She has thin eyebrows, blonde, and these serve to convey her many expressions neatly and quietly. She has a thin, hard line for a mouth, one that seems filled with sadness and looks very out of place with her petite nose cheerfully peering out from her long, skinny face. She usually wears a short-sleeved, long, striped shirt made of spider's webs and dye. For her 'pants', she tends to wear long, usually white, translucent garments. She enjoys wearing little black cat ears on her head. If you asked her how she got them, she wouldn't tell you. Her small hands are lithe and unscarred by battle, with nails short and cut back so that they don't cause discomfort inside of her white, silken gloves that she dons before battle.
Personality: Almost depressed, morose, very kind, extremely loyal, doesn't take to people easily (AT ALL).
Power/skill (MUST have one of the two): Assyria can freeze things, but only if they are suitably watery. (More than 65% water). She MUST be touching the thing that she wants to freeze, and the ice ring expands by 10% of it's total area every second. Starting area is always 1 inch diameter circle at first point of contact. Cannot freeze things through gloves. Exact temperature of frozen things fluctuates from around -120 degrees Fahrenheit to -80 degrees Fahrenheit and begins to get warmer as soon as she stops touching it. She is not very good at combat, having only trained with the village boys. She does not yet know of her ability.
Bio: Waking up in a large crater, surrounded by broken rocks, piles of dirt, burning trees, and miniature waterfalls from the nearby lake, she's rather new to this world and doesn't know where she came from originally. After climbing out of the crater (it was nearly filled up by the lake draining into it,) Assyria noted that the forest she was in ended abruptly to her left. This, of course, caused her to walk in that direction and find herself in a town where she was later accepted as a citizen. A few weeks passed by. She was living with an elderly grandma (to three grandchildren) and ended up becoming quite close to a cute boy that lived next to *her* house. The day that she was determined to ask him to be her boyfriend/whatever they call those things, a group of raiders stormed the (undescribed) town and killed nearly everyone. Assyria didn't see her friend die, but she was pretty sure that he did. She ended up surviving by hiding in the grandma's basement mine and sealing the entrance with some dynamite.
This lead to her being trapped in the tunnel and hoping that someone - anyone - would save her. After a day or two of nothing, she decided that no one was coming for her and began to travel further down the (undescribed) mine, only to find a small breach in it's orderly hallways (yay! Description!)
She went into this breach to fin Cassidy's mine, and, when looking for the exit, stumbled upon the hole in the world.
Other: Assyria is now really upset and sad, possibly depressed, that her caretaker (grandma person/whatever) and her best friend/the person she loved are now dead... or are they? This leads her to hurtling herself into the Void in an attempt to kill herself.
((Is death permanent in this story?
PS: In HTNL4ever, the only thing that could PERMANENTLY kill someone was falling into the Void... you can use that idea, just let people know it came from me, as I plan on using it still.
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Wow, really descriptive (ironically)! This is a really good character too, practically lays out her story for me :P. When people die in my story, besides void which always permanently kills (why Cassidy was so scared), is they respawn with no memory of what had happened in their past life. They also spawn in a totally different place then there home. This also makes for perfect plot twists ;).
Wow, really tough choices already and it isn't even July 1st :P. Good thing I'll be picking one later on as well, in a different chapter. You know what, I'm actually going to accept 2 now, and just introduce them in different parts of the story.
What now?
O_O
Do you want the translation?
'I can type with my eyes closed!'
ROFLCANON!
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Where are you?
[email protected]????
**Yes, I am aware of the @ sign there. It is pronounced 'at'.**
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."