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The Lost of Minecraftia : Story START!!!
The sound of the ore dropping to the floor echoed through the cavern. Steve was the only miner left there. '*sigh* More iron... Maybe I could give them to Mr. Ant for his armours.' He said. As he continued on. He grew more and more tired and soon began to get drowsy. Suddenly his eyes brightened. 'Diamonds!' He screamed, the sound echoed out of the cave and towards his village. Soon, everyone started rushing towards him. Steve held up the diamond and a few drops of tear rolled down his eyes. 'It has been a while since we ever had a diamond isn't it?' Antvenom said. Everyone nodded and cheer. Jeb, the village elder shouted, ' EVERYONE!! GRAB YOUR PICKAXE AND MINE AT THIS LEVEL!!!' Just as the echo in the cave ended. They heard galloping of horses in the village and everyone ran towards the exit.
'Villagers of the village! We are here as we heard that a man by the name of Steve lives here. Is it true?' Jeb, immediately said 'Yes, but he left 4 hours ago towards the city. Why do you need to find him?' The man on the horse jumped off and took out a iron sword with sharpness II and Fire_Aspect II on it. and held it onto jeb's throat. 'Tell.Me.Where.Is.He?!' Antvenom and Captain Sparklez immediately dashed up with their own iron sword and assaulted the man but was swiftly shot by arrows from nowhere. 'Aaah! It hurts!' They both screamed in a synchronised fashion. 'STOP!' A voice from the cave sounded out.
'You're looking for me, and i'm here.' Steve said, calmly but was afraid. the man grinned and said 'Sorry for the wounds Ant, and Capt.' 'Huh?' Steve sounded. 'My name is Sky. Remember me?' the man said. 'No way!' Antvenom and Captain Sparklez said in a surprised manner. 'Sorry i had to hide my identity by using this iron sword. Oh god I'm feelin' nauseous.' Steve, by now was very confused and slowly back down into the cave. 'Stop! You shall now escape!' Sky shouted as he ran towards Steve. He tackled Steve to the ground and held a Butter Sword Of Holiness towards his forehead and shouted 'You're under arrest Herobrine! You shall not escape anymore!' Steve punched Sky on the cheek and crawled back slowly and shouted back 'What?! Who the flipping dirt block is Herobrine?!'
*The Very Next Day*
Sky, wearing his robe stared at the village with a captive Steve by his side and with Antvenom and Captain Sparklez on the other. 'Thanks for escorting me Ant. Oh and Captain. Thank you too.'
'It's no problem. But i still do not believe Steve tried to assassinate Cave.' said Captain Sparklez By this, Steve quickly punched Ant and Sky off the cliff while quickly grabbing Sky's butter sword and Ant's iron sword and ran off. Captain Sparklez quickly gave chase and Steve, having no other choice. Threw the butter sword towards Capt. 'Ugh!' Capt groan as he dodged the sword, but the sword hanged onto Capt's cape and causes him to fall down and hit a boulder. 'Damn!'
Steve stopped running as he saw the sun set into the horizon. But something about the sun troubles Steve. 'The sun looks.... too damn red... It's too flopping weird...' Steve got an idea and ran towards the direction of the city of YogTower.
*2 days later* 'Help! Mister Help!!!!' Steve shouted towards a dwarf. 'Eh? A Steve? That is rare!' The dwarf said. 'What? How do you know my name?' Steve asked, surprised. 'No details needed. The name is Honeydew! What do you need help with?' Honeydew asked. 'Where.. is YogTowers?! The owner Xephos is most likely in trouble!' Steve shouted. 'What?! Lewis is in trouble?! Quick! Follow me!!' As the both of them dash into the forest...
To Be Continued.
Tell me what i did wrong and hope that i can improve in the future! Thank you!!
Spoilers, Bit more detail, Slightly confusing, maybe should add more parts to the beginning?
such as
Who is Cave?
Why are there Minecraft lets-players inhabiting this world?(BackStory)
Why does Sky think Steve is HeroBrine?
(Though i like this as it slightly fits in with my story "The ReinCarnation")
What in Notch's wide world is a YogsTower?
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The Lost of Minecraftia : Story START!!!
The sound of the ore dropping to the floor echoed through the cavern. Steve was the only miner left there.
'*sigh* More iron... Maybe I could give them to Mr. Ant for his armours.' He said. As he continued on. He grew more and more tired and soon began to get drowsy. Suddenly his eyes brightened. 'Diamonds!' He screamed, the sound echoed out of the cave and towards his village. Soon, everyone started rushing towards him. Steve held up the diamond and a few drops of tear rolled down his eyes. 'It has been a while since we ever had a diamond isn't it?' Antvenom said. Everyone nodded and cheer. Jeb, the village elder shouted, ' EVERYONE!! GRAB YOUR PICKAXE AND MINE AT THIS LEVEL!!!' Just as the echo in the cave ended. They heard galloping of horses in the village and everyone ran towards the exit.
'Villagers of the village! We are here as we heard that a man by the name of Steve lives here. Is it true?'
Jeb, immediately said 'Yes, but he left 4 hours ago towards the city. Why do you need to find him?' The man on the horse jumped off and took out a iron sword with sharpness II and Fire_Aspect II on it. and held it onto jeb's throat. 'Tell.Me.Where.Is.He?!' Antvenom and Captain Sparklez immediately dashed up with their own iron sword and assaulted the man but was swiftly shot by arrows from nowhere. 'Aaah! It hurts!' They both screamed in a synchronised fashion. 'STOP!' A voice from the cave sounded out.
'You're looking for me, and i'm here.' Steve said, calmly but was afraid. the man grinned and said 'Sorry for the wounds Ant, and Capt.' 'Huh?' Steve sounded. 'My name is Sky. Remember me?' the man said.
'No way!' Antvenom and Captain Sparklez said in a surprised manner. 'Sorry i had to hide my identity by using this iron sword. Oh god I'm feelin' nauseous.' Steve, by now was very confused and slowly back down into the cave. 'Stop! You shall now escape!' Sky shouted as he ran towards Steve. He tackled Steve to the ground and held a Butter Sword Of Holiness towards his forehead and shouted 'You're under arrest Herobrine! You shall not escape anymore!' Steve punched Sky on the cheek and crawled back slowly and shouted back 'What?! Who the flipping dirt block is Herobrine?!'
*The Very Next Day*
Sky, wearing his robe stared at the village with a captive Steve by his side and with Antvenom and Captain Sparklez on the other. 'Thanks for escorting me Ant. Oh and Captain. Thank you too.'
'It's no problem. But i still do not believe Steve tried to assassinate Cave.' said Captain Sparklez
By this, Steve quickly punched Ant and Sky off the cliff while quickly grabbing Sky's butter sword and Ant's iron sword and ran off. Captain Sparklez quickly gave chase and Steve, having no other choice. Threw the butter sword towards Capt. 'Ugh!' Capt groan as he dodged the sword, but the sword hanged onto Capt's cape and causes him to fall down and hit a boulder. 'Damn!'
Steve stopped running as he saw the sun set into the horizon. But something about the sun troubles Steve. 'The sun looks.... too damn red... It's too flopping weird...' Steve got an idea and ran towards the direction of the city of YogTower.
*2 days later*
'Help! Mister Help!!!!' Steve shouted towards a dwarf. 'Eh? A Steve? That is rare!' The dwarf said. 'What? How do you know my name?' Steve asked, surprised. 'No details needed. The name is Honeydew! What do you need help with?' Honeydew asked. 'Where.. is YogTowers?! The owner Xephos is most likely in trouble!' Steve shouted. 'What?! Lewis is in trouble?! Quick! Follow me!!' As the both of them dash into the forest...
To Be Continued.
Tell me what i did wrong and hope that i can improve in the future! Thank you!!
Yes of course ^^ I'm writing another right now actually
such as
Who is Cave?
Why are there Minecraft lets-players inhabiting this world?(BackStory)
Why does Sky think Steve is HeroBrine?
(Though i like this as it slightly fits in with my story "The ReinCarnation")
What in Notch's wide world is a YogsTower?