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You got me there, sc1020. You sicken meh. *shakes head slowly and squints eyes*

I sicken people because I'm demented

*shakes head* I forgot this, "Good morning to the world and all that inhabits it! Ahhhh!" *blanket covers face, falls off bed, falls down stairs, hits wall*

Sounds like a typical morning for me

Sounds like a typical morning for my brother. Except more farts are included.

Typical morning for me:

"I wonder what I dreamed of last night!" Then: *BWEE BWEE BWEE* And: "SHUDDAP ALARM CLOCK! I WOKE UP WITHOUT YOU!" Which leads to: *Throws pillow at clock* Predictably: "bwee bwee bwee" And, as such: "Oh my god. Where is my pillow?! What is that annoying sound?!" Because I have severe short term memory loss!

Anyways, after the morning alarm-clock drama is over, I lay in bed and get up about... oh, ten minutes before my bus arrives. Then I cram a bunch of cereal into my mouth and run out the door (undoubtedly forgetting math homeworks, my lunch, and, sometimes, my backpack) to just barely make it to the bus stop in time.

I shudder to think about how many people I have blinded with my morning-hair alone.
Because I don't comb.
Ever.


Short term memory loss has stricken me... I forgot what I was talking about. T_T.**Notices that this was written by sc1020.

What the heck?! I'm not reading this! It's written by someone I know will have a good story!
Blahg!

My typical morning:

1. Wake up and complain I'm sleepy
2. Sleep for 5 more minutes
3. Wake up again for breakfast
4. Eat breakfast in five to ten minutes
5. Wash up and change
6. Check my bag and pack
7. Get into the car and fall asleep
8. School and pretend that the morning never happened

Who keeps one-upping what you say?

Quote from Zeiustepali

Admittedly, my mind just wanders and that's how I come up with new chapters...

I actually am sort of a mix. I take past experiences, things I've seen (or will see, hmmmmm...mysterious much?), and my ideas that just pop up randomly or I think up in some random place, and mash them all together into a story and/or poem!

Quote from OnceInALongTime

My typical morning:

1. Wake up and complain I'm sleepy
2. Sleep for 5 more minutes
3. Wake up again for breakfast
4. Eat breakfast in five to ten minutes
5. Wash up and change
6. Check my bag and pack
7. Get into the car and fall asleep
8. School and pretend that the morning never happened

A typical (notice I'm not saying normal) morning for me (not including school):
1. Wake up naturally at like, 6:00 or something
2. Go back to sleep
3. Wake up naturally at like, 7:00 or something
4. Watch TV until 8:00
5. Get up
6. Go downstairs
7. Eat
8. Get dressed (maybe maybe not) and wash up
9. Get on computer and play Minecraft as well as check on Minecraftforums
10. It is now 12:00 therefore not morning anymore.

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Who keeps one-upping what you say?

If you click the little green thingy, you'll notice that it is me.

Quote from Jupiter714

A typical (notice I'm not saying normal) morning for me (not including school):
1. Wake up naturally at like, 6:00 or something
2. Go back to sleep
3. Wake up naturally at like, 7:00 or something
4. Watch TV until 8:00
5. Get up
6. Go downstairs
7. Eat
8. Get dressed (maybe maybe not) and wash up
9. Get on computer and play Minecraft as well as check on Minecraftforums
10. It is now 12:00 therefore not morning anymore.

I like how you just end it like that, as if your morning lasts forever, but the technical morning only lasts for until 12:00, meaning that you don't have to tell us about it anymore. XD

Name: Jake
Age (no older than 15, please ): 12
Bio: He lived in a mining colony with his family (mom, dad and 15 year old brother) until he was 9. The colony was attacked by Endermen, and he and his pig George were the only survivors. He's been living in the caverns, ravines, ruins and mineshafts of the world for the past 2 years, surviving largely because of his power.
Magic Power (you MUST have one): Shape Shifting. He can only do it for a few minutes, and he can only transform into someone or something he's physically seen and interacted with. It majorly drains him of energy, so he can't use it very often.
Personality: Adventurous, Cocky
Other: He wields a Diamond sword he crafted when he was 11, and his pig has an Iron Helmet that he recovered from some ruins. He also has a journal he's been writing in since he was 7, and he was always fascinated by the legends of the mythical Ender Dragon and The End. Since the attack he's been bent on finding a legendary Stronghold and slaying the horrible beast that caused the death of nearly everyone he'd ever known.

1+ what I say? Perhaps I can try saying something totally ridiculous and see if it gets 1+ the next day! I've got nothing, so here is what usually happens when I arrive at school early.

What happens when I arrive early at school.
1. Arrive, get out of the car.
2. Go upstairs
3. Know I am being watched (I'm not joking)
4. Know someone is staring at me (I'm still not joking)
5. Put bags in cubby/locker and go to bathroom to avoid being watched
6. Run into the classroom
7. Pretend like nothing ever happened

Eh, I'll post an app on the demented crazy person's story. AFTER I THINK OF ONE.

Name: Islan'morgordur
Age (no older than 15, please ): 15
Bio: Islan grew up running away from an unknown terror, all he knew was that if he stopped for more than a day, he would be caught by it. So, he just kept running, and one day he tripped on a metal rod, pointed at both ends, with a golden speartip on one side, when he picked it up things started floating around it, and he looked behind him to see a great darkness, at which he pointed the golden speartip at, and he felt a surge of energy and it fired a giant laser, which destroyed the darkness, however, he passed out after that, and woke up in the city. Since then he's just been exploring it, his spear thing on his back.
Magic Power (you MUST have one): Operating his spear cannon and firing lasers from his hand, since if anyone else tries to use it it just fails.
Personality: Caring for people in need, not all that quick to trust someone, always keeps an eye on suspicious people whenever he can, he also does some crazy stuff sometimes, however if he does it right he can do it without hurt, and he's adventurous, and curious too.
Other: Wields his spear-cannon thingy that has small blue-plated shields floating around it, when he fires it or fires lasers from his hand he gets tired, however the spear cannon thingy can only do a full burst every few days, or else it'd break and who knows what'd happen then. BTW, you forgot to add a gender section... and ULioploreudon really likes that one music video doesn't he...
Anyway, he's a male, of course, and also, welcome to standing up school. *Falls on ground* Aaaand you fail.

Islan'morgordur...? Anyway, throw the cheese!

Eh, no. This story reads like someone fires a gatling gun at me and replaced the bullets with events. Don't get me wrong, I hate you not, but this story is not well written enough. The characters could be very unique and interesting, but you don't give them enough time to be introduced. I mean, a 15 year old boy who chases criminals with steel fists is interesting, but he spontaneously decides to follow Herobrine on a quest in a be-back-for-dinner fashion. Or the man with the flaming sword that just runs at them. Or that they just go poof to the city. My overall advice is that you slow down with the pace of the story. There is just not enough flesh in this story. Or that Herobrine opens the door for that girl. I imagine that about 2000 years of self-exile have an impact on someones personality. They are most-likely going to be grim and would want to block out everyone.

You had that habit of trying too much into chapters before, but that is extreme. Note again, I give you this feedback because I want you to improve your writing. I hope you get the idea I am trying to give you.

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Eh, I'll post an app on the demented crazy person's story. AFTER I THINK OF ONE.

Name: Islan'morgordur
Age (no older than 15, please ): 15
Bio: Islan grew up running away from an unknown terror, all he knew was that if he stopped for more than a day, he would be caught by it. So, he just kept running, and one day he tripped on a metal rod, pointed at both ends, with a golden speartip on one side, when he picked it up things started floating around it, and he looked behind him to see a great darkness, at which he pointed the golden speartip at, and he felt a surge of energy and it fired a giant laser, which destroyed the darkness, however, he passed out after that, and woke up in the city. Since then he's just been exploring it, his spear thing on his back.
Magic Power (you MUST have one): Operating his spear cannon and firing lasers from his hand, since if anyone else tries to use it it just fails.
Personality: Caring for people in need, not all that quick to trust someone, always keeps an eye on suspicious people whenever he can, he also does some crazy stuff sometimes, however if he does it right he can do it without hurt, and he's adventurous, and curious too.
Other: Wields his spear-cannon thingy that has small blue-plated shields floating around it, when he fires it or fires lasers from his hand he gets tired, however the spear cannon thingy can only do a full burst every few days, or else it'd break and who knows what'd happen then. BTW, you forgot to add a gender section... and ULioploreudon really likes that one music video doesn't he...
Anyway, he's a male, of course, and also, welcome to standing up school. *Falls on ground* Aaaand you fail.

How come everyone always gets tired when they use their powers :P. It's a severe disadvantage. In other topics...I like Trainz

Name:Jeller
Age (no older than 15, please ):12
Appearance (I can't believe you forgot this):

Bio:A genetically engineered combination of a jelly cube and a human, causing awkward abilities to be given to him. When he speaks, it's either a low and sometimes high pitched childish voice, or a normal, mature, sometimes childish, voice. The reason of that is, he has two minds. He has two forms, (Which will be explained in the next section.) each mind controls only one form. When the minds share a similar thought, both voices say it.
Magic Power (you MUST have one): Transforming between the two forms. (Shown in the pictures.) For form 1, it's normal human, with listed voice 2. For form 2, he can transform into any shape, with listed voice 1. He can slightly transform, like, changing his hand into a sword or a key.
Personality:Childish for voice 1, and mature and sometimes childish for voice 2.
Other:

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