Wow, this is a really well-written story! Not everyone manages to mix actual Minecraft screenshots well with writing but you did! I'm excited to see what else you write!
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I was pleasantly surprised when I clicked on this! You took a memorable snippet of actual Minecraft gameplay and wrote about it in a touching way. Plus, it seems like you put a lot of effort into the journey. Transporting a testificate across an ocean is no small feat at all, definitely worthy of a religion.
Changing the name was a good idea. When I saw the title of this, I thought it was just another Steve story with a different name for the main character. When I realized that the post was garnering a lot of comments, though, it made me curious enough to click on it. I think that because of the varying degrees of quality of fanfiction on the Literature subforum, people tend to be hesitant to click on unfamiliar stories, myself included.
Wow, this is a really well-written story! Not everyone manages to mix actual Minecraft screenshots well with writing but you did! I'm excited to see what else you write!
After I posted this for the first time, I planned to go on another Minecraft adventure with a similar style, but forgot about it due to the lack of feedback on the original Legend of Tedward. Ever since I reposted it here though, it's been getting a lot more attention, so I probably will write more.
I was pleasantly surprised when I clicked on this! You took a memorable snippet of actual Minecraft gameplay and wrote about it in a touching way. Plus, it seems like you put a lot of effort into the journey. Transporting a testificate across an ocean is no small feat at all, definitely worthy of a religion.
Changing the name was a good idea. When I saw the title of this, I thought it was just another Steve story with a different name for the main character. When I realized that the post was garnering a lot of comments, though, it made me curious enough to click on it. I think that because of the varying degrees of quality of fanfiction on the Literature subforum, people tend to be hesitant to click on unfamiliar stories, myself included.
I know how you feel, I normally wouldn't want to waste time reading a story that didn't sound intriguing. Glad you and everyone else took interest in this one, though!
1) D1 will be the holy communicator. He will communicate with Tedward's spirit (his spirit permeates all of reality now.)
2) He will run a server dedicated to worshiping Tedward.
3) There will be multiple people just below him in rank - they will be the 'head priests' of other servers. They will maintain TFoTHT throughout other servers. They will also build churches and shrines to Him on the other servers.
4) Then there are the nominals - people that belong to the religion. They offer things to Tedward at shrines, 'pray' to him at churches, and, once a month (if they can make it) they all attend D1's master church on his server.
5) Other random details that will be sorted out...
This will be so cool - you could have towns on other servers dedicated to Tedward! It'd be like a real religion - just inside of MC and kind of funny to watch!
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OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Um...
Long live TFoTHT!
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Now,
Oncie, help me with TFoTHT. I will create a post for it... eventually. XD
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
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Curse PremiumChanging the name was a good idea. When I saw the title of this, I thought it was just another Steve story with a different name for the main character. When I realized that the post was garnering a lot of comments, though, it made me curious enough to click on it. I think that because of the varying degrees of quality of fanfiction on the Literature subforum, people tend to be hesitant to click on unfamiliar stories, myself included.
After I posted this for the first time, I planned to go on another Minecraft adventure with a similar style, but forgot about it due to the lack of feedback on the original Legend of Tedward. Ever since I reposted it here though, it's been getting a lot more attention, so I probably will write more.
I know how you feel, I normally wouldn't want to waste time reading a story that didn't sound intriguing. Glad you and everyone else took interest in this one, though!
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
2) He will run a server dedicated to worshiping Tedward.
3) There will be multiple people just below him in rank - they will be the 'head priests' of other servers. They will maintain TFoTHT throughout other servers. They will also build churches and shrines to Him on the other servers.
4) Then there are the nominals - people that belong to the religion. They offer things to Tedward at shrines, 'pray' to him at churches, and, once a month (if they can make it) they all attend D1's master church on his server.
5) Other random details that will be sorted out...
This will be so cool - you could have towns on other servers dedicated to Tedward! It'd be like a real religion - just inside of MC and kind of funny to watch!
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
I wish to help. Be my fourth organized religion.
I went nuts after i read this weird book about kids worshipping a water tower.
It was hilarious.
I'm just waiting for some religious person to see this THoTHT thing and flip out on us...
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
I know, They got trapped in the water tower!
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."