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Strength
Dejers Garth


There is
strength in words
and
strength in song
but if
the strength
is no longer there
is it gone?

There is
strength in wood
and
strength in rock
you mine
with it
block by block.

There is
strength of heart
and
strength of mind
witch is
the strength
you leave behind?

Is the
strength of song
greater than
strength of mind
will we leave
the strength of wood and stone behind?

When we reach
our final resting place
will hearts prevail
and give us space
and will
the strength of song
keep us strong
as we silently
sing along?

Such mystery and grace in the words. Thumbs up.

This is a very well written poem.
I, personally, have not written poetry in about two months.
I kind-a such at everything I do. D;

No, not really. If you want to be a writer, you "Keep on keeping on," because nobody starts a picture perfect. Metaphors.

What are you talking about? Have you seen the words I *type*?
Hmm... I should shut up before I'm accused of wanting too much attention. Again.

lol

So, you are evidently "communing with the atlantean crystals" if your location is correct...

...yeah, I can see how that's evident in those words. Very, very well done! Deserves digital applause. [insert applause here]