Wow I spent such a long time writing that that someone else posted something and I didn't even see it. Also Once I was just kidding, you don't have to enter something if you don't feel like it right now. On an unrelated topic, is it wrong that I feel like making a "Once upon a time" joke whenever I read your name?
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Name of Character(s) Wanted to be Featured:Duke Vikram Capra of the House of Capra, Duke of Saffron
Description of said Character:Vikram Capra is the son of the wealthy and industrious noble Duke Edward Capra, and lives on his estate on a comet orbiting the moon Saffron III. He is an incredibly good marksman, owing to years of practice, knows a great deal of useless academic information, has a lot of money and is very skilled with fixing and creating Redsteam technology (not sure if that even exists in Rift ). He is courageous, admittedly somewhat flamboyant and knows a lot about diplomacy from his father. He is in possession of a few items of note, including his own Aethership to travel through space, a broken device that allows time travel which he eventually fixes and an assortment of Redsteam tools (not sure how/if these will factor into Rift). To sum him up in a phrase, he is a scientist-aristocrat.
Synopsis (like a book jacket summary):Duke Vikram Capra lives a luxurious, carefree life on an estate built by his father, Duke Edward Capra, on a comet orbiting the moon Saffron III in a solar system of the Aether colonized by the great human Empire. He spends his days and nights studying academics, practicing his marksmanship, socializing with the wealthy daughters of duchesses over bottles of fine wine and creating clockwork gadgets in his laboratory. But his enjoyable and routine existence is interrupted by the arrival of a spectral projection of a man at his estate, a man who claims to be a messenger from the future. The man gives him a broken clockwork device, claiming it is a machine that allows one to travel through time, and tells him he must fix it and find the fabled "Clockwork Archives", where he will find a device that will save the world from a void that seeks to consume it. He departs unexpectedly without further explanation, and the young Vikram is skeptical of his claims. But as dark and dangerous forces make themselves known in pursuit of the device, he begins to believe the man's story and realize the full implications of his task: if he is to find the "Clockwork Archives", he will not only have to travel through space, but through time.
How many stories and/or fanfictions have you wrote before this one?:Many. I entered one in a writing contest at my school. I've only posted three that I can think of right now to forums though, one to the Terraria Forums and two, including the one I'm currently writing, to the Minecraft Forums.
By the looks of it, your story is definitely Rift-worthy! You, sir, are accepted!
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Well, I'm already in a fuss with three other stories and I thought I didn't need to create another one. I've seen your story and found it almost as good as the likes of Immortus! And if I dare say so... me!
Well, I'm already in a fuss with three other stories and I thought I didn't need to create another one. I've seen your story and found it almost as good as the likes of Immortus! And if I dare say so... me!
But seriously, you deserve it!
Well thanks again! This is going to be the most epic collaboration in the history of Minecraft!
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Well, I'm already in a fuss with three other stories and I thought I didn't need to create another one. I've seen your story and found it almost as good as the likes of Immortus! And if I dare say so... me!
But seriously, you deserve it!
D; What? Is my writing below par? D; (again with the crying face... XD)
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OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
US DEMENTED WRITERS SHALL CONQUER THE LITERATURE FORUMS!!!
Incorrect. I am already 'That one guy that posts so much on here that the entire first page of the subforum is regularly filled with his nonsense.'
This leads me to believe that I have already 'conquered' said forums. XD
Yeah, so do I. I see a new response and I insta-click to respond to it.
T_T
Anyways, Curiosity and the Cat is getting off to a slow start. The only problem? The antagonists, protagonists, and whatever-else-there-are-gonists are completely confused. The main character is not really the good guy, and there is no true 'bad' guy either. It's really confusing. But cool. XDI'm off to splurge my thoughts on other topics!
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OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Incorrect. I am already 'That one guy that posts so much on here that the entire first page of the subforum is regularly filled with his nonsense.'
This leads me to believe that I have already 'conquered' said forums. XD
My god... you lurk these forums, don't you? XD
Yeah, so do I. I see a new response and I insta-click to respond to it.
T_T
Anyways, Curiosity and the Cat is getting off to a slow start. The only problem? The antagonists, protagonists, and whatever-else-there-are-gonists are completely confused. The main character is not really the good guy, and there is no true 'bad' guy either. It's really confusing. But cool. XD
If i had a better internet connection rather than having to run to the library to see anything than i would best you there.
Also, you passed over the special rank for 42, Kasparal! (And welcome to Rift as well. Lots of things to say 'cause so many things to reply to...)
Yeah I know. I realized I had it and I thought "I have to savor this moment" and then I immediately forgot about that and posted a reply to Mage_of_Cats :P. Also, thanks! I'm really excited to be a part of a group of so many amazing writers!
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Well, I'm already in a fuss with three other stories and I thought I didn't need to create another one. I've seen your story and found it almost as good as the likes of Immortus! And if I dare say so... me!
But seriously, you deserve it!
So I don't?
In order to get to forty-five chapters, you'll need five more writers. You have three wanting to get in. You need all the help you can get.
Hey SC (your initials always make me think of Santa Claus, and I think your original avatar was of a creeper in a Santa hat so I'll call you SC), is there anything we should put in our stories to show that we're part of RIFT like we're supposed to do with Minefic: Legacy?
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
My initials are AC, so when I was younger, kids would make fun of me because it was like "Air-con." Though, it never really affected me, they were annoying.
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Wow I spent such a long time writing that that someone else posted something and I didn't even see it. Also Once I was just kidding, you don't have to enter something if you don't feel like it right now.
Really? I thought I would have to go through a waiting period or something. Thanks! I'm even more excited to see Rift when it gets started now!
But seriously, you deserve it!
Well thanks again! This is going to be the most epic collaboration in the history of Minecraft!
US DEMENTED WRITERS SHALL CONQUER THE LITERATURE FORUMS!!!
No. We don't want Sc1020 messing with our subconscious minds and stopping our hearts, do we?
Much better. Try to make him not overpowered.
D; What? Is my writing below par? D; (again with the crying face... XD)
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Incorrect. I am already 'That one guy that posts so much on here that the entire first page of the subforum is regularly filled with his nonsense.'
This leads me to believe that I have already 'conquered' said forums. XD
My god... you lurk these forums, don't you? XD
Yeah, so do I. I see a new response and I insta-click to respond to it.
T_T
Anyways, Curiosity and the Cat is getting off to a slow start. The only problem? The antagonists, protagonists, and whatever-else-there-are-gonists are completely confused. The main character is not really the good guy, and there is no true 'bad' guy either. It's really confusing. But cool. XDI'm off to splurge my thoughts on other topics!
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Another reply.
Also, you passed over the special rank for 42, Kasparal! (And welcome to Rift as well. Lots of things to say 'cause so many things to reply to...)
Yeah I know. I realized I had it and I thought "I have to savor this moment" and then I immediately forgot about that and posted a reply to Mage_of_Cats :P. Also, thanks! I'm really excited to be a part of a group of so many amazing writers!
Good luck. XD
I'ma get ninja'd, I can just feel it.
**O_O I WAS NINJAD. T_T
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
So I don't?
In order to get to forty-five chapters, you'll need five more writers. You have three wanting to get in. You need all the help you can get.
EDIT: Zombie Killer
Also, can I call you Santa Claus now?
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."