The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
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Hello Minecraftians, I have come to shave with you all my fanfiction. It is titled "This New World". Steve of the Minecraft world is transported to Equestria by some weird mishap. You can read it at FIMFiction.net here: http://www.fimfictio.../this-new-world
And here is an excerpt from the first life.
As I duck, dodge, and weave through the area around me, avoiding direct eye contact with Endermen, I wait for the scourge of my world to attack. Finally, my chance comes, and I strike fast and accurately with my diamond sword, directly into the Enderdragon’s neck. It flails around at the wound I have just inflicted upon it and retreats from me, giving me just enough time to remove my sword. Now, I wait for the next attack.
It comes back around, charging straight for me, the wound fully healed. Wait…Fully Healed? ! I must have forgotten a crystal, and he used it to heal his life threatening gap I put in his neck. I must find it so I can destroy it, and destroy him!
As I search, I avoid confrontation with the beast, dodging his every move, until he hits me. I go flying across the floating island in the middle of nothingness, and land right where I wanted to be. Slightly injured from the fall, I wield my bow, notch my arrow, aim, and FIRE! My accuracy never fails. I land the arrow directly on the crystal and it explodes, causing great damage upon the dragon while it was attached to it. Now, I can win.
Ducking, dodging, and weaving, this scene is all too familiar, but with a twist: He can no longer restore his body to full condition after every beating. I. Can. Win!
I dodge his lunge at me for the last time, breaking my blade off into his right eyeball. He thrashes and kicks at the pain, slowly rising into the air, disintegrating. The portal appears in front of me, and I walk toward it. Built with bedrock, there is no way of destroying it. At the top, a dragon egg, my prize. I reach to grab it when suddenly, the island starts to collapse! Blocks fall off the island, starting at the edges, eventually making it’s way to the portal. The portal suddenly goes from being a weird spacey hole, to a very rainbow-ish color. The dragon egg falls into it and teleports to where it leads, home. I jump after.
Falling through space and time itself is quite a weird feeling, but this one is different. It doesn’t fell as if I am being sucked from the Universe into nothingness, but instead feels as if I am being assaulted with happiness and friendship. Colors swirl all around me as I tumble through the portal, not knowing if it will take me home to my family. I can’t seem to find my backpack with all my stuff, which is weird, considering that it never leaves my back. Now as I tumble and turn though the gateway, I see a blinding white light, the exit of the portal.
I reenter my home, or at least that is what I think. I have just a second to survey the land before I fall to the ground.
Game Over. Time to respawn for the billionth time in a row. What I saw doesn’t make sense. No block. That was the first. The second was the scenery. It looked nothing like Minecraft at all!
If you aren't a fan of ponies, I feel bad for you. You do not have to read this is you don't want to, I just recommend this story, and all my others. Good day.
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I support the Aether mod! (it won't let me put in the banner)
Interesting story beginning... I like the concept, And Actually have a work similar to this on the back burner for a friend of mine.
(Note: I am Not, Nor ever will be a "Bronie")
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And here is an excerpt from the first life.
As I duck, dodge, and weave through the area around me, avoiding direct eye contact with Endermen, I wait for the scourge of my world to attack. Finally, my chance comes, and I strike fast and accurately with my diamond sword, directly into the Enderdragon’s neck. It flails around at the wound I have just inflicted upon it and retreats from me, giving me just enough time to remove my sword. Now, I wait for the next attack.
It comes back around, charging straight for me, the wound fully healed. Wait…Fully Healed? ! I must have forgotten a crystal, and he used it to heal his life threatening gap I put in his neck. I must find it so I can destroy it, and destroy him!
As I search, I avoid confrontation with the beast, dodging his every move, until he hits me. I go flying across the floating island in the middle of nothingness, and land right where I wanted to be. Slightly injured from the fall, I wield my bow, notch my arrow, aim, and FIRE! My accuracy never fails. I land the arrow directly on the crystal and it explodes, causing great damage upon the dragon while it was attached to it. Now, I can win.
Ducking, dodging, and weaving, this scene is all too familiar, but with a twist: He can no longer restore his body to full condition after every beating. I. Can. Win!
I dodge his lunge at me for the last time, breaking my blade off into his right eyeball. He thrashes and kicks at the pain, slowly rising into the air, disintegrating. The portal appears in front of me, and I walk toward it. Built with bedrock, there is no way of destroying it. At the top, a dragon egg, my prize. I reach to grab it when suddenly, the island starts to collapse! Blocks fall off the island, starting at the edges, eventually making it’s way to the portal. The portal suddenly goes from being a weird spacey hole, to a very rainbow-ish color. The dragon egg falls into it and teleports to where it leads, home. I jump after.
Falling through space and time itself is quite a weird feeling, but this one is different. It doesn’t fell as if I am being sucked from the Universe into nothingness, but instead feels as if I am being assaulted with happiness and friendship. Colors swirl all around me as I tumble through the portal, not knowing if it will take me home to my family. I can’t seem to find my backpack with all my stuff, which is weird, considering that it never leaves my back. Now as I tumble and turn though the gateway, I see a blinding white light, the exit of the portal.
I reenter my home, or at least that is what I think. I have just a second to survey the land before I fall to the ground.
Game Over. Time to respawn for the billionth time in a row. What I saw doesn’t make sense. No block. That was the first. The second was the scenery. It looked nothing like Minecraft at all!
If you aren't a fan of ponies, I feel bad for you. You do not have to read this is you don't want to, I just recommend this story, and all my others. Good day.
Apart from me not liking ponies (feel free to feel bad for me), viewing this from text quality, quite marvelous intro. I haven't got more to say.
TT2000, you are genius.
can't.... contain... laughter... *laughs*
(Note: I am Not, Nor ever will be a "Bronie")