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Here's a poem I came up with today about the Nether, hope you guys and gals like it:


Gate of stone as black as night
With rock and metal you shall light
Into Hell you now tread
You surely now have lost your head
Pigs and Ghasts with chilling screams
Stone above that brightly gleams
Blazes with rods they float and twirled
Deep in this lava-filled world.
Magma cubes that bounce around
Nether wart that looks profound
New to you, but not to us
You start to overhear a fuss
Into view pops a hellish thing
And great stone spheres it starts to fling
Back to the portal you now run
And like the firing of a gun
Bullets fly from behind your head
You feel like you are surely dead
Diving fast, into fire
You start to swirl and travel higher
Up through bedrock and the dirt
you land in grass, gravely hurt
But you survey the land in a different way
As you live to fight another day.

pretty cool dude its creative all thou i hate the nether xD but ur poem is cool

Back to the portal you now run
And like the firing of a gun

This was the only part that threw me off as it doesn't flow as well. Other than that, it was great.

Wow, great poem. I really liked the flow and poetic-ness (if that's a word);)

Quote from Sgt_Pepper426

Wow, great poem. I really liked the flow and poetic-ness (if that's a word)

Quote from Jaydroid15

pretty cool dude its creative all thou i hate the nether xD but ur poem is cool

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Back to the portal you now run
And like the firing of a gun

This was the only part that threw me off as it doesn't flow as well. Other than that, it was great.

Thanks for the feedback everyone, I didn't think it was THAT good ;P

Great poem. Its very inspiring.

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Thanks for the feedback everyone, I didn't think it was THAT good ;P

It wasn't the best poem of all time, but it DOES deserve this feedback.

Thanks for the good feedback everyone, I didn't think it was that good and it didn't even take me that long lol.

Pretty good poem. Just didn't get some parts.