This is the poor story of Mr. Poor him One day, Mr. came to the woods and finding a home. Then Mr. shows up and talks to him. Mr. said "Is it a nice day here, Mr. ?" Then he answered "Yah! It's so nice" until comes out of no where and kills Mr. When looks at that , Mr. ran away! Then looks at the spot where Mr. was, but he noticed he was gone! He quickly find me (of course, HerobrineGuard) to kill (stopping emotes) Notch. then i killed Notch with my Bow and Arrow! Then i flied all the way to our base (the Herobrine Army base) then Mr. Creeper continued to find home. Then he found a village but accidentally killed the Villagers. but he came to the Priest Villager's Home then Mr. Creeper found a player named "Haxor123345", Mr Creeper said "AHH! PLAYER!" then that player said "Don't worry, Im here to help you with your problems" but another player came named "Murderer55". then that player killed the other killed the other player. Mr. Creeper ran away then his friends died and blah blah blah blah! When Mr. Creeper ran away. He found an army of Notches! The Army killed Mr. Creeper then they ate CREEPAH FLESH! Then the army became creepers and they died happily after. The End!
It's kind of obvious that none of you appreciate the work that went into this story.
For the most part, the story line is actually quite interesting. The idea of a story from the point of view of a creeper sounds very, extremely intriguing. I would love to see a story from the point of view of a creeper. The thing that I didn't like about this story was that it used emoticons(for part of it, and I'm glad you stopped using them), and that it doesn't have much detail. HerobrineGuard, I would love to see you, and specifically you, write another story from the point of view of a creeper. However, if you were to write a new story, it would be cool if you were to add in maybe sections about 250-500 words long. If this story was a real attempt at a good story, I appreciate how hard it is to write at the beginning. If it wasn't a real attempt at a good story, I would appreciate it if you would make a real one. Please take no offense in anything I have said, HerobrineGuard, I mean only to advise, and not to do any harm. Forgive me if I said something offensive.
If you want any help or advice on anything story-related, you can simply send me a pm and I'll help you out.
It's kind of obvious that none of you appreciate the work that went into this story.
For the most part, the story line is actually quite interesting. The idea of a story from the point of view of a creeper sounds very, extremely intriguing. I would love to see a story from the point of view of a creeper. The thing that I didn't like about this story was that it used emoticons(for part of it, and I'm glad you stopped using them), and that it doesn't have much detail. HerobrineGuard, I would love to see you, and specifically you, write another story from the point of view of a creeper. However, if you were to write a new story, it would be cool if you were to add in maybe sections about 250-500 words long. If this story was a real attempt at a good story, I appreciate how hard it is to write at the beginning. If it wasn't a real attempt at a good story, I would appreciate it if you would make a real one. Please take no offense in anything I have said, HerobrineGuard, I mean only to advise, and not to do any harm. Forgive me if I said something offensive.
If you want any help or advice on anything story-related, you can simply send me a pm and I'll help you out.
Your reply makes me feel cold hearted.
Yeah. Sorry Herobrine guard.
It is always interesting to see a story from another point of view (I wrote a story where Herobrine's point of view is featured whilst being still evil, albeit I abandoned it.).
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It is always interesting to see a story from another point of view (I wrote a story where Herobrine's point of view is featured whilst being still evil, albeit I abandoned it.).
Cold-hearted? I prefer 'unable to envision the results at times'. But yes, alternate-view stories are wonderful.
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Your fake replies are too obvious...
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TT2000, you are genius.
April Fools?!
It's kind of obvious that none of you appreciate the work that went into this story.
For the most part, the story line is actually quite interesting. The idea of a story from the point of view of a creeper sounds very, extremely intriguing. I would love to see a story from the point of view of a creeper. The thing that I didn't like about this story was that it used emoticons(for part of it, and I'm glad you stopped using them), and that it doesn't have much detail. HerobrineGuard, I would love to see you, and specifically you, write another story from the point of view of a creeper. However, if you were to write a new story, it would be cool if you were to add in maybe sections about 250-500 words long. If this story was a real attempt at a good story, I appreciate how hard it is to write at the beginning. If it wasn't a real attempt at a good story, I would appreciate it if you would make a real one. Please take no offense in anything I have said, HerobrineGuard, I mean only to advise, and not to do any harm. Forgive me if I said something offensive.
If you want any help or advice on anything story-related, you can simply send me a pm and I'll help you out.
Your reply makes me feel cold hearted.
Yeah. Sorry Herobrine guard.
It is always interesting to see a story from another point of view (I wrote a story where Herobrine's point of view is featured whilst being still evil, albeit I abandoned it.).
TT2000, you are genius.
Cold-hearted? I prefer 'unable to envision the results at times'. But yes, alternate-view stories are wonderful.