As you have said to me, I do not posses the dictionary to describe this epic chapter. All I can say is... I AWAIT THE NEXT! WHEN IS IT GOING TO BE OUT? Also, it's easier to read when it is in paragraphs like this. Though, I meant spaced from one line. Paragraph. One Line as spacing. Paragraph. But this works too. I await the next chapter. (I found a lot of grammar errors)
As you have said to me, I do not posses the dictionary to describe this epic chapter. All I can say is... I AWAIT THE NEXT! WHEN IS IT GOING TO BE OUT? Also, it's easier to read when it is in paragraphs like this. Though, I meant spaced from one line. Paragraph. One Line as spacing. Paragraph. But this works too. I await the next chapter. (I found a lot of grammar errors)
Thank you for the response
Yes, I am not the best at english grammar. I do think I can spell the words correct, but I mix up the order in which they should be placed. Though as I write more and more my grammar will certainly improve, so bear with me
And I will try to incorporate your advice for paragraphs.
I don't know when I will post the next chapter. I don't like deadlines/schedules when I do things like this. I find myself forcing chapters, and that never turns out good. Though I have already some text.
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Thank you for the response
Yes, I am not the best at english grammar. I do think I can spell the words correct, but I mix up the order in which they should be placed. Though as I write more and more my grammar will certainly improve, so bear with me
And I will try to incorporate your advice for paragraphs.
I don't know when I will post the next chapter. I don't like deadlines/schedules when I do things like this. I find myself forcing chapters, and that never turns out good. Though I have already some text.
1. Sure, I'll bear with you. Just like where the story is going.
2. Sorry, I maybe there were some grammar mistakes, but mostly spacing with the punctuation marks. You sometimes add a space at the end of a sentence separating it from the punctuation mark. For example: (I just made this example)
"Wow !" I exclaim. "That is amazing !"
Notice the spacing separating the dialogue from the punctuation mark.
3. I agree with you, I don't like deadlines that much either. They really stress me out. Just know I await Chapter 4.
( 4. Chapter 8 of my Visions Of The Past: Void, is out. Not many people are checking it out, therefore, I don't know how to improve it. If you would mind, could you read some of the chapters and tell me what you think? Thanks in advance due to any choice/s you make. )
1. Sure, I'll bear with you. Just like where the story is going.
2. Sorry, I maybe there were some grammar mistakes, but mostly spacing with the punctuation marks. You sometimes add a space at the end of a sentence separating it from the punctuation mark. For example: (I just made this example)
"Wow !" I exclaim. "That is amazing !"
Notice the spacing separating the dialogue from the punctuation mark.
3. I agree with you, I don't like deadlines that much either. They really stress me out. Just know I await Chapter 4.
( 4. Chapter 8 of my Visions Of The Past: Void, is out. Not many people are checking it out, therefore, I don't know how to improve it. If you would mind, could you read some of the chapters and tell me what you think? Thanks in advance due to any choice/s you make. )
Thank you and yes.
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Add character applications to this. People love it!
Eh, I am a bit on the fence with apps. Of course, people LOVE seeing characters they designed come to live, it gets people more involved and such. On the other hand, before I begin writing a story I usually design the skeleton of tge story in my mind, and with that, the characters. Having apps would kind of rob me of my "free writing". My stories are my precioussssss
If I do decide to have applications I will only accept very detailed ones and have a small limit.
Hmm, why do I suddenly want to eat sushi ?
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Eh, I am a bit on the fence with apps. Of course, people LOVE seeing characters they designed come to live, it gets people more involved and such. On the other hand, before I begin writing a story I usually design the skeleton of tge story in my mind, and with that, the characters. Having apps would kind of rob me of my "free writing". My stories are my precioussssss
If I do decide to have applications I will only accept very detailed ones and have a small limit.
Hmm, why do I suddenly want to eat sushi ?
True, in your case. I have n answer to your question, but why are my siblings singing "Harry Potter in 90 seconds," in the bathroom and my neighbors sound like their yodeling? That's an answer I wanna hear!
True, in your case. I have n answer to your question, but why are my siblings singing "Harry Potter in 90 seconds," in the bathroom and my neighbors sound like their yodeling? That's an answer I wanna hear!
The answers to your question shall be given by more qualified people, Young One. But for the answer to my question, I give a hint.
I would die to get a certain accessoir.
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@MadScientist: I heed your answer, Knowledgeable One. For that hint, I suck at riddles. I'm at average. I'm getting there!
I'm playing: The Light, By Sara Bareilles for the past hour while writing just for the instrumentals. Look for the song on YouTube, for something as simple as it is, Sara Bareilles has outdone herself again with another hit!
An undead king/lord/wizard that stores his lifesiurce in a "phylacter" an object of his choice. A perfect example of a phylacter is The One Ring and the Horcruxes. Is often depicted as a skeleton/withered creature, sucks at hitting you with a sword and owns you with magic.
I made this my own, no Wikipedia required.
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Nice reference to asanetargoss' story there. And where did you happen to get the word "Icebringer" From? Hm???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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Thank you for the response
Yes, I am not the best at english grammar. I do think I can spell the words correct, but I mix up the order in which they should be placed. Though as I write more and more my grammar will certainly improve, so bear with me
And I will try to incorporate your advice for paragraphs.
I don't know when I will post the next chapter. I don't like deadlines/schedules when I do things like this. I find myself forcing chapters, and that never turns out good. Though I have already some text.
TT2000, you are genius.
1. Sure, I'll bear with you. Just like where the story is going.
2. Sorry, I maybe there were some grammar mistakes, but mostly spacing with the punctuation marks. You sometimes add a space at the end of a sentence separating it from the punctuation mark. For example: (I just made this example)
"Wow !" I exclaim. "That is amazing !"
Notice the spacing separating the dialogue from the punctuation mark.
3. I agree with you, I don't like deadlines that much either. They really stress me out. Just know I await Chapter 4.
( 4. Chapter 8 of my Visions Of The Past: Void, is out. Not many people are checking it out, therefore, I don't know how to improve it. If you would mind, could you read some of the chapters and tell me what you think? Thanks in advance due to any choice/s you make.
Thank you and yes.
TT2000, you are genius.
Eh, I am a bit on the fence with apps. Of course, people LOVE seeing characters they designed come to live, it gets people more involved and such. On the other hand, before I begin writing a story I usually design the skeleton of tge story in my mind, and with that, the characters. Having apps would kind of rob me of my "free writing". My stories are my precioussssss
If I do decide to have applications I will only accept very detailed ones and have a small limit.
Hmm, why do I suddenly want to eat sushi ?
TT2000, you are genius.
True, in your case. I have n answer to your question, but why are my siblings singing "Harry Potter in 90 seconds," in the bathroom and my neighbors sound like their yodeling? That's an answer I wanna hear!
The answers to your question shall be given by more qualified people, Young One. But for the answer to my question, I give a hint.
I would die to get a certain accessoir.
TT2000, you are genius.
I'm playing: The Light, By Sara Bareilles for the past hour while writing just for the instrumentals. Look for the song on YouTube, for something as simple as it is, Sara Bareilles has outdone herself again with another hit!
TT2000, you are genius.
If you are smart, then.... HAHAHAHAHAAA.
TT2000, you are genius.
TT2000, you are genius.
Reading chapter five leaves no time for harming.
Sometimes.
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TT2000, you are genius.
whats a lich
I made this my own, no Wikipedia required.
TT2000, you are genius.
Oh well.
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