The Lord of Deception smiled a cold, cruel smile. His work was done. "Servant!" He called. Immediately, a floating skull head appeared. "Fetch me the boy." The skull flickered. It grew a body, limbs, and flesh and skin. "I shall give you a little Deception if the boy needs convincing." The Lord Of Deception said un-willingly. He knew, though, that this was required. He would not be stopped. The servant walked off.
The Lord of Deception smiled that cold smile. He held out in his palm. In his hand was an orb of pure light. He held out his other palm. There he held an orb of darkness. "The Aether will think the Nether stole the Orb of Aether, and vice versa with The Sphere of Nether. The only flaws in my plan are the princess of the Aether and prince of the Nether. They are friends. This is unacceptable."
The Lord of Deception frowned. "This-this must work." He sounded like he was trying to convince himself. "The boy has more potentiel than I expected. He doesn't even know of his powers."
"Bring me the Globe of Knowing! NOW!" The Lord Of Deception barked. An orb of multicolored lights shimmered into existence infront of the him. "Show me the Prince of the Nether. The Unspeakable. The only one I fear." The inside of the globe sparked. Gas filled the inside. It would not, could not show the boy. The Lord of Deception roared. A bead of sweat trickled down his face, landing on the floor with a "Splosh." The prince was his worry. His only worry. But how? That was the question. How?
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"The devil enters our mind when it's not guarded."
So shall this topic rise again, not as a zombie, but as a creature of light and stuff.
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I like this. I just want to know why you post a new topic for every new chapter.
He made a new topic for every chapter because when he was new here, he didn't know that he could edit his posts. He told me before. He just didn't see the EDIT button.
He made a new topic for every chapter because when he was new here, he didn't know that he could edit his posts. He told me before. He just didn't see the EDIT button.
I feel very bad for him then. But I can't wait to see his story come to life!
The Lord of Deception smiled a cold, cruel smile. His work was done. "Servant!" He called. Immediately, a floating skull head appeared. "Fetch me the boy." The skull flickered. It grew a body, limbs, and flesh and skin. "I shall give you a little Deception if the boy needs convincing." The Lord Of Deception said un-willingly. He knew, though, that this was required. He would not be stopped. The servant walked off.
The Lord of Deception smiled that cold smile. He held out in his palm. In his hand was an orb of pure light. He held out his other palm. There he held an orb of darkness. "The Aether will think the Nether stole the Orb of Aether, and vice versa with The Sphere of Nether. The only flaws in my plan are the princess of the Aether and prince of the Nether. They are friends. This is unacceptable."
The Lord of Deception frowned. "This-this must work." He sounded like he was trying to convince himself. "The boy has more potentiel than I expected. He doesn't even know of his powers."
"Bring me the Globe of Knowing! NOW!" The Lord Of Deception barked. An orb of multicolored lights shimmered into existence infront of the him. "Show me the Prince of the Nether. The Unspeakable. The only one I fear." The inside of the globe sparked. Gas filled the inside. It would not, could not show the boy. The Lord of Deception roared. A bead of sweat trickled down his face, landing on the floor with a "Splosh." The prince was his worry. His only worry. But how? That was the question. How?
"The devil enters our mind when it's not guarded."
Writers don't really write NOW! It is written as Now!
As usual, great storyline and dialogue.
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Very weird bump.
I like this. I just want to know why you post a new topic for every new chapter.
TT2000, you are genius.
"The devil enters our mind when it's not guarded."
Name the topic the tittle of your book.
In the thread, add the prologue and chapters.
You haven't been on awhile, Fang, if you get the book awesome and ready and good reviews, you should check out RIFT. And join it! It is by sc1020.