The Lord of Deception looked up from his quiet meditation. The edges of his mouth reached the edges of his eyes, forming a cold smile. A skull head servant immediately came floating forward. "I have intercepted the spying orbs." He said. "The Aether and Nether are at the edge of war. My plan is going exactly as planned. Bring me the boy." The skull flickered and turned into a man. "Bring me Felix Holbrooke."
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"The devil enters our mind when it's not guarded."
Hey Fang! First off, the Prologue and the chapters are all in ONE FORUM, I see you added 2, 2 others were mistakes. Second, a Prologue is usually LONGER. Third, this is actually pretty good! I mean you can picture what they are up against and what kind of antagonist the antagonist is. Good Job! Looking forward to reading Chapter 1.
The Lord of Deception looked up from his quiet meditation. The edges of his mouth reached the edges of his eyes, forming a cold smile. A skull head servant immediately came floating forward. "I have intercepted the spying orbs." He said. "The Aether and Nether are at the edge of war. My plan is going exactly as planned. Bring me the boy." The skull flickered and turned into a man. "Bring me Felix Holbrooke."
"The devil enters our mind when it's not guarded."
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