Hello all readers! This thread is dedicated to a series i'm going to start writing, called The Envasion. A simple summary, is that before Steve arrived to the world, the Enderman broke out of the End, and conquered the overworld, thus filling it with all the creatures we know today, such as zombies, skeletons, and much more.
I don't know if this is an original concept, honestly. I've never stepped foot in this subforum, unfortunately, because honestly I never realized it existed. I hope to be spending a lot more time here though.
Lastly, if you've enjoyed any of this story, it would be great for you to maybe 1 up this post? :] However, if you enjoy it or not, I'd love to hear feedback. As long as it isn't, "OMG TEH STORIEZ SUCKS" then I'm fine with some negative feedback. I don't mind criticism.
Anyways, I hope you enjoy. I guess I'll add more things to this thread If i need to.
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It was the end of the Age Of Peace among the Overworld. The walls were breaking, the iron bars rusting, and the lava cooling. The End was invading.
As the portal lit, the Pigman that filled the frame laughed with glee. Oh, he had begun the new world! The End would take over, and fill the land! Oh, but that would not be the case - the poor pig soon learned. As the swarm of black, thin arms shot from the frame, the Pigman was stuffed with a feeling of dread - and regret.
It faded to black for the poor pigman, with few glimpses of magenta, as the endermen flooded the room, spilling into the halls of the stronghold. The bars on the walls shattered, as a high pitched wail broke loose. A bloodcurling scream from the pigman, as well as the screech of a beast. A beast unknown to any pigs alive.
It wasn't more than a few minutes before the dragon was above the ground, tunneling straight through the mountain the ancient ruin had been stowed away under for so long. The silverfish came out to watch the spectacle, some may say the ghasts banished away to the Nether heard the screech and the rubble. Suddenly - the night fell upon the overworld, the sun cracking in two, as the End itself flooded through.
The Enderman laughed with glee, as they pulled their ultimate source of power - The Ender Crystals, from the portal, and shoveled them up through the cavern, and onto the hill above. The Enderman, pressuring their cold, black hands against the crystal, wove a strange block from the crystal's power.
This block was a spawner. The Enderman placed them around the landscape, some hidden some not so. Nevertheless, strange creatures woven from the Endermen were soon crawling the land. Zombies, Skeletons, Creepers, Spiders, you name it.
A pigman watched from his village, several hundred blocks away, as the night locked into place, and the Overworld began to End.
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I don't see any major issues as I am not native English, but I think it is fine. Is this your first time writing something in that direction ?
TT2000, you are genius.