The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
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Stronghold
The dragon silently waited. She saw this new hero, and she disliked it. A little figure was curled up in what looked like a mound of dirt. No matter how childish he looked, this human would be the d of her. Countless generations of endermen and dragons had fought the humans. One by one, dragons fell, each leaving an egg. She remembered when her army defeated a human. But this one was silly. It had no armor and no weapons. This would be no picnic. She was snapped out of her trance when her main Enderman servant came up to her. "What distresses you?" The dragon looked at Void. "I see the next rebel," she murmured. "Send some newly trained fighters out. Give them orders to remove the dirt hut and attack its resident." "Yes, your majesty." Void agreed and set off. The air soon filled with teleport particles. It was quite lucky that endermen could pick up dirt. The Dragon stared into the endless night. The fire of the Ender Crystals glinted in her eyes. "I hope the army is strong enough to destroy the challenger," the Ender Dragon thought, "That Steve is a threat to the End, and we must stop him. The End will be near otherwise..."
Alright, now you know that little prologue tidbit. I started my first story, and I need YOU to give me advice! Don't be afraid to point out grammar/spelling mistakes (mostly my Kindle's fault) or unclear spots.
The story in a nutshell:
Steve has entered his Minecraft world, not knowing that HE is Minecraftia's hero. Soon enough he finds out. He must dragon-proof his home, guard his life, and defeat the Ender Dragon... Can he do it?
I woke up. "What in the..." I looked around. Everything was a cube. The sun was a glowing yellow square. There were pixelated mountains in the distance. A cube sheep ate the grass. No, no! This had to be a dream. I ran. My bare feet pounded on the moist dirt. I dashed toward a lake. I tripped over a block of dirt. I fell face first into the sand. The grit scratched my cheek. Not a dream. Then I noticed the position of the sun. It was lowering in the sky. I had to build shelter or I would get eaten in the night! I rushed to dig out a shelter. I managed to make a tiny dirt hut. It was a bit shabby, but it would do. I crawled in and curled up in a corner, sleeping uncomfortably.
I was awoken by the sound of dirt being dug in. There was a black creature staring in through a hole in the wall. Holy cow! I made the mistake of looking at its eyes. It made a strange noise. Eight pairs of glowing eyes appeared. "Uh oh.." I dug through the opposite wall and ran for a group of houses. White skeletons shot arrows at me, and zombies groaned and chased me. What was this place? I sprang inside the nearest house. I slammed the door. A carrot-nose person in a white robe stared at me. I blushed."Sorry." The villager shrugged. "No prob. Nobody likes those mobs." they said. "Help yourself to a book. By the way, I'm Teddy. " I thanked him and grabbed a book titled Mobs. I read through the rest of the night.
I yawned loudly. I was lying with my face down on a table. Teddy was already awake, and fumbling with the books. He noticed that I was awake. "Morning!" he greeted me cheerfully. "I didn't know you would sleep so late. Tara's shop is next door, if you're hungry." I decided I was. So I left the library and walked into the nearest building. Two girls, one with an apron, stood in the shop. The one with the apron smiled brightly. "I'm Tara. You're Steve, right?" I nodded. The other one, Jess, stared at me. "I... I heard about you, " she timidly told me. "There would be somebody to stop the Ender Dragon." What in the world was an Ender Dragon? Tara handed me a cooked porkchop. I took it and sat down. Jess told me all about how I was supposed to be a hero to Minecraftia. "I think I need to start to get ready!" I exclaimed. She grinned. "You won't be alone, don't worry. I will help you, you have my word. Teddy's as well, most likely. He agrees with whatever I say." I smiled. "Thanks." I felt like I could do anything.
The story in a nutshell:
Steve has entered his Minecraft world, not knowing that HE is Minecraftia's hero. Soon enough he finds out. He must dragon-proof his home, guard his life, and defeat the Ender Dragon... Can he do it?
I was awoken by the sound of dirt being dug in. There was a black creature staring in through a hole in the wall. Holy cow! I made the mistake of looking at its eyes. It made a strange noise. Eight pairs of glowing eyes appeared. "Uh oh.." I dug through the opposite wall and ran for a group of houses. White skeletons shot arrows at me, and zombies groaned and chased me. What was this place? I sprang inside the nearest house. I slammed the door. A carrot-nose person in a white robe stared at me. I blushed."Sorry." The villager shrugged. "No prob. Nobody likes those mobs." they said. "Help yourself to a book. By the way, I'm Teddy. " I thanked him and grabbed a book titled Mobs. I read through the rest of the night.
Enjoy!
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You ninja'd my idea.
The intro is a bit fast. I think you need to describe the surroundings a bit more.
TT2000, you are genius.
Edit: Fixed it a little.
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Why have I been gone so long? My interwebs are broken and I'm sick. Yay.
Want a reply? Reply to me first, I rarely stalk threads anymore.