Part 1 of Chapter 8: The Battle of Sandshard is out now. Ironically, there's not battling... YET! See the update and notice for why I made it in parts.
Part 1 of Chapter 8: The Battle of Snadshard is out now. Ironically, there's not battling... YET! See the update and notice for why I made it in parts.
Chapter 8; Snadshard. lol. Great first part of chapter 8, nice finalizing the connection between your characters, though there are parts that are misspelled... Might want to run it through a spellchecker real fast. :/
Thanks for pointing that out for me. There were a few misspelled parts. but it should be fixed now. If I still haven't fixed them, you might have to tell me specifically which parts. Other than that, I'm glad you enjoyed Part 1.
The forums kinda block curses, so there's an odd "ing" when David is speaking to Martin in the second part of the Sandshard battle. It was a great battle, though, and I enjoyed it thoroughly! Keep up the good work.
Hey guys! I'm back after... two months? Anyways, I have rewritten Chapters 1 and 2. I will proceed to rewrite the rest and start to work on Chapter 10, SOON. In the mean time, enjoy and read the update.
Also, I highly recommend to reread the story.
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Man! You're quick! Anyways, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
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Also, I highly recommend to reread the story.
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