As you all know, I am starting on a story. It's all explained here:
Hello, it's me, Longshot98764. I just wanted to tell you guys I will be making a story soon based on people who want to volunteer or be a part of the story. You will not get to choose what type of events or actions happen, I will and possibly another user valuable of earning my permission to. The topic will be of Minecraft but to make it seem as if this is real life and we meet others as if in an apocalypse type story.
Characters (Will change as story progresses)
Jonathan: Main Character
(Unknown): Warrior
Kadar Ladesh: Scientist
Tuna: Fisherman/Survivor
Expatcat Odyssion: Engineer
Story:
After being frozen in a cryogenic lag, you wake up on the floor and notice you are bleeding. You stand up with difficulty after your muscles have not been able to strengthen. You notice an Iron helmet on a coffee table along with a bow-n-arrow along with 6 bows and an Iron Sword. The place is torn to pieces but you manage to find an exit. The sun is blazing hot and you are instantly blinded. After a few minutes, you are barely able to see through the sun. In front of you are 2 pieces of pork. In the distance, there is a zombie and in the sky is a ghast. You grab the pork and make a run for it. The Ghast shoots at you and barely misses you but you are knocked down from the shock-wave. Knocked down, the Ghast shoots once again and you are afraid. You close your eyes and you notice the Ghasts shrieks. Slowly opening youe eyes, you see a brave warrior in front of you with full diamond armor, diamond sword, and a backpack full of meat and carrots. With the Ghast retreating, the warrior turns towards you and offers to be allies or face death. With no choice, you decide to ally with him.
Chapter 1: Part I - My Guardian!
It seems teaming up with this guy was a great idea. I mean, I had no choice but still. He was basically my guardian. If I was scavenging items and and a creeper was in front of me, he'd come and slice the creeper in two. I felt safe near him. I'd never want to leave his side. "So, where are we headed", I asked. He didn't respond. I didn't dare ask him twice. We approached a forest surrounded by a fence that read: "Forest of Secrecy". I thought to myself, "What type of forest would be secret"? I opened the gate and I was instantly pulled back. I noticed he saved me from walking through a tripwire. It was connected to two dispensers that would shoot arrows at you. "Wow, thanks for...". "Don't waste your time apologizing or thanking me", he exclaimed in a hoarse voice. "You don't go ahead on instinct, you scan your surroundings. Next time, stand behind me". I clearly understood he wasn't playing around. I could not mess up my chances buy getting separated from this guy. If that happened, I don't know what the outcome could be. He knelt down and cut the wire. After observing the cut wire and so on, he signaled me to come to him. He grabbed his backpack from his soldier and handed me and enchanted iron sword. "This sword is delicate", he said looking toward the horizon. "It is enchanted with Knockback II. You'll have a chance to run if you hit them. If you feel confident, you'll kill them". He grabbed my arm so tight, I thought it would've turned purple. He looked at me and for the first time, I could see his eyes. Bright green with a scar under it. His face was clean and perfect though. "Do not lose this sword. It is our only hope of survival". I nodded and swore I would not. And with that, we ventured deeper into the woods.
Chapter 1: Part 2 - How is started.
The woods seemed scary and a bit too quiet. There were no birds chirping nor did sunshine decide to show itself.
"Oh, and that question you asked earlier", he asked as if he were a bit trembled.
I didn't respond right away but I got a hold of myself.
"Where are we going? These woods are terrifying".
He turned around quickly and put his hand over my mouth. He did that signal to be quiet by putting his finger over his lips and said, "Listen". After a few minutes, I could here what he was talking about. A deep growl deep in the forest. It sounded close though.
"Follow me. We must avoid whatever that is".
I followed him around what seemed like a boulder in a specific shape of an eagle of some sort. As we continued, more boulders popped up and I realized these weren't boulders, they were statues. As if they were a victim of Medusa.
"Where are you leading me", I asked. I didn't want to be too curious and ask too many questions but the more statues I saw, the more I became to panic.
"We are heading back to my house. I sensed you were in need of help. That is my job" he replied. "I was looking for food or better yet, wool. But these monsters destroy all the animals I need and most importantly, my material."
In conclusion, I asked him one last question. Well two if you want to be technical.
"How did they get into the overworld and what is your name. I'm sorry if you want to be unknown".
He didn't want to respond but he did.
"My name is Steve", he said in a rough voice.
"Steve", I asked in amazement. "Steve the warrior who defeated the EnderDragon?" I felt like the most important man in the world now. To be in the presence of a warrior. That has to be a gold medal for a pie eater.
He then turned around. He had a strange look on his face. His voice was raspy but he told me how the monsters came to be.
"In my younger years, I was focused on getting nether stars and more experience. I built the nether portal and stayed there for maybe a week. Then, things turned for the worse. The monsters started hunting me down frequently. It was terrible. I couldn't leave the door from my nether house to get to the portal. So with the extra obsidian I had, I built an extra portal. That was the worst mistake of my life".
I felt sorry for him. But then again the story was entertaining. I didn't want it to end.
"I'm guessing they broke in and used that portal to hunt me down. All types of monsters from the nether came to the overworld".
He looked at me and his facial expression changed. It was as if I remembered him of something. His face showed anger. He lunged toward me and I flinched. I opened my eyes and I was surprised to see me whole. No blood. Diamond sword not in my head or any other part of my body. I looked behind me and he sword was jabbed into the beasts open mouth. He then curved the sword to go into his brain.
"Whoa, thanks", I cut myself off from thanking him again. I should've been paying attention.
He then looked at me and said, "Let's keep heading forward. Keep your guard up and have your sword ready for anything that come at us.
Chapter 1: Part 3 - Enchantment Table!
The woods were hell but we managed to get through it. We encountered so many skeletons and creepers. I was damaged pretty badly and I was hungry. Luckily, Steve gave me some pork to eat for my well being.
"Okay, we're close", he whispered. "But be careful. They are repelled by light and some are attracted to it. So my house will be surrounded with monsters".
I didn't want to show fear but if I could, I'd wet myself. The end of the forest led straight to a plain field. No grass, trees, nothing at all.
"What happened here", I asked.
He looked at me like I should've known but I was clueless. Then, he pointed toward a Ghast. "Oops", I thought. We were supposed to be silent and I just made it impossible to sneak. The monsters didn't look toward us so we were safe for a while. We did have to kill some zombies to get by which attracted a lot of monsters but we managed to arrive to the safe point. I was confused, there was no house. Just a cave with iron doors and two iron golems protecting the entrance. Steve ran towards a button on the side of a wall and both doors opened.
"Quickly", he yelled. "In here. We'll be safe"!
I ran towards the door and tripped on my way through. The doors shut behind us and the golems went to action defending the place. The inside was absolutely....awesome. There was a kitchen, den, bedroom. He even had cats and one dog. I was amazed. This place was huge. He had a chest full of food I never heard of and armor for guest he had saved.
"This will be your bedroom", he explained. "Everything you need for protection is in a chest. Food, water, armor. Whatever you'd like. I'll be in the library if you need me".
A library too? I was ready to explode with excitement. What else did he have? A zoo? I was curious. But I had to worry about myself for a while. At least until tomorrow. I opened the chest and there was a diamond helmet, iron chest plate, boots, and leggings, A diamond and gold sword, 52 pork-chops and steak, and a pickaxe made or pure diamond. It was enchanted with 'silk touch I' and 'efficiency II'. I figured I might as well take it since I'll be staying with him. I put on my armor and equipped my items and headed to the library. There was a long hallway leading to it. Statues of creepers, skeletons, witches, zombies were aligned next to the wall. I'm guessing those were the enemies he defeated. And to top it off, hanging from the ceiling was the Ender Dragon. It looked like the actual dragon too. I'm guessing he painted it. It still had the cuts on it. The library itself was amazing. I wondered how big it was and how it fit.
"Jonathan", he asked. I'm guessing he knew I was in his presence.
"Yeah, it's me", I replied. "This is a wonderful library you got here".
"Yeah. I made it for this. Follow me please."
I followed him to a room just within the library. As I approched it, symbols were being sucked into something. It looked like it was coming from the books. I didn't know what the symbols meant but I could only hope to learn. Steve raised a lever and a column of bookshelves went through the floor to reveal an enchantment table. The wind from it blew me back but Steve stood there. I guess I wasn't steady. It was amazing to see one of these in a while.
"This is where I enchant all of my items", he said. "Since you'll be staying with me, this is what you'll use".
"Exactly how do I use it", I asked. "I'm not familiar with this".
"It's easy. You get your selected item. In this case i'll use my sword. You lay your sword right above it and..."
The sword began to spin and rise into the air. By the looks of it, it was absorbing light into it.
"The enchantments are random. If you hope to get something great like 'Fire Aspect X', you'll need to fight a lot of monsters".
I couldn't believe it. It was this simple. With this, killing things would be easier. His sword lowered down and he read the transcript on it.
"Hmmm, 'Bane Of Arthropods V'. This is great for those pesky spiders. You should give it a try now. Oh, and may I include, you can receive more than one enchantment".
I was a bit weary but I stepped up to the table and did exactly what he said. I took out the diamond sword I grabbed from the chest and held it above the book. The sword began to spin and rise into the air. Light began to enter the sword and the sword descended into my hands. Suddenly, the transcript on it read, "Bane Of Arthropods II, Knockback V, and Smite IV". I'm not sure what smite is but I'd get to learn soon.
"Wow", he said in jealousy. "You haven't been fighting much at all and you received a high leveled sword. This thing must be broken."
I chuckled a bit a so did he.
"BOOM"
There was a huge explosion in the hallway. We shared looks with each other and rushed to the scene.
Nice and detailed story, but please don't make such a long wall of text. Most people who see something like this eventually lose interest and skip, just keep improving, and you'll do better and better!
If you'd like any inspiration, you could check my novel
Looks pretty good. Keep up the good work! Just as TheMinecraftMeme said, don't just have a big block of text. Divide it into paragraphs by hitting Enter twice.
Hello, it's me, Longshot98764. I just wanted to tell you guys I will be making a story soon based on people who want to volunteer or be a part of the story. You will not get to choose what type of events or actions happen, I will and possibly another user valuable of earning my permission to. The topic will be of Minecraft but to make it seem as if this is real life and we meet others as if in an apocalypse type story.
Characters (Will change as story progresses)
Jonathan: Main Character
(Unknown): Warrior
Kadar Ladesh: Scientist
Tuna: Fisherman/Survivor
Expatcat Odyssion: Engineer
Story:
After being frozen in a cryogenic lag, you wake up on the floor and notice you are bleeding. You stand up with difficulty after your muscles have not been able to strengthen. You notice an Iron helmet on a coffee table along with a bow-n-arrow along with 6 bows and an Iron Sword. The place is torn to pieces but you manage to find an exit. The sun is blazing hot and you are instantly blinded. After a few minutes, you are barely able to see through the sun. In front of you are 2 pieces of pork. In the distance, there is a zombie and in the sky is a ghast. You grab the pork and make a run for it. The Ghast shoots at you and barely misses you but you are knocked down from the shock-wave. Knocked down, the Ghast shoots once again and you are afraid. You close your eyes and you notice the Ghasts shrieks. Slowly opening youe eyes, you see a brave warrior in front of you with full diamond armor, diamond sword, and a backpack full of meat and carrots. With the Ghast retreating, the warrior turns towards you and offers to be allies or face death. With no choice, you decide to ally with him.
It seems teaming up with this guy was a great idea. I mean, I had no choice but still. He was basically my guardian. If I was scavenging items and and a creeper was in front of me, he'd come and slice the creeper in two. I felt safe near him. I'd never want to leave his side. "So, where are we headed", I asked. He didn't respond. I didn't dare ask him twice. We approached a forest surrounded by a fence that read: "Forest of Secrecy". I thought to myself, "What type of forest would be secret"? I opened the gate and I was instantly pulled back. I noticed he saved me from walking through a tripwire. It was connected to two dispensers that would shoot arrows at you. "Wow, thanks for...". "Don't waste your time apologizing or thanking me", he exclaimed in a hoarse voice. "You don't go ahead on instinct, you scan your surroundings. Next time, stand behind me". I clearly understood he wasn't playing around. I could not mess up my chances buy getting separated from this guy. If that happened, I don't know what the outcome could be. He knelt down and cut the wire. After observing the cut wire and so on, he signaled me to come to him. He grabbed his backpack from his soldier and handed me and enchanted iron sword. "This sword is delicate", he said looking toward the horizon. "It is enchanted with Knockback II. You'll have a chance to run if you hit them. If you feel confident, you'll kill them". He grabbed my arm so tight, I thought it would've turned purple. He looked at me and for the first time, I could see his eyes. Bright green with a scar under it. His face was clean and perfect though. "Do not lose this sword. It is our only hope of survival". I nodded and swore I would not. And with that, we ventured deeper into the woods.
"Oh, and that question you asked earlier", he asked as if he were a bit trembled.
I didn't respond right away but I got a hold of myself.
"Where are we going? These woods are terrifying".
He turned around quickly and put his hand over my mouth. He did that signal to be quiet by putting his finger over his lips and said, "Listen". After a few minutes, I could here what he was talking about. A deep growl deep in the forest. It sounded close though.
"Follow me. We must avoid whatever that is".
I followed him around what seemed like a boulder in a specific shape of an eagle of some sort. As we continued, more boulders popped up and I realized these weren't boulders, they were statues. As if they were a victim of Medusa.
"Where are you leading me", I asked. I didn't want to be too curious and ask too many questions but the more statues I saw, the more I became to panic.
"We are heading back to my house. I sensed you were in need of help. That is my job" he replied. "I was looking for food or better yet, wool. But these monsters destroy all the animals I need and most importantly, my material."
In conclusion, I asked him one last question. Well two if you want to be technical.
"How did they get into the overworld and what is your name. I'm sorry if you want to be unknown".
He didn't want to respond but he did.
"My name is Steve", he said in a rough voice.
"Steve", I asked in amazement. "Steve the warrior who defeated the EnderDragon?" I felt like the most important man in the world now. To be in the presence of a warrior. That has to be a gold medal for a pie eater.
He then turned around. He had a strange look on his face. His voice was raspy but he told me how the monsters came to be.
"In my younger years, I was focused on getting nether stars and more experience. I built the nether portal and stayed there for maybe a week. Then, things turned for the worse. The monsters started hunting me down frequently. It was terrible. I couldn't leave the door from my nether house to get to the portal. So with the extra obsidian I had, I built an extra portal. That was the worst mistake of my life".
I felt sorry for him. But then again the story was entertaining. I didn't want it to end.
"I'm guessing they broke in and used that portal to hunt me down. All types of monsters from the nether came to the overworld".
He looked at me and his facial expression changed. It was as if I remembered him of something. His face showed anger. He lunged toward me and I flinched. I opened my eyes and I was surprised to see me whole. No blood. Diamond sword not in my head or any other part of my body. I looked behind me and he sword was jabbed into the beasts open mouth. He then curved the sword to go into his brain.
"Whoa, thanks", I cut myself off from thanking him again. I should've been paying attention.
He then looked at me and said, "Let's keep heading forward. Keep your guard up and have your sword ready for anything that come at us.
Chapter 1: Part 3 - Enchantment Table!
The woods were hell but we managed to get through it. We encountered so many skeletons and creepers. I was damaged pretty badly and I was hungry. Luckily, Steve gave me some pork to eat for my well being.
"Okay, we're close", he whispered. "But be careful. They are repelled by light and some are attracted to it. So my house will be surrounded with monsters".
I didn't want to show fear but if I could, I'd wet myself. The end of the forest led straight to a plain field. No grass, trees, nothing at all.
"What happened here", I asked.
He looked at me like I should've known but I was clueless. Then, he pointed toward a Ghast. "Oops", I thought. We were supposed to be silent and I just made it impossible to sneak. The monsters didn't look toward us so we were safe for a while. We did have to kill some zombies to get by which attracted a lot of monsters but we managed to arrive to the safe point. I was confused, there was no house. Just a cave with iron doors and two iron golems protecting the entrance. Steve ran towards a button on the side of a wall and both doors opened.
"Quickly", he yelled. "In here. We'll be safe"!
I ran towards the door and tripped on my way through. The doors shut behind us and the golems went to action defending the place. The inside was absolutely....awesome. There was a kitchen, den, bedroom. He even had cats and one dog. I was amazed. This place was huge. He had a chest full of food I never heard of and armor for guest he had saved.
"This will be your bedroom", he explained. "Everything you need for protection is in a chest. Food, water, armor. Whatever you'd like. I'll be in the library if you need me".
A library too? I was ready to explode with excitement. What else did he have? A zoo? I was curious. But I had to worry about myself for a while. At least until tomorrow. I opened the chest and there was a diamond helmet, iron chest plate, boots, and leggings, A diamond and gold sword, 52 pork-chops and steak, and a pickaxe made or pure diamond. It was enchanted with 'silk touch I' and 'efficiency II'. I figured I might as well take it since I'll be staying with him. I put on my armor and equipped my items and headed to the library. There was a long hallway leading to it. Statues of creepers, skeletons, witches, zombies were aligned next to the wall. I'm guessing those were the enemies he defeated. And to top it off, hanging from the ceiling was the Ender Dragon. It looked like the actual dragon too. I'm guessing he painted it. It still had the cuts on it. The library itself was amazing. I wondered how big it was and how it fit.
"Jonathan", he asked. I'm guessing he knew I was in his presence.
"Yeah, it's me", I replied. "This is a wonderful library you got here".
"Yeah. I made it for this. Follow me please."
I followed him to a room just within the library. As I approched it, symbols were being sucked into something. It looked like it was coming from the books. I didn't know what the symbols meant but I could only hope to learn. Steve raised a lever and a column of bookshelves went through the floor to reveal an enchantment table. The wind from it blew me back but Steve stood there. I guess I wasn't steady. It was amazing to see one of these in a while.
"This is where I enchant all of my items", he said. "Since you'll be staying with me, this is what you'll use".
"Exactly how do I use it", I asked. "I'm not familiar with this".
"It's easy. You get your selected item. In this case i'll use my sword. You lay your sword right above it and..."
The sword began to spin and rise into the air. By the looks of it, it was absorbing light into it.
"The enchantments are random. If you hope to get something great like 'Fire Aspect X', you'll need to fight a lot of monsters".
I couldn't believe it. It was this simple. With this, killing things would be easier. His sword lowered down and he read the transcript on it.
"Hmmm, 'Bane Of Arthropods V'. This is great for those pesky spiders. You should give it a try now. Oh, and may I include, you can receive more than one enchantment".
I was a bit weary but I stepped up to the table and did exactly what he said. I took out the diamond sword I grabbed from the chest and held it above the book. The sword began to spin and rise into the air. Light began to enter the sword and the sword descended into my hands. Suddenly, the transcript on it read, "Bane Of Arthropods II, Knockback V, and Smite IV". I'm not sure what smite is but I'd get to learn soon.
"Wow", he said in jealousy. "You haven't been fighting much at all and you received a high leveled sword. This thing must be broken."
I chuckled a bit a so did he.
"BOOM"
There was a huge explosion in the hallway. We shared looks with each other and rushed to the scene.
If you'd like any inspiration, you could check my novel
Cheers, don't get writer's block!