The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
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Chapter 6&7 out now, hope you enjoy! And I already have in mind what I'm going to have for the final chapter..... With a cliffhanger on the epilogue... Soooo expect something unexpected for the last chapter, which will be the final battle, and some things will make more sense...
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I apologize about the short chapter, but the next one is the last one of book one, so they get to go to the Nether! Yay, and still no lords... I'd highly appreciate someone making the Nether lord (The Wither) Before I start book two.
Name: Waitriliokan
Gender: Male. I suppose he is...
Age: As old as The Nether, which may be a little younger than those balancing spirits.l
Good,Evil or Lord: An evil Lord. Of the Nether.
Backstory: When Carum was banished into the Nether to save the other worlds from his rage, his mad berserking crated an entity with the ability to make living things age millions of years in seconds : the Wither, as it was called because of this.
That is not the only dangerous thing about it though : It controls an army of wither skeletons, ready to wreak havoc all over the place and with the same although much weaker ability to make stuff wither away. Adding on to that, he is a Master of Deception, Mindcontrol, Trolling ( don't ask why, but it lessens the spirits of his enemys if they get trolled constantly) and general evil. In combat, he shoots of his heads in the direction of foes, but through his control of time regrows them in the blink of an eye. His appearance is a big skeletons without legs and arms, but instead three heads. One where it should be, and two where the shoulders are. His eyes glow white, his color ranges from sometimes pure black to a diseasing grey.
Other: Upon death drops a Nether star, a compaction of the lives that were taken before their time had come. They cannot bee freed, but in a beacon, they radiate a warm light that scares away evil.
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Sorry about not updating it, I got distracted doing other things, posting a mundanish chapter nine after I post this, chapter ten will have a little change in... I have no idea...
Sorry about not updating it, I got distracted doing other things, posting a mundanish chapter nine after I post this, chapter ten will have a little change in... I have no idea...
Mmmk. As long as this story doesn't die, I don't care how late these are (not really :D).
The story idea is going great, though you could make the ((bossfights)) a bit harder for the heroes: Otherwise it gets repetitive. This applies also to the dialogues; make them as long as you can without stretching it out ( that ,ay be tricky but the story gains a lot from it so take some time for that).
I have nothing to add.
I likes dat story.
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TT2000, you are genius.
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I know, that's cause I have to introduce two new characters in Chapter Six, so I didn't want to have to switch perspectives.
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TT2000, you are genius.
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Name: Waitriliokan
Gender: Male. I suppose he is...
Age: As old as The Nether, which may be a little younger than those balancing spirits.l
Good,Evil or Lord: An evil Lord. Of the Nether.
Backstory: When Carum was banished into the Nether to save the other worlds from his rage, his mad berserking crated an entity with the ability to make living things age millions of years in seconds : the Wither, as it was called because of this.
That is not the only dangerous thing about it though : It controls an army of wither skeletons, ready to wreak havoc all over the place and with the same although much weaker ability to make stuff wither away. Adding on to that, he is a Master of Deception, Mindcontrol, Trolling ( don't ask why, but it lessens the spirits of his enemys if they get trolled constantly) and general evil. In combat, he shoots of his heads in the direction of foes, but through his control of time regrows them in the blink of an eye. His appearance is a big skeletons without legs and arms, but instead three heads. One where it should be, and two where the shoulders are. His eyes glow white, his color ranges from sometimes pure black to a diseasing grey.
Other: Upon death drops a Nether star, a compaction of the lives that were taken before their time had come. They cannot bee freed, but in a beacon, they radiate a warm light that scares away evil.
Good enough ?
TT2000, you are genius.
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I lv reading !!
TT2000, you are genius.
TT2000, you are genius.
No, I was trying to get a certain .gif working so I had to test a few others. Finally, I got the good ol' triforce.
TT2000, you are genius.
It's a LOT more than that XD
Yikes.
Zeiu, update the story /ADD/
TT2000, you are genius.
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Mmmk. As long as this story doesn't die, I don't care how late these are (not really :D).
The story idea is going great, though you could make the ((bossfights)) a bit harder for the heroes: Otherwise it gets repetitive. This applies also to the dialogues; make them as long as you can without stretching it out ( that ,ay be tricky but the story gains a lot from it so take some time for that).
I have nothing to add.
I likes dat story.
TT2000, you are genius.