It was night, I was falling asleep until I heard a knock on the door. I squinted towards the door, there was nothing. I carelessly put my head down and closed my eyes gracefully. I dreamed of a farmer, planting seeds and wildlife. As dawn came, I heard...Fire. I woke, confused and sustained my consciousness. I carefully pulled myself up and walked towards the door. I twisted the knob, carefully, I pulled the door open. What I saw was not...Normal; I saw zombies -yes, zombies, but not on fire. I was clueless- Nothing. My mind was, nothing. Couldn't move, talk, nor blink. Confused and afraid, I slammed the door and got my iron sword. It was shining off of the plane glass. I opened the door, not afraid, not mindless, but focused. Strength was in me, not outside of the box as they say. I was thinking; maybe this is a glitch or a bug? I could report this, but is it worth it? I walked outside and everything was- dead. Nothing. Saw, nothing. I was, astonished. I saw villagers but - they were...Falling. Out of the sky. As they fell they took no damage. I thought; this is weird. And I mean: weird. This is no ordinary day for a minecrafter, nor anything at all really. I thought, and thought and thought. I got an idea; I would quit Minecraft and start it up again. So I did. As I loaded my world everything was gone. My items, my home, my sword, the village, everything. I was furious. I was mad, I was - nothing. I started to collect wood and begin my house again. Strange, every block was, round.
Then why are you still here? Making rude comments on my story. I did absolutely nothing to you. Either get out or get reported. All you had to say "I don't like it" or "Needs more improvement". Don't need to rude.
Stayed tuned for chapter 2.
Well that's not the point...The point is actually reading it.
Why thank you. Love to see positive feedback.
Mines suppose to be a mystery, not really a understandable content
Then why are you still here? Making rude comments on my story. I did absolutely nothing to you. Either get out or get reported. All you had to say "I don't like it" or "Needs more improvement". Don't need to rude.
Thanks, nice to see good feedback. I'll also correct my punctuation