The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
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Boredom....
Name: Dilikau (Dill-I-Koo)
Age (not required, since none of the main characters have a known age): 1907
Good or Evil?: Neutral, for now...
Mob They Control (only for evil characters. It could be normal minecraft mobs or made-up ones. However, corruptions and creepers are not allowed): Can control wind...
Ground Quest or Sky Quest?:Ground
Bio (summary of their past): Dilikau is a celestial being, like Star, except much older, however long ago they fought for many weeks until they were interuppted, he wants to find Star and finish the battle.
Personality: Doesn't really care about much but does protect friends, he does laugh in the face of danger though, and enjoys a good fight.
Weapons and armor (Can be anything. Could wear an enchanted zombie head or fight with a hoe): A dagger about half the length of a sword which is called "Lem" Which in a different language means "Balance" Also has a prototype rifle which fires light (Its magical...)
Appearance (Easy one. Just post an mc skin if you want): Has a black robe and cloak, the cloak has a symbol which represents balance and the robe also covers his mouth with a piece of fabric with glowing designs.
Chapter You Want Them to be Introduced (optional): Soon? The battle with Star should be a long one, as they're both very skilled in combat.
Other: A very good inventor, even made a prototype gun which he imbued with magic to fire light, also can use the power of magic and has a water spell tome and uses it to "surf" while fighting to get to another place quickly or to dodge an attack. He is very agile and is like an assassin too, and sneaks around on buildings at night when he's trailing someone, hence the dark clothes.
Edit: After they battle, do you think him and Star could disappear and Dilikau trains him or something like that and come back in the next book?
Boredom....
Name: Dilikau (Dill-I-Koo)
Age (not required, since none of the main characters have a known age): 1907
Good or Evil?: Neutral, for now...
Mob They Control (only for evil characters. It could be normal minecraft mobs or made-up ones. However, corruptions and creepers are not allowed): Can control wind...
Ground Quest or Sky Quest?:Ground
Bio (summary of their past): Dilikau is a celestial being, like Star, except much older, however long ago they fought for many weeks until they were interuppted, he wants to find Star and finish the battle.
Personality: Doesn't really care about much but does protect friends, he does laugh in the face of danger though, and enjoys a good fight.
Weapons and armor (Can be anything. Could wear an enchanted zombie head or fight with a hoe): A dagger about half the length of a sword which is called "Lem" Which in a different language means "Balance" Also has a prototype rifle which fires light (Its magical...)
Appearance (Easy one. Just post an mc skin if you want): Has a black robe and cloak, the cloak has a symbol which represents balance and the robe also covers his mouth with a piece of fabric with glowing designs.
Chapter You Want Them to be Introduced (optional): Soon? The battle with Star should be a long one, as they're both very skilled in combat.
Other: A very good inventor, even made a prototype gun which he imbued with magic to fire light, also can use the power of magic and has a water spell tome and uses it to "surf" while fighting to get to another place quickly or to dodge an attack. He is very agile and is like an assassin too, and sneaks around on buildings at night when he's trailing someone, hence the dark clothes.
Edit: After they battle, do you think him and Star could disappear and Dilikau trains him or something like that and come back in the next book?
The fight may have to be in the next book anyway. But I'll see. Perhaps Star will get trapped in the Nightmare Realm and fight Dilikau there.
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Join Date:
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Posts:
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Location:
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Might do a story for him to explain it, after all, what do you th- oh yeah....... I forgot you guys didn't see Star's backstory, anyway, he came from a meteorite, what do you think happened before then? And how do you think he was created?
Check out the poll. Three characters are about to enter the Nightmare Realm. Who will they be? You can decide! The winning three will enter the Nightmare Realm in Chapter Sixteen.
Just read the first chapter of the first book. Overall, it is really good! The words chosen actually shape the characters and I can already see a writing style, it kinda reminds me of Rick Riordan, but at the same time, its still different. The story kinda goes fast but is understandable. Since I am not much of a critique yet, that is all I have to say. I just started on a series, called The Four. I only wrote Chapter 1 so far. Please check it out and give ideas. Great job!
Just read the first chapter of the first book. Overall, it is really good! The words chosen actually shape the characters and I can already see a writing style, it kinda reminds me of Rick Riordan, but at the same time, its still different. The story kinda goes fast but is understandable. Since I am not much of a critique yet, that is all I have to say. I just started on a series, called The Four. I only wrote Chapter 1 so far. Please check it out and give ideas. Great job!
Name: Dilikau (Dill-I-Koo)
Age (not required, since none of the main characters have a known age): 1907
Good or Evil?: Neutral, for now...
Mob They Control (only for evil characters. It could be normal minecraft mobs or made-up ones. However, corruptions and creepers are not allowed): Can control wind...
Ground Quest or Sky Quest?:Ground
Bio (summary of their past): Dilikau is a celestial being, like Star, except much older, however long ago they fought for many weeks until they were interuppted, he wants to find Star and finish the battle.
Personality: Doesn't really care about much but does protect friends, he does laugh in the face of danger though, and enjoys a good fight.
Weapons and armor (Can be anything. Could wear an enchanted zombie head or fight with a hoe): A dagger about half the length of a sword which is called "Lem" Which in a different language means "Balance" Also has a prototype rifle which fires light (Its magical...)
Appearance (Easy one. Just post an mc skin if you want): Has a black robe and cloak, the cloak has a symbol which represents balance and the robe also covers his mouth with a piece of fabric with glowing designs.
Chapter You Want Them to be Introduced (optional): Soon? The battle with Star should be a long one, as they're both very skilled in combat.
Other: A very good inventor, even made a prototype gun which he imbued with magic to fire light, also can use the power of magic and has a water spell tome and uses it to "surf" while fighting to get to another place quickly or to dodge an attack. He is very agile and is like an assassin too, and sneaks around on buildings at night when he's trailing someone, hence the dark clothes.
Edit: After they battle, do you think him and Star could disappear and Dilikau trains him or something like that and come back in the next book?
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*EDIT* 800 posts! Woo!
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Reference to TAR ?
TT2000, you are genius.
tomorrow morning!
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Thank you. Thank you very much.
The results are in! The winners are...
Impedimos, Star, and... a tie. The new poll will decide if Max or Torrent enters the Nightmare Realm.
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Torrent's in the lead, but the poll is still anyone's game.
Direct tie! Looks like all four are going in...
On topic:
Yayy!
I like fighting scenes! Those four shall face their nightmares and they shall be bosses with that!
TT2000, you are genius.
Yep. The plan will be epically unfolded in Chapter Sixteen: Derik