The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
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This might be a little late to say, but I'll say it anyway: I never really meant for the Commander to become a character in this story.... But well, I suppose you can do what you want with him, but if you really want me to make a character thing for him I will do it, but only if you request if of me, I might give him a shocking past to say the least.
I have to say, I never even thought about the fact that Ghasts are giant squid/jellyfish/dragons. It's pretty cool seeing my character talking to them. Nice chapter.
Thanks. Many people say that ghasts are more of insects, though.
They're definitely not insects. Have to be giant squid/jellyfish/dragons. It's the only one that makes sense. They even look and move like a squid/jellyfish and the fireballs adds the dragon.
A ghast is a "Novopus" (octopus + one arm), that name just came to my mind ^^
I have got no idea how some think, it is an insect, well, actually, floating squid don't make too much sense I guess, but insects? Nope.
They have four tentacles, the other four degenerated to air pressurizing chambers. That is how they move.
Their organs are not bigger then those of the squids. Their big appearance is because of their helium tanks in their body.
The Ghast's favourite food is Netherrack. This gravelly stone is full of vitamines and minerals. The fireballs are tiny bits of Nettherack that can't be digested. The ghast ignites them with a special organ called .. Well ... Igniter.
The ghast uses this to free himself of netherrack and for self defense. The ghast's skin is specially adapted to withstand lava.
I reserve all rights and forbid to copy make copys.
Or not.
Ahum yes.
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The last chapter is fine, but I don't think it makes sense that Max talks about him being the traitor (which I have no problem with) in this particularly special way. I mean, it is weird that he says 'I am the traitor' , It would be just more fitting if someone would see him pulling out the bomb instead of doing it in the perspective of Max. Or you could make him just pull out the bomb without the sentence. The action alone makes it intense but the thoughts Max has kind of ruin it.
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The last chapter is fine, but I don't think it makes sense that Max talks about him being the traitor (which I have no problem with) in this particularly special way. I mean, it is weird that he says 'I am the traitor' , It would be just more fitting if someone would see him pulling out the bomb instead of doing it in the perspective of Max. Or you could make him just pull out the bomb without the sentence. The action alone makes it intense but the thoughts Max has kind of ruin it.
Meh. Eh, in Chapter Nine, things get cleared up. To be honest, the traitor thing will end pretty quickly. It's just to kind of introduce another guy I'm adding in...
I decided to release chapter nine a little early, just so I have room in my file for chapter ten, which I don't have a lot of time to type. I changed the end of Chapter Eight just a bit. Also changed the world map a bit. I don't think people use it, but who cares?
God or Evil: What is most useful for his minions. He truly loves them and would destroy the World if it made their lives better.
Mob he controls : Spiders,Cave Spiders and Silverfish. He doesn't control them but they chose him to obey himbecause of his love to Arthropods.
Ground Quest
Bio: His parents were killed, by an Enderman with a Scythe and one eye. He called himself Vothir'Oid.
He eventually came over it but still loathes Endermen.
A Scientist to the heart, he wanted to prove that Arthropods do possess intelligence. But one day he quit his job. After that, one year no one knew where he was. He was seen once again then defending a cave spider against a group of bully kids. After that he was asked why and answered : My friends are spiders And Silverfish. Why not defend them ?
Personality: Very patient, values logic above all else except if it comes to his friends (Arthropods): Harm one and he will harm you, Kill one and he will kill you. His life was ruined by an Enderman with one eye so he is very mistrusting with them.
Weapons and Armor: He fights with a nearly indestructible pirate saber composed of carbon fiber, however there are plenty of Arthropods who want to defend him if he is in danger.
Appearance: He wears Lab clothes and red goggles that cover all parts of his eyes. His hair is grey, he is thin and very tall, but he is a human.
Chapter I want him introduced in : Whatever suits the story best. I have great patience, just like a spider
Other: It would be great to have him as a kind of neutral character who just tries to make his own kind if thing, helping and harming both sides.
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Would you like to know the atomic structure of a piece of bread?
God or Evil: What is most useful for his minions. He truly loves them and would destroy the World if it made their lives better.
Mob he controls : Spiders,Cave Spiders and Silverfish. He doesn't control them but they chose him to obey himbecause of his love to Arthropods.
Ground Quest
Bio: His parents were killed, by an Enderman with a Scythe and one eye. He called himself Vothir'Oid.
He eventually came over it but still loathes Endermen.
A Scientist to the heart, he wanted to prove that Arthropods do possess intelligence. But one day he quit his job. After that, one year no one knew where he was. He was seen once again then defending a cave spider against a group of bully kids. After that he was asked why and answered : My friends are spiders And Silverfish. Why not defend them ?
Personality: Very patient, values logic above all else except if it comes to his friends (Arthropods): Harm one and he will harm you, Kill one and he will kill you. His life was ruined by an Enderman with one eye so he is very mistrusting with them.
Weapons and Armor: He fights with a nearly indestructible pirate saber composed of carbon fiber, however there are plenty of Arthropods who want to defend him if he is in danger.
Appearance: He wears Lab clothes and red goggles that cover all parts of his eyes. His hair is grey, he is thin and very tall, but he is a human.
Chapter I want him introduced in : Whatever suits the story best. I have great patience, just like a spider
Other: It would be great to have him as a kind of neutral character who just tries to make his own kind if thing, helping and harming both sides.
You're accepted. I don't know when to add him in. At first he will be evil (as there are two endermen in ground quest), but then he'll be a bit more neutral.
Name: chrisdom
Good or Evil?: EVIL
Mob They Control (only for evil characters. It could be normal minecraft mobs or made-up ones. However, corruptions and creepers are not allowed):normal minecraft mobs with cyber-enhancements, no creepers, all memes that ever exist, ender-humans, mantis men, with combustible lemons, the rabbits from raymen raving rabbits they are so like him, and all beings in the Internets with less insanity, but isn't completely sane.
Ground Quest or Sky Quest?: ground if it has the entrance to the internet, if sky has it, then yes
Bio (summary of their past): He wasn't always like this, he was an intelligent scientist. Then he discovered the internet, he then focused his work to learn about the internet. after a while he became insane after learning about the forth wall and can easily break it and sometimes on very rare times he can control of the author's thought and change tiny but Chane-reaction going things. Then he set his sites on conquering the internet. he has did most of it so far, after it is done he will conquer the rest of the known multiverse, and yes, he calls the internet the multiverse
Personality: like kefka's except he is very random, unpredictable, and is an control freak and wants to rule everything so he can terrorize it. Can be very manipulative. Finally he has no humanity except greed and lust for power
Weapons and armor (Can be anything. Could wear an enchanted zombie head or fight with a hoe): anything he can get his hands on. also his fourth wall breaking to see future events.
Appearance (Easy one. Just post an mc skin if you want) looks like dr. horrible, but with blood and multiple memes on it.
Chapter You Want Them to be Introduced (optional): anything or the following if they are close to doing those things: when they enter the internet or are in that place the next chapter in it.
Other:
(My crappy backstories are crappy, kk?)
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Thanks. Many people say that ghasts are more of insects, though.
I find it weird.
Like I said, my opinion is squid, not insect
I have got no idea how some think, it is an insect, well, actually, floating squid don't make too much sense I guess, but insects? Nope.
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They have four tentacles, the other four degenerated to air pressurizing chambers. That is how they move.
Their organs are not bigger then those of the squids. Their big appearance is because of their helium tanks in their body.
The Ghast's favourite food is Netherrack. This gravelly stone is full of vitamines and minerals. The fireballs are tiny bits of Nettherack that can't be digested. The ghast ignites them with a special organ called .. Well ... Igniter.
The ghast uses this to free himself of netherrack and for self defense. The ghast's skin is specially adapted to withstand lava.
I reserve all rights and forbid to copy make copys.
Or not.
Ahum yes.
TT2000, you are genius.
But I posted it.
Hmmmmmmmmm, what am I talking here?
OT:
The last chapter is fine, but I don't think it makes sense that Max talks about him being the traitor (which I have no problem with) in this particularly special way. I mean, it is weird that he says 'I am the traitor' , It would be just more fitting if someone would see him pulling out the bomb instead of doing it in the perspective of Max. Or you could make him just pull out the bomb without the sentence. The action alone makes it intense but the thoughts Max has kind of ruin it.
TT2000, you are genius.
Meh. Eh, in Chapter Nine, things get cleared up. To be honest, the traitor thing will end pretty quickly. It's just to kind of introduce another guy I'm adding in...
It is cool.
Kewl!
TT2000, you are genius.
Name: Spiadar'stai The King of Arthropods
Age: 20
God or Evil: What is most useful for his minions. He truly loves them and would destroy the World if it made their lives better.
Mob he controls : Spiders,Cave Spiders and Silverfish. He doesn't control them but they chose him to obey himbecause of his love to Arthropods.
Ground Quest
Bio: His parents were killed, by an Enderman with a Scythe and one eye. He called himself Vothir'Oid.
He eventually came over it but still loathes Endermen.
A Scientist to the heart, he wanted to prove that Arthropods do possess intelligence. But one day he quit his job. After that, one year no one knew where he was. He was seen once again then defending a cave spider against a group of bully kids. After that he was asked why and answered : My friends are spiders And Silverfish. Why not defend them ?
Personality: Very patient, values logic above all else except if it comes to his friends (Arthropods): Harm one and he will harm you, Kill one and he will kill you. His life was ruined by an Enderman with one eye so he is very mistrusting with them.
Weapons and Armor: He fights with a nearly indestructible pirate saber composed of carbon fiber, however there are plenty of Arthropods who want to defend him if he is in danger.
Appearance: He wears Lab clothes and red goggles that cover all parts of his eyes. His hair is grey, he is thin and very tall, but he is a human.
Chapter I want him introduced in : Whatever suits the story best. I have great patience, just like a spider
Other: It would be great to have him as a kind of neutral character who just tries to make his own kind if thing, helping and harming both sides.
TT2000, you are genius.
You're accepted. I don't know when to add him in. At first he will be evil (as there are two endermen in ground quest), but then he'll be a bit more neutral.
That is perfect !
TT2000, you are genius.
Good or Evil?: EVIL
Mob They Control (only for evil characters. It could be normal minecraft mobs or made-up ones. However, corruptions and creepers are not allowed):normal minecraft mobs with cyber-enhancements, no creepers, all memes that ever exist, ender-humans, mantis men, with combustible lemons, the rabbits from raymen raving rabbits they are so like him, and all beings in the Internets with less insanity, but isn't completely sane.
Ground Quest or Sky Quest?: ground if it has the entrance to the internet, if sky has it, then yes
Bio (summary of their past): He wasn't always like this, he was an intelligent scientist. Then he discovered the internet, he then focused his work to learn about the internet. after a while he became insane after learning about the forth wall and can easily break it and sometimes on very rare times he can control of the author's thought and change tiny but Chane-reaction going things. Then he set his sites on conquering the internet. he has did most of it so far, after it is done he will conquer the rest of the known multiverse, and yes, he calls the internet the multiverse
Personality: like kefka's except he is very random, unpredictable, and is an control freak and wants to rule everything so he can terrorize it. Can be very manipulative. Finally he has no humanity except greed and lust for power
Weapons and armor (Can be anything. Could wear an enchanted zombie head or fight with a hoe): anything he can get his hands on. also his fourth wall breaking to see future events.
Appearance (Easy one. Just post an mc skin if you want) looks like dr. horrible, but with blood and multiple memes on it.
Chapter You Want Them to be Introduced (optional): anything or the following if they are close to doing those things: when they enter the internet or are in that place the next chapter in it.
Other:
TT2000, you are genius.