If you are reading this then welcome to the story! This is a magical story, it will have adventure, romance, jokes and most important to any good story lots of fire and distruction yay! (Sorry for any mistakes I am writeing this on my phone :P) now with out further anouncements on with the show!
Chapter 1 : stupid farmers
"I see her face." "Any thing else?" A strange voice said "why, yes actualy she...she is in a field one filled with color. She, is petting the animals. Almost flawless, she is alive with her long golden hair her skin is kissed by the sun. She is lookine at me with a white smile." "Do you remember her name?" Said the voice once again. "Yes yes I do, it was.... alice and I remember something else... I I love her." at once the world around me turned bleak the colors that made the world washed away the earth crumbled like sand leaveing me with a single block surounded by a blackness. No not darkness something worse, The void.This space is now my PROPOTAY
Looks interesting. I kinda wanna find out what's going on. It's a little weird, but I think this could work.
(BTW, if this a Minecraft fanfic? It's kinda hard to tell...)
Not to be cruel, but you'll want to fix the spelling errors (propotay=prototype?) and separate the lines of dialog to help with the story's flow. That being said, it's been awhile since I saw a Minecraft romance! Good luck!
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I own one, and her name is Cuddlemuffins.
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Chapter 1 : stupid farmers
"I see her face." "Any thing else?" A strange voice said "why, yes actualy she...she is in a field one filled with color. She, is petting the animals. Almost flawless, she is alive with her long golden hair her skin is kissed by the sun. She is lookine at me with a white smile." "Do you remember her name?" Said the voice once again. "Yes yes I do, it was.... alice and I remember something else... I I love her." at once the world around me turned bleak the colors that made the world washed away the earth crumbled like sand leaveing me with a single block surounded by a blackness. No not darkness something worse, The void.This space is now my PROPOTAY
(BTW, if this a Minecraft fanfic? It's kinda hard to tell...)
I own one, and her name is Cuddlemuffins.