Okay, so this topic might not seem like it is related to minecraft with the first taste of the story, but believe me it is and eventually with enough positive responses more pieces will be put on including the lore. Also my co-writer is kind of weird and sometimes an idiot and we do not mean to offend anyone in any way and if we do we are so sorry this is a sometimes serious sometimes crazy/funny/stupid so, yeah...
All I ask is that you don't try to take any of these ideas and claim that they are yours, this is for your sake as if you do we will find you and umm do stuff to you...
P.S. I realize that we have taken A LOT of things from multiple known places such as skyrim so please no comments about that. also videos will be coming.
We are hoping to open a server soon and you can get more information at this site:
it's not much, but we need donations to start a server and if more than $20 is donated by one person they get to become a major character in the story, limited space available.
Now without further adue the preveiw of Chronicals of Origincraft:
Part 1: Civil War Revan wakes up in a cell and starts looking around until another prisoner sees him. “You! You tried to rip off skyrim by starting a story with an execution scene! While you were writing, we walked past and were ambushed right there! They must have seen the paper and what you wrote! Thanks to you, we’re now being executed!” “Why were you ambushed?” Revan asks, not remembering anything about ripping off Skyrim. Or his life. Then another prisoner without an eye or arms speaks “If it weren’t for you Imperials, I could have been on a pig and Halfway to the Capital by now!” The Imperial prisoner stares. “Why the HELL would you go to the capital if you’re riding stolen property!?” The pig thief then says “I CAN [email protected]$%& DO WHAT I WANT!” The Imperial then says “Watch your tongue! You’re speaking in front of my mother!” “So?” “She’s next to the Assassin Mentor Ulfric!” The pig thief gasps. “Gasp!” “I’m important too!” crowed the old woman. “MA! SHUT UP!” screamed the imperial. “Wow. You two are idiots.” Revan says. Then the door opens, and Templar guards walk in. “All right! single file! Lets go!” He yells. “We’re not kindergartners jeez.” Says the pig thief. Just then, an arrow hits his knee and he falls down dead. “That’s enough mouth out of you!” Says the Templar. “You two! Bind the prisoners!” “Get your hands off me!” Revan growls. “Watch it! We know you tried to rip off Skyrim. We respect that. But that’s still against the law. Come with us.” The Templar says with no hint of lying. “WHAT! I HAVE NO MEMORY OF THAT!” Revan yells. “Oh great now you’re ripping off Cowboys and Aliens just perfect. get up there!” He finally give in. “All right. Just this once, but only cause I’m in a good mood and ONLY for a slice of that cake.” “Ummmm.... you’re being executed, isn’t this the last time?” Says the Imperial. “SHUT UP YOU FAG!” Revan growls. All of the prisoners walk outside, Revan with cake being fed to him while in a rickshaw, while the other prisoners pull. They finally make it to the area, but Revan convinces the Templars that the cake hasn’t settled yet and they are forced to wait in those spots for twelve hours. Finally Revan deems it time. He takes out the lockpick that was hidden in his cake. Then he drops it. “Here,” a Templar Guard says “You dropped this.” “Thanks.” Revan replies. Finally, the Templar Legate calls Ulfric up to the block. The priest gave him his final rights “I deem you unworthy Ulfric, to go to robot heaven and as such you must go to robot hell.” “Umkay.” Ulfric says obviously deaf. Then, the Executioner raises up his axe. Everyone expects him to be saved by a dragon and a well placed arrow to the knee when.... He dies. Nothing exciting. His head gushed out blood for a while but other than that nothing. “Next up, the Skyrim Rip-offer!” Yells the Templar. Revan steps up, sure SOMETHING will happen. He leans and....
Okay so there are two ways I could add more, either continuing on from this point or a sneak peek at Part 2 vote in the comments.
well you see it was first as a script/story for for me on an RPG server but we need a server first... but i could always change it to third person if it would sound better
All I ask is that you don't try to take any of these ideas and claim that they are yours, this is for your sake as if you do we will find you and umm do stuff to you...
P.S. I realize that we have taken A LOT of things from multiple known places such as skyrim so please no comments about that. also videos will be coming.
We are hoping to open a server soon and you can get more information at this site:
http://origincraftofficial.webs.com/
it's not much, but we need donations to start a server and if more than $20 is donated by one person they get to become a major character in the story, limited space available.
Now without further adue the preveiw of Chronicals of Origincraft:
Part 1: Civil War
Revan wakes up in a cell and starts looking around until another prisoner sees him.
“You! You tried to rip off skyrim by starting a story with an execution scene! While you were writing, we walked past and were ambushed right there! They must have seen the paper and what you wrote! Thanks to you, we’re now being executed!”
“Why were you ambushed?” Revan asks, not remembering anything about ripping off Skyrim. Or his life.
Then another prisoner without an eye or arms speaks
“If it weren’t for you Imperials, I could have been on a pig and Halfway to the Capital by now!”
The Imperial prisoner stares.
“Why the HELL would you go to the capital if you’re riding stolen property!?”
The pig thief then says “I CAN [email protected]$%& DO WHAT I WANT!”
The Imperial then says “Watch your tongue! You’re speaking in front of my mother!”
“So?”
“She’s next to the Assassin Mentor Ulfric!”
The pig thief gasps.
“Gasp!”
“I’m important too!” crowed the old woman.
“MA! SHUT UP!” screamed the imperial.
“Wow. You two are idiots.” Revan says.
Then the door opens, and Templar guards walk in.
“All right! single file! Lets go!” He yells.
“We’re not kindergartners jeez.” Says the pig thief.
Just then, an arrow hits his knee and he falls down dead.
“That’s enough mouth out of you!” Says the Templar.
“You two! Bind the prisoners!”
“Get your hands off me!” Revan growls.
“Watch it! We know you tried to rip off Skyrim. We respect that. But that’s still against the law. Come with us.” The Templar says with no hint of lying.
“WHAT! I HAVE NO MEMORY OF THAT!” Revan yells.
“Oh great now you’re ripping off Cowboys and Aliens just perfect. get up there!”
He finally give in. “All right. Just this once, but only cause I’m in a good mood and ONLY for a slice of that cake.”
“Ummmm.... you’re being executed, isn’t this the last time?” Says the Imperial.
“SHUT UP YOU FAG!” Revan growls.
All of the prisoners walk outside, Revan with cake being fed to him while in a rickshaw, while the other prisoners pull.
They finally make it to the area, but Revan convinces the Templars that the cake hasn’t settled yet and they are forced to wait in those spots for twelve hours. Finally Revan deems it time. He takes out the lockpick that was hidden in his cake. Then he drops it.
“Here,” a Templar Guard says “You dropped this.”
“Thanks.” Revan replies.
Finally, the Templar Legate calls Ulfric up to the block.
The priest gave him his final rights
“I deem you unworthy Ulfric, to go to robot heaven and as such you must go to robot hell.”
“Umkay.” Ulfric says obviously deaf.
Then, the Executioner raises up his axe.
Everyone expects him to be saved by a dragon and a well placed arrow to the knee when....
He dies. Nothing exciting. His head gushed out blood for a while but other than that nothing.
“Next up, the Skyrim Rip-offer!” Yells the Templar.
Revan steps up, sure SOMETHING will happen. He leans and....
Okay so there are two ways I could add more, either continuing on from this point or a sneak peek at Part 2 vote in the comments.
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