The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
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NOTE: I will be doing new chapters every so often, or when I get inspiration for them, if you want to contribute a character, then open the spoiler below, and if you like it or see some places that could use improving, then don't be afraid to tell me via a comment. Anyway, have a good read! If you want to make a signature for this go ahead, but only the sig I like the most will be the one in this, and I am not a good artist nor do I know how to make a signature.
Thielomeu: Bringer of Dawn
Intre: Supernova
Pid: Blade
More coming soon.
Important objects:
Intrepid Chaos: Supernova blade of chaos, anything touched by the blade is incinerated.
Spells:
Halarum: Illusion arrows.
Halorai: Used to enchant something with the powers of wind, mostly used with arrows.
Halok: Homing.
Gulomur: Explosive.
Habenmire: Phantom blade, summons a phantom sword to your hand.
More coming soon.
People:
Spectre: The main character in this story, has powers over wind. Status: Alive
Shielarai: Spectre's friend, slayer of the Wither. Status: Dead
Mellanie: A person Spectre lived with when he was younger. Status: Dead
Solaris: Another person that Spectre lived with when he was young. Status: Unknown
More coming soon.
Part one.
Prologue
"HIYA!" I said as I sliced down a wither skeleton. "Take this!" And such.
Then, suddenly, I felt a presence in my mind; Spectre, almost got the heads?
Yes, Shielarai, I've got two, how many have you found? I thought. Seriously? Don't you know
that the wither skeletons don't spawn in the overworld? Besides, these ruins
aren't called ruins for nothing, I've dug through five hundred sand blocks atleast,
and I still haven't found anything interesting, Shielarai thought. Anything more interesting than the
telepathic link between us would be wierd, though, the wyvern blood that guy
gave me, it doesn't really seem worth it, I mean, a limb, maybe even your whole
body saved from withering, but everyone looking at you like: "OMGEEE ITS
A SCALY DUDE, RUN!!!!" It doesn't matter if you save the universe/worlds,
they'll still look at you that way, and I'm not in the mood to risk it. Oh great,
I got the last one, shall I make the sculpture now? I thought. Nah, I found some
glowing sand, might be the core of Imposibility, I don't know though, there is
after all, glowstone under this desert... You do realise that once we defeat the
wither that we have to move on to Tekkit, right? I mean, all of our reputation
in this dimension would disappear, and we would be starting fresh and new.
And I hear there is, like, real magic and machines. I wonder what the people
of Tekkit will think of us. Shielarai thought. Well, for one, do not mention
my abilities, please, it just reminds me of.... It. I thought. Sorry for raining
on your parade, and besides, so long as you keep your emotions in control
you'll be fine, though, I will haunt you for the rest of your life if you kill me
with lightning. I will, and you know it. Don't you have the same abilities
as me? Give or take a few, you are still immune to lightning, so I don't
think we have to worry about that, and are you at the por'al yet?
I thought. Don't you go bringing up my history, you know how bad
it is when pygmies mistake you for a god, jeez, I felt my life
before my eyes that one time I was roasted. On. A. Stupid. Fire.
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This is my first story ever so expect there to be grammar and hard to read for now... But I'd really like if you could spot out one or two grammar issues so that I could see what they're like, I'm quite young, I haven't done grammar school so if I don't exactly know what needs fixing I can't excactly fix it... And 4th chapter will be made today once I'm back home, will come out today or tomorrow, might be quite long too Nevermind that part, there will hopefully be an exiting chapter coming soon, around chapter 6-7, though, last chapter is going to be reaally long, and I already have an idea for it, so it should be good.
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OK, I was dissatisfied by these chapters, so I'm making some new ones while I post this, so they'll be done in a few mins or so, and these chapters are much better and longer. Hopefully everyone likes them!
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Thielomeu: Bringer of Dawn
Intre: Supernova
Pid: Blade
More coming soon.
Important objects:
Intrepid Chaos: Supernova blade of chaos, anything touched by the blade is incinerated.
Spells:
Halarum: Illusion arrows.
Halorai: Used to enchant something with the powers of wind, mostly used with arrows.
Halok: Homing.
Gulomur: Explosive.
Habenmire: Phantom blade, summons a phantom sword to your hand.
More coming soon.
People:
Spectre: The main character in this story, has powers over wind. Status: Alive
Shielarai: Spectre's friend, slayer of the Wither. Status: Dead
Mellanie: A person Spectre lived with when he was younger. Status: Dead
Solaris: Another person that Spectre lived with when he was young. Status: Unknown
More coming soon.
Part one.
Prologue
"HIYA!" I said as I sliced down a wither skeleton. "Take this!" And such.
Then, suddenly, I felt a presence in my mind; Spectre, almost got the heads?
Yes, Shielarai, I've got two, how many have you found? I thought. Seriously? Don't you know
that the wither skeletons don't spawn in the overworld? Besides, these ruins
aren't called ruins for nothing, I've dug through five hundred sand blocks atleast,
and I still haven't found anything interesting, Shielarai thought. Anything more interesting than the
telepathic link between us would be wierd, though, the wyvern blood that guy
gave me, it doesn't really seem worth it, I mean, a limb, maybe even your whole
body saved from withering, but everyone looking at you like: "OMGEEE ITS
A SCALY DUDE, RUN!!!!" It doesn't matter if you save the universe/worlds,
they'll still look at you that way, and I'm not in the mood to risk it. Oh great,
I got the last one, shall I make the sculpture now? I thought. Nah, I found some
glowing sand, might be the core of Imposibility, I don't know though, there is
after all, glowstone under this desert... You do realise that once we defeat the
wither that we have to move on to Tekkit, right? I mean, all of our reputation
in this dimension would disappear, and we would be starting fresh and new.
And I hear there is, like, real magic and machines. I wonder what the people
of Tekkit will think of us. Shielarai thought. Well, for one, do not mention
my abilities, please, it just reminds me of.... It. I thought. Sorry for raining
on your parade, and besides, so long as you keep your emotions in control
you'll be fine, though, I will haunt you for the rest of your life if you kill me
with lightning. I will, and you know it. Don't you have the same abilities
as me? Give or take a few, you are still immune to lightning, so I don't
think we have to worry about that, and are you at the por'al yet?
I thought. Don't you go bringing up my history, you know how bad
it is when pygmies mistake you for a god, jeez, I felt my life
before my eyes that one time I was roasted. On. A. Stupid. Fire.
That. They. Forgot. About. Because. Of. You. Shielarai thought.
Well atleast you figured out your powers then or else you'd be toast,
like I would be if I didn't have a wind shield up right now. Nice and
toasty though. Just got to the nether? I Thought. Yeah, send me
some coordiwinds now. Shielarai thought. I thought we agreed
it was: "Coordinate winds" not coordiwinds, and coordiwinds
sounds stupid. anyway, I sent them. See you there.
Prologue: Part Two
"Alright, you ready, Shielarai?" I said. "Yeah, let me get my 'Shielaraishield' first"
"Erm, you have a spider on your back..." I said. "Oh, you mean BarryJohnsonthethird?
He is my pet, and isn't he just the most adorable thing ever?" She said.
"Eh.... Why do you always have to name your things strange thi- Never mind,
lets just do this." *Plonk* Plonk* *Plonk* *Plonk* *Plonk* *Plonk* *Plonk*
"Eh? Why didn't this wo-" *BOOM* "WHAAAA!!! SHIELARAI, I THOUGHT YOU
SAID IT WAS SAFE!" I was yelling to keep my voice over the sound of the explosions.
"IT WAS, UNTIL YOU PUT A HEAD IN A SLIGHTLY DIFFERENT DIRECTION THEN
THE OTHE- Hey wait, the explosions have stopped..." Shielarai said.
* * * * *
One minute earlier
* * * * *
"So then, they are summoning the gatekeeper?" "Y-y-yes m-my lord."
someone said in a shaken voice. "They are trying to get to Tekkit."
"Well then, send the dragon that ends, they must not make it."
* * *
"Sssh Shielarai." I said in a wisper. "I'll distract it while you sneak up behind it
to strike." "Wait, I hear wings flapping, do you think its... It?" Shielarai asked in a wisper.
"If it is, we're toast." "What the, FIRE! GETAWAYGETAWAYGETAWAY!!!!!!!!" And then there
was a flash of light, and I had a strange feeling... As if something was entering my mind...
Chapter One: A normal morning
"Oh.... What the? Oh, Solaris, its just you, what were you doing anyway?"
"Early morning hunting, our food supply is getting low." He said. "Well then,
I'll wake up Mellie, we might as well hunt together." I said. "You go wake her
up, I'll cook the rabbit I just caught for breakfast." He said. And by the way,
Which biome do you want to hunt in?" "Hmm, how about the jungle?"
I said. "Why do you always have to pick the jungle Spectre? you know
its the fathest away, and there's a tundra between it and our house."
He said. "Well it has the most wildlife, so lets go there."
* * *
After we had breakfast we had set out to find some animals to hunt
"I think I see a deer over there." Mellie said. "Its a bit far away though,
I don't think my bow can reach that far, Spectre, you're up."
My bow was a longbow, well, this was my hunting bow,
my real bow I had made with some diamonds and iron and such,
and I called it the "Crystal bow" Because it was like a blue mirror
when you looked at it, very reflective. *Fwoosh* I heard as
I released the string on my longbow. "Man, you have some
good aim, it hit it right in the eye!" Solaris said. "I wish I could
shoot as good as you Spectre." Well, practice makes perfect,
now lets get that deer." I said.
Chapter Two: A deer, in a deer, in a deer.
"Whoa, this thing is heavy, what do you think it ate?"
Solaris asked. I dunno, maybe beans? Probably no-
I was saying when it split open and there was a dead deer inside.
And then that dead deer split open with another one inside, and so on.
"Okay... this is starting to get a little creepy..." Mellie was saying as a ruffling
of leaves was heard. "Creeper!" Solaris immediatly said. "Behind you Spectre!"
Solaris was saying after I had lightningly fast drew my sword and sliced it in half.
"Man, you really have a way with swords, don't you? Solaris asked. "Yeah, well,
we were each bo- created with our own gifts." Another thing to keep in mind,
me and my siblings weren't born, we were created in the middle of the universe.
Thought we would have a purpose? well we don't so far, so far, we were just
trying to survive, though, we each had our own gifts, such as Mellanie, which
we nicknamed "Mellie" could hear things far away, really far away, such as you
wisper a mile away from her, she would hear it, she can even hear screams from fifty miles under the earth,
she can hear them, and sometimes they aren't pleaseant. Sol (Solaris) could set him self on fire,
which.... was why we made our house out of cobblestone, and his room is surrounded
by obsidian blocks, believe me, you do not want to wake up in the middle of the night
with your bed on fire, it gets annoing, after you get over the fact that you can be in
five hundred degree temperatures with just minor burns. And I, (Spectre) Didn't really have
any abilities, so far. Though that may change, as some mobs have been, well,
blown away sometimes when they get near me, like you're hitting them with an
enchanted sword with knockback X. So yeah, sometimes handy if it happens.
Chapter Three: Messenger
"Mmmm this rabbit is good." Mellie said. "Well its my specialty meal,
Cooked rabbit with thirteen different herbs and spices on it!" Sol said.
"Don't forget the 'Special' arrows." I said. "Oh yes, those, how funny
that we invented an arrow that makes meat taste better." Mellie said.
"Well, how about we go exploring for once? I made a map last night."
I said. "Eh, why not, I could do with a bit of adventure, I'm getting
bored of hunting all day for food and doing nothing else." Sol said.
"So then, lets grab our swords and bows and go!" I said.
"Why did you get the better sword anyway, Spectre? I
mean, you have a hybrid mixed metal blah blah blah sword,
and all we have is some diamond ones." Well, if you'd remember,
I was the one who took care of you for the first ten days, and I mined
a lot while you were asleep, which is why we have diamond armor,
without me, its pretty safe to say you'd both be dead." I said.
"Spectre, what was you're sword made of again? I keep forgetting."
Mellie said. *Sigh* " A hilt made of gold mixed with obsidian with
white diamonds at the top, and a blade made from diamonds mixed
with sapphires, making a deep blue blade, that is really sharp, that
answer your question, Mel?" I said. "Yes it does, now then, lets explore!"
* * *
"Uhg, I'm getting tired of tree after tree after tree, any guess when we'll
get to open land, Mel?" Sol asked Mel. "Well I can hear sheep grazing
about a hundred blocks from here going north, if we go there there'll
probably be some plains, maybe if we're lucky we'll find a village."
* * *
"Whaddya know, we did find a village." Sol said. "Maybe we can trade
for some supplies!" Mel said. "Hmm seems more like a city to me-
What the-?!" I said as an obsidian tube thrust up from the ground and surrounded me.
"Mel?! Sol?!" They can't hear you. "Who's there?!" Just a messenger.
"What kind of messenger?" One to save you. One to harm you. One
to change you. And one to tell you. Four voices said. "What do you want to tell me?"
A prophocie "Then tell me it." The One Who Shines shall lead the way
to a grim demise, all who hath hope shall find it in the hearts of
Thielomeu, Asomain, Kraneak, and Yoiulomai, for they, shall
banish the evil, and lay light upon the worlds of Thieloumer,
and Juolumar. And with those words, the obsidian disappeared,
and the presence left my mind.
Chapter Four: Looking for an inn
"Spectre, are you okay?" Mel asked. "Yeah, I'm fine, but I have a
major headach, other than that, I'm all here." "Well then that's good,
you were in there for an hour!" Sol said. "What?! It felt like five minutes..."
"Well, anyway, lets head to the city."
* * *
"Man, how does anyone get around here, there's tons of people here!"
Mel said. "Lets look for somewhere to sleep, I'm pretty beat." I said.
"Yeah, its getting late anyway, lets look around for an inn." Sol said.
* * *
"Ohhhh, my legs hurt from walking so far." Mel said. "Well atleast
we found somewhere to sleep." I said once we had arrived at the
"Slithering Sloth" which made absolutly no sense at all. "Lets go
get some rooms" Sol said as he was opening the door. And
immediatly a mug flew past my head. "OI, GET OUT KIDS!
THIS AIN'T NO PLACE FOR YOU!" Someone who was obviously
drunk said. "We just ne-" "GO AWAY YOU SCUMBAGS!"
Then he fainted. "Erm..." I said as I was walking up to the
innkeeper. "How much would three rooms be?" I asked.
"A gold nugget apiece." the innkeeper said. So I rummaged
through my pack for some gold, and broke it into nuggets.
"Here you go, three gold nuggets." "Alright, here are ye keys."
The innkeeper said as he passed me some keys. "Rooms
five, six, and seven for ye, have a good rest children."
Chapter Five: The Real Beginning
Speeectre, wake up! Ehumph... Mellie its too early.
Mellie?! She's long dead! Spectre, you have to
wake up or else the world will never be peaceful
again! A voice said in my head. Who are you?
I asked in my mind. Its me, Shielarai! Wake up
sleepy head! She thought. Uhhg, why can't I just
get some rest? Because, if you don't wake up now the
world is doomed! That brought me to some attention.
Wake up, Spectre, NOW! "Mph..." I muttered. NO,NOT
THERE!!! NOT TO YOUR MIND, REALITY, WAKE UP
TO REALITY!!! "Unh..." I muttered. "WAKE. UP!" She said.
"Sholamarn, Wake. Up. Now." That brought me
to attention. "Shielarai? What happened?" I said.
"Oh thank Notch you're still alive, I thought you
were dead!" That doesn't answer my question,
though." I said. "The Wither tried to trap you
in your mind, it almost worked, had I not figured
out your true name." She said. "And just
how did you figure it out?" I asked. "Oh,
it was quite easy, actually, in a book I've
read it said that the most powerful wind spirit
was named Sholamarn, and thats how I
figured it out." She said. "Well, anyway,
where did the Wither go?" I said, and that's
when I knew we were in trouble, as Shielarai's
face went into a frown. "The Wither made it into the overworld,
I haven't been there since you've been sleeping."
She said. "Well then, know where the portal is?"
I asked. "Umm, I know what's nearby it..." "Then
lets go!"
Chapter Six: Battle to the withering!
(NOTE: I am going to make an index/dictionary because I am going to be making words up.)
As it turned out, the Wither had been waiting for us at the portal,
with an army of about a hundred ghasts and two hundred wither
skeletons. "Well this will be fun." I said as I drew my crystal bow.
"How are we going to get past that army? Its three hundred to one."
She said. "Well first of all..." I said as I pulled back the string
on my bow. "Halarum!" I said and looked at the illusion arrows
that had appeared as I said the spell. "Are you sure about that spell?
it exploded in your face last time" She said. "Well, I'm a much better
magician then I was when I first used it." I said as I turned my bow
sideways and shot, killing ten ghasts and damaging fifteen wither
skeletons and shot the fifteen wither skeletons again within the
span of five seconds, yes, I can move as fast as the wind.
"What is that sound?" Shielarai asked. "Take a guess." I
said grimly as I heard a screaming. "Take cover!" I said
as I dived behind some netherrack. and where I was a
second ago there was a massive crater going down into
a lava lake. "What was....." "Guess what, we're no longer
outnumbered, but we're definatly overpowered." I said.
"How?" Shielarai asked. "Take a look for yourself."
I said. And then Shielarai screamed: "HOW DID IT
GET SO BIG!?" "Well for one, did you not expect
to have to slay something really powerful?" I said
calmly. "Well are you coming to help or not?" She
asked. "I have to tell you this now, before its too late;
You're the one who has to slay the Wither, its the only
way that minecraftia can survive. I said. "Oh so that's
why you're so calm, you knew that you would live and
I wouldn't." She said. "Listen to me, I saw a fragment of
the future, I... I saw you slicing the Wither in half... It
doesn't mean I can't help you, but I you have to do it,
for the sake of everyone else in the worlds..." I said.
"Well then, get your but over here and help me kill
it."
* * *
"HIYA, TAKE THIS YOU SCUM OF A MONSTER!"
She said. "Halorai!" I said as I drew my bow, "Halok!"
Saying another spell I drew my bow back even more.
"GULOMUR!" And then I realeased the string and saw
the choas I had wrought; explosions everywhere near
the Wither and diamond tipped arrows imbedded inside of
it. "Spectre, if we're going to win this fight we have to get
closer." "But don't you know the risks?" I said. "Yes I
full well know the risks, but you have to trust me, try
and take down one of the heads please though." And
then she ran towards the Wither. Well, I might
as well try to shoot one of the heads of now...... I thought. So
I drew my bow one last time, aimed for the left head,
and shot, moments later, I heard a horrible scream.
I had hit it, and the head had come clean off. And
then I looked at Shielarai, she was doing fine until
the Wither got a direct hit on her, and I saw her slowly
withering away... "Shielarai! Do it now!" And I threw
a bomb to her, she caught it, and threw it at the Wither,
as the bomb exploded the Wither came down low enough
for a single blow, which Sheilarai took as a chance, and
swiped her sword clean through, cutting it in half, and I
saw it turn into ashes being blown away, the Wither, was
withering away I realised, which meant... The Wither had
chosen the next Wither before it died, which I somehow
knew it was Shielarai. So drawing my bow with a special
arrow made just for this, I drew back as much as I could,
which made a ton of tension, and then I let it go, heading
towards Shielarai, everything seemed to go in slow motion
and I saw the arrow zooming towards her, another head
growing onto her, and the arrow hitting its mark. *Thud*
was all I heard, until I heard something so terrible it made
me want to suicide, but I knew what had happened. I
had killed the Wither, once and for all, but not without
a casualty. Shielarai was dead, and there was no way
of bringing her back, nor would she respawn. As I
approached the bodys, I found a nether star, an
eye of ender, and a book. Yes, I found a book,
but what was its contents? As I picked up the
other two things the book flapped open, on the
page it was opened to it said: "Spectre, you are
the Thielomeu, Bringer of Dawn."
Part Two: A new quest
Chapter Seven: Ambush by the three... bandits?
In the book there was a lot of entries, all by the generations
of the Wither, there wasn't very many interesting entries,
but the first and second were the ones that caught most
of my attention, the first one said: "He is real." and
the second one said: "He did this to us." I got a
pretty good idea of what had happened. But before
I decided to go back to the overworld, I inspected
the eye of ender, completly solid, no sign of anything
interesting. So I decided to go back to the overworld,
where I immediatly felt a pain in my head, then I
fell down, knocked out.
* * *
"He has nothing else good on him boss."
I heard a voice say. "Only some cobblestone
and netherrack." Another voice said. "We'll
take him with us to see what he'll spill."
Yet another voice said. "He won't be escaping
us, nor will any of our other captives." As I
surveyed my surroundings, I noticed that
I was bound and gagged. Great, just great.
I thought. How to get out of here? these ropes
are as hard as iron I looked
at the "ropes" binding me, they were chains.
"Boss! We found a book on him!" Bandit one
said. "And it might have some treasure map
in it!" Bandit two said. "Take it then! Once
we sell his goods we'll be rich!" Bandit three
said, that was when I got a good look at him;
he was down-to-earth ugly, his face looked
like cow dung, but most importantly, there
was a gold and silver scabbard going down his back.
"He'll never stand a chance escaping since
we have Intrepid Chaos. Intrepid Chaos?!
How did they find it!? I thought. And also,
how do I get my stuff back? And then
I realised that they were tacking up some pigs.
"Grab him!" Bandit three said. This was my chance,
just as soon as bandit one touched my foot I
shot a burst of wind around me, blowing him
away, and launching his dagger into the
chains binding me, using wind to thrust
it, I used the dagger to cut open the chains
and gag, then launched myself up and
started running towards bandit three, he
was starting to take his sword out of his
scabbard but I was too fast for him,
just as I was almost to him I used a
spell; "Habenmire!" and sliced him
in half, I saw the white smoke out
of my pheriphial vision and assumed
he was dead. Biggest mistake of my
life, as I turned around he almost sliced
my face in half, but lightning fast I moved
enough to dodge most of his swing,
but he still managed to get two
quick hits on my left cheek,
not very big but really painful,
before he could get in another blow I grabbed
Intrepid Chaos from his hand and sliced him
open in one move, bandit two had looked
ready to fight but... He ran away. "Well
I'd better look for a town then." I said.
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