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I am daring doo pony adventue extraordinare some may think i am just in their books but they're wrong one pony ,rainbow dash, thought that I was real . This is my diary ,how rainbow freed me,and the adventures that follow us through all of equestria or, I think this is equestria one passing twolegged blocky local named steve told me this was minecraftia.

day 1 i was freed from my imprisonment in this strange blocky world by a kind pony named Rainbow Dash. She seemed nice she had a wide gleam in her eyes as she recued me.I figured she was a good fan by the excitement on her face . It's good to see that gleam in somepony's eyes after being imprisoned by discord for so long i suppose i should tell her about how i came to be here tommorrow...

Not bad, but very poorly written and spelled, with awful grammar. Try working on your writing skills a bit more, and post the diary pages in the original post instead of in replies (to make it easier to read).

Thanks for the advice i was kind of in a hurry because we had to leave for the festival of trees. btw the first episode of the mechast is up don't miss it!