Update! Update! Yay!
Chapter 2 added, with the name of the main character (finally) introduced, we will dwelve deeper into the secrets of the village, except.. not really. Not on this chapter.
Expect more on the next chapter~
Enjoy.
The only concern I have is wondering what tense is it. Past or present? In some sentences you say walk, but in others you say walked. That's the only thing I find wrong in this story. Otherwise, great job!
No comment D:
Alright, I've updated the story and attempted to try a third-person view on this chapter,
Hope you guys like it. Vote on the poll if you want to. Vote my story up by clicking the tiny green arrow in the corner if you show support!
Smiley faces guys.
Btw, I like sheeps. Have some sheeps. Might be too much.
Chapter 2 added, with the name of the main character (finally) introduced, we will dwelve deeper into the secrets of the village, except.. not really. Not on this chapter.
Expect more on the next chapter~
Enjoy.
The only concern I have is wondering what tense is it. Past or present? In some sentences you say walk, but in others you say walked. That's the only thing I find wrong in this story. Otherwise, great job!
It's the present tense by the way. Thanks.
Alright, I've updated the story and attempted to try a third-person view on this chapter,
Hope you guys like it. Vote on the poll if you want to. Vote my story up by clicking the tiny green arrow in the corner if you show support!
Smiley faces guys.
Btw, I like sheeps. Have some sheeps.
Might be too much.
Fourth chapter published for nobody in particular.
Enjoy.