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This poem uses the abab rhyming scheme. Hope you enjoy!
Also tell me what you think.

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I wake up in the grass

In a forest by a lake

The sun is starting to pass

While I have tools to make



The night fills the air

Monsters are coming out

They start to give me a glare

They are angry no doubt



They are after me

What have I done

I started to flee

Where is the sun



I find an empty nook

Where I'll rest for the night

I give outside a look

I think I'm out of sight



I wake up to sunlight

No monsters outside for

I will have to fight

Next time I encounter more



Looks like I'm stuck here forever

There was something that was amiss

For now I need to be clever

If I were to ever survive this


-Steve

This is a very well thought out poem.21 views and only i commented..you deserve more attention

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Wow. You put a lot of effort into this.
This needs to be spread to more people!

This is amazing, you ought to do more!

It's pretty cool! I'm not much of a fan of poetry but this one's good.

Man, it's tough finding real talent like this, with proper grammar and actual skill. Great job!

*clap clap clap*

Nice nice, very good poem, write more, like one about redstone or about the wither, that would interest me how you would put that into words, I'll check again once in a while ^^

Hmm great have you considered writing stories?