I hope you all enjoy chapter XI, and aren't too disappointed with its length.
P.S.
The first line is the only part of the chapter where Minxed isn't talking.
Dude great story man!! Keep writing. I love the way you do the magic! It's totally amazing!! Chap. 11 is pretty sweet too. I love how you have Minxed remember everything and tell it to Aboba like that.
If you liked it, loved it, can't stop reading it, dislike it, hate it, or wish it never existed, please comment. I would love to hear your constructive or non-constructive criticism.
I just added a link to a google document of Minxed's Journal. So far the journal is not up-to-date, but I'll work on that. For now, enjoy.
As I said before, its been a while since I've looked at the Literature Forums. I've been meaning to catch up on several stories, including this one.
I really like the journal! You should continue it. Also I just read the last chapter and you're doing really well with the whole other language thing. Sometimes people just add redundant syllables and make it hard to read but you did pretty good with it. Good job!
As I said before, its been a while since I've looked at the Literature Forums. I've been meaning to catch up on several stories, including this one.
I really like the journal! You should continue it. Also I just read the last chapter and you're doing really well with the whole other language thing. Sometimes people just add redundant syllables and make it hard to read but you did pretty good with it. Good job!
Thanks! I've tried my best to make the language pronounceable, but it's not always easy because I pronounce things with an accent. I'm still working on actually catching the journal up to speed, but he only says anything about writing it in chapter XV(which has yet to be released), so it might be a while.
Added a dictionary for the language, just in case you have no idea what it says. By the way, sometimes I just kind of put filler words in, so half the time the sentences that you translate might not make any sense...
Added a map/picture thing of the inside of the house Aboba, Minxed, and Brailyn built in the forest in chapter 12. There's one with labels, and one without labels.
That said, I love maps... Have you considered doing a large map of Minxed's world? Such as where the Castle in the Forest is, and the Grey City, and things like that. That would be pretty awesome.
I have thought about making a large map, but the problem with that is that I don't really have the patience to do it right now. Not to mention...
well, it's a secret.
I told you it's a secret, are you sure you want to know?
Well, how 'bout it? Turning back yet?
Okay, fine.
I'm writing another fan fic called Blueice -- Legend of the Miner
READ THIS NEXT SPOILER!!
If you copy the name of this story, or take an idea for part of a story or a whole story from the name or anything else related to it, I ask that you credit me. Thank you.
Credit for the inspiration for the idea for Blueice goes to dragontyron and his wonderful bluestone.
And then I also have to worry about actually writing The Entrappers... the maps for the hosue are kind of a thing that I did just 'cause I was bored, and wound up being better than I expected, so I guess just don't expect much of a good map. Yup, there's my nice, long, boring tangent with lots of spoilers.
Okay people, get excited for Monday! (That's 36 hours from now if you didn't know). The next update shouldn't be read during or near the night, or if you hate end-of-the-world type things, or extreme zombie stuff. So yup, that pretty much sums up chapter 14. By the way... happy Valentine's Day!!
For those of you who easily get nightmares, don't read this chapter
For those of you who get nightmares when you read/hear about something extreme (zombie apocalypse, end of the world, etc.) don't read this chapter
This chapter is not necessary for developing anything between reader and character, but it is necessary for developing character
Added chapter 15
Don't worry, this chapter is fine. Mostly. There is one scary scene, but I hope it's not that bad. However, if you're thinking of skipping this chapter, don't do it. This chapter is necessary in the plot line of the story. Well, mostly, that is.
- Added chapter XI
- Fixed some formatting errors
I hope you all enjoy chapter XI, and aren't too disappointed with its length.P.S.
Dude great story man!! Keep writing. I love the way you do the magic! It's totally amazing!! Chap. 11 is pretty sweet too. I love how you have Minxed remember everything and tell it to Aboba like that.
- Added Chapter XII
- I will be adding chapter XIII in three weeks instead of one or two, sorry guys.
- Do not read chapter XII at night, unless you never have dreams/nightmares, enjoy nightmares, or want to read it so badly that you can't resist
If you like it, love it, can't stop reading it, dislike it, hate it, or want it to end, please comment. I can take criticism, don't worry.I cannot find chap 12...
Hmm, well that's kind of awkward.
Sorry, it looks like it didn't save it in the post. I'll fix it right away.
Ok chap 12 is awesome!
You'll have to wait about two months for that, but it will be... let's just say that might be one of the more interesting chapters.
- Added Chapter XIII
- Fixed some post formatting errors
- Rescheduled all of the release dates
If you liked it, loved it, can't stop reading it, dislike it, hate it, or wish it never existed, please comment. I would love to hear your constructive or non-constructive criticism.As I said before, its been a while since I've looked at the Literature Forums. I've been meaning to catch up on several stories, including this one.
I really like the journal! You should continue it. Also I just read the last chapter and you're doing really well with the whole other language thing. Sometimes people just add redundant syllables and make it hard to read but you did pretty good with it. Good job!
Thanks! I've tried my best to make the language pronounceable, but it's not always easy because I pronounce things with an accent. I'm still working on actually catching the journal up to speed, but he only says anything about writing it in chapter XV(which has yet to be released), so it might be a while.
I have thought about making a large map, but the problem with that is that I don't really have the patience to do it right now. Not to mention...
well, it's a secret.
I told you it's a secret, are you sure you want to know?
Well, how 'bout it? Turning back yet?
Okay, fine.
I'm writing another fan fic called Blueice -- Legend of the Miner
READ THIS NEXT SPOILER!!
If you copy the name of this story, or take an idea for part of a story or a whole story from the name or anything else related to it, I ask that you credit me. Thank you.
Credit for the inspiration for the idea for Blueice goes to dragontyron and his wonderful bluestone.
Oh, and by the way, thanks Immortus.
Where the NETHER does H get all these Bows for the Skeletons from ?!
Jokes be gone.
Your story is cool. The only issue is the occasional grammar/spelling error. But then we are all human...
TT2000, you are genius.