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Hi! Im here with a story of a minecraftian in your first night! I Hope you will like:

In a cool and sun day, a minecraftian go get some wood, then he view a Creeper, he doesnt know what he do, then he walk... Head to Head to Creeper... Them BOOM!

He gets scared. Still he now knows that Creepers explode.
He craft the wood to get planks, then make a workbench.

He says:
- What i will do with this workbench?

Then a villager walking, helps them what he will do with that.
He says (villager):
- Hello! Good day, yay?

The newbie:
-Hi! You can help me with this workbench?

The villager:
Yes, need a pickaxe, a sword?

The newbie:
I need a pickaxe.

The Villager:

- Go found more wood, to craft sticks.

Then the newbie go ahead to found wood, he takes times to found too much wood, then it comes night.

He views a zombie, he tried to run, but the zombie calls the friend skeleton, to hurt them.

He run more than the speed of lights!
He view a young village, with lots of villagers.

View Part 2, Coming Soon

This would be a good story if not for the grammar problems. They just make it look so annoying, but you have a good beginning. One thing I would suggest is adding lots of adjectives to the story, like "On a cool, sunny day, a Minercraftian was going to get some wood. In the foggy distance, he saw a green, tall thing. He didn't know what it was, so he sneaked closer to investigate. He and the thing were only a few blocks away, when suddenly, the green thing exploded with enough force to knock the wind out of the Minercaftian." instead of "In a cool and sun day, a minecraftian go get some wood, then he view a Creeper, he doesnt know what he do, then he walk... Head to Head to Creeper... Them BOOM!"