"And as the Darkone looked and saw his own thoughts in the minds and works of others, he laughed and laughed and knew he had won."
Chapter 3, part 5 of the Chronicles of Darkhelm
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GENERATION 35: The first time you see this, copy it into your signature on any forum and add 1 to the generation. This is a Social experiment. I like pie
Aha. Quite interesting. I would suggest adding spoilers. It sizes down the text ALOT.
The actual story is nicely written, the plot seems good too, I don't have problems with the pacing, and...
Just because I can, I will offer you the title of a Lich Lord in honor!
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Would you like to know the atomic structure of a piece of bread?
Aha. Quite interesting. I would suggest adding spoilers. It sizes down the text ALOT.
The actual story is nicely written, the plot seems good too, I don't have problems with the pacing, and...
Just because I can, I will offer you the title of a Lich Lord in honor!
What?!?! You can't just give out the that title to just anyone! Oh wait, you can.
What do you guys think of a complete re-write of this story, so that it's better, less confusing, more detailed, and longer chapters? I can't guarantee it, but I'm thinking about it!
Chapter 3, part 5 of the Chronicles of Darkhelm
GENERATION 35: The first time you see this, copy it into your signature on any forum and add 1 to the generation. This is a Social experiment. I like pie
But seriously, add the spoilers.
The actual story is nicely written, the plot seems good too, I don't have problems with the pacing, and...
Just because I can, I will offer you the title of a Lich Lord in honor!
TT2000, you are genius.
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TT2000, you are genius.
I SUPPORT THE TESTIFICATE LANGUAGE
TT2000, you are genius.