Steve woke up in an arena disoriented. He slowly got his sight back and looked to the crowd. He saw his family,crying. Behind them and filling the stands are the mobs he usually kills. Skeletons have arrows at each family members head. Steve didn't know if they knew that or not. He looked at his shirt and saw blood all over him. He slowly remembers the last fight he was in. But not how he got here. He looks to his sides to see a chest at his right. Next to it a sign saying " Take these you will need them.". He looked in the weird black chest to see a few different things. He saw an iron sword,some armor he did not recognize in his daze,and a bow with five arrows. He then saw a note at the bottom that said look forward. Steve looked up and saw the one he was in those snowy woods for. Or he WAS there. Now he was in a fiery hole shaped to be an arena. But the man or thing was staring him down. He saw no emotion in the uncomfortably blank eyes. He could not take his gaze from them they were amazing but frightening. Now he regained himself. Steve took the sword and left the armor and charged at him. The thing was not moving at all. Steve thought it was stupid. He was wrong The thing teleported at the last second. Steve took the sword and swung it behind him. It was nowhere to be seen. He looked frantically around the arena. Then suddenly a hard push forced him to the ground from behind. He turned and looked up and saw the eyes staring at him. He found a meaning to them. A meaning that said You shall die. He took the sword and swung. It hit the creature. It yelled in pain and teleported away. He saw it across the stadium. Steve could have sworn it winked. He ran for the bow. He got to the chest but felt breathing he turned and with the a hard blow he hit the thing in the face. It yelled again then turned and screamed in his face. Steve fell to the ground in fright at the things golden yellow teeth and lack of having a anything but teeth in it's mouth. He quickly recovered and took the sword. And went to lash the creature but missed. It jumped on him and hit him numerous times leaving his bottom lip bleeding and his eye impaled. Steve struck the creature with the blunt sword missing with the sharp. He hit it in the head. It squealed and teleported. Steve took the bow and found the creature across the arena. He took his shot but missed because of the bad daze he still had. He again looked for the thing he was fighting. He found it charging at him he shot another arrow and hit it in the knee. It fell and as Steve ran to it to stick his sword in it. It looked up at him still no change in his face and screamed so loudly the humans in the arena's ears bled. Steve dropped and the creature got up and ripped the arrow from it's knee. It ran at Steve again still yet to lose blood. Steve put his sword up and expected the worse. Adrenaline pumped him up. He kick flipped himself off the ground and ran at the creature. The thing stopped but Steve did not. Steve was faster than it. He struck it and it screeched loudly. Steve lost his arrows but took the one from it's hand. The teleported. It was now not 3 feet from him it knocked him to the ground. Steve threw up about two pints of blood. The thing thought he was dead. He heard his wife cry and his kids scream. It raised its hands with it's back to Steve. Steve had one shot. He knocked the arrow in the bow. He aimed now more disoriented then when he awoke from his evil slumber. He took his shot. It hit the creature in the back of the head. The creature turned and looked at him. His frown now turned to a smile. He had gotten his pupils and eyes. It looked like him. Then a bright light flashed. He awoke in a completely white world. He then heard his name called from behind. He screamed and turned and saw a man with a fedora and a beard. He explained to Steve he was Notch. He was the god of that dimension. He said his purpose was to do what he did. He killed the devil of that dimension. His name was Herobrine. He had stalked Steve and brought the creatures upon that dimension. He now gave Steve an option. Notch said that Steve could either rule that dimension in Notch's place. Or he could return with his family in the foreworld without the terrible monsters. Either way he would be immortal and so would his family. He did not even have to think about it. He returned to his family. Him and his family lived together forever in perfect harmony.
Authors Note
I made this whole story off the top of my head. I got bored and made this so I know the ending is cheesy and it was kinda crappy but if you want me to make more just say so in the comments. Bye and see ya in Minecraftia!!!
"He found it charging at him he shot another arrow and hit it in the knee." That made me laugh. Your story is VERY suspenseful. I enjoyed reading every bit of it. It had a confusing part in the beginning, and there are a few very minor grammatical errors, but overall, it is wonderful. I feel there should be a second part explaining how Steve had gotten to where he is. Also, I would like for this to be on the Minefic story list. A link to the thread is in my signature, and if you want it on the list, just PM one of us pre-readers with the proper format stated on the thread. But also, try to fix any grammatical errors that you spot before it gets on the list. (We like to look as professional as possible.)
"He found it charging at him he shot another arrow and hit it in the knee." That made me laugh. Your story is VERY suspenseful. I enjoyed reading every bit of it. It had a confusing part in the beginning, and there are a few very minor grammatical errors, but overall, it is wonderful. I feel there should be a second part explaining how Steve had gotten to where he is. Also, I would like for this to be on the Minefic story list. A link to the thread is in my signature, and if you want it on the list, just PM one of us pre-readers with the proper format stated on the thread. But also, try to fix any grammatical errors that you spot before it gets on the list. (We like to look as professional as possible.)
WOW! It I can't believe someone actually wants to post my work! I will get right on the edited version and a prequel soon! Thanks for being able to make my work a tad bit more noticed!
"He found it charging at him he shot another arrow and hit it in the knee." That made me laugh. Your story is VERY suspenseful. I enjoyed reading every bit of it. It had a confusing part in the beginning, and there are a few very minor grammatical errors, but overall, it is wonderful. I feel there should be a second part explaining how Steve had gotten to where he is. Also, I would like for this to be on the Minefic story list. A link to the thread is in my signature, and if you want it on the list, just PM one of us pre-readers with the proper format stated on the thread. But also, try to fix any grammatical errors that you spot before it gets on the list. (We like to look as professional as possible.)
WOW! It I can't believe someone actually wants to post my work! I will get right on the edited version and a prequel soon! Thanks for being able to make my work a tad bit more noticed!
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Authors Note
I made this whole story off the top of my head. I got bored and made this so I know the ending is cheesy and it was kinda crappy but if you want me to make more just say so in the comments. Bye and see ya in Minecraftia!!!