Hello, I have decided to write a long Minecraft Fan Fiction. It is titled "Into The End", and it is my first fan fiction. That being said, I want you all to be as brutally honest about its quality as possible. It will heavily involve many different mods, (Which I will Disclaim and give credit to the original creators). I am going to edit the chapters based on their reception. Now on to the main story.
Into The End
A Minecraft story by Dustin Curtis
Prologue
Hello Hero, I hope it is you that has discovered my journal, and not some wandering villager or those vile demons. If you would care to give it a read, you shall discover what happened to this once idyllic world.
Ch. 1: Where Our Hero Washes Up on a Beach, Meets a Strange Old Lady, And Nearly Dies of A Heart Attack
I had arrived at the kingdom of Soluna on the Fifth of Cobblestone in the year 1678. I remember waking up to the feeling of waves lapping at my feet. I opened my eyes and saw a pair of feet underneath a long red robe. I sprang up, but fell down as I tried to edge backwards. The robes rippled as a hand shot out and grabbed my arm, sending a field of warmth through it. I looked up and saw the face of a girl, her face framed in long blonde hair, with streaks of red and orange running through it.
"Who are you?" she asked in a voice that sound like melting chocolate.
"Steve," I replied, struggling to form coherent words.
"Steve? What a strange name," she muttered
"Well Steve, it looks like you've had a long journey," said motioning to my tattered clothing.
"Where... where am I?"I asked
"You are in the kingdom of Soluna," she stated, reassuringly.
"Who... who are you?" I asked worried.
"Shhhhh..." she said, trying to calm me down" You have time to ask questions later."
With that, she allowed me to prop myself on her arm. She led me down a cobbled path, to a wooden gate with a strange symbol carved deep into the wood. All of a sudden, my vision became blood red, I felt my body tense, I let out a garbled shriek. My vision went black as there was a flash of light.
I awoke this time in a small bedroom, on the walls was a mural showing local scenery, and on the ceiling was an exquisite painting of the sun. Around me were beautiful pieces of mahogany furniture, scarlet red with golden trim, forming images of the sun. To my right was a lamp shaped like a miniature sun, with the light coming from a complicated array of wires leading to a large amount of pistons, and inside of that layer, was a liquid that appeared to be... lava? I shook my head at this notion, as lava would have burnt through the fragile wall of glass. I was interrupted from my admiring by a knock at the door.
"Come in," I said, whilst worrying about who it could be.
With that, the door opened to reveal a small, plump, old woman dressed in an old red dress, with the same sun pattern on it's chest.
"Hello, dear," she said in a frail, warm voice, like a hearth "I was told by the queen to tend to you until you were ready to speak to her."
"Where am I?" I asked.
"Why you're in the finest inn of the Aurora sector," she said smiling, revealing a mouth full of white teeth.
"How did I get here?" I asked, braver this time.
"If you mean the inn, then you were dropped off here last night by her majesty," she explained, softly," but if you mean the kingdom, then I don't know dear."
The kingdom? That brought back a memory of last night, a girl? Yes... yes a girl, telling me the name of a kingdom...Soluna, I think
"Can you take me to the queen now?" I asked, hopefully.
"Well yes dear, but you should eat and get dressed first," she instructed," because it's not good manners to go there in your night clothes."
It was true, I had some how changed into a pair of Pajamas over night, red, with the same sun design on the pocket.
"Alright," I agreed
"Breakfast is still being cooked, and the bathroom and closets are over there dearie," she said, pointing at an open doorway.
I thanked her and entered the bathroom through the exquisite doorway, carved with the same highly-detailed sun design (At this I had briefly wondered whether or not this was for some sort of religious reason, or whether the owner had some sort of weird attraction to the sun). The bathroom was cozy, with an ornate sink and an elaborate iron door with the same sun pattern (I was starting to strongly believe my latter thought), directly adjacent to this was a button labeled in an ornate font: "Cleaning Stall".
Beyond this door, was a small tiled room, with a strange ceiling divided into 3x3 blocks featuring small holes in the center of them. On the wall opposite the door, in a small alcove, was a button stated as the way to start the shower. After getting undressed, I pressed the button. There was a clicking noise as the wall next to me slide open, revealing a chest with a button above it. Inside of this chest was a small stash of crystal, stoppered vials containing some sort of strange golden liquid. The label described it as a "Potion of Fire-resistance". On the stopper was an image of a creepy grinning moon with the words "Umbra Sector Concoctions" written in deep purple ink below it. Behind the stash of bottles, was a note instructing me to drink the liquid then press the button again. Confused as to why this would be needed for a regular shower, I nonetheless followed the instructions.
The potion tasted like Ice. My throat began burning, my breathing became harder, my eyes began to water. All of a sudden my sight became foggy , small Crystals began growing from along the edges, getting closer and closer to the center. I tried to reach up and clean my eyes, but shrieked when saw through my impaired vision that my skin was covered in a thin layer of Crystal, the skin underneath tinted a pale shade of blue. Looking up, I saw that surrounding me was a small snowstorm, the flakes whirling like crazed dervishes. Through the the flakes, I noticed the button behind the alcove. Realizing that the button was probably my only hope, I reached over and pressed it.
There was a small *clunk*, as the shelf behind me retracted into the wall, followed a small amount of whirring. I heard sliding above and a wave of fear washed over me as I saw lava begin slowly pouring down onto me. As a form of futile self defense, I crawled into the fetal position, my arms covering my head and face. As the lava edged closer, I shut my eyes and braced myself for the end. To my shock, I felt... nothing. I opened my eyes and saw that my entire field of vision was filled with shades of red and yellow, mesmerizing me. I stared for what seemed to be ages, just barely noticing that the feeling cold was gone.
There was another *clunk* as the machine above whirred to a stop. The lava disappeared through small holes at the bottom of the walls. Slowly, the crystals began retracting from my vision. The ice on my skin slowly melted away as the snowflakes slowly began dissipating. It was only after the cold was completely gone that I realized how hard I was breathing.
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Into The End
A Minecraft story by Dustin Curtis
Prologue
Hello Hero, I hope it is you that has discovered my journal, and not some wandering villager or those vile demons. If you would care to give it a read, you shall discover what happened to this once idyllic world.
Ch. 1: Where Our Hero Washes Up on a Beach, Meets a Strange Old Lady, And Nearly Dies of A Heart Attack
I had arrived at the kingdom of Soluna on the Fifth of Cobblestone in the year 1678. I remember waking up to the feeling of waves lapping at my feet. I opened my eyes and saw a pair of feet underneath a long red robe. I sprang up, but fell down as I tried to edge backwards. The robes rippled as a hand shot out and grabbed my arm, sending a field of warmth through it. I looked up and saw the face of a girl, her face framed in long blonde hair, with streaks of red and orange running through it.
"Who are you?" she asked in a voice that sound like melting chocolate.
"Steve," I replied, struggling to form coherent words.
"Steve? What a strange name," she muttered
"Well Steve, it looks like you've had a long journey," said motioning to my tattered clothing.
"Where... where am I?"I asked
"You are in the kingdom of Soluna," she stated, reassuringly.
"Who... who are you?" I asked worried.
"Shhhhh..." she said, trying to calm me down" You have time to ask questions later."
With that, she allowed me to prop myself on her arm. She led me down a cobbled path, to a wooden gate with a strange symbol carved deep into the wood. All of a sudden, my vision became blood red, I felt my body tense, I let out a garbled shriek. My vision went black as there was a flash of light.
I awoke this time in a small bedroom, on the walls was a mural showing local scenery, and on the ceiling was an exquisite painting of the sun. Around me were beautiful pieces of mahogany furniture, scarlet red with golden trim, forming images of the sun. To my right was a lamp shaped like a miniature sun, with the light coming from a complicated array of wires leading to a large amount of pistons, and inside of that layer, was a liquid that appeared to be... lava? I shook my head at this notion, as lava would have burnt through the fragile wall of glass. I was interrupted from my admiring by a knock at the door.
"Come in," I said, whilst worrying about who it could be.
With that, the door opened to reveal a small, plump, old woman dressed in an old red dress, with the same sun pattern on it's chest.
"Hello, dear," she said in a frail, warm voice, like a hearth "I was told by the queen to tend to you until you were ready to speak to her."
"Where am I?" I asked.
"Why you're in the finest inn of the Aurora sector," she said smiling, revealing a mouth full of white teeth.
"How did I get here?" I asked, braver this time.
"If you mean the inn, then you were dropped off here last night by her majesty," she explained, softly," but if you mean the kingdom, then I don't know dear."
The kingdom? That brought back a memory of last night, a girl? Yes... yes a girl, telling me the name of a kingdom...Soluna, I think
"Can you take me to the queen now?" I asked, hopefully.
"Well yes dear, but you should eat and get dressed first," she instructed," because it's not good manners to go there in your night clothes."
It was true, I had some how changed into a pair of Pajamas over night, red, with the same sun design on the pocket.
"Alright," I agreed
"Breakfast is still being cooked, and the bathroom and closets are over there dearie," she said, pointing at an open doorway.
I thanked her and entered the bathroom through the exquisite doorway, carved with the same highly-detailed sun design (At this I had briefly wondered whether or not this was for some sort of religious reason, or whether the owner had some sort of weird attraction to the sun). The bathroom was cozy, with an ornate sink and an elaborate iron door with the same sun pattern (I was starting to strongly believe my latter thought), directly adjacent to this was a button labeled in an ornate font: "Cleaning Stall".
Beyond this door, was a small tiled room, with a strange ceiling divided into 3x3 blocks featuring small holes in the center of them. On the wall opposite the door, in a small alcove, was a button stated as the way to start the shower. After getting undressed, I pressed the button. There was a clicking noise as the wall next to me slide open, revealing a chest with a button above it. Inside of this chest was a small stash of crystal, stoppered vials containing some sort of strange golden liquid. The label described it as a "Potion of Fire-resistance". On the stopper was an image of a creepy grinning moon with the words "Umbra Sector Concoctions" written in deep purple ink below it. Behind the stash of bottles, was a note instructing me to drink the liquid then press the button again. Confused as to why this would be needed for a regular shower, I nonetheless followed the instructions.
The potion tasted like Ice. My throat began burning, my breathing became harder, my eyes began to water. All of a sudden my sight became foggy , small Crystals began growing from along the edges, getting closer and closer to the center. I tried to reach up and clean my eyes, but shrieked when saw through my impaired vision that my skin was covered in a thin layer of Crystal, the skin underneath tinted a pale shade of blue. Looking up, I saw that surrounding me was a small snowstorm, the flakes whirling like crazed dervishes. Through the the flakes, I noticed the button behind the alcove. Realizing that the button was probably my only hope, I reached over and pressed it.
There was a small *clunk*, as the shelf behind me retracted into the wall, followed a small amount of whirring. I heard sliding above and a wave of fear washed over me as I saw lava begin slowly pouring down onto me. As a form of futile self defense, I crawled into the fetal position, my arms covering my head and face. As the lava edged closer, I shut my eyes and braced myself for the end. To my shock, I felt... nothing. I opened my eyes and saw that my entire field of vision was filled with shades of red and yellow, mesmerizing me. I stared for what seemed to be ages, just barely noticing that the feeling cold was gone.
There was another *clunk* as the machine above whirred to a stop. The lava disappeared through small holes at the bottom of the walls. Slowly, the crystals began retracting from my vision. The ice on my skin slowly melted away as the snowflakes slowly began dissipating. It was only after the cold was completely gone that I realized how hard I was breathing.
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