Dani don't u feel embarsed that you fell in LOVE with your own character , I mean that's gotta feel awkward, no offense dani but that's pretty awkward, it was cool with you joining the story and all but you falling in love with Steve O.O any1 else know what I'm saying
Steve helped Dani onto his bench, as in Dani is on Steve's bench.
Dani don't u feel embarsed that you fell in LOVE with your own character , I mean that's gotta feel awkward, no offense dani but that's pretty awkward, it was cool with you joining the story and all but you falling in love with Steve O.O any1 else know what I'm saying
Well yeah it is awkward but why not put yourself into the story? lol
I've already said this, Shes writing a Fan Fiction of a Fan Fiction. It's creepy
If you don't like it, stop reading. Simple as that.
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Whoo, a sequel to the story that sparked the imagination to make my own fanfiction. But yes, ridiculous romance plot certainly is ridiculous. It seems very, um, rushed (no offense), unless you wanted to jump into the romance straight away. I know how it feels, with Intrepid I wanted to jump into the main plot twist, but I had to restrain myself for like 7 chapters. But if you're proud of it, or like it by all means, jiggle it away.
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( The reason Dani is slightly shorter than Steve because I figured Dani was a teenager and Steve was a man, and the reason Dani's hair looks different from the skin is because I thought she would get pretty messed up after fighting with an Enderman. )
( The reason Dani is slightly shorter than Steve because I figured Dani was a teenager and Steve was a man, and the reason Dani's hair looks different from the skin is because I thought she would get pretty messed up after fighting with an Enderman. )
Omg <3 You guys are making me happy <3
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Another cool story from you.
I like how you introduce a third person, the only thing that was missing in "End" was the third person who was kinda bringing variarity into the talk. And i also find it hilarious how End sings "STEEVE LIKES DANI" that is exactly like other real life persons would react (especially if they had Ends mindset) it doesnt have to be like in movies, where nobody makes a joke about *such things*.
i personally think that the story is really great, it made me smile and laugh a lot and i know that there is still more to come.
XD This is a book, actually it is a sequel to 1Dani's book End.
no a real paper book
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Great story! I read the first book, which was really good.But I wish Dani would tell End that her friends got taken away! But still awesome!I see you really like Endermen, cool. I like creepers, which actually is kinda bad 4 me cause everytime I get close they blow me skyhigh. (One time a creeper blew up my house, now I stay in the open away from living lifeforms)
Great story! I read the first book, which was really good.But I wish Dani would tell End that her friends got taken away! But still awesome!I see you really like Endermen, cool. I like creepers, which actually is kinda bad 4 me cause everytime I get close they blow me skyhigh. (One time a creeper blew up my house, now I stay in the open away from living lifeforms)
At the point where she tells End and Steve her story, she says: "I-um, I.... I spawned in a tundra....and...my fr-" She sais fr (which is the beginning of friends ^^) and breaks up, for some reason she didnt want to tell, that her friends were taken away.
Check out my FINISHED story, End, which has over 14,000 views and over 250 comments! Read it already? Read the FINISHED sequel with 16,000 views, found in the description of End.
Steve helped Dani onto his bench, as in Dani is on Steve's bench.
Well yeah it is awkward but why not put yourself into the story? lol
If you don't like it, stop reading. Simple as that.
By the way, I lol'd at "high on redstone dust."
Nice!
And Dani and Steve have come to join him!
( The reason Dani is slightly shorter than Steve because I figured Dani was a teenager and Steve was a man, and the reason Dani's hair looks different from the skin is because I thought she would get pretty messed up after fighting with an Enderman. )
Omg <3 You guys are making me happy <3
XD This is a book, actually it is a sequel to 1Dani's book End.
I like how you introduce a third person, the only thing that was missing in "End" was the third person who was kinda bringing variarity into the talk. And i also find it hilarious how End sings "STEEVE LIKES DANI" that is exactly like other real life persons would react (especially if they had Ends mindset) it doesnt have to be like in movies, where nobody makes a joke about *such things*.
i personally think that the story is really great, it made me smile and laugh a lot and i know that there is still more to come.
At the point where she tells End and Steve her story, she says: "I-um, I.... I spawned in a tundra....and...my fr-" She sais fr (which is the beginning of friends ^^) and breaks up, for some reason she didnt want to tell, that her friends were taken away.
This one has a lot of references