I am writing a story in my journal.I compared your story with my story and I said to myself,"Man this girl has talents.Her story is WAY more detailed than mine,I read her story first then mine and I can still picture everything from her story,this girl is has a special talent!"I really like your story,just one question.
I know how you got you inspiration for End and Steve but how did you get the inspiration for Dani,is it just that she has your name or is it from something else?
Anyway,LOVE End and Enderpeace (so far...)you have a special talent and you should be happy that you have that talent.Hope you have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Years!
Happy Holidays!
THE AWESOME GIRL NAMED EXPLOSION JUNIOR (AKA CreeperKing)
Yeah, Dani is me lol. But her personality is not me at all. And thanks for everything!
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Please come check out my channel. I'm new to YouTube and do Minecraft and other games. My channel name is Temido2222. Views and subs would be appreciated!
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Nice nice!
I have to say, I am running out of original stuff I can say about your story, I used it all on previous comments ^^
I am really curious, where the feesh come from, I know, that they are near strongholds and a stronghold means an end portal.
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I'm sorry I don't have chapters up, I've just been really busy with social life and friends and school. I do continue to finish the story.
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The story will finish. I don't think I will have time until this summer, but do not expect me to quit this.
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Ah, now I can congratulate you finally. This was the first story I read on here, and it was this story that made me come back here. Whereas words may be repeated too often, this still is a good book.
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Would you like to know the atomic structure of a piece of bread?
Crappy romance plot is CRAPPY. How people can consider this sophisticated is nothing but dumbfounding to me. It's a sequal only made due to popular demand, the writers doesn't care about the story itself. (I am not flaming however, as these are my actual thoughts. Meh, the first one wasn't really that good either. It's like a grammically and creative writing adept five year old wrote this.)
Romance plot was never a true romance plot.
PS: 'It's like a grammatically and creative writing adept five year old wrote this.' Is not even close to moderately grammatically correct. Dani has the grammar of the average fifteen year old. Not a five year old. You, on the other hand... ugh.
I do not consider this 'sophisticated', I consider this 'amazing'. Sophisticated = usually boring and proper. Amazing = interesting and epic to read.
I usually focus on story/imagination before grammar and grammar before anything else.
I still love this story.
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OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
((Although I suppose that it is slightly less imaginative than it's predecessor. However, this is just fine, as it is building upon the last book's story line by introducing consequences for Steve's actions.
Funny how I knew that this book was probably going to be centered around all of the humans dying... if not just as an important plot point. Or something. That sentence made no grammatical sense. XD))
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OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
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Yeah, Dani is me lol. But her personality is not me at all. And thanks for everything!
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Retired StaffI have to say, I am running out of original stuff I can say about your story, I used it all on previous comments ^^
I am really curious, where the feesh come from, I know, that they are near strongholds and a stronghold means an end portal.
Behold Enderbrine
I was really getting into this story lol
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TT2000, you are genius.
Romance plot was never a true romance plot.
PS: 'It's like a grammatically and creative writing adept five year old wrote this.' Is not even close to moderately grammatically correct. Dani has the grammar of the average fifteen year old. Not a five year old. You, on the other hand... ugh.
I do not consider this 'sophisticated', I consider this 'amazing'. Sophisticated = usually boring and proper. Amazing = interesting and epic to read.
I usually focus on story/imagination before grammar and grammar before anything else.
I still love this story.
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
Funny how I knew that this book was probably going to be centered around all of the humans dying... if not just as an important plot point. Or something. That sentence made no grammatical sense. XD))
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."