The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
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lowcatzrock
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long ago, deep in the caves, and above land, before any miners, skeletons and spiders, were creepers, made to be together, they covered the land, from sea to shining sea, eery places caves where made by creeper combustion, with a highly explosive material, lit by flint and steel, kept in a pouch in the creeper. but none know of what happened over the years. ... until now. im the nly one, my identity is secret, but, you must be impatient, and want to go back last. but lets start with there begining. or else the story would be confusing. so let us start, when the first creeper was born, in the creeper chronicles episode one coming soon to a forum near you
if you would like to be in the creeper chronicles, here is the form you must post in this forum! (oh, homophones) (hopefully you know wich one is wich)
available parts (new parts come out in each episode, but in this one, all parts got in here, and last into the next episode will not be replaced)
creeper god
beth(creeper queen)
im being the mystery guy, and creeper king
here is the form, write the told part or your part using this
name:
sex(gender):
personality:
ill have to choose the best ones. but if you don't get in this time, try next episode when we have new characters> thnx for understanding
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
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why am i being ignored, even thought i get so many veiws? i just want to do a fanfiction. so, instead of losig interest, why im the creeper king, and mystery guy, is because, i wrote the intro, and, the mystery person only tells in intros like a narrator. so, im letting you reply, and make your own. and if your athiest, the creeper god, is not a reason to think this christiAN. i put him in there for no apperant reason, to make someone at least have some big part. he doesn't come up very often. i see a ad, with flashing colors and makes my eyes feel weird. yet agAIN, ADS ARE ANNOYING, BUT SOME ARE DEADLY. creepers are nice, it's just that later, we wll se what miners did to them.im waiting.
no seriously.
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
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come on, you notice others, but you ignore mine? this isn't making any sense. i can't start until i have all parts listed filled and have 5 custom characters. this has a storyline, but, as long as we get to the part ending, for the episode, we do okay. other than that, we do not explode yet. that is a remindercreeper call ssssssssok. can someone plz. i posted this in the morning.
Dude, a story is meant to be read, not participated in. What you're doing is closer to roleplay. Look, you write, they look, they rate, not asking them to do the work for them. Have you ever seen a part in Harry Potter that says "For the story to continue you must write down your character". No, and there hasn't been any. If you want your story to be appreciated, then this isn't the way to go. You got to put effort in it even if nobody seems to care. The illusion most people get from Fan Art is people will read their stories, but dude, the stories that do get read are the ones who were too busy making their story good to read, not asking for views and help.
That said, if you really wanted to get attention and have fun, do a roleplay.
On your story writing. You lack capitalization and grammar, and your plot is confusing. 'sea to shining sea'? 'My identity is secret, you must be impatient' it should be patient if you mean the person to go through your chapters. Also, a self-insertion on your own story is a bad move in the writing world.
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
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did you know, i have some of the best writing, that is to be changed. and, ive been doing rps forever, and my keyboard is crappy. it goes on and off, and misses keys even if you press them down, and, I don't use capitalization because of that.ill move this to the rp section thank you very much, and while your at it, exquisite writing makes the reader feel it. and, since this is online, I've done a lot of roleplay. really, you only capitalize I when it's lone. how is i've wrong?
did you know, i have some of the best writing, that is to be changed. and, ive been doing rps forever, and my keyboard is crappy. it goes on and off, and misses keys even if you press them down, and, I don't use capitalization because of that.ill move this to the rp section thank you very much, and while your at it, exquisite writing makes the reader feel it. and, since this is online, I've done a lot of roleplay. really, you only capitalize I when it's lone. how is i've wrong?
I simply gave you my complete, and honest, response. I did not mean to offend, I only meant to help. I did not know your keyboard is broken, and you didn't give any sign of it being broken in your post to prevent misunderstandings such as this, and so I presumed your writing is how you really write. You should get a new keyboard when you can then edit and work on your story/roleplay. Your keyboard gives you a bad impression.
if you would like to be in the creeper chronicles, here is the form you must post in this forum! (oh, homophones) (hopefully you know wich one is wich)
available parts (new parts come out in each episode, but in this one, all parts got in here, and last into the next episode will not be replaced)
creeper god
beth(creeper queen)
im being the mystery guy, and creeper king
here is the form, write the told part or your part using this
name:
sex(gender):
personality:
ill have to choose the best ones. but if you don't get in this time, try next episode when we have new characters> thnx for understanding
no seriously.
That said, if you really wanted to get attention and have fun, do a roleplay.
On your story writing. You lack capitalization and grammar, and your plot is confusing. 'sea to shining sea'? 'My identity is secret, you must be impatient' it should be patient if you mean the person to go through your chapters. Also, a self-insertion on your own story is a bad move in the writing world.
I simply gave you my complete, and honest, response. I did not mean to offend, I only meant to help. I did not know your keyboard is broken, and you didn't give any sign of it being broken in your post to prevent misunderstandings such as this, and so I presumed your writing is how you really write. You should get a new keyboard when you can then edit and work on your story/roleplay. Your keyboard gives you a bad impression.