If you'd like, I can give you some grammar lessons, (especially commas. All I've been doing this last month was commas) via PM. My teacher likes to drill into us grammar lessons, and I think you might find it useful.
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If you'd like, I can give you some grammar lessons, (especially commas. All I've been doing this last month was commas) via PM. My teacher likes to drill into us grammar lessons, and I think you might find it useful.
although i appreciated the offer exactly how would you give me the lessons also you could just read the story and tell me where commas need to be and not to be but i could understand that if you taught me it could be less work on you but then again how long woud it take to teach me (im not a fast learner when it comes to grammar)
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why would i spends hours a day righting this? why would you look a mine craft book up if you cant spend that long reading? WHY DO YOU QUESTION THE OVER POWERING AWESOMENESS! just read it you may like this
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Nice job, probably the longest fan story I've read. I can get past the grammar/spelling stuff because the story is quite entertaining.
thank you for your info when wirhgting a story the righter tends to think of it as boring or not interesting but people who didn't make it tend to ether dislike it as well or like it much more
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GOOD NEWS EVERYONE! apparently my uncle is a grammar Nazi and a teacher so hes going to fix my grammar i sent him half the story so now it wont be so unbearable to read he also might make some slight modifications to they story plausibly making it better
it would really help BTW to tell me your still reading this or not i want to make a website with the book in a better format but im to lazy to make a 5th website trust me it gets kinda annyiong after your 3rd time none the less 5th
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By the time I am replying I am only on Day 13 and I have to say, A really great story. Better than I usually read these days. The interaction with the character is beyond amazing. It reminds me the first moments of me dwelling in the confusing enviroment. It's as if I can easily put my self in the shoes of the Main character. I can easily imagine this as an epic machinima. Hopefully I will see more content like this in the future.
don't worry im going to update towmarow morning... nvm im going to do it now but let me warn you it has not been proofread at all so there are no periods or anything grammar helpful but ill add it eventually
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ATTENTION EVERYONE BAD NEWS!!! apparently im using too much content so i have to make another forum page im just going to call it Johnson's Journal Pt 2 youll have to go to go to my page to find it... i think idk well anyway its going to take some time to make it so for now bye
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guys i have BAD news i finished my book on my memory unit and someone stole it i don't know who but when i find out and get my hands on them i am going to show them what hell on earth really is
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Retired Staff[12:41] Coffeeeeeee!
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[16:29] "And lo, the tacos were delicious"
it would really help BTW to tell me your still reading this or not i want to make a website with the book in a better format but im to lazy to make a 5th website trust me it gets kinda annyiong after your 3rd time none the less 5th
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By the time I am replying I am only on Day 13 and I have to say, A really great story. Better than I usually read these days. The interaction with the character is beyond amazing. It reminds me the first moments of me dwelling in the confusing enviroment. It's as if I can easily put my self in the shoes of the Main character. I can easily imagine this as an epic machinima. Hopefully I will see more content like this in the future.