This is a sad minecraft story i don't think anyone has done this on this website so i decided would try to be the first remember there is contently updates to this story grammar fixes and slightly changed story so like wait a week and read it and then read some more every once in a while and pleas give me an up vote it will help give this book more popularity (yes a book not a story i plan on making it 100 pages this is 80 pages)
Johnson’s journal
Made by: Zachary M. Criswell
Edited by: ______________
A MineCraft story
Day 1 morning: Where am I? What happened? Who am I? My name is Johnson OK, I got this, I’m by a lake I don’t know where I was partially but it will have to do for now. I can’t remember anything that happened in my past. I only knew my name is Johnson and I know how to build many things, plus I know the English writing system…but I don’t think that counts as past memory, I don’t even know exactly what that is. I really have no idea why i could be hear, but I doubt someone did this to me but whatever. I have bigger problems on my mind. I knew I needed wood. I realized I had strength beyond normal people after I punched down some trees to make some wooden planks. I found some sugar cane and made this book so in my free time I will be writing what goes on throughout the day it will help keep my sanity until I find some people. I’m going back to work now I need more materials if I want a home.
Day 3 sunset: I grow fearsome as night approaches, throughout the day I build and mine. But at night I can’t do anything but run from zombies, and skeletons with bows and arrows. The first night I took cover in a cave only to be almost killed by an explosion. I don't know what it was but I don't know if I’d make it if I didn’t get my house built. It was made of cobble stone and wood I was going to make it dirt but it would have been too weak. I grow more and more hungry throughout the day but I was able to find a couple cows and now have a small farm. Every once in a while I’ll kill a cow for food. I can’t sleep at night but I made a bed today hopefully I will be able to sleep (the zombie groanning and the skeleton’s bone clanking don’t help) I look at the sunset and realize it’s beautiful. I look around at the scenery, the trees are lush with green the mountains in the distance are over powering with size and the water is calm maybe I can get used to this place. Night is hear I better get inside my house I can hear zombies.
Day 4 morning: I slept really well last night I am refreshed and ready to take on the day I am going to nearby mountains. at night I see light in the mountains not a bright but it is clearly visible I can only take a couple items on my trip there so I took a wooden sword 64 wooden planks my bed and a couple other tools I better go I need as much time as I can get. But before I go I will need to let some of my cows free and kills some too.
Day 6 sunset: I’m finally reached the bottom of the mountain it looks even larger than it did before. Up top most be a breath taking view. While on the way hear i got some cobble stone and made some better equipment. I set up temporary houses at night and run through the day closer to the lights. I sometimes see green monsters they appear sad and look as if they want a hug but I know what they are. I call them creepers they follow me and when they get close they hiss and blow up. Every once in a while I hear some music is it my imagination of just loneness taking over.
Day 6 night: I made it to the village. But its abandoned I just wondered around a bit they had about 4 homes all small thou. I see a lot of gardens but most of it is destroyed they also had a library but the righting was unreadable but the black smith building was probably the best it had lava a furnace and some more stuff but I didn’t go inside because it was getting dark I just went to one of the houses to sleep in for now.
Day 7 morning: I wake up and look out unto the sunset and see the best scenery that I’ve ever seen and will ever see. The trees with their broad branches, the sunrise coolers of orange, yellow, purple, and blue, The clouds moving slowly, the animals rooming freely and the peaceful environment today is going to be a good day I can already tell.
Day 7 evening: It’s going to be easy living now but I’ll just have to keep writing till I do find some people I saw the inside of the black smith finally good thing too there was a chest with iron boots, iron helm, and 2 apples. That’s the best find since coal on the side of the mountain I didn’t even mine it. But I think it’s about time I start mining to get some ores so I better get started if I want to have a mine.
Day 11 night: it’s been so long since I’ve written anything it makes me feel good when I do. The reason why I haven’t written in a while is just because I’m so busy mining in stuff. I’ll catch you up on the past few days the first day in mining I was able to get 6 coals and ate my 2 apples but I made 16 torches and the other 2 coal for my stove. I fond 2 iron too. The second day of mining I found 3 iron and made a iron pix. Day 3 I found 7 coal, 5 iron, and 2 gold but gold breaks pretty easily I made a sword with it and its already breaking just after killing 2 spiders. I can feel the pressure of the air as I get deeper into my mine it feels good to not only see my hard work but to feel it day 4 and 5 I found nothing today I build an iron sword and killed a creeper I almost blew up in the process I picked up some gun powder I would say 3 handfuls I will make some kind of explosive with it hopefully I will right again tomorrow I hear some zombies I’m going to use the gold sword it may break really soon but it sure is sharp.
Day 13 morning: last night was a good fight I killed 3 zombies and 1 skeleton and a spider I got 2 string, rotten flesh, and 2 bones the sword broke after the 3rd kill but I had my iron sword with me the really bad thing was that my armor broke but I’ll get more in the future... Hopefully. I’m going to explore the top of the mountain a bit hopefully to find a lake so I can go fishing I made a fishing rod with the string I got. Its rather large mountain top ill need a map so I don’t get lost.
Day 15 afternoon: I was lucky I found 2 lakes a forest 2 waterfalls on the side of the mountain (it just looks pretty cool) and a cave this mountain is huge I caught fish till my line broke I got a total of 21 fish I cooked them all and… wait… what’s that… I think I see someone outside… YES! I DO! There coming up the mountain one second….HEY UP HEAR OVER HEAR!!!! Ok he knows I’m hear he has some kind of blue glowing armor it looks like… no that can’t be right but… can it.. Well anyway it looks to be made of… diamonds… if so I hope he’s friendly I write later I’m going to meet him now.
Day 15 night: Today was awesome! The guy that was climbing the mountain did have diamond armor. His name is creeper killer kind of funny in a way too but I don’t think that’s his real name probably just some nick name. He has big blue eyes and green hair. I can’t see what he’s wearing behind all the armor thou. Anyway he has this thing called a enchantment table it makes armor, tools, and weapons more powerful I was only able to make a lv 3 upgrade whatever that means but now when I hit anything they catch on fire and the best part is I no longer have a stone sword but a diamond sword he also gave me a few other things a just what I wanted a map (I already explored most of the top of the mountain) leather helm, leather boots, leather chest plate and leather pants not much defense but it will do for now.
Day 16 morning: ah it’s a beautiful morning the smell of burning skeletons and zombies it’s wonderful. Creeper killer is going to the mine too make it deeper and wider he said he will give me 50% of what he finds I hope he’s being honest but he’s nice enough so I assume that he’s telling the truth. I’m going to build on to my/our house I built 2 beds a second floor and have windows now.
Day 16 afternoon: I hope he comes back soon it’s almost sunset. I finished the second floor of the house its turning out quite nicely I have some seeds from clearing out the ground from my house I think I’m going to make a farm then I could use the bone I got from skeletons and turn it to bone meal for fertilization.
Day 16 night: ok now I’m worried he said he would be back before sunset .I just felt like he died I have a feeling he got shot by a skeleton and fell in lava he’s in the cave so I haven’t explored it yet only the entrance but I’m going to see if I can find his stuff and use it before it gets taken, moved or something along those lines. I know it’s cruel but this is not a game… this is a fight for survival
Day 17 morning: I wake up tired and grumpy the sun isn’t up yet I don’t see anything that would wake me up there are no annoying monsters or anything along the sort that I can hear at least. But i might as well go out early I need to find creeper killer or at least his stuff but for now I’m going to look around the house to see what woke me. ok I’m back I saw something out there … it was black, tall, and its holding a block of stone it’s just staring at me watching me… Hu it’s gone…. That thing looks dangerous ill just wait in hear till sunrise… hey I’ve been thinking about a new way to wright I can tell you what happens in battle but and write at the same time well not exactly writing but I’m just going to start doing that its complicated I can do things even that surprise myself but it will still be like a journal. You know what never mind you’ll experience it shortly
Day 17 time unknown: I could really use a watch right now I’m looking for creeper killer’s stuff or at least his body wait what’s that SSSssssSSS CREEPER!!! SLASH! BOOM! Arghhh! Stupid suicidal creepers. WHAT GOOD ARE YOU TOO THE WORLD! I’m in pain if I had 10 hearts I’d say I just lost 5 ow that hurts I need some food o good I brought some fish NOM NOM NOM NOM…. ah much better. O there’s his stuff its by lava most of his stuff is gone or melted i can only scavenge iron boots, iron helm… Waite a second if he had diamond armor then why didn’t he give me the iron armor… I’m just going to guess he made it down hear. There are also 136 stone blocks, plus 3 dispensers or something? And… what is this? Wait its A CLOCK! I didn’t know he had a clock it’s made of gold right now it’s in the evening I better head up before it gets too late.
Day 18 morning: it’s one of those… things ... I don’t know what to call them but this time there’s 3. I’m going to see if there hostile they don’t seem to mind let me get a closer look AGHHH my back! Slash slash slash BURN!! DIE BY BURNING!! 1 down ahhh BAM! My face! I must get inside BAM! ARGH! Almost there SMAK TAKE THAT BLACKY! Made it! Slash! NOW YOU BURN… ok he’s dead too I’m inside now there too tall to get in next time I’m not going to look at them ok I’m going to use the 8 hart scenario from now on I would day I got a heart and a half luckily I’m healing it seems if I’m full I heal.. Huh? What’s that I see those things drop something I quickly go and get them. I’m just going to build some things hopefully that thing won’t came back and try to kill me.
Day 19 evening: Well I was really busy the past 2 days and built some things I built 3 towers that shoot arrows a dock for fishing and a path from tower to tower to house its starting to look like a permeate home I’m very proud of my work speaking of it I’m headed to my first tower ill call it alpha the nearest to my house it about 6x taller it’s made of cobble stone the second one in between the other 2 towers is called omega it’s about 3x my height and made of stone and the fareset one from my home is called delta it’s made of wood and 4x my height I’m actually in it right now the view is amazing I can see a jungle to my east a desert to my west an ocean to my back point close to where I woke up. It feels so long ago since I’ve been there makes me sad to think about all that’s happened here in the past few days. O I forgot to mention all the town houses are destroyed due to issues with some need for wood. (Not like it matters no one lived there) Well I’m going to bed now.
Day 21 morning: I’m in alpha tower I was going to see if I can find any creepers and the tall black things I’ll come with a name soon enough wait what’s that is that… HEY HEY OVER HEAR!! I see a grope of 3 people! HEY OVER HEAR! they can’t hear me but they see the tower and there on their way I can’t get a good look at them there too far away but they should be hear by sun down. I should build a large light house so people can find me and perhaps an easy way to get up the mountain you know I’m going to get started on that right now…
Day 21 night: well there still not up hear there about half way up the mountain. I finished my light house it’s probably about 13x my height you can see it for miles and on the top I have 5 torches if they didn’t see my tower earlier they defiantly do now I’m going to shoot some monsters in delta I can defend the survives from that angle as well.
Day 22 morning: they have just arrived they don’t look like that have many materials no armor but I think one has wool the other 2 just have a little bit of wood.
Hey you made it!
Yeah we saw you up there at first we thought you were shooting at us then we saw that living dynamite thing.
O that? I call it a creeper.
Sounds reasonable what’s your name?
Johnson…. Yours?
Blue penguin but you can call me blue this is Wheatly, and that’s Elis
Blue Penguin had Blue hair, blue eyes, blue shirt, blue pants, and blue shoes I could see why he was called Blue. I also noticed he was vary pale. You got a leader of this grope?
Yeah that would be me.
Yeah but we usually call him Blue.
Elis we know I already told him that.
Elis had overalls, leather boots, and dark brown hair cut short. He was quite tan.
Sooo you want to look around if we’re going to have 4 people we will need 2 more beds.
Well I have 4 wool so if you got any sheep up hear we can shear them and make the 2 beds we need.
Wheatly go with Johnson hear and sheer some sheep me and Elis will explore a bit same place at sun set sound good?
I agree with that. Wheatly had a light green torn up shirt, and light brown shorts plus no shoes.
Day 22 sun set: Well glad to see where all hear in one peace
Well Johnson you got a nice place up hear ya do you know it would be better if you had some kind of thing to shoot mobs so you can live easily like you know with like arrows and like…
Elis… shut up.
Well that’s rather rude.
So was “accidently” setting our house on fire?
Hey I didn’t know it was going to burn.
Of course you didn’t.
Well guys I got the wool I notice Wheatly doesn’t talk much in fact he hasn’t said a word since he’s got hear...
Yeah he’s rather quite like that the only thing we can get from him is his name.
Well nights coming lets go to bed.
Day 23: evening: Blue’s mining looking for gold and iron Elis is getting wood, seeds, and other things like that. Wheatly well I don’t know what he’s doing I think he building something out of… what is that... Wheatly... what is that it looks like an entrance or a gate for something what is it made out of anyway? …..No answer…OK.
Flint and iron.
Ok well I’ll give you only 1 iron we only have 4 in total you know were low on ores I gave him the materials and he made some kind of device that would catch things on fire… ill just call it flint and steal.
Sooo what is that thing supp AHHSHAKLASHARA WHAT THE HECK DID THAT JUST DO!?!?
Portal to nether don’t go in.
You don’t have to tell me twice those things creepy. It appears you’ve been around a while. You know a bit about this space more than your average Joe but why don’t you have many material’s like cree… sigh never mind.
Day 25 evening: well I told Elis and blue not to go in the portal till were ready not much is being accomplished except know we got a farm Elis is doing most of the work we keep mining but are only able to find iron and coal but know we all have iron boots and iron helms but today I’m the one who’s going to mine. iv came across a couple caves on the way down but blue said he already got all ores from them well hopefully ill come across something soon I only have 2 stone pix axes left and I don’t like using my iron one I want to keep it for as long as… DIMONDS!!!! I CANT BELIVE IT DIMONDS…… o umm I guess I was wrong it was red powdery stuff there’s more so might as well get the rest.
Day 26 night: Wheatly and Blue are outside building something with the red stone dust I gave them apparently Wheatly knows how to build a way to light up the night. (His exact words were Redstone pleas I will put it too good use for night it makes light.) that was the biggest thing I’ve ever hear Wheatly say and so far all I can see are some sort of red blocks they keep going underneath them and them adjusting the block placement. But anyway Blue is defending Wheatly in case some monsters come by.
Day 27 evening: Well while I mine they keep building the light thingy. Any way Elis said diamonds are blue I thought so because creeper kill had blue armor…. Sigh I’ll never get over his death…
Day 27 approaching sunset: I FOUND DIMONDS!!!!!! I got a total of 5. I’m going to build a diamond pickaxe and another diamond sword for Wheatly. I’m heading back up the mine right now so I can build these right away.
Day 27 night: well I’m headed to the house which is where everyone one is at right now. CLONCK! AHHH SKELITON! This is why I need a bow! HOLY CRAP ITS RIDEING A SPIDER! I must make it too the house CLONK! YOU DON’T KNOW HOW TO SHO CLINK! ARGH! Almost their Doors open! I can make HA I’m inside now he’s locked out and I’m safe… for now. At least hmmm I wonder where everyone’s at anyway… Wheatly… Elis… Blue!!
Where up here! We’d like you to meet someone her names Caroline!
Day 28 morning: Well last night I could say was quite the talk. Caroline apparently has all iron armor diamond sword diamond pix, and some disks for music with a music box. She has rather an interest for… well how do I say this… griefer hunting… apparently griefors are people who kill others take their things destroy their homes and other things like that. People like that I would not call them people but rather viscous animals, and I will help with my best ability to help her on her quest to kill a particular griefor. His name is Gordon freeman but he usually goes by freeman. but here’s the thing he’s on his way hear he saw out light house.
Day 29 evening: so you’ve been to the nether before?
Yes.
What’s it like?
Just so it doesn’t surprise you its pretty much hell if there wasn’t a way out.
Harsh.
So Caroline when is Wheatly going to get? Here you said he’d be hear 5 minutes ago.
I’m not Wheatly. All I know is that he will be hear and we will go in the nether find a castle. and kill some blaze rods.
Well I already knew that…. How did you get up the mountain so fast anyway?
….I have my ways.
Of course you do.
Wheatly finally starts approaching us. Good, you made it what took you so long anyway? You were supposed to be hear 5 minutes ago… ready to go in the nether…. I’ll take that as a yes.
AHHSHAKLASHARA!
The Nether realm: HOLY DIMONDS…this really is hell this place is creepy
Yeah most people say that…. hey look where in luck a castle.
What is all this red stuff anyway?
Nether rack it burns forever and breaks easily there is some bright lights as well called glow stone there pretty cool.
Yeah I saw some of that.
When do you think Elis, and blue are going to finish that light thing? I haven’t seen it on nor have I’ve seen them work on it.
Well I saw it and it works. It’s just we been preparing for the griefer and all they forgot to show you. Maybe they’ll show you when we get back.
Sounds good. So what’s with all those pigs things they looks deadly but they just oink and stand around
Those are zombies pigs hurt one they all try to kill you that is why I don’t touch them.
We walk for a while then we hear this crying noise.
RUN!
We see a big white ghost it had wrinkles and it was crying then it opend its red eyes and shot a fire bal right at us.
HARE!
LOOK OUT!
BOOM!
WHAT IS THAT THING!
GAST!
ALMOST THERE!
HARE!
Wheatly take out his word and jumps right where the fireball is headed Wheatly what are you doing?!?!
SMAK!
What the… BOOM...
So hit the fire ball of death and it hit the Gast Square in the face.… Nice hit. Hey looks like were hear.
How do we get in just break some of the stone?
Precisely.
After running around trying to find blaze rods and every once in a while collecting nether warts. (Wheatly said will be used when new get the potion creator.) We finally found them the blazes but it was worse than just a couple blazes it was a blaze spawner.
Wheatly you destroy the spawner me and Caroline will defend you. Let’s go!
HUUR HARE HEER
Fire balls!
BOOM BOOM BOOM!
WHEATLY GET TO SPAWNER!
I take out my bow and shoot 1 it in face 3 times. Clink! Clonk! Clank! CAROLINE TAKE THE ONE IN THE BACK!
HE CAN FLY?!?
Well… WHAT DOSE IT LOOK LIKE!
I try to take out anther arrow but it seems I ran out. IM OUT OF AROOWS!
Wheatly made it to the spawner and is destroying it now. He then takes out several arrows and throws them to me. I pull my bow far back and shoot the 1 I shot early in the stomach. Arhhh! 1 DWON! MORE FIRE BALLS! HUU! BOOM! CAROLINE TAKE COVER! ILL TAKE EM FROM HEAR! Wheatly just broke the spawner. I shoot the last one 4 times in the stomach dodging a fire ball while at it. YES! WE DID IT! Anyone hurt?
Were all good.
Hey look 5 blaze rods perfect just what we came for. Now let’s get the nether out of here.
Later in the nether: Were near the nether portal so far no encounters of gast, zombie pigmen just stand with their golden swords, we stay clear of possibilities of falling in lava. What is that enchantment table require? Experience from what you kill right?
Yea pretty much.
Well them… let’s get some. ATTACKE THE PIGMEN!!! Well when get close enough of course there tons right by the teleporter out of here. We’ll have a fight over there (45 seconds later) ATTACKE!! Now that I just hit one in the face with my sword they all start trying to kill me. But the one I hit it caught on fire but fire doesn’t affect these pigs. Looks like we have to go old school. BRUTE FORCE. Smack! Slash! Slice! Woops there goes your head…. Awww slash! Did you lose an arm… yea you did. BAM! Missing legs much? SLASH! SMAK! How’s your limbs been lately? Missing? Such a shame. Well we made it to the portal… Witch was rather interesting you could say. Now like I said last time let’s get the nether out of here.
Day 31 morning: Apparently we were gone a day and a half. (we came back in the middle of the night) after we got back inside we built the potion brewer and cauldron which holds water for glass bottles which are used for potions. Elis and Blue found some iron in the mine enough for everyone to have iron chest plates, and iron leggings which mean I have full iron armor and only blue, Elis, and Wheatly need more armor.
Day 32 night: Well Johnson let me show you how this works. See that lever?
Yea.
Pull it and that’s how it works.
Elis is showing me how the light thing works because I haven’t seen it yet. I pull the lever and 1 by one these blocks light up. It keeps getting brighter and brighter lighting up the night. Now easily seeing things. My path, towers, and home it looks amazing. Usually I try to stay inside at night but I actually feel comfortable now.
It looks pretty cool…. ok never mind it looks really cool.
That’s what most people say.
You do know that there are only 5 people including you, and Wheatly probably didn’t even say anything and blue helped build it so he probably didn’t mention it ether, and Caroline is not one know for too much of appertain. So I think I’m the only one who said it.
…..well perhaps that may be true but most people think it.
You know what… Never mind I’m just going to bed
Goo nigh
Whatever.
Day 33 Morning: we wake up seeing someone running away while the smell of smoke in our lungs.
FIREE!! FIREEE!!!! COUGH COUGH FIREEE!!!!
ELIS GET THE BUCKETS OF WATER GET RID OF THE FIRE! JHONSON CUT THE FIRE SHORT FROM THE REST OF THE HOUSE! CAOLINE GET YOUR SWORD COME WITH ME WE GOING TO TRACK HIM DOWN BEFOR HE MAKES MORE TROBLE!
Caroline, and Blue run out of the house while Elis poured water on the fire. I quickly try to destroy blocks leading to other parts of the house, the fire was quickly growing but Elis managed to get to the top floor and pore tons of water all over the fire getting about 90% of it while I managed to get the rest. we quickly start rebuilding the house. We checked if anything was stolen. Luckily nothing was so we decided to help track down Freeman. I forgot about him… That’s probably why he managed to get through easily.
Where do you think he went?
Probably to the lake to hide.
What makes you so sure?
Well there’s lots of dirt mounts he can hide in those.
Ok then let’s go.
We get there quickly and sure enough we saw him digging a hole but we didn’t see Blue or Caroline anywhere. We got to the hole and he finally noticed us and we had him surrounded, sword and bucket of water ready.
So freeman going to tell us what happened to those that were following you?
They got caught up in a fight with some ender men.
Tell me why you do what you do.
Entertainment!!! My dear friend ENTERTAINMENT! What’s life for without entertainment?
I can name several. 1. Accomplishments 2.Amazing scenery 3.Cleaning this place of people like you.
Well before you kill me let me tell you something……. Creeper.
What? SSSSssssSSSS BOOM!
ARGHHH!! ILL KILL YOU! Get him!
I take out my bow and aim for his legs FLING! BANG!
ARRRR!!!
He keeps running. This time no mercy. I aim for his neck. FLING! BANG!
ARGHHH!!!
I quickly catch up with Elis to see Freeman at his dyeing breath.
If you ever become like me always remember STAB!
I will never be like you swine.
Day 34 morning: We find Caroline and Blue picking up some stuff from the dead ender man
What’s that?
Ender pearls…. you killed him Johnson didn’t you?
Yes.
So the Freeman is dead well if that’s the case there’s no use in following me take this.
Wait what? Where are you going?
Just take this and let me go. I must find and kill more griefers like him.
She takes out an ender pearl and throws it far away from the mountain.
Good bye… VOOM!
SHES GONE!
Holy diamond blocks! Where did she go?
Over there where she threw the ender Perl. They must make you teleport. Do you see her?
Yes…Like She said there’s no use in following her…. Might as well listen she’s got things to do on her own I wish her luck She gave me 2 ender pearls and an ender eye I guess we just live on without her then.
That would be so Johnson. Well then who wants to find out what we can do with those ender eyes?
Day 34 evening: Today Wheatly, and Blue are going to mess with the brewing stand all day while me, and Elis mine for diamonds. We got a long day ahead of us but what we are going to try to do is get 94 diamonds. We plan on making armor and swords but I already have a diamond sword so you can do the math 22 diamonds for a full diamond set of armor and 2 for a sword witch makes a total of 94 well then, better get started.
Day 36 night: Well we have been mining 2 days trait and well I am tired… very very tired we packed plenty of food but I need sleep. We found 25 diamonds so far. Elis has got a full set of diamond armor. We keep mining luckily we haven’t run into problems yet. here’s how we mine Elis mines on top of bedrock while I get 2 layers above Elis it works out quite fine finds some diamonds every once in a while. The sun is rising were going to head back up to meet with Wheatly and Blue.
Day 37 morning: Wheatly and Blue have made so many healing potions, and poison potions its maddening (that or all the aromas from the potions are getting to me.)If you throw the poison at them they continuously get hurt. The healing potions give you extra strength, make you heal faster, move faster, or become stronger and even more. Yet there still making more but for now I got to get stocked up on bread and meat so I can mine some more.
Day 37 night: well I found some more diamonds we have a total of 36 out of 94 more than a 3rd already wait what’s that noise …. Slop…. Slip…. slat… slop…. It’s coming from the right... it getting louder SLIP… SLAT… SLOP… it sounds like a giant Blob of slime that HOLY GRAVITY NOT WORKING! IT IS A BIG BLOB OF SLIME! I quickly ready my sword to attack it coming closer SLASH! SLASH! It fell into 4 more slimes ARGHH TO MANY OF THEM SLAH SLAH SLAH (5 minutes later after making slimes split in half and finally killing them all) well that was… surprising you could say. I got a bunch of balls of slime and I found an abounded mine craft with no monster spawner witch blue warned me about looks like it already been explored but let me check these chests any way……HOLY PORK CHOPS…. DIMOND ARMOR AND DIMOND WEPONS!!!..... ITS BUITFUL... I must get up to ground NOW! There was a full set of diamond armor 2 swords (diamond of course) and best of all 3 bows with 192 arrows this guy must have been a skeleton killing master that or just kills chickens a lot and finds flint often… either way there mine now.
Day 38 morning: I’m right about to get inside to tell everyone my find. Even Elis doesn’t know.
Hey guys we found 18 diamonds!
Really? That’s not what that abandoned mineshaft gave me.
What? You found a mineshaft?
WITH 2 SETS OF DIMONDS ARMOR! And 192 arrows plus some diamond sword and 3 bows must have forgotten to mention on the way up hear.
YA THINK?
No I know I forgot. Actually I purposely didn’t tell you it was basically a surprise.
Well that’s good Johnson now we all can have diamond armor and weapons. So blue and Wheatly are those potions at their best?
Yes very so.
So are we heading to the end soon?
Well yes but first you Johnson will find it and come back hear it could be really far out so you’ll have food torches lots of cobble stone for temporary homes and what not.
Why me?
Because you learn the fastest.
Ok. Simple enough.
Tomorrow I’m going to show you how the ender eye works and the ender pearls.
Ok sounds good but what do we do for now?
Practice with a bow.
Day 38 night: Well we shot all the arrows at least twice and my arm is now killing me. We used a block of wool for the targets, we placed them all over the place on the mountain and at the bottom too by the end I hit every target and was hitting them with ease. It’s like playing note blocks hard at first and gets easier over time. The reason I mentioned note blocks is because Blue made some note blocks and started placing them everywhere and some red stone dust too and by the end he had this little jingle thing going. Whenever of us hit the target he would pull the lever and some music would come on for a little bit at first it sounded really dumb but he kept changing the notes and over time become better and better. After the 8th time he changed it, it sounded really good and he stopped changing it. He also shot a few himself but he never missed unlike everyone else who missed every once in a while even Wheatly. But now were all perfect shots. I almost forgot the ender eyes and pearls if I throw the ender eyes it will show me the direction to the end portal and the ender pearls will teleport you were ever you throw them but it hurts you a little bit so you want to make sure you’re strong. And make sure you don’t get them mixed up but I must sleep I got a long trip ahead of me.
Day 39 morning: Bye guys… But honestly I don’t think 64 loafs of bread was necessary.
Trust me, it’s necessary. you might run out it could be miles and miles away it could be across the ocean for all we know.
I don’t see an ocean… And this bread should at least last me a month but if there is an ocean or lake I have a boat with me.
Well good bye
Bye.
Day 39 evening: well it’s a lot easier going down the mountain then up I can tell you that. Right now I’m following the ender eyes they keep going the same direction. I just head forward a while and throw it up to see if I’m still heading the wright direction. Right now I’m in a forest its not to dense and there’s lots of chickens and cows so I got some meat while I was here. If I eat only bread I’ll go crazy and I still don’t see an ocean or even a lake.
Day 39 night: Well I made a small home just enough room to move to my bed and to my stove. (I cooked all the meat I got earlier.) I still hear the music every once in a while I think it’s sad sometimes but gets happier as it goes along… kind of like how I’ve lived. I’ve experienced creeper killer die, and I’ve made new friends along the way. I still miss him… hey I just realized something I’m heading the same direction as Caroline was when she left maybe ill see her… But I got to go to bed now.
Day 41 evening: I can’t believe it I’m already half way out of bread and still heading the same direction. This is become crazy nothing really special happened in the last few days but I still got 2 steaks left and 32 bread. The only real reason I decided to wright was that I can no longer see the tower I made, and I’m not in a forest anymore I’m in a valley I’m hoping to at least find someone to help me on my journey or just a place to sleep. These temporary homes are tiny and I might run out of coble stone soon. I’ve been placing a cobble stone block every once In a while to make sure I’m heading the wright direction when I’m heading back. I only got 27 cobble stone blocks left but then again, I can always mine some more.
Day 46: night I am out of food. I’ve built another small home and now I’m in a desert. I have a sand stone home and I am getting hungry. The desert cold and heat are not helping ether. I’m going to use the ender pearls tomorrow to cross the desert easier I encountered a few hostiles, like zombies, spiders, and skeletons. I destroyed them they barley hurt me with the diamond armor but it’s the hunger that’s getting to me.
Day 47 morning: FOUND IT!! Ok good I just have to mine it now…. I haven’t eaten in days I won’t survive to mine if I don’t get food NOW! I can feel my strength leaving me luckily I’m not in the desert I left using those ender eyes like I said. But I only used 1 cause when I used it I was finally able to see green (not cactuses for once.)I regret getting to close too one… Wait I hear something….. Moooo moo COWS! Finally I got to get to find the moooo… moooo I’m getting closer… mooo... moooo I SEE THEM! FOOD! Die now so I may eat you... NOM NOM NOM I don’t have time to cook the meat I’m too hungry. Well now I do I’m no longer dying of hunger I have food I’m just going to kill the rest and cook the meat.
Day 49 evening: I dug a huge hole where the eye kept landing so I don’t forget where it was. I’m not bringing it back here again just so I can hold more food. I crossed the desert t with the ender eye again but I only got 7 pork chops left and I got a long trip ahead of me… I’m just following the cobble stone blocks for now, and if I ever find one of my homes I just get most of the stuff from it. I’m moving much faster than last time because I’m running, but I also get hungrier faster whenever I hear an animal I kill it and take its meat.
Day 50 night: I’m already 1/3rd of the way back home and I’m using a home from last time. I’m thinking I should start traveling by night make the trip go faster and, they may think I’m dead or something. Too bad I haven’t seen Caroline I probably won’t see hear but… I don’t know.
Day 52 evening: I’m ½ of the way there and I did travel by night but I’m out of food. I just ate my last pork chop. But luckily I haven’t encountered any hostiles yet. I hope I can find some animals to kill.
Day 53 morning: last night I crossed paths with a creeper. His sad little face didn’t keep me from slicing him in half, but I’m starting to starve I can’t run anymore and I still haven’t found any food. I haven’t hears any animals either. I can Finlay see the light tower thou but I’m still far away it will take me 2 days to get there but I’d be dead by starvation before I get there.
Day 54 night: I found one of my old homes but it was larger I’m wondering if someone lives here now. I go inside and see a sigh saying “Hi Johnson it’s me Caroline I saw you in the woods looking for food so I got some for you the reason why I didn’t come to see you is a private matter. Please forgive me” there was a chest underneath the sighn with 7 pork chops in some 4 bread loafs not much but it will keep me from starving. I leave a sghn saying Caroline if you ever read this I thank you for the food and I forgive for not coming to see me I can understand that. I can hear spiders… sigh I’m going to bed.
Day 55 evening: I’m close I’m at the bottom of the mountain but good news they made a stair way to the top all across the mountain I should get up there by night I’ll be a little hungry when I get there but I’ll live.
Day 56 morning: GIVE ME FOOD!!
Johnson? Is that really you?
Skip it and give me the pork chops.
Ok hear.
NOM NOM NOM NOM. I from hear forth will never take food for granted.…. So Blue where is Wheatly and Elis?
Wheatly is mining and Elis he’s looking for you we told him not to go but he went anyway
How is Wheatly doing? Has he started talking more often?
Acutely yes lots more…. wait you didn’t see Elis on the way hear?
No not at all he’s probably fine thou… long time no see eh? How long has it been anyway 17 days right?
Yes.
Why is Wheatly mining? We all have diamond armor and weapons what’s he looking for?
As much gold as possible. Usually it’s pretty bad to use, but because it’s so malleable you can make it really sharp and dangerous and those bows you found well there all broke and we got some new ones and we enchanted them hugely at level 25 each. Hears yours its unbreakable to the 3rd power and extra damage to the 6th power
WOW THANKS…. You want to try to find Wheatly?
Yea… Might as well let’s go.
Day 56 evening: We were searching for Wheatly for a while. The mine is huge it was at least 4times smaller when I left. Hey look there’s Wheatly!
Hu? Johnson? YOU’RE BACK! It’s about time you got hear I thought you were never coming back what did you do get a full time job or something?
Well glad to see you started talking. you going to tell me why you never did when I first met you?
No. I likely never will that is my story, not yours…. Literally I have a book
Really? Me too… Did you find gold?
Yes I got 37 gold ore currently.
Nice.
Hey when do you think Elis is coming back? When he finds me or when he gets hungry?
Hungry… He never misses a meal.
Good. In that case he should be on his way.
True that. He started looking for you yesterday said he’d be back if he found you or not.
Well that’s good to know. Well let’s head back up before it gets too dark.
Day 57 morning: hey there’s Elis coming up the mountain. Do you see him over there on the middle part of the stairs…? Who built the stairs anyway?
Yeah I see him. Elis built the stairs when he was going to try to find you. O I never really asked you if you found the end portal.
Well I found were going to dig. Almost starved to death too.
That explains why there no food left. I told you it was necessary how much food do you think we’ll need to pack if we want to head to the end?
2 stacks of 64 bread each and some 20-30 meat related things so we all don’t go crazy only eating bread.
Sounds good to me the farm is a lot larger then when you left it shouldn’t take too long to grow as long as we got some bone meal.
Sounds good…. ELIS YOU MADE IT!
Johnson? Is that really you? Haven’t shaved in a while have you?
...Good to see you too?
Great to see me then well I built theses stairs you saw me climb.
Yeah I know Blue told me that.
BLUE! I told you I wanted to tell him.
Hey. He asked it and it’s not like it’s the end of the world.
Well it could have been.
Elis… Just never mind. We got a long day tomorrow it will be long trip I assure you that. So get that garden of yours grown then cleared of wheat were going to need every bread loaf we can get.
Ok Blue I’m on it. After all were going to need all the bread we can get. It’s going to be like a 2 month trip.
…..Yeah sure whatever.
Day 58 morning: We head off each of us with a stack and a half of bread our weapons, tons of arrows, and some more miner things. We start off with an easy jog before we start running.
So what do you think is in The End?
I don’t know but I’ve heard that whoever went in never came out.
Who did you hear from and how do we know we just don’t fall in lava as soon as we get there?
Some old friends….. There all dead now. But let’s hope not to fall in lava.
Day 61 evening: We just stopped running for a lunch break. Wow I’m surprised were probably a 3rd of the way there already.
Really? So does that mean we been gone like 20 days?
…..Elis it’s been 3 days and it’s not going to be a 2 month trip.
Well anyway how much food we got left? I got 61 bread left
61.
59.
2.
…….Elis how in the world do you only have 2 bread left?
I left a bread trail.
….SMAK! Elis you idiot! You don’t need a bread trail! I already have a cobble stone trail that’s what we’ve been following!
Ouch…. but what if birds take the cobble stone away?
Elis just stop leaving a bread trail and follow the cobble stone. If anything the birds would eat the bread trail. And I never even seen a bird none the less heard them.
O…. well can I have some of your bread?
Sigh… fine hear have 10.
Yeah!
Day 64 night: Were already 3/4th of the way there were in one of our temporary homes we had to make it a bit bigger but it’s still a tight fit we give Elis food whenever he runs out and make sure he doesn’t leave a bread trail.
So you think we’ll be there tomorrow?
No probably in 2 more days, when I was coming hear I was hoping to come across Caroline. This is the way she left but I never did see her. But when I was coming back to the mountain I did see a sign written by Caroline saying she saw me and was sorry for not seeing me. She left a chest with some food in it probably would have died without it. What do you think she’s doing?
Why didn’t you tell us earlier… actually never mind that but I bet she’s Beating the crap out of a grifers face.
Hopefully….
GRONNNE!!
SHUT UP AND CRAW BACK IN TO YOUR CAVE YOU WORTHLESS DEAD FREAK!
Well ill call it a night lets go to bed but first let me just rip that zombies head off… I open the door and sure enough there he was. DIE! SLICE! Can’t grone without a face you know. Well let’s go to bed now.
Day 65 morning: There’s a creeper in front of the door and we can’t get out without a big explosion right in front of us. I have an idea but you’re not going to like it.
What is it?
I have a bock of TNT I could place it in front of the door, We blow it up but we would have a back exit and the creeper would get a taste of its own medicine.
Not bad of an idea let’s do it Wheatly get the flint and steal ready Johnson place the block and Elis make a BACK exit. Not a front.
Ok blue
I place the block and Elis made the exit we all quickly get behind Wheatly and Wheatly lights in on fire.
STOP! Wait almost time RUN!
We all quickly run out of the house sssssss BOOM! Woohoo!
That was awesome!
Now that we got the obstacle over with let’s get going.
Sounds good.
Day 67 sunset: WE MADE IT!!
Really?!
Yes really, see the hole I dug that’s where we mine. Remember we can’t mine strait down or well get our self’s killed we could fall in lava or something the portal could be in a room with high ceilings you know.
Well let’s get started I would like to get done today we still got some time left.
Ok let’s just mine in a circular pattern did anyone bring a diamond pix by chance?
I have one you can borrow it
Thanks Wheatly…. I never knew you had one.
No problem.
Day 67 night: I can hear something….. We should be getting close.
It’s about time I can hear zombies from above but there to stupid to know how to come down here without falling to their death.
LOOK THERE IT IS!
Great!... What are those little silvery things? There kind of hard to see because they match the cooler of the floor.
They appear to be like a land fish coted in silver… let’s just call them silver fish I think there hostile let’s kill them. O CRAP! There’s a monster spawner down there too, and lava let’s take a different route down I think I see a library throe the iron bars. Let’s head that direction.
Ok sounds good.
After several minutes of mining we found the library below us. There it is.
HEY LOOK 2 CHESTS!
Good eye Elis.
Let’s go to the side of the room there’s a ladder to down to get around. We can access the chests too.
(After a while of getting there.) Hey ill check this chest… nothing really in hear just 2 papers, 1 book and 6 arrows the book is in a different language. Elis check the other chest.
Already on it… hmm not much hear ether just a book shelf and 1 book.
Is it readable?
I don’t know I can’t read.
Just hold onto it for now let’s head to The End. Ready your sword the silver fish are coming. Blue break the spawner, Wheatly, me, and Elis will cover you. LET’S GO!
HACK! SLASH! They die in one hit.
BAM! WACK! BLUE JUST RUN TO THE SPAWNER!
Ok I started destroying it!
Elis get to the left of blue!
Which is left?
Just get to the side that has more silver fish!!
On it.
Wheatly cover his front ill cover his right
It’s almost broke!
Elis watch your back side!
ARGH THERE TO MANY HELP ME JHONSON!
IM COMEING STAY CLEAR OF THE LAVA! ELIS RUN FORWARD! YOU’RE GOING TO FALL IN ELIS!!!!
AHHHH IM ON FIRE GET SOME WATER AHHHughh…
ELIS NOOO!
ITS BROKEEN!
Elis…
…..Is he….
Yes.
O crap not good.
Quickly get his stuff before it burns.
I only managed to get his 64 arrows and the book wait… ITS READABLE it’s called 3 Books in 1 The Mysterious Herobrine, The Story of Steve, and the Experts Guide on How to Build Everything.
Wheatly looks at me directly in the eyes and says, “We can read later… for now we fight… sometimes it’s better not to know things”
I make no reply I don’t think Blue heard Wheatly say that but I don’t call it out ether.
Well that’s quite a surprise Johnson but we need to get to The End. Less reading more killing. But first a moment of silence…. for Elis………………… Johnson do you have an ender eye with you?
No.
Blue do you?
No. wait look a chest looks like it was hear for the portal let me take a look…. YES ENDER EYES! And even ender pearls.
Nice find Blue.
We found the end portal so why do we need ender eyes?
Watch.
Wheatly then proceeds to place each ender eye on a strange looking block and when he fills them all in this black thing appears.
Wow didn’t see that coming.
Just like the nether?
O shut up.
Ok so you’re sure this is safe
Positive.
Ok let’s go.
RALKA!
The End: We all appear on a large obsidian pillar seeing many more, some with orbs on top and some not it was clear people were hear before there are stairs going up the pillars made with different blocks. Then the next thing we notice is enderman everywhere, and a large black dragon heading toward us. RUN! THERES STAIRS TO GET DWON! WHATEVER YOU DO DON’T LOOK AT THE ENDERMAN!
GOT IT!
READY YOU’RE BOWS! HEAR HE COMES… FIRE!
FLING! FLANG! PING!
He then swoops down and hits Blue and then goes back to an orb that seems to give his strength back.
BLUE ARE YOU ALLRIGHT
Yeah fine. Stop yelling were right hear.
Yeah sorry… THERE HE IS!
Ok everyone get to a pillar with an orb on top and break it.
I got a better idea I’m a good shot you know. FLING!...... boom.
Woe. HES COMEING! Wheatly keep shooting the pillar orbs, and Blue and me will distract the dragon.
FIRE!
FLING! FLING!
He then flies off without hitting us heading toward the nearest orb, Wheatly quickly shoots it down. It then goes off in another direction to far off to shoot.
Wheatly take this potion it will make you run faster and longer.
Thanks.
Quickly let’s build a shooting tower.
Good idea I got plenty of stone with us hear have 64.
Let’s get building. Wheatly get to the other towers you need any blocks?
No I’m fine with what I have.
Ok let’s go.
Hopefully the enderman won’t take our blocks
Yeah.
Ok he coming back get the left side wall I get the right side and well then head to the front. It was a basic shooting tower 3 walls and back stairs to get up to the top about 4x our height. Ready your bow. AIM…. FIRE! FLING!
HES ON FIRE! Never mind not anymore.
You got any poison potions?
Yeah hear it slowly kills him, and take this it’s a temporary heath potion.
Thanks. Gulp gulp gulp he’s coming back around. Ready… aim…. Fire! FLIN FANG!
LOOK OUT! BOOM!
Arghhhh he ran into our tower and destroyed it! Next time we aim for his eyes… acutily let’s aim for his nose maybe it will hit his poor excuse for a brain and if the poison hits his brain it would kill him for sure.
Sounds like a plan.
O no he’s headed for Wheatly.
Maybe he’ll out run it.
Hopefully.
It’s coming closer…. HE DOSENT SEE IT ITS GOING TO HIT HIM! Bam! QUICKLY GET GIVE WHEATLY HEATH POTIONS ILL DISTRACT HIM.
The dragon starts coming toward us with his dark purple eyes, it gives a cold death stair coming closer, and closer the flapping wings getting louder, its angry grow turns to a roar I pull out my poison potion Blue starts running toward Wheatly. I pull out the poison potion ready to throw with all my might closer, closer….. ARGHHHH FLING! The potion hits the dragon right in the mouth when it was roaring he swallowed. But he kept coming closer I quickly do a barrel roll to the left it misses me but it comes back around but it appears to be slower. I take out my bow and rapidly keep shooting at it never missing it. Whether hitting it in the foot, the stomach, or face. It keeps getting slower and slower then I shoot it one last time in the nose it then try’s flying off then blows up into a great flash of white and purple leaving a black well underneath were it died. I ignore it and head towards Blue, and Wheatly. Wheatly was lying down with his hand on his chest… it was bleeding pritty badly.
Blue do you have any heath potions?
No I gave the last one to you.
Johnson…. Blue…. you never asked…. if I had… a heath potion.
Do you?
Noooo I just said that…. to try to be funny.
Well then drink it
It’s a throwing potion… hear.
Fling! Splat! His blood wound starts healing and he gets up.
Aww yeah much better. So how do we get out of here?
I think where the dragon died there’s like a well or something.
That must be the way out then let’s go.
We head over there and it looks like the black stuff that got us hear. It looks like stars now that I think about it…
Hey what’s that black think on top?
I don’t know… let’s take it.
But just before Blue got to touch it it disappears…… Well that was kind of pointless
LET’S GO!
AKLAR
Day 68 morning: We wake up in all our beds.
We see Wheatly running out the house with nothing but an iron sword an ender pearl and diamond pix.
WHAETLY!!!! WHARE ARE YOU GOING?!?!?
MY REAL NAME IS STEAVE!
He throws the ender pearl far away from the mountain and disappears.
Ill probably never see him again…
Johnson why did Wheatly leave?
Don’t ask me but he said his real name was Steve… wait a second The Story of Steve!!! that was in the book…
That has to be the same person in the book.
I bet that’s why he ran away.
Should we read his part of the book?
Maybe…. but today is not that day.
For now let’s read the experts guide on building.
Sounds good.
Day 68 night: We spent all day reading that book. It teaches things I didn’t know when I got here like how to build an ender chest; you need 8 obsidian blocks and an eye of ender. What it does is if you put an object in the chest any other ender chest will also have the object. So if I have a chest in the mine so when my pickaxe brakes I don’t have to come all the way back up here and get another one. I just open the chest and there it is. (Hopefully I left a good one.) When we went to the end I never noticed but that stuff we were walking on was called end stone. But it’s not very useful. We also now know that you get music discs from caves and a creeper if it gets killed by a skeleton…. I have no idea why. I always wondered how Caroline got hers…. And there’s some more things in hear too. But I already knew some like the dispensers remember how Creeper killer had them I put some in all three towers. I never really did use them…
Day 69 morning: I see them… Endermen 6 of them me and Blue are in the house not looking directly at them but defiantly looking (I told him the mistake I did when I first looked directly at them).
Should we try to kill them? Or should we just wait for them to leave or something?
Well we could put a hole in the roof and shoot them.
Nah how about we just try to cut their legs off if they can teleport they don’t need legs.
Ok sounds good. We take out are diamond materials and prepare for a fight. Ready?
Ready
FOR ELIS!
HACK! SLASH! BANG! If you hit them in the legs they can’t teleport!
Good to know! Johnson behind you!
I can see everything in slow motion I turn around with my sword spinning I slice the enderman’s legs clean off then I duck down avoiding the blow from the ender man in front of me then I quickly take out my bow and shoot the enderman between the eyes then I come back to normal motion. I see Blue about to be surrounded by 3 enderman. Blue there all around you! Get down! Blue then proceeds to do a 720 rotation slicing 2 enderman in half but 1 still remained. I just realized the enderman had a stone block he hits Blue in the back of the head breaking the helmet in half. I try to shoot it but just before the arrow hits it teleports slightly away from where he was standing and hits Blue twice in the face. Blue falls to the ground on his knees then he tries to slice the enderman’s feet but instead the enderman teleports again behind Blue. Blue takes one final blow on the head before I stab the enderman in the back I see Blue fall to the ground blood around his forehead.
BLUE! I quickly rush to his side while Blue coughs some blood.
I’ve written a journal as well as you have, take it but only read it when the time is right.
I will. But how am I to know when to read it?
You’ll know…
Blue Penguin Then died……
Day 69 night: I made a coffin and buried him I left a grave stone it says “Hear lays Blue Penguin the one you could always rely on R.I.P. “
Day 70 morning: I look out onto the sun rise the red orange and yellow all blending and changing colors it’s sad how something so beautiful can when something so bad did as well. Iv been thinking about going out and trying to find someone maybe even a town. You know what I am to tell my story, to help others in need, to build a kingdom of peace if it’s not already of course I’m going to head the opposite direction when I was set off to find the end. It truly has been an end to many lives. I bring the necessity’s food, armor, tools, building blocks, bed and some more stuff. I stop at Blues grave one last time. I place a single flower and shed a single tear. FOR BLUE!
Day 71 night: I made a small home from what I’ve seen there’s no village nearby but there could be someone when I was making camp and seeing it become dark I saw a light small but yet still there when it became totally dark I saw what it was a mere torch not much walking and already found sign of a possible person.
Day 72 evening: I occasionally see a torch now and then. I think it’s a trail so I just follow them I don’t know if it’s just me but I think there’s a fog coming in on me far off but very slowly coming closer.
Day 73 morning: Ok now I know there’s a fog coming its slowly but surely coming closer I don’t want to go looking for torches if there’s going to be a thick fog so I take the book The Mystery’s Story of Herobrine. And when I opened the first page I couldn’t stop reading.
The Mysterious Story of Herobrine
Hello my name is Pie_Man3; how I got this name I have no idea. I don’t think any of us do, so I changed my name to Zale. For years now I have been doing research on a partial… person or monster I’m not quite sure witch. His name is Herobrine. You may have seen him or heard of Herobrine but I’m very sure if you’re reading this you defiantly herd of Steve. Herobrine is Steve’s brother Steve denies he has a brother but Herobrine is supposed to be. Technically I don’t even know how that’s possible because none of us know where we came from we just wake up somewhere in this world of MineCraft and know are name. Some of you never heard of this planet to be called MineCraft. But honestly what do you do all the time? You build or craft and mine for things too, so I decided to call this place MineCraft some call it Free Land because you can do basically whatever you want but I prefer MineCraft. I’m sorry, I’m getting off topic anyway Herobrine is supposed to be the total opposite version of Steve. He looks just like him except for his eyes…. Those eyes are just terrifying from what I’ve heard there piercing white there so bright they make light but there’s no pupils just that haunting white light. As we all know Steve is a good builder, monster hunter, and everything you could possibly want to be. Always helps people out but he does have 1 thing in common with Herobrine. He runs off a lot just leaves without a trace. Herobrine can teleport he uses it to his advantage he sometimes teleports behind people and kills them from behind they never know what hit them. Now you’ve probably been wondering how did he die and why do people think he’s Steve’s dead brother well that’s a touching story, here’s how it happened. Steve was the first MineCrafter he built a house and had iron on the first day really good unless you know what you’re doing he didn’t but at night he saw someone just appear out of nowhere just woke up at night and cried out for help (notice his eyes were normal while he was alive) Steve saw that he was in trouble I think you understand that with all those zombies and what not out there he quickly saves him when they get back to his house they talk and get to know each other Herobrine didn’t have much to tell but Steve did. He told him how to survive the next day he had his own house they made a mine together and found lava they made sure to stay clear but then they saw something, diamonds in just 2 days he found diamonds he sure is a lucky guy but here’s the thing it was just beside the lava and you could fall in real easily Steve went to mine it and Herobrine right behind Steve started to mine it when that first diamond fell Herobrine couldn’t help but mine some diamonds to but his diamond fell into lava Steve told Herobrine to be careful next time they kept mining them and when they got to the last diamond Steve started mining it but because of the greed Herobrine had he wanted it for himself he also started to mine and it and accidently hit Steve. Steve fell into the lava screaming HELP ME HEROBRINE! He quickly takes his arm out and pulls Steve out he runs off on fire trying to get to some water nearby Herobrine takes the last diamond and then a skeleton comes out and shoots him from a different part of the cave. He falls into the lava just as Steve was coming back to get Herobrine he saw him get shot and fall into the lava Herobrine thought of Steve as brother even as the short moment he was falling he thought of that he screamed out HELP ME BROTHER! Steve runs over but before he can pull him out he burnt to death he then runs back up makes a diamond sword came back down and killed the skeleton. After wards we fell to his knees and wept he drop his sword it fell in the lava where Herobrine died apparently the power that gives the skeleton life was on that sword after all he was the only person to beat a skeleton like that since Ted the power fell onto Herobrine remains giving him life. Herobrine was greedy he wanted to live and blamed Steve for his death and vowed for revenge. When Herobrine was given life he was teleported in the nether and was stuck there for a long time until the first nether portal was built. When he was in the nether he became more and more evil wanting not only revenge on Steve but his fate as well making him want to destroy all in his path he killed zombie pigmen gast and blaze rods taking over the nether all the creators in the nether were bound to his power if they disobeyed they would be terminated gast don’t want to hurt you that’s why there sad and pigmen have a resentment built up but if you attack them they for sure will follow Herobrine blaze rods were like normal people just a lot more fire like and were forced to kill everyone. Evently in the other realm someone figured out how to make a nether portal. When Herobrine saw the nether portal he went straight to it and went through causing him to come to our world once again he saw when he left the nether a home. He destroyed it and took all the valuables although Herobrine had the power to destroy nearly everything in his path, he did not. Why? He must have has his reasons. He only destroys things that other people place like homes monuments and other things. He won’t destroy tombs though that’s all he won’t destroy. When he came to our dimension he knew there were skeletons, spiders, silver fish, and zombies that would kill us. But there was something that didn’t try to kill us the greens or as we call them now creepers Herobrine forced them to kill us they already had the explosive powder in them but they never committed suicide until Herobrine started killing them all he made sure every green become a suicidal bomber and if they didn’t listen he would send them to the nether where they would burn for eternity. So they listened they don’t want to thou so there always sad. Eventluy he become so powerful he made a creature of his own. The Endermen the worst ones of the bunch he made them in his image terrifying, evil, and deadly. And that where they come from now that was his most recent action now all he does is just kill people there have been many Herobrine sighting some say there fake some so there real we may never know but from all the sighting this is what he looks like
Lucky I was able to get colored ink to get you a good image if you see, or seen this monster I have 1 suggestions for you run, or try to kill him. Here are some Herobrine things he tends to do he will take your diamond’s and dispose of them by throwing them in lava if you see him he will star at you then disappear sometimes kill you from behind when he dose do not follow him if you get the chance he make lots of traps that are fatal to any normal human can suppress. If you have a diamond sword be weary for Herobrine sees it he will steal it and kill you with your own sword some said they have battled Herobrine but I doubt that although the ones how said they have always used a gold sword supposedly his only weakness and I don’t know why. Herobrine may or may not exist for all we know all this damage could have been by grifers. O and 1 more thing about Herobrine on vary rare occasions he will help you in a way but when he does it hurts someone else. I personally have not seen him and hope not too but I believe he’s out there. This is Zale leaving you the responsibility to let others read this. Good luck out there.
I close the book in amazement Herobrine could be just some guys who made a scary story and became believable or he could be real and maybe he’s over exaggerated maybe he died and stayed dead. I bet it was just some guys making some scary stories or maybe a book and it was fiction and someone didn’t know the different to fiction and nonfiction and told the world there’s a mass murderer out there. And some people believed it. If Herobrine is supposed to look like Steve why didn’t Steve have a beard and have green shirt instead of blue…. I look out to the window and see nothing but a very close fog. It was night I could tell by the darkness and the fog made it even darker I will admit I am a bit scared what if some creeper is out there just waiting for me to open the door and end my life…. I now wonder why there so sad they do try to kill us but for what…. You know what; to this day forth I vow to never kill another creeper unless my life truly depends on it. I’m going to bed.
Day 74 morning: Its still fogy outside but not as bad as last night. I go out side with my sword ready and see no monsters. I look where the torches were leading me and I see another torch I’m just going to follow those for a while now.
Day 74 evening: After walking for a while I notice the fog is clearing. Good now I can see better. Hopefully I’ll be able to see where the torches are leading to. Maybe it’s a village or maybe it was someone trying to get to one place to another without getting lost… witch could be a village to village.
Day 75 Sunset: After another hour or so the fog was nearly completely clear. I could see a think forest and some light inside But they were all in random spots to light it up entirely. I quickly make a tower to see over the forest and see 2 mountains and between them a wall made of cobble stone. And a small entrance… it appears to be guarded... Maybe its not abandon! But it was too far off to get there in one day. I set camp at the edge of the forest. Tomorrow may be the most important day in my life.
Day 76 morning: I wake up eagerly to get to the village but when I head out to go inside the forest I hear a sound… chop chop chop. Someone is cutting down a tree… looks like I’m about to meet someone.
HELLO!
Chop chop…..
There’s a long silence as if this person is deciding I’m a friend or foe. HELLO WHOS THERE! The next thing I know I have a sword at my thought.
What’s your name!
…. Johnson.
He loosens the sword just a bit and says do you know Caroline?
Yes! I think I can prove it too…. she was hunting Gordon Freeman and found us… he came to try and kill us but I cut his life short… He puts his sword away.
Sorry about that didn’t know who you were. My name is Ted. I’m a lumberjack it’s my specialty. And killing monsters.
….What a second I know that name…. THE MYSTERYS STORY OF HEROBRINE!
Yes I am aware I am in the book but I don’t believe in herobrin never seen him never will.
Ok then…. Why did you ask me if I knew Caroline?
She came in yesterday she was talking about some friends she made.
Caroline is hear? Can you lead me to where she lives?
Of course! Follow me.
Day 76 sunset: we make it to the main entrance without problems and I see 2 guards both with iron armor, and diamond swords.
Hello Ted. I see you’ve met someone who is he?
This is Johnson, found him at the edge of the forest. He knows Caroline.
That’s quite a surprise. Welcome Johnson to the town of Sunset Valley!
Thank you. What are your names?
I’m Molly Daisy but most people just call me Daisy
I’m Jeon.
Nice to meet you Jeon, and Daisy As you already know I’m Johnson. Just by chance do you know who Steve is?
HAHAHA! YOU KIDDING? Everyone knows Steve after all he started not only Sunset valley but many more towns too. Like Mine Town, 3 Tree Mountain, Crafting Kingdom, Cube Land, and many more.
Have you been to those towns?
I’ve been in Crafting Kingdom. That place is HUGE! That was the most cobble stone I’ve ever seen. A cobble stone path, the castle was made of cobble stone, and the walls biggest walls ever. 16 layers of cobble stone. Took me all day just to get from one side of the city to the other the population was about 6,000 and it has never been grifed.
Wow… that’s a lot of people. It sounds a lot better than my place. How many people live here?
234 including you.
I’m impressed how do you keep track so well
You have to know how many people live here when there’s only one entrance
What if they climb over the walls with ladders?
They can’t the top is glass you can’t place a ladder on glass but what if the make something to climb over?
We have watch towers with people examining at all time anyone can leave but no one can enter without some sort of proof that you’re not a grifer. And you’re would be killing one and helping Caroline.
Alright simple enough and speaking of Caroline I would like to see her. Bye!
Good day Johnson see you soon.
I walk into the village and was amazed by how many buildings they had Ted walked over and said
So what do you want to do first? have a tour, or find Caroline?
Caroline can wait id like a tour.
Too bad I got to get back to the forest to work I’m not on a break. Good bye.
…Bye?
After he leaves I notice that you can see other people walking around just minding their business I guess. Then I hear someone babbling about some sort of god or something.
People of Sunset Valley! Do you not understand the power of Notch?! He has made this place and controls what happens hear! He controls whoever lives and dies! He makes the sun rise and fall! He makes the blocks endlessly never repeat its patterns!
He had a red cloche on I couldn’t see his face to well but I saw he had gray hair yet a young face. I asked him for his name.
Dear child of notch your new hear aren’t you?
Yes….I would just like to know your name though.
Of course my name is Red Lightning. But most people just call me lightning, but personally I don’t care if you call me Red, Red lightning or Lightning.
Ok thanks for the info.
I head on I’m hoping to find an armory so I can sell some of my iron and luckily enough I found one I go in seeing someone heating up some iron. After a while he finally notices me.
MOTHER OF GOLD! HOW IN THE WORLD DID YOU GET ALL THOSE DIMONDS?
Steve gave me some good advice when he lived with me he called himself Wheatly… Ran away when I found a book about him said his real name was Steve when running away.
How long ago was this?
It was about a month ago is when I met him but he ran off at least 5 days ago
YOU’RE LIEING! I SAW STEVE DIE! AND THAT WAS ABOUT A MONTH AGO WHEN HE DIED!
Well if I remember correctly we killed the ender dragon together, I saved his life, he helped me do tons of stuff like make a nether portal, and stuff like that. And I’m pretty sure I’m not imagining that he was with me that whole time.
He looks up at me and pulls out a paper and says “mention this to no one”
He gives me the paper it says
Dear
ClockWorkDreams
I know you’re mad at me for leaving but it’s hard to keep my past a secret when your asking questions and I don’t want to answer them. As you know I’ve done some things I regret but won’t mention entirely. There is a town called Sunset Valley, I want you to live there. Follow the sun set and you’ll find it. When you get there make sure you say to whoever guards it Steve’s sends his apologies they should let you in. they may have questions. Answer as many as you can but only show them this letter if you have to. I’m going to head to that light on the mountain we been looking at for a while. I think creeper killer went there. I know you’ll want to follow me but don’t I have a feeling that this may get a bit crazy I left you all my supplies except the ender pearls I needed them to get there faster but I’ll use them all by the time I get there. I want to make it appear I’m new to this place. When you’re leaving make a path of torches so others can find the town. I think I saw some people at the bottom of the mountain I better get there quickly if I want a group of 3. 1 more thing ClockWorks Sunset Valley needs a black smith.
You’re Friend
Steve
When I finish the letter he says can I have the letter back?
I hand it over carefully I could tell it was his most prized passion
Who said Steve died?
When Steve went to go to the light tower I managed to follow him. He left in the middle of the night I heard him get up and head out I also had several pearls he didn’t know about. So I followed him when we were approaching the mountain bottom out of nowhere a creeper came up and blew him up there were 2 more so they came after me. They both blew up but I kept running maybe the guys herd the explosion and helped him I was too far off to know. Was that you who made the tower?
Matter of fact it was. They all came up at once their names where Blue Penguin, Elis and of course Steve. I do know Blue Penguin, Creeper killer, and Elis are all dead. He proceeds to cry once again I quietly leave and leave a note saying if you wish to talk to me again I’ll be at Caroline’s house most likely I will be back weather you wish me to visit or not. I look outside and see the sun is starting to set I quickly head to a house that has a person sitting on a porch I head over to her and say do you know where Caroline lives?
….Yes Caroline lives in the largest house in the town it’s over there to the left.
Thank you and by the way my name is Johnson you may have heard of me I killed Gordon freeman.
Ahh yes Caroline mentioned you and I thank you.
I head out and instantly see the house she was talking about. It was made of logs, wooden planks, cobble stone, and glass panels it looked really nice it was 3 story’s tall 3 blocks tall for every room I quickly get to the front of the house and just stare at the door. I finally noticed that every door was made of iron. I tried to open it but it wouldn’t budge I saw a lever by the door and I heard a note block at its highest pitch. Ding! I then hear a familiar voice.
Coming!
As soon as she opens the door she freezes.
Johnson? Is that you?
Yes.
Johnson!!!
She hugs me tightly.
I’m so sorry for leaving I couldn’t help but coming back to Sunset valley I haven’t seen my friends in a long time I’ve been hunting grifers ever since one burned my first house down. I haven’t been myself since then but I’m fine now.
She stops hugging me and says
Please come in I have much to tell.
Didn’t you know Wheatly was Steve?
Wheatly is…. Steve? So that’s why he never talked… he didn’t want me to know that he was Steve I would recognize his voice if I heard it enough!
Did he start talking often when I left?
Not instantly but eventually yes.
Well my question if he didn’t start talking from the start did he know I was on the way possible?
Not likely but then again Steve is quite smart I’m starting to learn a lot about him. But some information I am unable to give you due to some trust I granted to someone.
I can understand that but I’m sorry for not telling you about this place and others like it I’m still trying comprehend on how many people there truly are out there. This place is endless literally it just hard to think straight sometimes I should have mentioned something while I was with you…. Its late we should get some sleep you’ll have to stay with me for the time being until you can rent or build a home.
I can work with that but before we go to bed I have a question are you still hunting down grifers?
No Gordon freeman was the last target nearby there are more out there defiantly but I’m done with that job I’m going to try to be a book righter or something I want to give information to other people.
Well good night.
Day 77 morning: I can smell chicken cooking…. It smells good. I head to try to find Caroline and there’s some chicken in the furnace and a paper saying “I’m at the library feel free to eat the chicken and look around town but don’t eat anything else.” I eat the chicken with gratefulness I haven’t eaten in a while and that filled me up. I decide to go visit ClockWorks see how he’s managing. When I arrive he’s forging a diamond shovel he finishes it quite quickly. He makes several more things shovels, picks, axes, and swords but no hoes but then again why would he he’s not a farmer and I never saw any farms near this place must be stocked with food or something. Finally ClockWorks notices me. He looks at me for a moment as if deciding if he should talk to me or not.
Sigh…. Take a seat we have much to talk about. I know I was a bit… emotional yesterday but I though Steve had died and now just know he’s alive I was so happy I cried. Trust me it’s not easy now knowing 1 of your friends is dead and 1 was never really dead. Creeper Killer was my friend as well as Steve Creeper Killer left 2 day earlier saying he wanted to help some more people. we moved to another location the same day not knowing we went in the same direction as Creeper Killer. That night we saw some lights from a nearby mountain so Steve wrote the letter and I managed to find it before he left. And I heard him wake up in the middle of the night and you know the rest. Now tell me what happened to you?
I told him everything from waking up on day 1 too all the way to when I left the mountain. He never interrupted so I thought that was nice. When I finally finished the day was already half over he only asked one question.
Do you or do you not want to know the past about Steve?
I do but am not going to read his journal until I think the time is wright witch is not now but it is soon.
How do you know?
I don’t…. it’s just a feeling.
Fair enough…. You don’t have a job do you?
No
Well you want one?
Of course!
Well what are you good at?
Well I’m not the best fighter….. I’m not known for the wood master….. I mine pretty well but that was in unexplored land where the land would be filled with minerals and ores…….I can shoot well but I don’t know how that would be useful…. I can build decent but not like your builders……I don’t think I would make a good cook… trading probably wouldn’t be good on me ether…. but I am one heck of a fast learner.
How about working at a library?
….Sounds good to me but what would I get paid in?
That depends it can be gold, iron, rarely diamonds, and other random stuff.
How long would I work there?
I don’t know you would have to ask Mr. Original he’s a book writer and the librarian.
Mr. Original? That’s a strange name did he change name to that or was it already like it?
He said he was born with that name and he’ll die with that name.
Sounds reasonable I guess… where’s the library?
Right by the town hall can’t miss it large windows and TONS of books. And if you want you could send him your journal when you want to call it quits and he’ll reproduce it.
K thanks.
Day 77 night: I finally managed to find town hall it was quite the build it even had some statues… or some sort of giant wool art work it looked cool but I don’t quite know what it was looked like some sort or green diamond there were some other people standing around it I ignored them and went looking for the library sure enough it was right beside the town hall and when he said a ton of books he meant it I cant even estimate how many there are in there could be well over 100,000 books in there maybe even a 1,000,000 I’m not too good with estimating thou so I could be far off when I walk in I see books all in aisles I see a counter with someone reading he had gray hair a gray cloche and leather boots I walk over o him Hey I’m sorry to interrupt while your reading but are you Mr. Original?
Hu? O yes sorry how may I help you?
My name is Johnson. I’m looking for a job hear at the library perhaps I can apply?
Uhh what’s your name?
Johnson
Well then Johnson I like to keep an open mind about things but I would like some more time on this. But I could use a break. After all with this many books and almost every one of them better then the next people come here all the time renting books and in some cases stealing them. I can’t quite my job because if I did I couldn’t read all these books for as long as I want and who would take care of them?.... You’re probably wondering why I’m the only one who works hear. Well there’s a reason for that most people who do apply can’t handle the hours, they have no organization skills, and they always forget who has this book and who has that book. We get stolen from a lot you know Johnson I’m getting old I forget who has the books and who don’t.
Why don’t you just right down there name on a paper of what book they checked out and put next to it the date they checked it out?
………You’re hired.
Day 78 morning library: Yesterday was really hectic when I got the job he gave me the time I have to work witch is in the morning till noon. He gave me a white cloche saying I must where this when I work. It means I’m an apprentice he also gave me a list of what the colors mean for each cloche now that I think about I do see people in cloches a lot more than I thought. Here is the list.
White- new in town/ just got a job /apprentice
Red-lower class
Blue-lower class grade 2
Black-lower class grade 3/ has own property
Green-middle class/
Yellow-upper class
Orange-upper class grade 1
Purple-upper class grade 2
Brown-helped build the town/keep the town in order/government job
Pretty complex if you ask me but I guess over time you just kind of memorize it. How the classes work Is not how much you have, but how much land you own I live with Caroline I don’t own any land yet. People like Steve probably own large portions of this town. You don’t have to were cloches but it keeps you warm on cool days and protects from the sun on hot days so people usually keep them on. Some jobs of course don’t allow you to where cloches like clockworks job he was smelting iron and stuff if he had on a cloche it could have easily burned him. Anyway in order to upgrade your status you can ether get a raise in your job get more jobs and put money or valuable items in the bank and things like that. Although I don’t know what most of that is I don’t plan too. I’ve decided I’m going to leave this town but not anytime soon when of course you see at first when I started to right I was going insane, but now that I’ve met people and experienced the worlds joy and its pain I can cope with or with out people. But the reason I keep righting is to look at my past and learn from my experiences plus when I have grown old I can reread this… I may be old already I don’t know I haven’t ever seen my own face… well I guess not many have ether… I can live without knowing what I look like. I sometimes wish I could have done things differently in life but I know that that is imposable and you have to carry on in life I’m probably going to leave without telling anyone. That I will regret in the future but I know I will have a hard time saying good bye if I do. I guess Caroline had that same problem and Steve… and I bet plenty more too. But then there’s the guards I can’t leave without them noticing… O who am I kidding why would they care?
People come and go all the time…. I think so anyway. Well I made it to the library ill right later.
Day 78 Noon: I just got off work with Mr. Original the job wasn’t so bad I got talk to a lot of people even Red Lightning again He was getting a book about…. I don’t even know what I was in some sort of ancient language. He said it was from the same people who make the desert tombs sand forgers or something like that saying he wanted to know more about there religion where java supposedly allows everything to work like correctly. If java didn’t exist we would all be in a stand still he’s all into religion and history. Anyway everyone else ether grumbled about too many new comers all the time and others just said hi or just had small talk, like what’s the book that has all those name for? (The new book where I put there name down and what book/books they got) most were surprised I had all diamond armor and had a white cloche on kind of funny to see peoples reactions. Mr. Original helped me with a lot of things like righting in some of the titles that were in different languages, putting books back in a certain order things like that. He said I could read whenever I wanted but I had to be at the counter ready for when people wanted to check out books. And so I found a book about towns it was quite interesting I found out some towns were grifer filled and no one had any control over what happened and some allowed people to kill each other. Most were like sunset valley where you’re only allowed to kill hostile mobs. Mr. Original said the book was outdated and some of those towns no longer existed and it didn’t mention new towns. Some towns in that book were made by Steve one that really caught my attention was 3 Tree Valley, the population only had 21 people living there. Apparently only certain people were allowed, anyone not allowed would be ether killed, captured and moved far away, or just threatened and that would scare them off. In order to get inside the town without these things happening is to send a letter to a runner. The runners take letters and send them places like certain people, towns, and more. The white listed areas usually consisted of 4-6 people to defend themselves at night. I would like to make a town like that except I wouldn’t kill intruders unless I had good reason too. Well I made it back to Caroline’s house and she doesn’t need to feed me this time I got my pay it was 20 watermelons, 2 iron ingots, and a book it’s not been written in of course it was actually a gift even came with ink and a feather for righting. I go inside Carline’s house I see her eating some cookies and pork chop.
Hey Johnson how was your first day on the job?
Fine I got some watermelons and iron hear take the iron I don’t need it and it’s my thanks for letting me live hear.
It’s not a problem
Uh question what is your job?
I build houses, trade; expand the town’s walls, farm, and research.
….that’s a lot of jobs.
Sigh…. Not as much as Steve had.
Day 79: Evening: Hey Lighting did you read that book already?
Yes and I’m hear for this one its called The 2 temples one is dedicated to Notch and the other to Jeb I don’t know much about Jeb and that’s why I want to learn about his temple.
…dose the book mention where the temples are located?
Yes of course however there too far for me to visit without help I wish I could visit them.
Well why don’t you leave with someone check them out and then come back?
Not many people think my religion is correct and even if they did they probably wouldn’t go on a month trip with me there and back. I’m getting old Johnson my face my look young but my hair is getting grayer by the day. By the time I’m getting back I won’t have the strength to fight the mobs alone.
…can you keep a secret? (He nods his head.) I’m going to leave this town in 5 days and I could take you to the temple and back hear or if you want join a different one with more books or something like that.
Why just us 2? What if we get some of your friends I heard your friends with Steve. If you know Steve then you may know some others that may also want to join you.
You have a good point Lighting after all there is strength in numbers… I should know.
Tell you what tomorrow night meet me at town hall I will bring 2 friends and you can bring some of your friends if you wish and then after 2 days of planning and preparation we leave off into the wilderness.
Sounds like a plan too me, I know just who to bring.
Day 78 sunset: I head over to ClockWorks armory when I go inside he’s eating a cake. Hey ClockWorks
Nom nom nom…. Hi what bring you over? I heard you got the job at the library people been saying some new guy working was working and he even came up with a system on who has over due books and who doesn’t.
Yeah and if I didn’t I probably wouldn’t have gotten the job either. Recently I got in touch with a friend. You may know him his name is Red Lighting… You see he wants to go find some temple of some sort but he’s too old to go on his own and I said I’ll take him to it. This is something I’ll need help with… perhaps you may want to join are little team? After all in the wild there’s more ores you can build with more room for building then you could ever imagine and perhaps we may find Steve.
Johnson you don’t have to try to tell me all the good things that are out in the wilderness I’ve been there before. But anyway ID LOVE TO GO! I WANTED TO GO BACK OUT THERE THE DAY I GOT HEAR!
….Whys that?
There’s too many unnecessary rules hear you can’t do certain things hear. Unlike out there there’s no rules although, some rules are necessary like no killing I agree with that, but some like you have to get a job or jobs to get land and stuff I don’t agree with. I just haven’t gone out there by myself because I would need help I always had Steve help me throe out all my days until he left of course but I cant blame him do you know if anyone else is coming?
Yes Red Lighting is bringing 2 of his friends and I want to bring you and Ted.
What about Caroline?
This is her home she likes it hear. I know that for sure… Do you want to bring any of your friends?
Nah everyone I know pretty much loves this place.
Ok then, tomorrow night we’ll meet at town hall I got to go find Ted. (Later that day) I finally made it to the city gates.
Hey your Johnson right?
Yes I’m going to talk to ted I’ll be back later.
Ok he’s probably at his house you’ll see it because of all the lights.
After finally making it too the forest the moon is high in the sky I saw some lights deep into the forest just like he said. I finally find Teds cabin (I know it’s his because it says it on his door.) Nock! Nock!
Who’s there?
It’s me Johnson… remember? We met at the edge of the forest.
(He opens the door) AH YES! Please come in I was meaning to talk to you yesterday but didn’t find the time to do it.
Why did you want to talk to me?
I wanted to see how things are going for you. I don’t go into the village much; I like it out hear less people, better air quality, less noise, and what not.
I agree I’m actually going to leave in several days and I wanted to see if you would like to join me. After all you seem to wild more because you left the village quite fast, and well I’m going to need someone like you to help me out there once again. But it won’t be just me and you we’ll have a group of 6 including you and me so what do you say you in or out?
Day 79 morning: It didn’t even take him two seconds to say I’m in. Right now I’m heading to the library by the tine I got home last night Caroline was already asleep and when I woke up she was gone. Probably working like always… anyways I think I’m going to read Steve’s Journal when I leave this town. I did something else besides sleeping last night, I took apart The Mysterious Story of Herobrine, gave it a proper cover, and did the same with the other books.(Of course mine already had a proper cover. Remember how all the books were in one?) I’m going to give The Mysterious Story of Herobrine, to the library. That would probably help me feel as if I actually helped this town even if it’s just for information. (Not my journal of course.) I finally make it to the library and I see someone there waiting for me to open it. He had a large scar across his face making him only able to see out of 1 eye his eye was green by the way and he had a green cloche kind of funny if you ask me just like Lightning I walk over to open it and he says.
Hello Johnson you may not know me and I don’t know you personally but I do know you’re leaving this town… I want to leave with you… your probably wondering why I know your leaving.
Yea a little bit.
Simple I ease drop… a lot. You may have no reason to trust me but I know I can trust you. I herd you killed Gordon Freeman… He the very man who gave me this scare and he did it in the most cowardly way possible…. In my sleep. I woke up with a fierce pain in my eye and stabbed blindly. He got away.
…….What’s your name? Why do you want to leave? And give me 1 reason why I should trust you.
My name is Green Eyes… but now it’s Green Eye if you get my point. I would like to leave because I want to go on an adventure. I’ve been stuck in this town far too long, Nothing exciting go’s on hear. And why you can trust me? I got nothing… maybe it well help to know I’m a good shot with an arrow. Actually I can’t remember the last time I missed a shot.
…Come to the meeting and well see if they want you to come, but I have 1 more question…. WHY DO PEAPLE ALWAYS HAVE A COLOR IN THERE NAME? There’s Blue Penguin, Red lightning, now you who else?
….I have a friend named Black Light.
Day 79 Noon: Mr. Original just came in so we can change our work shifts.
Hello Johnson, you will receive your next pay check tomorrow when I come in, it will be larger than last time.
Thanks….. Question do I have to give you books I want to donate? or do I put them where they would belong? Because I have 2 books right hear I want the library to have.
Why that’s wonderful Johnson! You have to give them me to be approved and then I tell you if they are or not. And if there not I just give them back to you.
I give him the 2 books and he looks at the titles and says
Well the one about building is a no brainer its library approved. I’m going to read this other one…Herobrine eh? Iv herd of him but I don’t know much about him in fact I know nothing about him except his name.
It’s kind of creepy really I don’t know what category it would go in fiction or nonfiction.
Ill figure it out good day Johnson.
As soon as I head outside I see green eye with a bow and arrow pointing it in the sky.
Hello Johnson it’s about time you left work. Have you consider my offer of joining your team
I already told you, well see if my friends want you to or not. He fires the arrow.
When that arrow hits ground it will land on a presser plate causing it to activate a dispenser. The dispenser will give you a paper; it will have a symbol on it. Give it to Caroline the day you’re leaving and you’ll get what you wanted.
I never told you what I want.
You didn’t have to.
I look up at the roof and see the dispenser, it activates and sure enough a paper falls out, it looks like a man running with a chest. I look over where Green eye was earlier and see no one there. I don’t think he’s good with good byes either. I head over to town hall where we were to have are meeting. I’m sure Green eye is already in there. I just realized something… town hall has tons rooms and I don’t know witch room well have the meeting in. I head inside anyway and I see Green Eye talking to someone at the counter in the center of the room I try to over hear the conversation.
….Lightning rent a room.
Yes in room # 4 he said he didn’t know all who were coming to the meeting so let anyone enter. It says here the meeting will start when the moon is visible witch is in about 15 minuets.
Well thanks for the info ill just wait hear.
I head over to Green Eye to wait with him.
So what’s that symbol mean? All it is is a guy walking with a storage chest.
Like I said earlier give it to Caroline the day you leave no sooner no later understand?
Yea but that still doesn’t….sigh… never mind. I see Ted walk in and Lightning behind him. They walk over to us they clearly don’t know that there both here for the same thing until they both said“Hi Johnson.”
….So Green eye, you, Red Lightning, and me that’s 4 were the other 2?
Actually other 3… you see Green Eye wasn’t originally going to be with us but he managed to convince me….(I just realized my mistake when I said me but I didn’t try to correct myself) ClockWorkDreams still needs to get hear and Red Lightning’s friends too. Witch I still don’t know who they are.
Well let me tell you, their names are Nolan____ but we usually just call him Nolan and the other is named Yukari she is a bit… different than your regular Freelander. I brought her along because she’s a good fighter probably better then all of us
Humph. Red Lightning is it? No matter, she may be a good fighter witch I believe you, but I doubt she’s better than me with a bow. It not even funny how good I am, if you get a white wool block 65 blocks away no matter how low or high it is I guaranty you I will hit it every time. No one and I mean NO ONE is a better shot then me.
….I was just saying she’s a good fighter I was not insulting you.
Hey look its ClockWorks.
Hey Johnson! I see you made quite some friends I already know Ted, Red, you, but not this fine fellow what’s your name?
My name is Green eyes, but everyone calls me Green eye I think you can understand why.
…Yes I see
We start hearing several people come down the hall that just came out of room # 4.
You know what that means everyone; we can now have a proper meeting.
Do your 2 friends know where to be?
Yes I told…. Speak of the blaze rods, hear they come right now. Hey Nolan! Hey Yukari! Oh one more thing about Yukari she doesn’t speak often usually when import don’t ask me why she’s just quite like that.
if you want more pleas comment below and pleas you don't have tell tell my my grammar sucks)
well im writing more anyways weather you like it or not im just not going to post it till later btw i rewrote most of the beginning its a lot better then it was before and im on page 30
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I am personally okay with it. It looks good, but you could stand to study up on grammar a little. Or at least read a chapter from a longer book (that tends to help show where to put periods).
And I would like to see more, but less about the amount of coal & iron you mine. Instead of saying I found 3 coal, say I think I found enough coal for a dozen torches. That way you're slipping in numbers, but subconsciously.
I am personally okay with it. It looks good, but you could stand to study up on grammar a little. Or at least read a chapter from a longer book (that tends to help show where to put periods).
And I would like to see more, but less about the amount of coal & iron you mine. Instead of saying I found 3 coal, say I think I found enough coal for a dozen torches. That way you're slipping in numbers, but subconsciously.
~Pyro1997
thanks for the input ill see what i can do
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I hope you are willing to hear some constructive critiquing. You have a good idea for a story but it is flawed by your lack of grammar and punctuation. I can't work on the story line until the other issues are taken care of. Other people have commented on this. I truly believe if you get these issues taken care of, then the storyline will come through. I was only able to read a short part of your story and once I reached the long paragraphs, I lost interest.
Another suggestion is "Show, don't tell" the story. You start a lot of your sentences with "I...." and this gets boring to read. Google "Show don't tell" (use the quotes) and go read on how to do this, then come back to your story and evaluate every line. Take a creative writing class at your school.
Here are my suggestions for the first couple of paragraphs so you know what to be looking out for. Instead of just complaining I will show you my suggestions. Red highlighted words are my edits. Blue highlighted words are things I would change. Words in <> are my comments/suggestions.
Day 1 morning: I woke up this morning by a lake. I didn't know where I was or what happened in my past. The only things I knew was that my name was Johnson, and I knew how to build many things. You know I’m not really <Not sure if 'really' should be 'very' or not> concerned about my memory. although It would be nice but maybe it's better I don’t remember it. It doesn’t look like someone did this to me or anything but whatever. I realized foundI had strength beyond normal people. I punched down some trees to make some wooden planks and went to work. I was able to find found some sugar cane and make a book so. In my free time I will be writing write what goes on throe out throughout the day. It will help keep my sanity till i until I find some people. I’m going back to work now. "I need to collect more stones and wood for my house. I'll write more later.>
Day 3 sunset:
I grow fearsome of the night <Show, don't tell. Maybe use "My fears increase as night starts to fall." describe why the fears start. Maybe describe the past few nights>,throughout During the day I build and mine. The first night I was running from zombies, and skeletons with bows and arrows.
I took cover in <maybe use "escaped from theses monsters by running into"> a cave. only to be <<Maybe "Instead of finding safety, I almost found death as I was >almost killed by an explosion. I don't know what it was <Not sure what you are trying to say here. Maybe use "caused the explosion>but I don't know if I’ll make it <you are writing this paragraph on the third night, so you know you survived. Maybe use " but once I woke up, I found myself bloodied and bruised all over.> if I go out at night ever again. I grow more and more hungry throughout the day <Show don't tell. "I looked for food everywhere I went but my stomach was never satisfied until I butchered my first cow and cooked its meat over the fire.> but I was able to find a couple cows and now have a small farm. Every once in a while ill kill a cow for food. I can’t sleep at night but I made a bed today. Hopefully I will be able to can sleep as (the groaning zombies Groening and bone clanking skeletons don’t help me fall asleep.) I also made a house speaking of my house I better get in it the sun is setting. <Show don't tell. "I better get into my newly built house to escape the nightly monsters.">
Day 4 morning:
I slept really 'm not sure if 'really' or ''very' is better:)>well last night. I am refreshed and ready to take on the day. I am going to some nearby mountains manly because as at night I see a <flickering but stationary> light. I can only take some a couple of items things on my trip there so. I took a wooden sword, 64 wooden planks, my bed. and a couple other tools. I better go need to leave as I need as much time as i can get o almost forgot too kill all my cows for food. 'd leave this out as it doesn't seem to fit in very well. You are in a hurry to go and butchering takes a long time.>
Day 6 Sunset:
I’m at <Finally I reach> the bottom of the mountain. While on the way hear i got I found some cobblestone and made some better equipment. Each night I set up a temporary houses at night and run through During the day I run closer to the lights. I see these green sad things thour out the day <Show don't tell "I run past green sad looking monsters during the day.> sometimes but i know what they are i I call them creepers <why do you call them creepers?> they follow me and when they get close they hiss and blow up. Sometimes I hear music but i know it’s just my imagination. <At times I hear snatches of music, but could it be my imagination or the loneliness?> Better get started climbing the mountain now
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I hope this gives you some idea of the amount of editing you will need to do to get your story readable. Are you writing your story in MS Word or Google Docs? MS Word will show your spelling issues and grammar problems. Even this editor will red underline your spelling mistakes. It is a lot of work to do this type of proofreading and you need to learn how to do it yourself.
Writing is hard work to take a story idea, write it down then spend hours editing it.
I hope you are willing to hear some constructive critiquing. You have a good idea for a story but it is flawed by your lack of grammar and punctuation. I can't work on the story line until the other issues are taken care of. Other people have commented on this. I truly believe if you get these issues taken care of, then the storyline will come through. I was only able to read a short part of your story and once I reached the long paragraphs, I lost interest.
Another suggestion is "Show, don't tell" the story. You start a lot of your sentences with "I...." and this gets boring to read. Google "Show don't tell" (use the quotes) and go read on how to do this, then come back to your story and evaluate every line. Take a creative writing class at your school.
Here are my suggestions for the first couple of paragraphs so you know what to be looking out for. Instead of just complaining I will show you my suggestions. Red highlighted words are my edits. Blue highlighted words are things I would change. Words in <> are my comments/suggestions.
Day 1 morning: I woke up this morning by a lake. I didn't know where I was or what happened in my past. The only things I knew was that my name was Johnson, and I knew how to build many things. You know I’m not really <Not sure if 'really' should be 'very' or not> concerned about my memory. although It would be nice but maybe it's better I don’t remember it. It doesn’t look like someone did this to me or anything but whatever. I realized foundI had strength beyond normal people. I punched down some trees to make some wooden planks and went to work. I was able to find found some sugar cane and make a book so. In my free time I will be writing write what goes on throe out throughout the day. It will help keep my sanity till i until I find some people. I’m going back to work now. "I need to collect more stones and wood for my house. I'll write more later.>
Day 3 sunset:
I grow fearsome of the night <Show, don't tell. Maybe use "My fears increase as night starts to fall." describe why the fears start. Maybe describe the past few nights>,throughout During the day I build and mine. The first night I was running from zombies, and skeletons with bows and arrows.
I took cover in <maybe use "escaped from theses monsters by running into"> a cave. only to be <<Maybe "Instead of finding safety, I almost found death as I was >almost killed by an explosion. I don't know what it was <Not sure what you are trying to say here. Maybe use "caused the explosion>but I don't know if I’ll make it <you are writing this paragraph on the third night, so you know you survived. Maybe use " but once I woke up, I found myself bloodied and bruised all over.> if I go out at night ever again. I grow more and more hungry throughout the day <Show don't tell. "I looked for food everywhere I went but my stomach was never satisfied until I butchered my first cow and cooked its meat over the fire.> but I was able to find a couple cows and now have a small farm. Every once in a while ill kill a cow for food. I can’t sleep at night but I made a bed today. Hopefully I will be able to can sleep as (the groaning zombies Groening and bone clanking skeletons don’t help me fall asleep.) I also made a house speaking of my house I better get in it the sun is setting. <Show don't tell. "I better get into my newly built house to escape the nightly monsters.">
Day 4 morning:
I slept really 'm not sure if 'really' or ''very' is better:)>well last night. I am refreshed and ready to take on the day. I am going to some nearby mountains manly because as at night I see a <flickering but stationary> light. I can only take some a couple of items things on my trip there so. I took a wooden sword, 64 wooden planks, my bed. and a couple other tools. I better go need to leave as I need as much time as i can get o almost forgot too kill all my cows for food. 'd leave this out as it doesn't seem to fit in very well. You are in a hurry to go and butchering takes a long time.>
Day 6 Sunset:
I’m at <Finally I reach> the bottom of the mountain. While on the way hear i got I found some cobblestone and made some better equipment. Each night I set up a temporary houses at night and run through During the day I run closer to the lights. I see these green sad things thour out the day <Show don't tell "I run past green sad looking monsters during the day.> sometimes but i know what they are i I call them creepers <why do you call them creepers?> they follow me and when they get close they hiss and blow up. Sometimes I hear music but i know it’s just my imagination. <At times I hear snatches of music, but could it be my imagination or the loneliness?> Better get started climbing the mountain now
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I hope this gives you some idea of the amount of editing you will need to do to get your story readable. Are you writing your story in MS Word or Google Docs? MS Word will show your spelling issues and grammar problems. Even this editor will red underline your spelling mistakes. It is a lot of work to do this type of proofreading and you need to learn how to do it yourself.
Writing is hard work to take a story idea, write it down then spend hours editing it.
Good luck.
i appreciated the work you put in on my story you helped me fix quite a bit im using Microsoft word
and i learned MS word is not always correct sometimes it makes no since whatsoever but also eventluy people start talking i will have purpose errors because the way they talk is usely never perfect just like regular peaple
thank ypu fpr spending mucth time into the comment i really aprecte your sugestions i wil write later currently im short of time
ok than you so much for this info i will adjust what needs to be adjusted i highly appreciated that your not just like other people and say it sucks or something like that
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Very good story! About those first two replies people made, yes the grammar needed some work but those were mean things to say. Just ignore comments like that and don't let them discourage you!
Very good story! About those first two replies people made, yes the grammar needed some work but those were mean things to say. Just ignore comments like that and don't let them discourage you!
thanks
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To be honest, although I haven't read much of the story yet from writing, to put it bluntly, it does not interest me. In the beginning, there is nothing that catches my eye, that makes me feel like this is different from all the other minecraft fanfics out there. I tire of seeing the same, "Wake up in the middle of nowhere, get your bearings, punch some wood, etc" exposition. Although I do understand that your story has to start somewhere, but spice things up a little. Give me a reason to care about your character, or your plot. Your character doesn't have any striking personality in the first few paragraphs. That's another thing that really puts me down.
The biggest thing that puts me off is the lack of commas in your story. As I read, I feel like I am Yahzee, from the aptly named Zero Punctuation. Just-talking-very-rapidly-without-any-stops-or-taking-any-breaths-until-I-feel-like-I'm-suffocating-and-I-must-stop-and-realize-how-stupid-it-is-reading-like-this. There isn't much left to say about this, since there are plenty of people who stated it already.
Also, scrolling down your story, I notice that you start writing like Johnson is writing right at the same time he's doing these things. Your journal never had an after-the-action/apocalypse log-type feeling to them, and that's the purpose of a journal. You also never bother to describe the scenery. Minecraft is famous for it's jaw-dropping views. Don't just skip them. Slow down a moment and describe a few things, to help the reader visualize (but don't over-do this.)
You have a lot a head of you, but the best thing I have to tip my hat towards you is how much you've written. Congrats.
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[12:41] Coffeeeeeee!
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[16:29] "And lo, the tacos were delicious"
To be honest, although I haven't read much of the story yet from writing, to put it bluntly, it does not interest me. In the beginning, there is nothing that catches my eye, that makes me feel like this is different from all the other minecraft fanfics out there. I tire of seeing the same, "Wake up in the middle of nowhere, get your bearings, punch some wood, etc" exposition. Although I do understand that your story has to start somewhere, but spice things up a little. Give me a reason to care about your character, or your plot. Your character doesn't have any striking personality in the first few paragraphs. That's another thing that really puts me down.
The biggest thing that puts me off is the lack of commas in your story. As I read, I feel like I am Yahzee, from the aptly named Zero Punctuation. Just-talking-very-rapidly-without-any-stops-or-taking-any-breaths-until-I-feel-like-I'm-suffocating-and-I-must-stop-and-realize-how-stupid-it-is-reading-like-this. There isn't much left to say about this, since there are plenty of people who stated it already.
Also, scrolling down your story, I notice that you start writing like Johnson is writing right at the same time he's doing these things. Your journal never had an after-the-action/apocalypse log-type feeling to them, and that's the purpose of a journal. You also never bother to describe the scenery. Minecraft is famous for it's jaw-dropping views. Don't just skip them. Slow down a moment and describe a few things, to help the reader visualize (but don't over-do this.)
You have a lot a head of you, but the best thing I have to tip my hat towards you is how much you've written. Congrats.
i thank you for your feedback expecaly the scenery part you reminded me to make my charitor chill and tell the surrounding there is not necessarily a plot to it but survival most journals dot evin have plots i read books quite often around 500 every year (thats basically what got me motivated to wright) and remember i am constantly changing the story grammar fixes and story changes so reread it in a week or so and you might see some major changes your looking for
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no new comments. I NEED YOUR FEEDBACK!!!!! am i getting better as you read worse or what have anyone read the hole thing yet (still righting) do you like or dislike? ext
The first way to improve your grammar is to always type like you're writing an essay worth 30% of your final grade, and expect your teacher to read your posts/story, and then give you a D- and a "See me" note on grammar. Not only people will respect you more, it will make your story much better, and your posts much more readable!
Even on the Internet, at least take the time to type with proper grammar, spelling and punctuation. The results are much, much, much more worth it.
Every story worth reading should have a plot. Or at least a conflict. With most minecraft stories, the expected conflict would be the Man vs. Enviroment one.
Also, may I suggest to you enrolling in a writing or grammar class? I did that last year, and it did improve my writing. You don't have to go to a Creative Writing class, any writing class will do. I'm sure that there are some in your school, or you could ask your teacher to give you pointers, or even better: printing out your story and showing it to your teacher to be proof-read. I did that with my story, and I got a lot of great suggestions and pointers. (It helped that my teacher is an award-winning journalist.)
If you typed up your story straight into the forum, just highlight it all, and either right-click and click on the "copy" in the drop down menu, or just use the short cut, Ctrl+C (Holding down the Ctrl button no the bottom corners on your keyboard, and then pressing "C"), and then pasting it in a word program.
And while you're doing that, you should type up your story in Microsoft Word, since not only it catches mistakes, but also grammar mistakes. (Although I wouldn't rely on it too much.)
The first way to improve your grammar is to always type like you're writing an essay worth 30% of your final grade, and expect your teacher to read your posts/story, and then give you a D- and a "See me" note on grammar. Not only people will respect you more, it will make your story much better, and your posts much more readable!
Even on the Internet, at least take the time to type with proper grammar, spelling and punctuation. The results are much, much, much more worth it.
Every story worth reading should have a plot. Or at least a conflict. With most minecraft stories, the expected conflict would be the Man vs. Enviroment one.
Also, may I suggest to you enrolling in a writing or grammar class? I did that last year, and it did improve my writing. You don't have to go to a Creative Writing class, any writing class will do. I'm sure that there are some in your school, or you could ask your teacher to give you pointers, or even better: printing out your story and showing it to your teacher to be proof-read. I did that with my story, and I got a lot of great suggestions and pointers. (It helped that my teacher is an award-winning journalist.)
If you typed up your story straight into the forum, just highlight it all, and either right-click and click on the "copy" in the drop down menu, or just use the short cut, Ctrl+C (Holding down the Ctrl button no the bottom corners on your keyboard, and then pressing "C"), and then pasting it in a word program.
And while you're doing that, you should type up your story in Microsoft Word, since not only it catches mistakes, but also grammar mistakes. (Although I wouldn't rely on it too much.)
i thank you for your suggestions i was actually was going to give the paper to my grammar teacher but school is out for a while
and i am using micro soft word i haven't updated in a while because my computers internet was down (bad weather) its actually about to rain right now
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Johnson’s journal
Made by: Zachary M. Criswell
Edited by: ______________
A MineCraft story
Day 1 morning: Where am I? What happened? Who am I? My name is Johnson OK, I got this, I’m by a lake I don’t know where I was partially but it will have to do for now. I can’t remember anything that happened in my past. I only knew my name is Johnson and I know how to build many things, plus I know the English writing system…but I don’t think that counts as past memory, I don’t even know exactly what that is. I really have no idea why i could be hear, but I doubt someone did this to me but whatever. I have bigger problems on my mind. I knew I needed wood. I realized I had strength beyond normal people after I punched down some trees to make some wooden planks. I found some sugar cane and made this book so in my free time I will be writing what goes on throughout the day it will help keep my sanity until I find some people. I’m going back to work now I need more materials if I want a home.
Day 3 sunset: I grow fearsome as night approaches, throughout the day I build and mine. But at night I can’t do anything but run from zombies, and skeletons with bows and arrows. The first night I took cover in a cave only to be almost killed by an explosion. I don't know what it was but I don't know if I’d make it if I didn’t get my house built. It was made of cobble stone and wood I was going to make it dirt but it would have been too weak. I grow more and more hungry throughout the day but I was able to find a couple cows and now have a small farm. Every once in a while I’ll kill a cow for food. I can’t sleep at night but I made a bed today hopefully I will be able to sleep (the zombie groanning and the skeleton’s bone clanking don’t help) I look at the sunset and realize it’s beautiful. I look around at the scenery, the trees are lush with green the mountains in the distance are over powering with size and the water is calm maybe I can get used to this place. Night is hear I better get inside my house I can hear zombies.
Day 4 morning: I slept really well last night I am refreshed and ready to take on the day I am going to nearby mountains. at night I see light in the mountains not a bright but it is clearly visible I can only take a couple items on my trip there so I took a wooden sword 64 wooden planks my bed and a couple other tools I better go I need as much time as I can get. But before I go I will need to let some of my cows free and kills some too.
Day 6 sunset: I’m finally reached the bottom of the mountain it looks even larger than it did before. Up top most be a breath taking view. While on the way hear i got some cobble stone and made some better equipment. I set up temporary houses at night and run through the day closer to the lights. I sometimes see green monsters they appear sad and look as if they want a hug but I know what they are. I call them creepers they follow me and when they get close they hiss and blow up. Every once in a while I hear some music is it my imagination of just loneness taking over.
Day 6 night: I made it to the village. But its abandoned I just wondered around a bit they had about 4 homes all small thou. I see a lot of gardens but most of it is destroyed they also had a library but the righting was unreadable but the black smith building was probably the best it had lava a furnace and some more stuff but I didn’t go inside because it was getting dark I just went to one of the houses to sleep in for now.
Day 7 morning: I wake up and look out unto the sunset and see the best scenery that I’ve ever seen and will ever see. The trees with their broad branches, the sunrise coolers of orange, yellow, purple, and blue, The clouds moving slowly, the animals rooming freely and the peaceful environment today is going to be a good day I can already tell.
Day 7 evening: It’s going to be easy living now but I’ll just have to keep writing till I do find some people I saw the inside of the black smith finally good thing too there was a chest with iron boots, iron helm, and 2 apples. That’s the best find since coal on the side of the mountain I didn’t even mine it. But I think it’s about time I start mining to get some ores so I better get started if I want to have a mine.
Day 11 night: it’s been so long since I’ve written anything it makes me feel good when I do. The reason why I haven’t written in a while is just because I’m so busy mining in stuff. I’ll catch you up on the past few days the first day in mining I was able to get 6 coals and ate my 2 apples but I made 16 torches and the other 2 coal for my stove. I fond 2 iron too. The second day of mining I found 3 iron and made a iron pix. Day 3 I found 7 coal, 5 iron, and 2 gold but gold breaks pretty easily I made a sword with it and its already breaking just after killing 2 spiders. I can feel the pressure of the air as I get deeper into my mine it feels good to not only see my hard work but to feel it day 4 and 5 I found nothing today I build an iron sword and killed a creeper I almost blew up in the process I picked up some gun powder I would say 3 handfuls I will make some kind of explosive with it hopefully I will right again tomorrow I hear some zombies I’m going to use the gold sword it may break really soon but it sure is sharp.
Day 13 morning: last night was a good fight I killed 3 zombies and 1 skeleton and a spider I got 2 string, rotten flesh, and 2 bones the sword broke after the 3rd kill but I had my iron sword with me the really bad thing was that my armor broke but I’ll get more in the future... Hopefully. I’m going to explore the top of the mountain a bit hopefully to find a lake so I can go fishing I made a fishing rod with the string I got. Its rather large mountain top ill need a map so I don’t get lost.
Day 15 afternoon: I was lucky I found 2 lakes a forest 2 waterfalls on the side of the mountain (it just looks pretty cool) and a cave this mountain is huge I caught fish till my line broke I got a total of 21 fish I cooked them all and… wait… what’s that… I think I see someone outside… YES! I DO! There coming up the mountain one second….HEY UP HEAR OVER HEAR!!!! Ok he knows I’m hear he has some kind of blue glowing armor it looks like… no that can’t be right but… can it.. Well anyway it looks to be made of… diamonds… if so I hope he’s friendly I write later I’m going to meet him now.
Day 15 night: Today was awesome! The guy that was climbing the mountain did have diamond armor. His name is creeper killer kind of funny in a way too but I don’t think that’s his real name probably just some nick name. He has big blue eyes and green hair. I can’t see what he’s wearing behind all the armor thou. Anyway he has this thing called a enchantment table it makes armor, tools, and weapons more powerful I was only able to make a lv 3 upgrade whatever that means but now when I hit anything they catch on fire and the best part is I no longer have a stone sword but a diamond sword he also gave me a few other things a just what I wanted a map (I already explored most of the top of the mountain) leather helm, leather boots, leather chest plate and leather pants not much defense but it will do for now.
Day 16 morning: ah it’s a beautiful morning the smell of burning skeletons and zombies it’s wonderful. Creeper killer is going to the mine too make it deeper and wider he said he will give me 50% of what he finds I hope he’s being honest but he’s nice enough so I assume that he’s telling the truth. I’m going to build on to my/our house I built 2 beds a second floor and have windows now.
Day 16 afternoon: I hope he comes back soon it’s almost sunset. I finished the second floor of the house its turning out quite nicely I have some seeds from clearing out the ground from my house I think I’m going to make a farm then I could use the bone I got from skeletons and turn it to bone meal for fertilization.
Day 16 night: ok now I’m worried he said he would be back before sunset .I just felt like he died I have a feeling he got shot by a skeleton and fell in lava he’s in the cave so I haven’t explored it yet only the entrance but I’m going to see if I can find his stuff and use it before it gets taken, moved or something along those lines. I know it’s cruel but this is not a game… this is a fight for survival
Day 17 morning: I wake up tired and grumpy the sun isn’t up yet I don’t see anything that would wake me up there are no annoying monsters or anything along the sort that I can hear at least. But i might as well go out early I need to find creeper killer or at least his stuff but for now I’m going to look around the house to see what woke me. ok I’m back I saw something out there … it was black, tall, and its holding a block of stone it’s just staring at me watching me… Hu it’s gone…. That thing looks dangerous ill just wait in hear till sunrise… hey I’ve been thinking about a new way to wright I can tell you what happens in battle but and write at the same time well not exactly writing but I’m just going to start doing that its complicated I can do things even that surprise myself but it will still be like a journal. You know what never mind you’ll experience it shortly
Day 17 time unknown: I could really use a watch right now I’m looking for creeper killer’s stuff or at least his body wait what’s that SSSssssSSS CREEPER!!! SLASH! BOOM! Arghhh! Stupid suicidal creepers. WHAT GOOD ARE YOU TOO THE WORLD! I’m in pain if I had 10 hearts I’d say I just lost 5 ow that hurts I need some food o good I brought some fish NOM NOM NOM NOM…. ah much better. O there’s his stuff its by lava most of his stuff is gone or melted i can only scavenge iron boots, iron helm… Waite a second if he had diamond armor then why didn’t he give me the iron armor… I’m just going to guess he made it down hear. There are also 136 stone blocks, plus 3 dispensers or something? And… what is this? Wait its A CLOCK! I didn’t know he had a clock it’s made of gold right now it’s in the evening I better head up before it gets too late.
Day 18 morning: it’s one of those… things ... I don’t know what to call them but this time there’s 3. I’m going to see if there hostile they don’t seem to mind let me get a closer look AGHHH my back! Slash slash slash BURN!! DIE BY BURNING!! 1 down ahhh BAM! My face! I must get inside BAM! ARGH! Almost there SMAK TAKE THAT BLACKY! Made it! Slash! NOW YOU BURN… ok he’s dead too I’m inside now there too tall to get in next time I’m not going to look at them ok I’m going to use the 8 hart scenario from now on I would day I got a heart and a half luckily I’m healing it seems if I’m full I heal.. Huh? What’s that I see those things drop something I quickly go and get them. I’m just going to build some things hopefully that thing won’t came back and try to kill me.
Day 19 evening: Well I was really busy the past 2 days and built some things I built 3 towers that shoot arrows a dock for fishing and a path from tower to tower to house its starting to look like a permeate home I’m very proud of my work speaking of it I’m headed to my first tower ill call it alpha the nearest to my house it about 6x taller it’s made of cobble stone the second one in between the other 2 towers is called omega it’s about 3x my height and made of stone and the fareset one from my home is called delta it’s made of wood and 4x my height I’m actually in it right now the view is amazing I can see a jungle to my east a desert to my west an ocean to my back point close to where I woke up. It feels so long ago since I’ve been there makes me sad to think about all that’s happened here in the past few days. O I forgot to mention all the town houses are destroyed due to issues with some need for wood. (Not like it matters no one lived there) Well I’m going to bed now.
Day 21 morning: I’m in alpha tower I was going to see if I can find any creepers and the tall black things I’ll come with a name soon enough wait what’s that is that… HEY HEY OVER HEAR!! I see a grope of 3 people! HEY OVER HEAR! they can’t hear me but they see the tower and there on their way I can’t get a good look at them there too far away but they should be hear by sun down. I should build a large light house so people can find me and perhaps an easy way to get up the mountain you know I’m going to get started on that right now…
Day 21 night: well there still not up hear there about half way up the mountain. I finished my light house it’s probably about 13x my height you can see it for miles and on the top I have 5 torches if they didn’t see my tower earlier they defiantly do now I’m going to shoot some monsters in delta I can defend the survives from that angle as well.
Day 22 morning: they have just arrived they don’t look like that have many materials no armor but I think one has wool the other 2 just have a little bit of wood.
Hey you made it!
Yeah we saw you up there at first we thought you were shooting at us then we saw that living dynamite thing.
O that? I call it a creeper.
Sounds reasonable what’s your name?
Johnson…. Yours?
Blue penguin but you can call me blue this is Wheatly, and that’s Elis
Blue Penguin had Blue hair, blue eyes, blue shirt, blue pants, and blue shoes I could see why he was called Blue. I also noticed he was vary pale. You got a leader of this grope?
Yeah that would be me.
Yeah but we usually call him Blue.
Elis we know I already told him that.
Elis had overalls, leather boots, and dark brown hair cut short. He was quite tan.
Sooo you want to look around if we’re going to have 4 people we will need 2 more beds.
Well I have 4 wool so if you got any sheep up hear we can shear them and make the 2 beds we need.
Wheatly go with Johnson hear and sheer some sheep me and Elis will explore a bit same place at sun set sound good?
I agree with that. Wheatly had a light green torn up shirt, and light brown shorts plus no shoes.
Day 22 sun set: Well glad to see where all hear in one peace
Well Johnson you got a nice place up hear ya do you know it would be better if you had some kind of thing to shoot mobs so you can live easily like you know with like arrows and like…
Elis… shut up.
Well that’s rather rude.
So was “accidently” setting our house on fire?
Hey I didn’t know it was going to burn.
Of course you didn’t.
Well guys I got the wool I notice Wheatly doesn’t talk much in fact he hasn’t said a word since he’s got hear...
Yeah he’s rather quite like that the only thing we can get from him is his name.
Well nights coming lets go to bed.
Day 23: evening: Blue’s mining looking for gold and iron Elis is getting wood, seeds, and other things like that. Wheatly well I don’t know what he’s doing I think he building something out of… what is that... Wheatly... what is that it looks like an entrance or a gate for something what is it made out of anyway? …..No answer…OK.
Flint and iron.
Ok well I’ll give you only 1 iron we only have 4 in total you know were low on ores I gave him the materials and he made some kind of device that would catch things on fire… ill just call it flint and steal.
Sooo what is that thing supp AHHSHAKLASHARA WHAT THE HECK DID THAT JUST DO!?!?
Portal to nether don’t go in.
You don’t have to tell me twice those things creepy. It appears you’ve been around a while. You know a bit about this space more than your average Joe but why don’t you have many material’s like cree… sigh never mind.
Day 25 evening: well I told Elis and blue not to go in the portal till were ready not much is being accomplished except know we got a farm Elis is doing most of the work we keep mining but are only able to find iron and coal but know we all have iron boots and iron helms but today I’m the one who’s going to mine. iv came across a couple caves on the way down but blue said he already got all ores from them well hopefully ill come across something soon I only have 2 stone pix axes left and I don’t like using my iron one I want to keep it for as long as… DIMONDS!!!! I CANT BELIVE IT DIMONDS…… o umm I guess I was wrong it was red powdery stuff there’s more so might as well get the rest.
Day 26 night: Wheatly and Blue are outside building something with the red stone dust I gave them apparently Wheatly knows how to build a way to light up the night. (His exact words were Redstone pleas I will put it too good use for night it makes light.) that was the biggest thing I’ve ever hear Wheatly say and so far all I can see are some sort of red blocks they keep going underneath them and them adjusting the block placement. But anyway Blue is defending Wheatly in case some monsters come by.
Day 27 evening: Well while I mine they keep building the light thingy. Any way Elis said diamonds are blue I thought so because creeper kill had blue armor…. Sigh I’ll never get over his death…
Day 27 approaching sunset: I FOUND DIMONDS!!!!!! I got a total of 5. I’m going to build a diamond pickaxe and another diamond sword for Wheatly. I’m heading back up the mine right now so I can build these right away.
Day 27 night: well I’m headed to the house which is where everyone one is at right now. CLONCK! AHHH SKELITON! This is why I need a bow! HOLY CRAP ITS RIDEING A SPIDER! I must make it too the house CLONK! YOU DON’T KNOW HOW TO SHO CLINK! ARGH! Almost their Doors open! I can make HA I’m inside now he’s locked out and I’m safe… for now. At least hmmm I wonder where everyone’s at anyway… Wheatly… Elis… Blue!!
Where up here! We’d like you to meet someone her names Caroline!
Day 28 morning: Well last night I could say was quite the talk. Caroline apparently has all iron armor diamond sword diamond pix, and some disks for music with a music box. She has rather an interest for… well how do I say this… griefer hunting… apparently griefors are people who kill others take their things destroy their homes and other things like that. People like that I would not call them people but rather viscous animals, and I will help with my best ability to help her on her quest to kill a particular griefor. His name is Gordon freeman but he usually goes by freeman. but here’s the thing he’s on his way hear he saw out light house.
Day 29 evening: so you’ve been to the nether before?
Yes.
What’s it like?
Just so it doesn’t surprise you its pretty much hell if there wasn’t a way out.
Harsh.
So Caroline when is Wheatly going to get? Here you said he’d be hear 5 minutes ago.
I’m not Wheatly. All I know is that he will be hear and we will go in the nether find a castle. and kill some blaze rods.
Well I already knew that…. How did you get up the mountain so fast anyway?
….I have my ways.
Of course you do.
Wheatly finally starts approaching us. Good, you made it what took you so long anyway? You were supposed to be hear 5 minutes ago… ready to go in the nether…. I’ll take that as a yes.
AHHSHAKLASHARA!
The Nether realm: HOLY DIMONDS…this really is hell this place is creepy
Yeah most people say that…. hey look where in luck a castle.
What is all this red stuff anyway?
Nether rack it burns forever and breaks easily there is some bright lights as well called glow stone there pretty cool.
Yeah I saw some of that.
When do you think Elis, and blue are going to finish that light thing? I haven’t seen it on nor have I’ve seen them work on it.
Well I saw it and it works. It’s just we been preparing for the griefer and all they forgot to show you. Maybe they’ll show you when we get back.
Sounds good. So what’s with all those pigs things they looks deadly but they just oink and stand around
Those are zombies pigs hurt one they all try to kill you that is why I don’t touch them.
We walk for a while then we hear this crying noise.
RUN!
We see a big white ghost it had wrinkles and it was crying then it opend its red eyes and shot a fire bal right at us.
HARE!
LOOK OUT!
BOOM!
WHAT IS THAT THING!
GAST!
ALMOST THERE!
HARE!
Wheatly take out his word and jumps right where the fireball is headed Wheatly what are you doing?!?!
SMAK!
What the… BOOM...
So hit the fire ball of death and it hit the Gast Square in the face.… Nice hit. Hey looks like were hear.
How do we get in just break some of the stone?
Precisely.
After running around trying to find blaze rods and every once in a while collecting nether warts. (Wheatly said will be used when new get the potion creator.) We finally found them the blazes but it was worse than just a couple blazes it was a blaze spawner.
Wheatly you destroy the spawner me and Caroline will defend you. Let’s go!
HUUR HARE HEER
Fire balls!
BOOM BOOM BOOM!
WHEATLY GET TO SPAWNER!
I take out my bow and shoot 1 it in face 3 times. Clink! Clonk! Clank! CAROLINE TAKE THE ONE IN THE BACK!
HE CAN FLY?!?
Well… WHAT DOSE IT LOOK LIKE!
I try to take out anther arrow but it seems I ran out. IM OUT OF AROOWS!
Wheatly made it to the spawner and is destroying it now. He then takes out several arrows and throws them to me. I pull my bow far back and shoot the 1 I shot early in the stomach. Arhhh! 1 DWON! MORE FIRE BALLS! HUU! BOOM! CAROLINE TAKE COVER! ILL TAKE EM FROM HEAR! Wheatly just broke the spawner. I shoot the last one 4 times in the stomach dodging a fire ball while at it. YES! WE DID IT! Anyone hurt?
Were all good.
Hey look 5 blaze rods perfect just what we came for. Now let’s get the nether out of here.
Later in the nether: Were near the nether portal so far no encounters of gast, zombie pigmen just stand with their golden swords, we stay clear of possibilities of falling in lava. What is that enchantment table require? Experience from what you kill right?
Yea pretty much.
Well them… let’s get some. ATTACKE THE PIGMEN!!! Well when get close enough of course there tons right by the teleporter out of here. We’ll have a fight over there (45 seconds later) ATTACKE!! Now that I just hit one in the face with my sword they all start trying to kill me. But the one I hit it caught on fire but fire doesn’t affect these pigs. Looks like we have to go old school. BRUTE FORCE. Smack! Slash! Slice! Woops there goes your head…. Awww slash! Did you lose an arm… yea you did. BAM! Missing legs much? SLASH! SMAK! How’s your limbs been lately? Missing? Such a shame. Well we made it to the portal… Witch was rather interesting you could say. Now like I said last time let’s get the nether out of here.
Day 31 morning: Apparently we were gone a day and a half. (we came back in the middle of the night) after we got back inside we built the potion brewer and cauldron which holds water for glass bottles which are used for potions. Elis and Blue found some iron in the mine enough for everyone to have iron chest plates, and iron leggings which mean I have full iron armor and only blue, Elis, and Wheatly need more armor.
Day 32 night: Well Johnson let me show you how this works. See that lever?
Yea.
Pull it and that’s how it works.
Elis is showing me how the light thing works because I haven’t seen it yet. I pull the lever and 1 by one these blocks light up. It keeps getting brighter and brighter lighting up the night. Now easily seeing things. My path, towers, and home it looks amazing. Usually I try to stay inside at night but I actually feel comfortable now.
It looks pretty cool…. ok never mind it looks really cool.
That’s what most people say.
You do know that there are only 5 people including you, and Wheatly probably didn’t even say anything and blue helped build it so he probably didn’t mention it ether, and Caroline is not one know for too much of appertain. So I think I’m the only one who said it.
…..well perhaps that may be true but most people think it.
You know what… Never mind I’m just going to bed
Goo nigh
Whatever.
Day 33 Morning: we wake up seeing someone running away while the smell of smoke in our lungs.
FIREE!! FIREEE!!!! COUGH COUGH FIREEE!!!!
ELIS GET THE BUCKETS OF WATER GET RID OF THE FIRE! JHONSON CUT THE FIRE SHORT FROM THE REST OF THE HOUSE! CAOLINE GET YOUR SWORD COME WITH ME WE GOING TO TRACK HIM DOWN BEFOR HE MAKES MORE TROBLE!
Caroline, and Blue run out of the house while Elis poured water on the fire. I quickly try to destroy blocks leading to other parts of the house, the fire was quickly growing but Elis managed to get to the top floor and pore tons of water all over the fire getting about 90% of it while I managed to get the rest. we quickly start rebuilding the house. We checked if anything was stolen. Luckily nothing was so we decided to help track down Freeman. I forgot about him… That’s probably why he managed to get through easily.
Where do you think he went?
Probably to the lake to hide.
What makes you so sure?
Well there’s lots of dirt mounts he can hide in those.
Ok then let’s go.
We get there quickly and sure enough we saw him digging a hole but we didn’t see Blue or Caroline anywhere. We got to the hole and he finally noticed us and we had him surrounded, sword and bucket of water ready.
So freeman going to tell us what happened to those that were following you?
They got caught up in a fight with some ender men.
Tell me why you do what you do.
Entertainment!!! My dear friend ENTERTAINMENT! What’s life for without entertainment?
I can name several. 1. Accomplishments 2.Amazing scenery 3.Cleaning this place of people like you.
Well before you kill me let me tell you something……. Creeper.
What? SSSSssssSSSS BOOM!
ARGHHH!! ILL KILL YOU! Get him!
I take out my bow and aim for his legs FLING! BANG!
ARRRR!!!
He keeps running. This time no mercy. I aim for his neck. FLING! BANG!
ARGHHH!!!
I quickly catch up with Elis to see Freeman at his dyeing breath.
If you ever become like me always remember STAB!
I will never be like you swine.
Day 34 morning: We find Caroline and Blue picking up some stuff from the dead ender man
What’s that?
Ender pearls…. you killed him Johnson didn’t you?
Yes.
So the Freeman is dead well if that’s the case there’s no use in following me take this.
Wait what? Where are you going?
Just take this and let me go. I must find and kill more griefers like him.
She takes out an ender pearl and throws it far away from the mountain.
Good bye… VOOM!
SHES GONE!
Holy diamond blocks! Where did she go?
Over there where she threw the ender Perl. They must make you teleport. Do you see her?
Yes…Like She said there’s no use in following her…. Might as well listen she’s got things to do on her own I wish her luck She gave me 2 ender pearls and an ender eye I guess we just live on without her then.
That would be so Johnson. Well then who wants to find out what we can do with those ender eyes?
Day 34 evening: Today Wheatly, and Blue are going to mess with the brewing stand all day while me, and Elis mine for diamonds. We got a long day ahead of us but what we are going to try to do is get 94 diamonds. We plan on making armor and swords but I already have a diamond sword so you can do the math 22 diamonds for a full diamond set of armor and 2 for a sword witch makes a total of 94 well then, better get started.
Day 36 night: Well we have been mining 2 days trait and well I am tired… very very tired we packed plenty of food but I need sleep. We found 25 diamonds so far. Elis has got a full set of diamond armor. We keep mining luckily we haven’t run into problems yet. here’s how we mine Elis mines on top of bedrock while I get 2 layers above Elis it works out quite fine finds some diamonds every once in a while. The sun is rising were going to head back up to meet with Wheatly and Blue.
Day 37 morning: Wheatly and Blue have made so many healing potions, and poison potions its maddening (that or all the aromas from the potions are getting to me.)If you throw the poison at them they continuously get hurt. The healing potions give you extra strength, make you heal faster, move faster, or become stronger and even more. Yet there still making more but for now I got to get stocked up on bread and meat so I can mine some more.
Day 37 night: well I found some more diamonds we have a total of 36 out of 94 more than a 3rd already wait what’s that noise …. Slop…. Slip…. slat… slop…. It’s coming from the right... it getting louder SLIP… SLAT… SLOP… it sounds like a giant Blob of slime that HOLY GRAVITY NOT WORKING! IT IS A BIG BLOB OF SLIME! I quickly ready my sword to attack it coming closer SLASH! SLASH! It fell into 4 more slimes ARGHH TO MANY OF THEM SLAH SLAH SLAH (5 minutes later after making slimes split in half and finally killing them all) well that was… surprising you could say. I got a bunch of balls of slime and I found an abounded mine craft with no monster spawner witch blue warned me about looks like it already been explored but let me check these chests any way……HOLY PORK CHOPS…. DIMOND ARMOR AND DIMOND WEPONS!!!..... ITS BUITFUL... I must get up to ground NOW! There was a full set of diamond armor 2 swords (diamond of course) and best of all 3 bows with 192 arrows this guy must have been a skeleton killing master that or just kills chickens a lot and finds flint often… either way there mine now.
Day 38 morning: I’m right about to get inside to tell everyone my find. Even Elis doesn’t know.
Hey guys we found 18 diamonds!
Really? That’s not what that abandoned mineshaft gave me.
What? You found a mineshaft?
WITH 2 SETS OF DIMONDS ARMOR! And 192 arrows plus some diamond sword and 3 bows must have forgotten to mention on the way up hear.
YA THINK?
No I know I forgot. Actually I purposely didn’t tell you it was basically a surprise.
Well that’s good Johnson now we all can have diamond armor and weapons. So blue and Wheatly are those potions at their best?
Yes very so.
So are we heading to the end soon?
Well yes but first you Johnson will find it and come back hear it could be really far out so you’ll have food torches lots of cobble stone for temporary homes and what not.
Why me?
Because you learn the fastest.
Ok. Simple enough.
Tomorrow I’m going to show you how the ender eye works and the ender pearls.
Ok sounds good but what do we do for now?
Practice with a bow.
Day 38 night: Well we shot all the arrows at least twice and my arm is now killing me. We used a block of wool for the targets, we placed them all over the place on the mountain and at the bottom too by the end I hit every target and was hitting them with ease. It’s like playing note blocks hard at first and gets easier over time. The reason I mentioned note blocks is because Blue made some note blocks and started placing them everywhere and some red stone dust too and by the end he had this little jingle thing going. Whenever of us hit the target he would pull the lever and some music would come on for a little bit at first it sounded really dumb but he kept changing the notes and over time become better and better. After the 8th time he changed it, it sounded really good and he stopped changing it. He also shot a few himself but he never missed unlike everyone else who missed every once in a while even Wheatly. But now were all perfect shots. I almost forgot the ender eyes and pearls if I throw the ender eyes it will show me the direction to the end portal and the ender pearls will teleport you were ever you throw them but it hurts you a little bit so you want to make sure you’re strong. And make sure you don’t get them mixed up but I must sleep I got a long trip ahead of me.
Day 39 morning: Bye guys… But honestly I don’t think 64 loafs of bread was necessary.
Trust me, it’s necessary. you might run out it could be miles and miles away it could be across the ocean for all we know.
I don’t see an ocean… And this bread should at least last me a month but if there is an ocean or lake I have a boat with me.
Well good bye
Bye.
Day 39 evening: well it’s a lot easier going down the mountain then up I can tell you that. Right now I’m following the ender eyes they keep going the same direction. I just head forward a while and throw it up to see if I’m still heading the wright direction. Right now I’m in a forest its not to dense and there’s lots of chickens and cows so I got some meat while I was here. If I eat only bread I’ll go crazy and I still don’t see an ocean or even a lake.
Day 39 night: Well I made a small home just enough room to move to my bed and to my stove. (I cooked all the meat I got earlier.) I still hear the music every once in a while I think it’s sad sometimes but gets happier as it goes along… kind of like how I’ve lived. I’ve experienced creeper killer die, and I’ve made new friends along the way. I still miss him… hey I just realized something I’m heading the same direction as Caroline was when she left maybe ill see her… But I got to go to bed now.
Day 41 evening: I can’t believe it I’m already half way out of bread and still heading the same direction. This is become crazy nothing really special happened in the last few days but I still got 2 steaks left and 32 bread. The only real reason I decided to wright was that I can no longer see the tower I made, and I’m not in a forest anymore I’m in a valley I’m hoping to at least find someone to help me on my journey or just a place to sleep. These temporary homes are tiny and I might run out of coble stone soon. I’ve been placing a cobble stone block every once In a while to make sure I’m heading the wright direction when I’m heading back. I only got 27 cobble stone blocks left but then again, I can always mine some more.
Day 46: night I am out of food. I’ve built another small home and now I’m in a desert. I have a sand stone home and I am getting hungry. The desert cold and heat are not helping ether. I’m going to use the ender pearls tomorrow to cross the desert easier I encountered a few hostiles, like zombies, spiders, and skeletons. I destroyed them they barley hurt me with the diamond armor but it’s the hunger that’s getting to me.
Day 47 morning: FOUND IT!! Ok good I just have to mine it now…. I haven’t eaten in days I won’t survive to mine if I don’t get food NOW! I can feel my strength leaving me luckily I’m not in the desert I left using those ender eyes like I said. But I only used 1 cause when I used it I was finally able to see green (not cactuses for once.)I regret getting to close too one… Wait I hear something….. Moooo moo COWS! Finally I got to get to find the moooo… moooo I’m getting closer… mooo... moooo I SEE THEM! FOOD! Die now so I may eat you... NOM NOM NOM I don’t have time to cook the meat I’m too hungry. Well now I do I’m no longer dying of hunger I have food I’m just going to kill the rest and cook the meat.
Day 49 evening: I dug a huge hole where the eye kept landing so I don’t forget where it was. I’m not bringing it back here again just so I can hold more food. I crossed the desert t with the ender eye again but I only got 7 pork chops left and I got a long trip ahead of me… I’m just following the cobble stone blocks for now, and if I ever find one of my homes I just get most of the stuff from it. I’m moving much faster than last time because I’m running, but I also get hungrier faster whenever I hear an animal I kill it and take its meat.
Day 50 night: I’m already 1/3rd of the way back home and I’m using a home from last time. I’m thinking I should start traveling by night make the trip go faster and, they may think I’m dead or something. Too bad I haven’t seen Caroline I probably won’t see hear but… I don’t know.
Day 52 evening: I’m ½ of the way there and I did travel by night but I’m out of food. I just ate my last pork chop. But luckily I haven’t encountered any hostiles yet. I hope I can find some animals to kill.
Day 53 morning: last night I crossed paths with a creeper. His sad little face didn’t keep me from slicing him in half, but I’m starting to starve I can’t run anymore and I still haven’t found any food. I haven’t hears any animals either. I can Finlay see the light tower thou but I’m still far away it will take me 2 days to get there but I’d be dead by starvation before I get there.
Day 54 night: I found one of my old homes but it was larger I’m wondering if someone lives here now. I go inside and see a sigh saying “Hi Johnson it’s me Caroline I saw you in the woods looking for food so I got some for you the reason why I didn’t come to see you is a private matter. Please forgive me” there was a chest underneath the sighn with 7 pork chops in some 4 bread loafs not much but it will keep me from starving. I leave a sghn saying Caroline if you ever read this I thank you for the food and I forgive for not coming to see me I can understand that. I can hear spiders… sigh I’m going to bed.
Day 55 evening: I’m close I’m at the bottom of the mountain but good news they made a stair way to the top all across the mountain I should get up there by night I’ll be a little hungry when I get there but I’ll live.
Day 56 morning: GIVE ME FOOD!!
Johnson? Is that really you?
Skip it and give me the pork chops.
Ok hear.
NOM NOM NOM NOM. I from hear forth will never take food for granted.…. So Blue where is Wheatly and Elis?
Wheatly is mining and Elis he’s looking for you we told him not to go but he went anyway
How is Wheatly doing? Has he started talking more often?
Acutely yes lots more…. wait you didn’t see Elis on the way hear?
No not at all he’s probably fine thou… long time no see eh? How long has it been anyway 17 days right?
Yes.
Why is Wheatly mining? We all have diamond armor and weapons what’s he looking for?
As much gold as possible. Usually it’s pretty bad to use, but because it’s so malleable you can make it really sharp and dangerous and those bows you found well there all broke and we got some new ones and we enchanted them hugely at level 25 each. Hears yours its unbreakable to the 3rd power and extra damage to the 6th power
WOW THANKS…. You want to try to find Wheatly?
Yea… Might as well let’s go.
Day 56 evening: We were searching for Wheatly for a while. The mine is huge it was at least 4times smaller when I left. Hey look there’s Wheatly!
Hu? Johnson? YOU’RE BACK! It’s about time you got hear I thought you were never coming back what did you do get a full time job or something?
Well glad to see you started talking. you going to tell me why you never did when I first met you?
No. I likely never will that is my story, not yours…. Literally I have a book
Really? Me too… Did you find gold?
Yes I got 37 gold ore currently.
Nice.
Hey when do you think Elis is coming back? When he finds me or when he gets hungry?
Hungry… He never misses a meal.
Good. In that case he should be on his way.
True that. He started looking for you yesterday said he’d be back if he found you or not.
Well that’s good to know. Well let’s head back up before it gets too dark.
Day 57 morning: hey there’s Elis coming up the mountain. Do you see him over there on the middle part of the stairs…? Who built the stairs anyway?
Yeah I see him. Elis built the stairs when he was going to try to find you. O I never really asked you if you found the end portal.
Well I found were going to dig. Almost starved to death too.
That explains why there no food left. I told you it was necessary how much food do you think we’ll need to pack if we want to head to the end?
2 stacks of 64 bread each and some 20-30 meat related things so we all don’t go crazy only eating bread.
Sounds good to me the farm is a lot larger then when you left it shouldn’t take too long to grow as long as we got some bone meal.
Sounds good…. ELIS YOU MADE IT!
Johnson? Is that really you? Haven’t shaved in a while have you?
...Good to see you too?
Great to see me then well I built theses stairs you saw me climb.
Yeah I know Blue told me that.
BLUE! I told you I wanted to tell him.
Hey. He asked it and it’s not like it’s the end of the world.
Well it could have been.
Elis… Just never mind. We got a long day tomorrow it will be long trip I assure you that. So get that garden of yours grown then cleared of wheat were going to need every bread loaf we can get.
Ok Blue I’m on it. After all were going to need all the bread we can get. It’s going to be like a 2 month trip.
…..Yeah sure whatever.
Day 58 morning: We head off each of us with a stack and a half of bread our weapons, tons of arrows, and some more miner things. We start off with an easy jog before we start running.
So what do you think is in The End?
I don’t know but I’ve heard that whoever went in never came out.
Who did you hear from and how do we know we just don’t fall in lava as soon as we get there?
Some old friends….. There all dead now. But let’s hope not to fall in lava.
Day 61 evening: We just stopped running for a lunch break. Wow I’m surprised were probably a 3rd of the way there already.
Really? So does that mean we been gone like 20 days?
…..Elis it’s been 3 days and it’s not going to be a 2 month trip.
Well anyway how much food we got left? I got 61 bread left
61.
59.
2.
…….Elis how in the world do you only have 2 bread left?
I left a bread trail.
….SMAK! Elis you idiot! You don’t need a bread trail! I already have a cobble stone trail that’s what we’ve been following!
Ouch…. but what if birds take the cobble stone away?
Elis just stop leaving a bread trail and follow the cobble stone. If anything the birds would eat the bread trail. And I never even seen a bird none the less heard them.
O…. well can I have some of your bread?
Sigh… fine hear have 10.
Yeah!
Day 64 night: Were already 3/4th of the way there were in one of our temporary homes we had to make it a bit bigger but it’s still a tight fit we give Elis food whenever he runs out and make sure he doesn’t leave a bread trail.
So you think we’ll be there tomorrow?
No probably in 2 more days, when I was coming hear I was hoping to come across Caroline. This is the way she left but I never did see her. But when I was coming back to the mountain I did see a sign written by Caroline saying she saw me and was sorry for not seeing me. She left a chest with some food in it probably would have died without it. What do you think she’s doing?
Why didn’t you tell us earlier… actually never mind that but I bet she’s Beating the crap out of a grifers face.
Hopefully….
GRONNNE!!
SHUT UP AND CRAW BACK IN TO YOUR CAVE YOU WORTHLESS DEAD FREAK!
Well ill call it a night lets go to bed but first let me just rip that zombies head off… I open the door and sure enough there he was. DIE! SLICE! Can’t grone without a face you know. Well let’s go to bed now.
Day 65 morning: There’s a creeper in front of the door and we can’t get out without a big explosion right in front of us. I have an idea but you’re not going to like it.
What is it?
I have a bock of TNT I could place it in front of the door, We blow it up but we would have a back exit and the creeper would get a taste of its own medicine.
Not bad of an idea let’s do it Wheatly get the flint and steal ready Johnson place the block and Elis make a BACK exit. Not a front.
Ok blue
I place the block and Elis made the exit we all quickly get behind Wheatly and Wheatly lights in on fire.
STOP! Wait almost time RUN!
We all quickly run out of the house sssssss BOOM! Woohoo!
That was awesome!
Now that we got the obstacle over with let’s get going.
Sounds good.
Day 67 sunset: WE MADE IT!!
Really?!
Yes really, see the hole I dug that’s where we mine. Remember we can’t mine strait down or well get our self’s killed we could fall in lava or something the portal could be in a room with high ceilings you know.
Well let’s get started I would like to get done today we still got some time left.
Ok let’s just mine in a circular pattern did anyone bring a diamond pix by chance?
I have one you can borrow it
Thanks Wheatly…. I never knew you had one.
No problem.
Day 67 night: I can hear something….. We should be getting close.
It’s about time I can hear zombies from above but there to stupid to know how to come down here without falling to their death.
LOOK THERE IT IS!
Great!... What are those little silvery things? There kind of hard to see because they match the cooler of the floor.
They appear to be like a land fish coted in silver… let’s just call them silver fish I think there hostile let’s kill them. O CRAP! There’s a monster spawner down there too, and lava let’s take a different route down I think I see a library throe the iron bars. Let’s head that direction.
Ok sounds good.
After several minutes of mining we found the library below us. There it is.
HEY LOOK 2 CHESTS!
Good eye Elis.
Let’s go to the side of the room there’s a ladder to down to get around. We can access the chests too.
(After a while of getting there.) Hey ill check this chest… nothing really in hear just 2 papers, 1 book and 6 arrows the book is in a different language. Elis check the other chest.
Already on it… hmm not much hear ether just a book shelf and 1 book.
Is it readable?
I don’t know I can’t read.
Just hold onto it for now let’s head to The End. Ready your sword the silver fish are coming. Blue break the spawner, Wheatly, me, and Elis will cover you. LET’S GO!
HACK! SLASH! They die in one hit.
BAM! WACK! BLUE JUST RUN TO THE SPAWNER!
Ok I started destroying it!
Elis get to the left of blue!
Which is left?
Just get to the side that has more silver fish!!
On it.
Wheatly cover his front ill cover his right
It’s almost broke!
Elis watch your back side!
ARGH THERE TO MANY HELP ME JHONSON!
IM COMEING STAY CLEAR OF THE LAVA! ELIS RUN FORWARD! YOU’RE GOING TO FALL IN ELIS!!!!
AHHHH IM ON FIRE GET SOME WATER AHHHughh…
ELIS NOOO!
ITS BROKEEN!
Elis…
…..Is he….
Yes.
O crap not good.
Quickly get his stuff before it burns.
I only managed to get his 64 arrows and the book wait… ITS READABLE it’s called 3 Books in 1 The Mysterious Herobrine, The Story of Steve, and the Experts Guide on How to Build Everything.
Wheatly looks at me directly in the eyes and says, “We can read later… for now we fight… sometimes it’s better not to know things”
I make no reply I don’t think Blue heard Wheatly say that but I don’t call it out ether.
Well that’s quite a surprise Johnson but we need to get to The End. Less reading more killing. But first a moment of silence…. for Elis………………… Johnson do you have an ender eye with you?
No.
Blue do you?
No. wait look a chest looks like it was hear for the portal let me take a look…. YES ENDER EYES! And even ender pearls.
Nice find Blue.
We found the end portal so why do we need ender eyes?
Watch.
Wheatly then proceeds to place each ender eye on a strange looking block and when he fills them all in this black thing appears.
Wow didn’t see that coming.
Just like the nether?
O shut up.
Ok so you’re sure this is safe
Positive.
Ok let’s go.
RALKA!
The End: We all appear on a large obsidian pillar seeing many more, some with orbs on top and some not it was clear people were hear before there are stairs going up the pillars made with different blocks. Then the next thing we notice is enderman everywhere, and a large black dragon heading toward us. RUN! THERES STAIRS TO GET DWON! WHATEVER YOU DO DON’T LOOK AT THE ENDERMAN!
GOT IT!
READY YOU’RE BOWS! HEAR HE COMES… FIRE!
FLING! FLANG! PING!
He then swoops down and hits Blue and then goes back to an orb that seems to give his strength back.
BLUE ARE YOU ALLRIGHT
Yeah fine. Stop yelling were right hear.
Yeah sorry… THERE HE IS!
Ok everyone get to a pillar with an orb on top and break it.
I got a better idea I’m a good shot you know. FLING!...... boom.
Woe. HES COMEING! Wheatly keep shooting the pillar orbs, and Blue and me will distract the dragon.
FIRE!
FLING! FLING!
He then flies off without hitting us heading toward the nearest orb, Wheatly quickly shoots it down. It then goes off in another direction to far off to shoot.
Wheatly take this potion it will make you run faster and longer.
Thanks.
Quickly let’s build a shooting tower.
Good idea I got plenty of stone with us hear have 64.
Let’s get building. Wheatly get to the other towers you need any blocks?
No I’m fine with what I have.
Ok let’s go.
Hopefully the enderman won’t take our blocks
Yeah.
Ok he coming back get the left side wall I get the right side and well then head to the front. It was a basic shooting tower 3 walls and back stairs to get up to the top about 4x our height. Ready your bow. AIM…. FIRE! FLING!
HES ON FIRE! Never mind not anymore.
You got any poison potions?
Yeah hear it slowly kills him, and take this it’s a temporary heath potion.
Thanks. Gulp gulp gulp he’s coming back around. Ready… aim…. Fire! FLIN FANG!
LOOK OUT! BOOM!
Arghhhh he ran into our tower and destroyed it! Next time we aim for his eyes… acutily let’s aim for his nose maybe it will hit his poor excuse for a brain and if the poison hits his brain it would kill him for sure.
Sounds like a plan.
O no he’s headed for Wheatly.
Maybe he’ll out run it.
Hopefully.
It’s coming closer…. HE DOSENT SEE IT ITS GOING TO HIT HIM! Bam! QUICKLY GET GIVE WHEATLY HEATH POTIONS ILL DISTRACT HIM.
The dragon starts coming toward us with his dark purple eyes, it gives a cold death stair coming closer, and closer the flapping wings getting louder, its angry grow turns to a roar I pull out my poison potion Blue starts running toward Wheatly. I pull out the poison potion ready to throw with all my might closer, closer….. ARGHHHH FLING! The potion hits the dragon right in the mouth when it was roaring he swallowed. But he kept coming closer I quickly do a barrel roll to the left it misses me but it comes back around but it appears to be slower. I take out my bow and rapidly keep shooting at it never missing it. Whether hitting it in the foot, the stomach, or face. It keeps getting slower and slower then I shoot it one last time in the nose it then try’s flying off then blows up into a great flash of white and purple leaving a black well underneath were it died. I ignore it and head towards Blue, and Wheatly. Wheatly was lying down with his hand on his chest… it was bleeding pritty badly.
Blue do you have any heath potions?
No I gave the last one to you.
Johnson…. Blue…. you never asked…. if I had… a heath potion.
Do you?
Noooo I just said that…. to try to be funny.
Well then drink it
It’s a throwing potion… hear.
Fling! Splat! His blood wound starts healing and he gets up.
Aww yeah much better. So how do we get out of here?
I think where the dragon died there’s like a well or something.
That must be the way out then let’s go.
We head over there and it looks like the black stuff that got us hear. It looks like stars now that I think about it…
Hey what’s that black think on top?
I don’t know… let’s take it.
But just before Blue got to touch it it disappears…… Well that was kind of pointless
LET’S GO!
AKLAR
Day 68 morning: We wake up in all our beds.
We see Wheatly running out the house with nothing but an iron sword an ender pearl and diamond pix.
WHAETLY!!!! WHARE ARE YOU GOING?!?!?
MY REAL NAME IS STEAVE!
He throws the ender pearl far away from the mountain and disappears.
Ill probably never see him again…
Johnson why did Wheatly leave?
Don’t ask me but he said his real name was Steve… wait a second The Story of Steve!!! that was in the book…
That has to be the same person in the book.
I bet that’s why he ran away.
Should we read his part of the book?
Maybe…. but today is not that day.
For now let’s read the experts guide on building.
Sounds good.
Day 68 night: We spent all day reading that book. It teaches things I didn’t know when I got here like how to build an ender chest; you need 8 obsidian blocks and an eye of ender. What it does is if you put an object in the chest any other ender chest will also have the object. So if I have a chest in the mine so when my pickaxe brakes I don’t have to come all the way back up here and get another one. I just open the chest and there it is. (Hopefully I left a good one.) When we went to the end I never noticed but that stuff we were walking on was called end stone. But it’s not very useful. We also now know that you get music discs from caves and a creeper if it gets killed by a skeleton…. I have no idea why. I always wondered how Caroline got hers…. And there’s some more things in hear too. But I already knew some like the dispensers remember how Creeper killer had them I put some in all three towers. I never really did use them…
Day 69 morning: I see them… Endermen 6 of them me and Blue are in the house not looking directly at them but defiantly looking (I told him the mistake I did when I first looked directly at them).
Should we try to kill them? Or should we just wait for them to leave or something?
Well we could put a hole in the roof and shoot them.
Nah how about we just try to cut their legs off if they can teleport they don’t need legs.
Ok sounds good. We take out are diamond materials and prepare for a fight. Ready?
Ready
FOR ELIS!
HACK! SLASH! BANG! If you hit them in the legs they can’t teleport!
Good to know! Johnson behind you!
I can see everything in slow motion I turn around with my sword spinning I slice the enderman’s legs clean off then I duck down avoiding the blow from the ender man in front of me then I quickly take out my bow and shoot the enderman between the eyes then I come back to normal motion. I see Blue about to be surrounded by 3 enderman. Blue there all around you! Get down! Blue then proceeds to do a 720 rotation slicing 2 enderman in half but 1 still remained. I just realized the enderman had a stone block he hits Blue in the back of the head breaking the helmet in half. I try to shoot it but just before the arrow hits it teleports slightly away from where he was standing and hits Blue twice in the face. Blue falls to the ground on his knees then he tries to slice the enderman’s feet but instead the enderman teleports again behind Blue. Blue takes one final blow on the head before I stab the enderman in the back I see Blue fall to the ground blood around his forehead.
BLUE! I quickly rush to his side while Blue coughs some blood.
I’ve written a journal as well as you have, take it but only read it when the time is right.
I will. But how am I to know when to read it?
You’ll know…
Blue Penguin Then died……
Day 69 night: I made a coffin and buried him I left a grave stone it says “Hear lays Blue Penguin the one you could always rely on R.I.P. “
Day 70 morning: I look out onto the sun rise the red orange and yellow all blending and changing colors it’s sad how something so beautiful can when something so bad did as well. Iv been thinking about going out and trying to find someone maybe even a town. You know what I am to tell my story, to help others in need, to build a kingdom of peace if it’s not already of course I’m going to head the opposite direction when I was set off to find the end. It truly has been an end to many lives. I bring the necessity’s food, armor, tools, building blocks, bed and some more stuff. I stop at Blues grave one last time. I place a single flower and shed a single tear. FOR BLUE!
Day 71 night: I made a small home from what I’ve seen there’s no village nearby but there could be someone when I was making camp and seeing it become dark I saw a light small but yet still there when it became totally dark I saw what it was a mere torch not much walking and already found sign of a possible person.
Day 72 evening: I occasionally see a torch now and then. I think it’s a trail so I just follow them I don’t know if it’s just me but I think there’s a fog coming in on me far off but very slowly coming closer.
Day 73 morning: Ok now I know there’s a fog coming its slowly but surely coming closer I don’t want to go looking for torches if there’s going to be a thick fog so I take the book The Mystery’s Story of Herobrine. And when I opened the first page I couldn’t stop reading.
The Mysterious Story of Herobrine
Hello my name is Pie_Man3; how I got this name I have no idea. I don’t think any of us do, so I changed my name to Zale. For years now I have been doing research on a partial… person or monster I’m not quite sure witch. His name is Herobrine. You may have seen him or heard of Herobrine but I’m very sure if you’re reading this you defiantly herd of Steve. Herobrine is Steve’s brother Steve denies he has a brother but Herobrine is supposed to be. Technically I don’t even know how that’s possible because none of us know where we came from we just wake up somewhere in this world of MineCraft and know are name. Some of you never heard of this planet to be called MineCraft. But honestly what do you do all the time? You build or craft and mine for things too, so I decided to call this place MineCraft some call it Free Land because you can do basically whatever you want but I prefer MineCraft. I’m sorry, I’m getting off topic anyway Herobrine is supposed to be the total opposite version of Steve. He looks just like him except for his eyes…. Those eyes are just terrifying from what I’ve heard there piercing white there so bright they make light but there’s no pupils just that haunting white light. As we all know Steve is a good builder, monster hunter, and everything you could possibly want to be. Always helps people out but he does have 1 thing in common with Herobrine. He runs off a lot just leaves without a trace. Herobrine can teleport he uses it to his advantage he sometimes teleports behind people and kills them from behind they never know what hit them. Now you’ve probably been wondering how did he die and why do people think he’s Steve’s dead brother well that’s a touching story, here’s how it happened. Steve was the first MineCrafter he built a house and had iron on the first day really good unless you know what you’re doing he didn’t but at night he saw someone just appear out of nowhere just woke up at night and cried out for help (notice his eyes were normal while he was alive) Steve saw that he was in trouble I think you understand that with all those zombies and what not out there he quickly saves him when they get back to his house they talk and get to know each other Herobrine didn’t have much to tell but Steve did. He told him how to survive the next day he had his own house they made a mine together and found lava they made sure to stay clear but then they saw something, diamonds in just 2 days he found diamonds he sure is a lucky guy but here’s the thing it was just beside the lava and you could fall in real easily Steve went to mine it and Herobrine right behind Steve started to mine it when that first diamond fell Herobrine couldn’t help but mine some diamonds to but his diamond fell into lava Steve told Herobrine to be careful next time they kept mining them and when they got to the last diamond Steve started mining it but because of the greed Herobrine had he wanted it for himself he also started to mine and it and accidently hit Steve. Steve fell into the lava screaming HELP ME HEROBRINE! He quickly takes his arm out and pulls Steve out he runs off on fire trying to get to some water nearby Herobrine takes the last diamond and then a skeleton comes out and shoots him from a different part of the cave. He falls into the lava just as Steve was coming back to get Herobrine he saw him get shot and fall into the lava Herobrine thought of Steve as brother even as the short moment he was falling he thought of that he screamed out HELP ME BROTHER! Steve runs over but before he can pull him out he burnt to death he then runs back up makes a diamond sword came back down and killed the skeleton. After wards we fell to his knees and wept he drop his sword it fell in the lava where Herobrine died apparently the power that gives the skeleton life was on that sword after all he was the only person to beat a skeleton like that since Ted the power fell onto Herobrine remains giving him life. Herobrine was greedy he wanted to live and blamed Steve for his death and vowed for revenge. When Herobrine was given life he was teleported in the nether and was stuck there for a long time until the first nether portal was built. When he was in the nether he became more and more evil wanting not only revenge on Steve but his fate as well making him want to destroy all in his path he killed zombie pigmen gast and blaze rods taking over the nether all the creators in the nether were bound to his power if they disobeyed they would be terminated gast don’t want to hurt you that’s why there sad and pigmen have a resentment built up but if you attack them they for sure will follow Herobrine blaze rods were like normal people just a lot more fire like and were forced to kill everyone. Evently in the other realm someone figured out how to make a nether portal. When Herobrine saw the nether portal he went straight to it and went through causing him to come to our world once again he saw when he left the nether a home. He destroyed it and took all the valuables although Herobrine had the power to destroy nearly everything in his path, he did not. Why? He must have has his reasons. He only destroys things that other people place like homes monuments and other things. He won’t destroy tombs though that’s all he won’t destroy. When he came to our dimension he knew there were skeletons, spiders, silver fish, and zombies that would kill us. But there was something that didn’t try to kill us the greens or as we call them now creepers Herobrine forced them to kill us they already had the explosive powder in them but they never committed suicide until Herobrine started killing them all he made sure every green become a suicidal bomber and if they didn’t listen he would send them to the nether where they would burn for eternity. So they listened they don’t want to thou so there always sad. Eventluy he become so powerful he made a creature of his own. The Endermen the worst ones of the bunch he made them in his image terrifying, evil, and deadly. And that where they come from now that was his most recent action now all he does is just kill people there have been many Herobrine sighting some say there fake some so there real we may never know but from all the sighting this is what he looks like
Lucky I was able to get colored ink to get you a good image if you see, or seen this monster I have 1 suggestions for you run, or try to kill him. Here are some Herobrine things he tends to do he will take your diamond’s and dispose of them by throwing them in lava if you see him he will star at you then disappear sometimes kill you from behind when he dose do not follow him if you get the chance he make lots of traps that are fatal to any normal human can suppress. If you have a diamond sword be weary for Herobrine sees it he will steal it and kill you with your own sword some said they have battled Herobrine but I doubt that although the ones how said they have always used a gold sword supposedly his only weakness and I don’t know why. Herobrine may or may not exist for all we know all this damage could have been by grifers. O and 1 more thing about Herobrine on vary rare occasions he will help you in a way but when he does it hurts someone else. I personally have not seen him and hope not too but I believe he’s out there. This is Zale leaving you the responsibility to let others read this. Good luck out there.
I close the book in amazement Herobrine could be just some guys who made a scary story and became believable or he could be real and maybe he’s over exaggerated maybe he died and stayed dead. I bet it was just some guys making some scary stories or maybe a book and it was fiction and someone didn’t know the different to fiction and nonfiction and told the world there’s a mass murderer out there. And some people believed it. If Herobrine is supposed to look like Steve why didn’t Steve have a beard and have green shirt instead of blue…. I look out to the window and see nothing but a very close fog. It was night I could tell by the darkness and the fog made it even darker I will admit I am a bit scared what if some creeper is out there just waiting for me to open the door and end my life…. I now wonder why there so sad they do try to kill us but for what…. You know what; to this day forth I vow to never kill another creeper unless my life truly depends on it. I’m going to bed.
Day 74 morning: Its still fogy outside but not as bad as last night. I go out side with my sword ready and see no monsters. I look where the torches were leading me and I see another torch I’m just going to follow those for a while now.
Day 74 evening: After walking for a while I notice the fog is clearing. Good now I can see better. Hopefully I’ll be able to see where the torches are leading to. Maybe it’s a village or maybe it was someone trying to get to one place to another without getting lost… witch could be a village to village.
Day 75 Sunset: After another hour or so the fog was nearly completely clear. I could see a think forest and some light inside But they were all in random spots to light it up entirely. I quickly make a tower to see over the forest and see 2 mountains and between them a wall made of cobble stone. And a small entrance… it appears to be guarded... Maybe its not abandon! But it was too far off to get there in one day. I set camp at the edge of the forest. Tomorrow may be the most important day in my life.
Day 76 morning: I wake up eagerly to get to the village but when I head out to go inside the forest I hear a sound… chop chop chop. Someone is cutting down a tree… looks like I’m about to meet someone.
HELLO!
Chop chop…..
There’s a long silence as if this person is deciding I’m a friend or foe. HELLO WHOS THERE! The next thing I know I have a sword at my thought.
What’s your name!
…. Johnson.
He loosens the sword just a bit and says do you know Caroline?
Yes! I think I can prove it too…. she was hunting Gordon Freeman and found us… he came to try and kill us but I cut his life short… He puts his sword away.
Sorry about that didn’t know who you were. My name is Ted. I’m a lumberjack it’s my specialty. And killing monsters.
….What a second I know that name…. THE MYSTERYS STORY OF HEROBRINE!
Yes I am aware I am in the book but I don’t believe in herobrin never seen him never will.
Ok then…. Why did you ask me if I knew Caroline?
She came in yesterday she was talking about some friends she made.
Caroline is hear? Can you lead me to where she lives?
Of course! Follow me.
Day 76 sunset: we make it to the main entrance without problems and I see 2 guards both with iron armor, and diamond swords.
Hello Ted. I see you’ve met someone who is he?
This is Johnson, found him at the edge of the forest. He knows Caroline.
That’s quite a surprise. Welcome Johnson to the town of Sunset Valley!
Thank you. What are your names?
I’m Molly Daisy but most people just call me Daisy
I’m Jeon.
Nice to meet you Jeon, and Daisy As you already know I’m Johnson. Just by chance do you know who Steve is?
HAHAHA! YOU KIDDING? Everyone knows Steve after all he started not only Sunset valley but many more towns too. Like Mine Town, 3 Tree Mountain, Crafting Kingdom, Cube Land, and many more.
Have you been to those towns?
I’ve been in Crafting Kingdom. That place is HUGE! That was the most cobble stone I’ve ever seen. A cobble stone path, the castle was made of cobble stone, and the walls biggest walls ever. 16 layers of cobble stone. Took me all day just to get from one side of the city to the other the population was about 6,000 and it has never been grifed.
Wow… that’s a lot of people. It sounds a lot better than my place. How many people live here?
234 including you.
I’m impressed how do you keep track so well
You have to know how many people live here when there’s only one entrance
What if they climb over the walls with ladders?
They can’t the top is glass you can’t place a ladder on glass but what if the make something to climb over?
We have watch towers with people examining at all time anyone can leave but no one can enter without some sort of proof that you’re not a grifer. And you’re would be killing one and helping Caroline.
Alright simple enough and speaking of Caroline I would like to see her. Bye!
Good day Johnson see you soon.
I walk into the village and was amazed by how many buildings they had Ted walked over and said
So what do you want to do first? have a tour, or find Caroline?
Caroline can wait id like a tour.
Too bad I got to get back to the forest to work I’m not on a break. Good bye.
…Bye?
After he leaves I notice that you can see other people walking around just minding their business I guess. Then I hear someone babbling about some sort of god or something.
People of Sunset Valley! Do you not understand the power of Notch?! He has made this place and controls what happens hear! He controls whoever lives and dies! He makes the sun rise and fall! He makes the blocks endlessly never repeat its patterns!
He had a red cloche on I couldn’t see his face to well but I saw he had gray hair yet a young face. I asked him for his name.
Dear child of notch your new hear aren’t you?
Yes….I would just like to know your name though.
Of course my name is Red Lightning. But most people just call me lightning, but personally I don’t care if you call me Red, Red lightning or Lightning.
Ok thanks for the info.
I head on I’m hoping to find an armory so I can sell some of my iron and luckily enough I found one I go in seeing someone heating up some iron. After a while he finally notices me.
MOTHER OF GOLD! HOW IN THE WORLD DID YOU GET ALL THOSE DIMONDS?
Steve gave me some good advice when he lived with me he called himself Wheatly… Ran away when I found a book about him said his real name was Steve when running away.
How long ago was this?
It was about a month ago is when I met him but he ran off at least 5 days ago
YOU’RE LIEING! I SAW STEVE DIE! AND THAT WAS ABOUT A MONTH AGO WHEN HE DIED!
Well if I remember correctly we killed the ender dragon together, I saved his life, he helped me do tons of stuff like make a nether portal, and stuff like that. And I’m pretty sure I’m not imagining that he was with me that whole time.
He looks up at me and pulls out a paper and says “mention this to no one”
He gives me the paper it says
Dear
ClockWorkDreams
I know you’re mad at me for leaving but it’s hard to keep my past a secret when your asking questions and I don’t want to answer them. As you know I’ve done some things I regret but won’t mention entirely. There is a town called Sunset Valley, I want you to live there. Follow the sun set and you’ll find it. When you get there make sure you say to whoever guards it Steve’s sends his apologies they should let you in. they may have questions. Answer as many as you can but only show them this letter if you have to. I’m going to head to that light on the mountain we been looking at for a while. I think creeper killer went there. I know you’ll want to follow me but don’t I have a feeling that this may get a bit crazy I left you all my supplies except the ender pearls I needed them to get there faster but I’ll use them all by the time I get there. I want to make it appear I’m new to this place. When you’re leaving make a path of torches so others can find the town. I think I saw some people at the bottom of the mountain I better get there quickly if I want a group of 3. 1 more thing ClockWorks Sunset Valley needs a black smith.
You’re Friend
Steve
When I finish the letter he says can I have the letter back?
I hand it over carefully I could tell it was his most prized passion
Who said Steve died?
When Steve went to go to the light tower I managed to follow him. He left in the middle of the night I heard him get up and head out I also had several pearls he didn’t know about. So I followed him when we were approaching the mountain bottom out of nowhere a creeper came up and blew him up there were 2 more so they came after me. They both blew up but I kept running maybe the guys herd the explosion and helped him I was too far off to know. Was that you who made the tower?
Matter of fact it was. They all came up at once their names where Blue Penguin, Elis and of course Steve. I do know Blue Penguin, Creeper killer, and Elis are all dead. He proceeds to cry once again I quietly leave and leave a note saying if you wish to talk to me again I’ll be at Caroline’s house most likely I will be back weather you wish me to visit or not. I look outside and see the sun is starting to set I quickly head to a house that has a person sitting on a porch I head over to her and say do you know where Caroline lives?
….Yes Caroline lives in the largest house in the town it’s over there to the left.
Thank you and by the way my name is Johnson you may have heard of me I killed Gordon freeman.
Ahh yes Caroline mentioned you and I thank you.
I head out and instantly see the house she was talking about. It was made of logs, wooden planks, cobble stone, and glass panels it looked really nice it was 3 story’s tall 3 blocks tall for every room I quickly get to the front of the house and just stare at the door. I finally noticed that every door was made of iron. I tried to open it but it wouldn’t budge I saw a lever by the door and I heard a note block at its highest pitch. Ding! I then hear a familiar voice.
Coming!
As soon as she opens the door she freezes.
Johnson? Is that you?
Yes.
Johnson!!!
She hugs me tightly.
I’m so sorry for leaving I couldn’t help but coming back to Sunset valley I haven’t seen my friends in a long time I’ve been hunting grifers ever since one burned my first house down. I haven’t been myself since then but I’m fine now.
She stops hugging me and says
Please come in I have much to tell.
Didn’t you know Wheatly was Steve?
Wheatly is…. Steve? So that’s why he never talked… he didn’t want me to know that he was Steve I would recognize his voice if I heard it enough!
Did he start talking often when I left?
Not instantly but eventually yes.
Well my question if he didn’t start talking from the start did he know I was on the way possible?
Not likely but then again Steve is quite smart I’m starting to learn a lot about him. But some information I am unable to give you due to some trust I granted to someone.
I can understand that but I’m sorry for not telling you about this place and others like it I’m still trying comprehend on how many people there truly are out there. This place is endless literally it just hard to think straight sometimes I should have mentioned something while I was with you…. Its late we should get some sleep you’ll have to stay with me for the time being until you can rent or build a home.
I can work with that but before we go to bed I have a question are you still hunting down grifers?
No Gordon freeman was the last target nearby there are more out there defiantly but I’m done with that job I’m going to try to be a book righter or something I want to give information to other people.
Well good night.
Day 77 morning: I can smell chicken cooking…. It smells good. I head to try to find Caroline and there’s some chicken in the furnace and a paper saying “I’m at the library feel free to eat the chicken and look around town but don’t eat anything else.” I eat the chicken with gratefulness I haven’t eaten in a while and that filled me up. I decide to go visit ClockWorks see how he’s managing. When I arrive he’s forging a diamond shovel he finishes it quite quickly. He makes several more things shovels, picks, axes, and swords but no hoes but then again why would he he’s not a farmer and I never saw any farms near this place must be stocked with food or something. Finally ClockWorks notices me. He looks at me for a moment as if deciding if he should talk to me or not.
Sigh…. Take a seat we have much to talk about. I know I was a bit… emotional yesterday but I though Steve had died and now just know he’s alive I was so happy I cried. Trust me it’s not easy now knowing 1 of your friends is dead and 1 was never really dead. Creeper Killer was my friend as well as Steve Creeper Killer left 2 day earlier saying he wanted to help some more people. we moved to another location the same day not knowing we went in the same direction as Creeper Killer. That night we saw some lights from a nearby mountain so Steve wrote the letter and I managed to find it before he left. And I heard him wake up in the middle of the night and you know the rest. Now tell me what happened to you?
I told him everything from waking up on day 1 too all the way to when I left the mountain. He never interrupted so I thought that was nice. When I finally finished the day was already half over he only asked one question.
Do you or do you not want to know the past about Steve?
I do but am not going to read his journal until I think the time is wright witch is not now but it is soon.
How do you know?
I don’t…. it’s just a feeling.
Fair enough…. You don’t have a job do you?
No
Well you want one?
Of course!
Well what are you good at?
Well I’m not the best fighter….. I’m not known for the wood master….. I mine pretty well but that was in unexplored land where the land would be filled with minerals and ores…….I can shoot well but I don’t know how that would be useful…. I can build decent but not like your builders……I don’t think I would make a good cook… trading probably wouldn’t be good on me ether…. but I am one heck of a fast learner.
How about working at a library?
….Sounds good to me but what would I get paid in?
That depends it can be gold, iron, rarely diamonds, and other random stuff.
How long would I work there?
I don’t know you would have to ask Mr. Original he’s a book writer and the librarian.
Mr. Original? That’s a strange name did he change name to that or was it already like it?
He said he was born with that name and he’ll die with that name.
Sounds reasonable I guess… where’s the library?
Right by the town hall can’t miss it large windows and TONS of books. And if you want you could send him your journal when you want to call it quits and he’ll reproduce it.
K thanks.
Day 77 night: I finally managed to find town hall it was quite the build it even had some statues… or some sort of giant wool art work it looked cool but I don’t quite know what it was looked like some sort or green diamond there were some other people standing around it I ignored them and went looking for the library sure enough it was right beside the town hall and when he said a ton of books he meant it I cant even estimate how many there are in there could be well over 100,000 books in there maybe even a 1,000,000 I’m not too good with estimating thou so I could be far off when I walk in I see books all in aisles I see a counter with someone reading he had gray hair a gray cloche and leather boots I walk over o him Hey I’m sorry to interrupt while your reading but are you Mr. Original?
Hu? O yes sorry how may I help you?
My name is Johnson. I’m looking for a job hear at the library perhaps I can apply?
Uhh what’s your name?
Johnson
Well then Johnson I like to keep an open mind about things but I would like some more time on this. But I could use a break. After all with this many books and almost every one of them better then the next people come here all the time renting books and in some cases stealing them. I can’t quite my job because if I did I couldn’t read all these books for as long as I want and who would take care of them?.... You’re probably wondering why I’m the only one who works hear. Well there’s a reason for that most people who do apply can’t handle the hours, they have no organization skills, and they always forget who has this book and who has that book. We get stolen from a lot you know Johnson I’m getting old I forget who has the books and who don’t.
Why don’t you just right down there name on a paper of what book they checked out and put next to it the date they checked it out?
………You’re hired.
Day 78 morning library: Yesterday was really hectic when I got the job he gave me the time I have to work witch is in the morning till noon. He gave me a white cloche saying I must where this when I work. It means I’m an apprentice he also gave me a list of what the colors mean for each cloche now that I think about I do see people in cloches a lot more than I thought. Here is the list.
White- new in town/ just got a job /apprentice
Red-lower class
Blue-lower class grade 2
Black-lower class grade 3/ has own property
Green-middle class/
Yellow-upper class
Orange-upper class grade 1
Purple-upper class grade 2
Brown-helped build the town/keep the town in order/government job
Pretty complex if you ask me but I guess over time you just kind of memorize it. How the classes work Is not how much you have, but how much land you own I live with Caroline I don’t own any land yet. People like Steve probably own large portions of this town. You don’t have to were cloches but it keeps you warm on cool days and protects from the sun on hot days so people usually keep them on. Some jobs of course don’t allow you to where cloches like clockworks job he was smelting iron and stuff if he had on a cloche it could have easily burned him. Anyway in order to upgrade your status you can ether get a raise in your job get more jobs and put money or valuable items in the bank and things like that. Although I don’t know what most of that is I don’t plan too. I’ve decided I’m going to leave this town but not anytime soon when of course you see at first when I started to right I was going insane, but now that I’ve met people and experienced the worlds joy and its pain I can cope with or with out people. But the reason I keep righting is to look at my past and learn from my experiences plus when I have grown old I can reread this… I may be old already I don’t know I haven’t ever seen my own face… well I guess not many have ether… I can live without knowing what I look like. I sometimes wish I could have done things differently in life but I know that that is imposable and you have to carry on in life I’m probably going to leave without telling anyone. That I will regret in the future but I know I will have a hard time saying good bye if I do. I guess Caroline had that same problem and Steve… and I bet plenty more too. But then there’s the guards I can’t leave without them noticing… O who am I kidding why would they care?
People come and go all the time…. I think so anyway. Well I made it to the library ill right later.
Day 78 Noon: I just got off work with Mr. Original the job wasn’t so bad I got talk to a lot of people even Red Lightning again He was getting a book about…. I don’t even know what I was in some sort of ancient language. He said it was from the same people who make the desert tombs sand forgers or something like that saying he wanted to know more about there religion where java supposedly allows everything to work like correctly. If java didn’t exist we would all be in a stand still he’s all into religion and history. Anyway everyone else ether grumbled about too many new comers all the time and others just said hi or just had small talk, like what’s the book that has all those name for? (The new book where I put there name down and what book/books they got) most were surprised I had all diamond armor and had a white cloche on kind of funny to see peoples reactions. Mr. Original helped me with a lot of things like righting in some of the titles that were in different languages, putting books back in a certain order things like that. He said I could read whenever I wanted but I had to be at the counter ready for when people wanted to check out books. And so I found a book about towns it was quite interesting I found out some towns were grifer filled and no one had any control over what happened and some allowed people to kill each other. Most were like sunset valley where you’re only allowed to kill hostile mobs. Mr. Original said the book was outdated and some of those towns no longer existed and it didn’t mention new towns. Some towns in that book were made by Steve one that really caught my attention was 3 Tree Valley, the population only had 21 people living there. Apparently only certain people were allowed, anyone not allowed would be ether killed, captured and moved far away, or just threatened and that would scare them off. In order to get inside the town without these things happening is to send a letter to a runner. The runners take letters and send them places like certain people, towns, and more. The white listed areas usually consisted of 4-6 people to defend themselves at night. I would like to make a town like that except I wouldn’t kill intruders unless I had good reason too. Well I made it back to Caroline’s house and she doesn’t need to feed me this time I got my pay it was 20 watermelons, 2 iron ingots, and a book it’s not been written in of course it was actually a gift even came with ink and a feather for righting. I go inside Carline’s house I see her eating some cookies and pork chop.
Hey Johnson how was your first day on the job?
Fine I got some watermelons and iron hear take the iron I don’t need it and it’s my thanks for letting me live hear.
It’s not a problem
Uh question what is your job?
I build houses, trade; expand the town’s walls, farm, and research.
….that’s a lot of jobs.
Sigh…. Not as much as Steve had.
Day 79: Evening: Hey Lighting did you read that book already?
Yes and I’m hear for this one its called The 2 temples one is dedicated to Notch and the other to Jeb I don’t know much about Jeb and that’s why I want to learn about his temple.
…dose the book mention where the temples are located?
Yes of course however there too far for me to visit without help I wish I could visit them.
Well why don’t you leave with someone check them out and then come back?
Not many people think my religion is correct and even if they did they probably wouldn’t go on a month trip with me there and back. I’m getting old Johnson my face my look young but my hair is getting grayer by the day. By the time I’m getting back I won’t have the strength to fight the mobs alone.
…can you keep a secret? (He nods his head.) I’m going to leave this town in 5 days and I could take you to the temple and back hear or if you want join a different one with more books or something like that.
Why just us 2? What if we get some of your friends I heard your friends with Steve. If you know Steve then you may know some others that may also want to join you.
You have a good point Lighting after all there is strength in numbers… I should know.
Tell you what tomorrow night meet me at town hall I will bring 2 friends and you can bring some of your friends if you wish and then after 2 days of planning and preparation we leave off into the wilderness.
Sounds like a plan too me, I know just who to bring.
Day 78 sunset: I head over to ClockWorks armory when I go inside he’s eating a cake. Hey ClockWorks
Nom nom nom…. Hi what bring you over? I heard you got the job at the library people been saying some new guy working was working and he even came up with a system on who has over due books and who doesn’t.
Yeah and if I didn’t I probably wouldn’t have gotten the job either. Recently I got in touch with a friend. You may know him his name is Red Lighting… You see he wants to go find some temple of some sort but he’s too old to go on his own and I said I’ll take him to it. This is something I’ll need help with… perhaps you may want to join are little team? After all in the wild there’s more ores you can build with more room for building then you could ever imagine and perhaps we may find Steve.
Johnson you don’t have to try to tell me all the good things that are out in the wilderness I’ve been there before. But anyway ID LOVE TO GO! I WANTED TO GO BACK OUT THERE THE DAY I GOT HEAR!
….Whys that?
There’s too many unnecessary rules hear you can’t do certain things hear. Unlike out there there’s no rules although, some rules are necessary like no killing I agree with that, but some like you have to get a job or jobs to get land and stuff I don’t agree with. I just haven’t gone out there by myself because I would need help I always had Steve help me throe out all my days until he left of course but I cant blame him do you know if anyone else is coming?
Yes Red Lighting is bringing 2 of his friends and I want to bring you and Ted.
What about Caroline?
This is her home she likes it hear. I know that for sure… Do you want to bring any of your friends?
Nah everyone I know pretty much loves this place.
Ok then, tomorrow night we’ll meet at town hall I got to go find Ted. (Later that day) I finally made it to the city gates.
Hey your Johnson right?
Yes I’m going to talk to ted I’ll be back later.
Ok he’s probably at his house you’ll see it because of all the lights.
After finally making it too the forest the moon is high in the sky I saw some lights deep into the forest just like he said. I finally find Teds cabin (I know it’s his because it says it on his door.) Nock! Nock!
Who’s there?
It’s me Johnson… remember? We met at the edge of the forest.
(He opens the door) AH YES! Please come in I was meaning to talk to you yesterday but didn’t find the time to do it.
Why did you want to talk to me?
I wanted to see how things are going for you. I don’t go into the village much; I like it out hear less people, better air quality, less noise, and what not.
I agree I’m actually going to leave in several days and I wanted to see if you would like to join me. After all you seem to wild more because you left the village quite fast, and well I’m going to need someone like you to help me out there once again. But it won’t be just me and you we’ll have a group of 6 including you and me so what do you say you in or out?
Day 79 morning: It didn’t even take him two seconds to say I’m in. Right now I’m heading to the library by the tine I got home last night Caroline was already asleep and when I woke up she was gone. Probably working like always… anyways I think I’m going to read Steve’s Journal when I leave this town. I did something else besides sleeping last night, I took apart The Mysterious Story of Herobrine, gave it a proper cover, and did the same with the other books.(Of course mine already had a proper cover. Remember how all the books were in one?) I’m going to give The Mysterious Story of Herobrine, to the library. That would probably help me feel as if I actually helped this town even if it’s just for information. (Not my journal of course.) I finally make it to the library and I see someone there waiting for me to open it. He had a large scar across his face making him only able to see out of 1 eye his eye was green by the way and he had a green cloche kind of funny if you ask me just like Lightning I walk over to open it and he says.
Hello Johnson you may not know me and I don’t know you personally but I do know you’re leaving this town… I want to leave with you… your probably wondering why I know your leaving.
Yea a little bit.
Simple I ease drop… a lot. You may have no reason to trust me but I know I can trust you. I herd you killed Gordon Freeman… He the very man who gave me this scare and he did it in the most cowardly way possible…. In my sleep. I woke up with a fierce pain in my eye and stabbed blindly. He got away.
…….What’s your name? Why do you want to leave? And give me 1 reason why I should trust you.
My name is Green Eyes… but now it’s Green Eye if you get my point. I would like to leave because I want to go on an adventure. I’ve been stuck in this town far too long, Nothing exciting go’s on hear. And why you can trust me? I got nothing… maybe it well help to know I’m a good shot with an arrow. Actually I can’t remember the last time I missed a shot.
…Come to the meeting and well see if they want you to come, but I have 1 more question…. WHY DO PEAPLE ALWAYS HAVE A COLOR IN THERE NAME? There’s Blue Penguin, Red lightning, now you who else?
….I have a friend named Black Light.
Day 79 Noon: Mr. Original just came in so we can change our work shifts.
Hello Johnson, you will receive your next pay check tomorrow when I come in, it will be larger than last time.
Thanks….. Question do I have to give you books I want to donate? or do I put them where they would belong? Because I have 2 books right hear I want the library to have.
Why that’s wonderful Johnson! You have to give them me to be approved and then I tell you if they are or not. And if there not I just give them back to you.
I give him the 2 books and he looks at the titles and says
Well the one about building is a no brainer its library approved. I’m going to read this other one…Herobrine eh? Iv herd of him but I don’t know much about him in fact I know nothing about him except his name.
It’s kind of creepy really I don’t know what category it would go in fiction or nonfiction.
Ill figure it out good day Johnson.
As soon as I head outside I see green eye with a bow and arrow pointing it in the sky.
Hello Johnson it’s about time you left work. Have you consider my offer of joining your team
I already told you, well see if my friends want you to or not. He fires the arrow.
When that arrow hits ground it will land on a presser plate causing it to activate a dispenser. The dispenser will give you a paper; it will have a symbol on it. Give it to Caroline the day you’re leaving and you’ll get what you wanted.
I never told you what I want.
You didn’t have to.
I look up at the roof and see the dispenser, it activates and sure enough a paper falls out, it looks like a man running with a chest. I look over where Green eye was earlier and see no one there. I don’t think he’s good with good byes either. I head over to town hall where we were to have are meeting. I’m sure Green eye is already in there. I just realized something… town hall has tons rooms and I don’t know witch room well have the meeting in. I head inside anyway and I see Green Eye talking to someone at the counter in the center of the room I try to over hear the conversation.
….Lightning rent a room.
Yes in room # 4 he said he didn’t know all who were coming to the meeting so let anyone enter. It says here the meeting will start when the moon is visible witch is in about 15 minuets.
Well thanks for the info ill just wait hear.
I head over to Green Eye to wait with him.
So what’s that symbol mean? All it is is a guy walking with a storage chest.
Like I said earlier give it to Caroline the day you leave no sooner no later understand?
Yea but that still doesn’t….sigh… never mind. I see Ted walk in and Lightning behind him. They walk over to us they clearly don’t know that there both here for the same thing until they both said“Hi Johnson.”
….So Green eye, you, Red Lightning, and me that’s 4 were the other 2?
Actually other 3… you see Green Eye wasn’t originally going to be with us but he managed to convince me….(I just realized my mistake when I said me but I didn’t try to correct myself) ClockWorkDreams still needs to get hear and Red Lightning’s friends too. Witch I still don’t know who they are.
Well let me tell you, their names are Nolan____ but we usually just call him Nolan and the other is named Yukari she is a bit… different than your regular Freelander. I brought her along because she’s a good fighter probably better then all of us
Humph. Red Lightning is it? No matter, she may be a good fighter witch I believe you, but I doubt she’s better than me with a bow. It not even funny how good I am, if you get a white wool block 65 blocks away no matter how low or high it is I guaranty you I will hit it every time. No one and I mean NO ONE is a better shot then me.
….I was just saying she’s a good fighter I was not insulting you.
Hey look its ClockWorks.
Hey Johnson! I see you made quite some friends I already know Ted, Red, you, but not this fine fellow what’s your name?
My name is Green eyes, but everyone calls me Green eye I think you can understand why.
…Yes I see
We start hearing several people come down the hall that just came out of room # 4.
You know what that means everyone; we can now have a proper meeting.
Do your 2 friends know where to be?
Yes I told…. Speak of the blaze rods, hear they come right now. Hey Nolan! Hey Yukari! Oh one more thing about Yukari she doesn’t speak often usually when import don’t ask me why she’s just quite like that.
if you want more pleas comment below and pleas you don't have tell tell my my grammar sucks)
Have you ever heard of a period, it looks like this: .
WE Don't Want More!
Yes, I'm very happy
Oh wait, I lied
And I would like to see more, but less about the amount of coal & iron you mine. Instead of saying I found 3 coal, say I think I found enough coal for a dozen torches. That way you're slipping in numbers, but subconsciously.
~Pyro1997
Yeah.
Another suggestion is "Show, don't tell" the story. You start a lot of your sentences with "I...." and this gets boring to read. Google "Show don't tell" (use the quotes) and go read on how to do this, then come back to your story and evaluate every line. Take a creative writing class at your school.
Here are my suggestions for the first couple of paragraphs so you know what to be looking out for. Instead of just complaining I will show you my suggestions. Red highlighted words are my edits. Blue highlighted words are things I would change. Words in <> are my comments/suggestions.
Day 1 morning: I woke up this morning by a lake. I didn't know where I was or what happened in my past. The only things I knew was
thatmy name was Johnson,and I knew how to build many things.You knowI’m not really <Not sure if 'really' should be 'very' or not> concerned about my memory.althoughIt would be nice but maybe it's better I don’t remember it. It doesn’t look like someone did this to me or anythingbut whatever. IrealizedfoundI had strength beyond normal people. I punched down some trees to make some wooden planks and went to work. Iwas able to findfound some sugar cane and make a bookso. In my free time I willbe writingwrite what goes onthroe outthroughout the day. It will help keep my sanitytill iuntil I find some people. I’m going back to work now. "I need to collect more stones and wood for my house. I'll write more later.>Day 3 sunset:
I grow fearsome of the night <Show, don't tell. Maybe use "My fears increase as night starts to fall." describe why the fears start. Maybe describe the past few nights>
,throughoutDuring the day I build and mine. The first night I was running from zombies,and skeletons with bows and arrows.I took cover in <maybe use "escaped from theses monsters by running into"> a cave.
only to be<<Maybe "Instead of finding safety, I almost found death as I was >almost killed by an explosion. I don't know what it was <Not sure what you are trying to say here. Maybe use "caused the explosion>but I don't know if I’ll make it <you are writing this paragraph on the third night, so you know you survived. Maybe use " but once I woke up, I found myself bloodied and bruised all over.>if I go out at night ever again.I grow more and more hungry throughout the day <Show don't tell. "I looked for food everywhere I went but my stomach was never satisfied until I butchered my first cow and cooked its meat over the fire.> but I was able to find a couple cows and now have a small farm.Every once in a while ill kill a cow for food.I can’t sleep at night but I made a bed today. Hopefully Iwill be able tocan sleep as(the groaning zombiesGroeningand bone clanking skeletons don’t help me fall asleep.)I also made a house speaking of my house I better get in it the sun is setting. <Show don't tell. "I better get into my newly built house to escape the nightly monsters.">Day 4 morning:
I slept really 'm not sure if 'really' or ''very' is better:)>well last night. I am refreshed and ready to take on the day. I am going to
somenearby mountainsmanly becauseas at night I see a <flickering but stationary> light. I can only takesomea couple of itemsthingson my tripthere so. I took a wooden sword, 64 wooden planks, my bed. and a couple other tools. Ibetter goneed to leave as I need as much time as i can get o almost forgot too kill all my cows for food. 'd leave this out as it doesn't seem to fit in very well. You are in a hurry to go and butchering takes a long time.>Day 6 Sunset:
I’m at <Finally I reach> the bottom of the mountain. While on the way
hear i gotI found some cobblestone and made some better equipment. Each night I set up a temporary houses at night and run throughDuring the day I run closer to the lights. I see these green sad things thour out the day <Show don't tell "I run past green sad looking monsters during the day.>sometimes but i know what they are iI call them creepers <why do you call them creepers?> they follow me and when they get close they hiss and blow up. Sometimes I hear music but i know it’s just my imagination. <At times I hear snatches of music, but could it be my imagination or the loneliness?>Better get started climbing the mountain now-----------------
I hope this gives you some idea of the amount of editing you will need to do to get your story readable. Are you writing your story in MS Word or Google Docs? MS Word will show your spelling issues and grammar problems. Even this editor will red underline your spelling mistakes. It is a lot of work to do this type of proofreading and you need to learn how to do it yourself.
Writing is hard work to take a story idea, write it down then spend hours editing it.
Good luck.
and i learned MS word is not always correct sometimes it makes no since whatsoever but also eventluy people start talking i will have purpose errors because the way they talk is usely never perfect just like regular peaple
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But this looked A LOT, Like my first story. I approve.
I hope you get better at this! I'd love to see what you'd make.
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Retired StaffThe biggest thing that puts me off is the lack of commas in your story. As I read, I feel like I am Yahzee, from the aptly named Zero Punctuation. Just-talking-very-rapidly-without-any-stops-or-taking-any-breaths-until-I-feel-like-I'm-suffocating-and-I-must-stop-and-realize-how-stupid-it-is-reading-like-this. There isn't much left to say about this, since there are plenty of people who stated it already.
Also, scrolling down your story, I notice that you start writing like Johnson is writing right at the same time he's doing these things. Your journal never had an after-the-action/apocalypse log-type feeling to them, and that's the purpose of a journal. You also never bother to describe the scenery. Minecraft is famous for it's jaw-dropping views. Don't just skip them. Slow down a moment and describe a few things, to help the reader visualize (but don't over-do this.)
You have a lot a head of you, but the best thing I have to tip my hat towards you is how much you've written. Congrats.
[12:41] Coffeeeeeee!
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[16:29] "And lo, the tacos were delicious"
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Retired StaffEven on the Internet, at least take the time to type with proper grammar, spelling and punctuation. The results are much, much, much more worth it.
Every story worth reading should have a plot. Or at least a conflict. With most minecraft stories, the expected conflict would be the Man vs. Enviroment one.
Also, may I suggest to you enrolling in a writing or grammar class? I did that last year, and it did improve my writing. You don't have to go to a Creative Writing class, any writing class will do. I'm sure that there are some in your school, or you could ask your teacher to give you pointers, or even better: printing out your story and showing it to your teacher to be proof-read. I did that with my story, and I got a lot of great suggestions and pointers. (It helped that my teacher is an award-winning journalist.)
If you typed up your story straight into the forum, just highlight it all, and either right-click and click on the "copy" in the drop down menu, or just use the short cut, Ctrl+C (Holding down the Ctrl button no the bottom corners on your keyboard, and then pressing "C"), and then pasting it in a word program.
And while you're doing that, you should type up your story in Microsoft Word, since not only it catches mistakes, but also grammar mistakes. (Although I wouldn't rely on it too much.)
[12:41] Coffeeeeeee!
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[16:29] "And lo, the tacos were delicious"
and i am using micro soft word i haven't updated in a while because my computers internet was down (bad weather) its actually about to rain right now