Chapter 5 (Precious Items Lost For Good) is out! And I just started two days ago! Got my free time and my right hand, and my trusty Mac at my side! Please read and give me comments on what I can improve or what you liked (or what you didn't)!
Thy name shalt be engraved undearth thoust storyth nameth! I speaketh be thiseth trueth!
Isn't it funny that when people try to speak like that, most people just write eth or th at the end of the words? He he he.
Description: Aziver Vedar, a young man from the village Mooreneat seeks to avenge his father's death by the hands of the henchmen of Baron Malveus Ertz of Istir. But soon, he discovers that Malveus is merely a pawn in the plans of an evil entity. And as the banner of the frozen Phoenix rises again, and this evil mastermind seeds hatred in Minceraftia, Aziver must uncover the secrets of his heritage. And beat stuff up with a scythe. But mostly uncover his heritage.
Status: IN ZE PROGRESS
(I have no idea why the Forums don't accept my Topic ID, but I can't link it the proper way. Sorry again)
I think, MadScientist, you want your app to look like this?
Title: The Frozen Phoenix: Winterfall
Author: MadScientist
Description: Aziver Vedar, a young man from the village Mooreneat seeks to avenge his father's death by the hands of the henchmen of Baron Malveus Ertz of Istir. But soon, he discovers that Malveus is merely a pawn in the plans of an evil entity. And as the banner of the frozen Phoenix rises again, and this evil mastermind seeds hatred in Minceraftia, Aziver must uncover the secrets of his heritage. And beat stuff up with a scythe. But mostly uncover his heritage.
Status: IN ZE PROGRESS
Description: When an ancient being is awakened which makes Earth eternal day, someone has to fix it, so, a seventeen year old with extensive training in many styles of combat goes into the Overworld with hopes to stop the ancient being and resume the normal day night cycle, meeting some strange friends along the way, including one from space, he journeys to the other three dimensions, defeating the Lord which makes the ancient being more powerful along the way.
I think, MadScientist, you want your app to look like this?
Title: The Frozen Phoenix: Winterfall
Author: MadScientist
Description: Aziver Vedar, a young man from the village Mooreneat seeks to avenge his father's death by the hands of the henchmen of Baron Malveus Ertz of Istir. But soon, he discovers that Malveus is merely a pawn in the plans of an evil entity. And as the banner of the frozen Phoenix rises again, and this evil mastermind seeds hatred in Minceraftia, Aziver must uncover the secrets of his heritage. And beat stuff up with a scythe. But mostly uncover his heritage.
Status: IN ZE PROGRESS
We do indeed.
Thank you a ton of times.
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Would you like to know the atomic structure of a piece of bread?
To MadScientist, you're welcome many times. I just thought you could use help. To sc1020, well, we could use the readers. He he he. Rift seems to be going well. I'm actually narrowing it all down!
1st:My story still says 'in progress' when it's complete. 2nd:I'd like you to change the name to 'The Entrappers - Dreams of the Past' seeing as there will be a sequel named The Entrappers as well.
Pleaseexcusethe sizeof thetext, I just wanted to make sure you could readit REALLY well.
PS: That last part of the message in the first part of the spoiler is bolded so it's easier to read.
Chapter 5 (Precious Items Lost For Good) is out! And I just started two days ago! Got my free time and my right hand, and my trusty Mac at my side! Please read and give me comments on what I can improve or what you liked (or what you didn't)!
Isn't it funny that when people try to speak like that, most people just write eth or th at the end of the words? He he he.
The secret to speak somewhat authentic english is to write like you speak. Like this: Bow, mortal pawn fore otherwyse thoust shalt bye smytten!
- Srebro of Altkuink, The frozen Phoenix: Winterfall
To MadScientist, you're welcome many times. I just thought you could use help. To sc1020, well, we could use the readers. He he he. Rift seems to be going well. I'm actually narrowing it all down!
Too bad I revealed Rift's identity to the members of the PM conversation. You'll never guess who Rift truly is until you see it...
@Farteh16: Hullo! Would you mind changing o this description for Visions To The Past: Void?
Saving the world isn’t easy if you’re a Young One. Celeste, an ordinary Minecraftian citizen, learns she is part of an ancient group called the Alliance. As the destined hero, she must stop the Dark One and his Endermen from claiming The Overworld and The Aether. Regoreidin, a somewhat friend of Celeste, must play a part in the saving of Minecraftia and it’s dimensions, but getting caught in his past. Will they make it to the End?
If the above is too long, here is a shorter version.
Saving the world isn't easy if your an Alliance. Join Celeste and Regoreidin as they try to stop the Dark One from claiming all dimensions, while getting caught up in their past, their destiny and their right nows. Will they make it to The End?
Isn't it funny that when people try to speak like that, most people just write eth or th at the end of the words? He he he.
Title:The frozen Phoenix: Winterfall
Author: MadScientist
Description: Aziver Vedar, a young man from the village Mooreneat seeks to avenge his father's death by the hands of the henchmen of Baron Malveus Ertz of Istir. But soon, he discovers that Malveus is merely a pawn in the plans of an evil entity. And as the banner of the frozen Phoenix rises again, and this evil mastermind seeds hatred in Minceraftia, Aziver must uncover the secrets of his heritage. And beat stuff up with a scythe. But mostly uncover his heritage.
Status: IN ZE PROGRESS
(I have no idea why the Forums don't accept my Topic ID, but I can't link it the proper way. Sorry again)
TT2000, you are genius.
Title: The Frozen Phoenix: Winterfall
Author: MadScientist
Description: Aziver Vedar, a young man from the village Mooreneat seeks to avenge his father's death by the hands of the henchmen of Baron Malveus Ertz of Istir. But soon, he discovers that Malveus is merely a pawn in the plans of an evil entity. And as the banner of the frozen Phoenix rises again, and this evil mastermind seeds hatred in Minceraftia, Aziver must uncover the secrets of his heritage. And beat stuff up with a scythe. But mostly uncover his heritage.
Status: IN ZE PROGRESS
Title: The Aether's Rage
Author: Zeiustepali
Description: When an ancient being is awakened which makes Earth eternal day, someone has to fix it, so, a seventeen year old with extensive training in many styles of combat goes into the Overworld with hopes to stop the ancient being and resume the normal day night cycle, meeting some strange friends along the way, including one from space, he journeys to the other three dimensions, defeating the Lord which makes the ancient being more powerful along the way.
Status: In progress/Almost Complete
*Insert signature here*
We do indeed.
Thank you a ton of times.
TT2000, you are genius.
1st: My story still says 'in progress' when it's complete.
2nd: I'd like you to change the name to 'The Entrappers - Dreams of the Past' seeing as there will be a sequel named The Entrappers as well.
TT2000, you are genius.
The secret to speak somewhat authentic english is to write like you speak. Like this: Bow, mortal pawn fore otherwyse thoust shalt bye smytten!
- Srebro of Altkuink, The frozen Phoenix: Winterfall
TT2000, you are genius.
Thou father shalleth be smitten from 'is eternal statue.
Or something like that...
Edit: 100TH POST!!! Yay.
*Insert signature here*
TT2000, you are genius.
Saving the world isn’t easy if you’re a Young One. Celeste, an ordinary Minecraftian citizen, learns she is part of an ancient group called the Alliance. As the destined hero, she must stop the Dark One and his Endermen from claiming The Overworld and The Aether. Regoreidin, a somewhat friend of Celeste, must play a part in the saving of Minecraftia and it’s dimensions, but getting caught in his past. Will they make it to the End?
If the above is too long, here is a shorter version.
Saving the world isn't easy if your an Alliance. Join Celeste and Regoreidin as they try to stop the Dark One from claiming all dimensions, while getting caught up in their past, their destiny and their right nows. Will they make it to The End?
Thanks in advance!