Any feedback? I'm so close to the closure of this story, I only need two more comments!
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So sing a lonely song/Of a deep blue dream/Seven horses seem to be on the mark/Yeah, don't you love her/Don't you love her as she's walkin' out the door.
Looks interesting, gonna save it and read it later.
Just wondering, would you say this counts as a creepypasta?
I guess so, but I don't find it creepy enough to count as a creepypasta. Other people might though.
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So sing a lonely song/Of a deep blue dream/Seven horses seem to be on the mark/Yeah, don't you love her/Don't you love her as she's walkin' out the door.
Uploaded chapter ten. The end is near. I'll finish it tomorrow, but feedback is greatly appreciated now. Any suggestions as to what I should finish this with? I have something in mind, but I want to hear your opinions too!
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So sing a lonely song/Of a deep blue dream/Seven horses seem to be on the mark/Yeah, don't you love her/Don't you love her as she's walkin' out the door.
My eyes fell out, my brain exploded, my ears leaked out rainbows, my nose leaked out purple goo, I threw up rainbows, and my empty eye sockets spewed out yellow circles.
My eyes fell out, my brain exploded, my ears leaked out rainbows, my nose leaked out purple goo, I threw up rainbows, and my empty eye sockets spewed out yellow circles.
Nice! You definitely spent some time writing that Good job.
Thank you both! Chapter eleven, aka the final chapter, coming tonight.
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So sing a lonely song/Of a deep blue dream/Seven horses seem to be on the mark/Yeah, don't you love her/Don't you love her as she's walkin' out the door.
So sing a lonely song/Of a deep blue dream/Seven horses seem to be on the mark/Yeah, don't you love her/Don't you love her as she's walkin' out the door.
CHAPTER ELEVEN IS FINALLY RELEASED! As well as the prologue. I'm looking forward to any more feedback I'll get for this. Thank you all, it's been really fun writing this.
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So sing a lonely song/Of a deep blue dream/Seven horses seem to be on the mark/Yeah, don't you love her/Don't you love her as she's walkin' out the door.
Wow. Just wow. You did a great job, and this is purely amazing. Great job man.
Thank you!
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So sing a lonely song/Of a deep blue dream/Seven horses seem to be on the mark/Yeah, don't you love her/Don't you love her as she's walkin' out the door.
So awesome. Dude, you don't deserve to be on these forums. Instead, you deserve to be a million-dollar person, writing amazing books such as this.
SO AWESOME.
Wow, your compliments are so intense that I feel like you could be using sarcasm. You're the best feedback-giver ever
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So sing a lonely song/Of a deep blue dream/Seven horses seem to be on the mark/Yeah, don't you love her/Don't you love her as she's walkin' out the door.
It has just occurred to me that you have received eleven reputation for this story. Spooky.
That is an awesome coincidence.
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So sing a lonely song/Of a deep blue dream/Seven horses seem to be on the mark/Yeah, don't you love her/Don't you love her as she's walkin' out the door.
So sing a lonely song/Of a deep blue dream/Seven horses seem to be on the mark/Yeah, don't you love her/Don't you love her as she's walkin' out the door.
I guess so, but I don't find it creepy enough to count as a creepypasta. Other people might though.
So sing a lonely song/Of a deep blue dream/Seven horses seem to be on the mark/Yeah, don't you love her/Don't you love her as she's walkin' out the door.
So sing a lonely song/Of a deep blue dream/Seven horses seem to be on the mark/Yeah, don't you love her/Don't you love her as she's walkin' out the door.
My eyes fell out, my brain exploded, my ears leaked out rainbows, my nose leaked out purple goo, I threw up rainbows, and my empty eye sockets spewed out yellow circles.
So awesome.. Can't wait for the ending.
Thank you both! Chapter eleven, aka the final chapter, coming tonight.
So sing a lonely song/Of a deep blue dream/Seven horses seem to be on the mark/Yeah, don't you love her/Don't you love her as she's walkin' out the door.
Nice, can't wait for the amazing conclusion.
This deserves a popular star, really.
Heck, this even deserve to be the official story of 11!
Thank you both! And I'm sorry I had to kill off all of the cool characters. It had to happen, though.
So sing a lonely song/Of a deep blue dream/Seven horses seem to be on the mark/Yeah, don't you love her/Don't you love her as she's walkin' out the door.
So sing a lonely song/Of a deep blue dream/Seven horses seem to be on the mark/Yeah, don't you love her/Don't you love her as she's walkin' out the door.
Thank you!
So sing a lonely song/Of a deep blue dream/Seven horses seem to be on the mark/Yeah, don't you love her/Don't you love her as she's walkin' out the door.
SO AWESOME.
Wow, your compliments are so intense that I feel like you could be using sarcasm. You're the best feedback-giver ever
So sing a lonely song/Of a deep blue dream/Seven horses seem to be on the mark/Yeah, don't you love her/Don't you love her as she's walkin' out the door.
That is an awesome coincidence.
So sing a lonely song/Of a deep blue dream/Seven horses seem to be on the mark/Yeah, don't you love her/Don't you love her as she's walkin' out the door.
Indeed. I don't want to ruin it by giving you rep. I'll wait for somebody else to, then I'll bring it up to thirteen.
Oh, and by the way, I got here from your signature, in case you were wondering.